Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Enchanted.
orchidee said:
A truly enchanting write Fay. We\'re \'seeing\' nature more these days, hopefully, if only from our gardens in some cases.
April 10th, 2020 03:21
orchidee said:
A truly enchanting write Fay. We\'re \'seeing\' nature more these days, hopefully, if only from our gardens in some cases.
April 10th, 2020 03:21
Gold Vision.
Goldfinch60 said:
I could see that deer in your words Fay. It is so wonderful to sit in silence and see those deer.
Andy
April 10th, 2020 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
I could see that deer in your words Fay. It is so wonderful to sit in silence and see those deer.
Andy
April 10th, 2020 01:07
Gold Vision.
Michael Edwards said:
Took me to a time and place that , in these difficult times, can only be seen in dreams.
April 9th, 2020 16:12
Michael Edwards said:
Took me to a time and place that , in these difficult times, can only be seen in dreams.
April 9th, 2020 16:12
Gold Vision.
dusk arising said:
Painted vivvidly as ever with sophistication of your unique brush strokes..... i watched this scene unfold as the breeze raked those trees.
Can\'t but think you live in a idyllic spot surrounded by such marvels. Or is it all in your mind?
April 9th, 2020 13:40
dusk arising said:
Painted vivvidly as ever with sophistication of your unique brush strokes..... i watched this scene unfold as the breeze raked those trees.
Can\'t but think you live in a idyllic spot surrounded by such marvels. Or is it all in your mind?
April 9th, 2020 13:40
Gold Vision.
Neville said:
Mr. Andrew C. Forrest took the words right out of my mouth, so he did...
Lovely Fay and true
Neville
April 9th, 2020 07:20
Neville said:
Mr. Andrew C. Forrest took the words right out of my mouth, so he did...
Lovely Fay and true
Neville
April 9th, 2020 07:20
Gold Vision.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wonderful brush with Nature Fay very well captured
April 9th, 2020 06:02
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wonderful brush with Nature Fay very well captured
April 9th, 2020 06:02
Chance.
Goldfinch60 said:
That destiny will take me back to my lover so that we can go forward to eternity.
Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
April 9th, 2020 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That destiny will take me back to my lover so that we can go forward to eternity.
Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
April 9th, 2020 00:22
Chance.
Neville said:
This put a smile on this old fella’s face... there’s hope for me yet it seems..... maybe 😎💕
Neville
April 8th, 2020 16:23
Neville said:
This put a smile on this old fella’s face... there’s hope for me yet it seems..... maybe 😎💕
Neville
April 8th, 2020 16:23
Chance.
dusk arising said:
Age brings knowledge, so when certain feelings are aroused, we know what\'s going on inside us. In later years a loving bond would be so precious. Holding hands.... just the tip of the iceberg so to speak.
The thought of relaxing into a super-mature loving relationship has a very comfortable warmth for me. Needless to say your words kindled it.
April 8th, 2020 07:57
dusk arising said:
Age brings knowledge, so when certain feelings are aroused, we know what\'s going on inside us. In later years a loving bond would be so precious. Holding hands.... just the tip of the iceberg so to speak.
The thought of relaxing into a super-mature loving relationship has a very comfortable warmth for me. Needless to say your words kindled it.
April 8th, 2020 07:57
Chance.
Fay Slimm. said:
Never too late Joe eh ? - - Glad you enjoyed the read.
April 8th, 2020 05:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Never too late Joe eh ? - - Glad you enjoyed the read.
April 8th, 2020 05:52
Hunger.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, may you sail the sea together on a calm sea of love.
Andy
April 8th, 2020 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, may you sail the sea together on a calm sea of love.
Andy
April 8th, 2020 00:42
Hunger.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing FAY - A lovely emotional Poem *Waitin* fer the Boat to cum in* AMEN !
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
April 7th, 2020 16:57
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing FAY - A lovely emotional Poem *Waitin* fer the Boat to cum in* AMEN !
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
April 7th, 2020 16:57
Hunger.
Neville said:
Your words say so much more than the way they first read..... a special gift you have dear Fay....
April 7th, 2020 13:34
Neville said:
Your words say so much more than the way they first read..... a special gift you have dear Fay....
April 7th, 2020 13:34
Hunger.
dusk arising said:
Within these words i can feel the longing of one looking out to sea. The expanse of most beaches is sufficient to expand the sense of solitude, longing, hope and prayer. All there for your reader today.
April 7th, 2020 09:09
dusk arising said:
Within these words i can feel the longing of one looking out to sea. The expanse of most beaches is sufficient to expand the sense of solitude, longing, hope and prayer. All there for your reader today.
April 7th, 2020 09:09
Hunger.
jarcher54 said:
Your last line really got me! I\'ve always been a softie for those Waiting on the Shore ballads but I didn\'t see it coming this time. Very effective and poignant. The old balladeers never quite captured the inner thoughts of the waiting lover like you have!
April 7th, 2020 08:44
jarcher54 said:
Your last line really got me! I\'ve always been a softie for those Waiting on the Shore ballads but I didn\'t see it coming this time. Very effective and poignant. The old balladeers never quite captured the inner thoughts of the waiting lover like you have!
April 7th, 2020 08:44
Take Me.
MendedFences27 said:
Stay strong, Fay. \"And this too will pass.\" Sleep can sometimes carry one to the brighter side. Hope all is well with you. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2020 22:01
MendedFences27 said:
Stay strong, Fay. \"And this too will pass.\" Sleep can sometimes carry one to the brighter side. Hope all is well with you. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2020 22:01
Take Me.
FredPeyer said:
You say it beautifully, as always!
Unfortunately I cannot relate, I must have been born with a little switch in my head. The moment I am horizontal, it sleeps. :-)
April 6th, 2020 12:54
FredPeyer said:
You say it beautifully, as always!
Unfortunately I cannot relate, I must have been born with a little switch in my head. The moment I am horizontal, it sleeps. :-)
April 6th, 2020 12:54
Take Me.
Neville said:
Another splendid poem our Fay and one that I can well and truly relate to these last few nights...…
Neville
April 6th, 2020 07:16
Neville said:
Another splendid poem our Fay and one that I can well and truly relate to these last few nights...…
Neville
April 6th, 2020 07:16
Take Me.
dusk arising said:
There is tragedy in the air and your first verse here took me straight to that feeling of despair.
Sleep the great leveller for the troubled mind, the gift of Morpheus.
So true the phrase \'it will look different in the morning\'
April 6th, 2020 06:15
dusk arising said:
There is tragedy in the air and your first verse here took me straight to that feeling of despair.
Sleep the great leveller for the troubled mind, the gift of Morpheus.
So true the phrase \'it will look different in the morning\'
April 6th, 2020 06:15
Take Me.
Goldfinch60 said:
May Morpheus be forever with you when summoned, and with us all.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 05:11
Goldfinch60 said:
May Morpheus be forever with you when summoned, and with us all.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 05:11
Take Me.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. Just as long as it\'s not me singing the lullabies. You would never get to sleep! lol.
April 6th, 2020 02:48
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. Just as long as it\'s not me singing the lullabies. You would never get to sleep! lol.
April 6th, 2020 02:48
Love\'s Effect.
FredPeyer said:
\'Love\'s ever changing rainbow\' is something only you could dream up! Beautiful!
April 5th, 2020 11:56
FredPeyer said:
\'Love\'s ever changing rainbow\' is something only you could dream up! Beautiful!
April 5th, 2020 11:56
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