Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Battle.
MendedFences27 said:
The daily \"battle\" of Night vs. Day and the glamorous skies that result. What a wonderful illusion you have pictured here. We live for such moments of beauty as those you describe.Terrific poem. - Phil A.
April 28th, 2020 16:15
MendedFences27 said:
The daily \"battle\" of Night vs. Day and the glamorous skies that result. What a wonderful illusion you have pictured here. We live for such moments of beauty as those you describe.Terrific poem. - Phil A.
April 28th, 2020 16:15
Battle.
Michael Edwards said:
Another lesson in the woven word - great write Fay
April 28th, 2020 13:55
Michael Edwards said:
Another lesson in the woven word - great write Fay
April 28th, 2020 13:55
Battle.
Goldfinch60 said:
The never ending battle of sun and moon and each victorious in their own wonderful ways.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
The never ending battle of sun and moon and each victorious in their own wonderful ways.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 02:25
Battle.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Maybe a \'battle\' to hold on to the sunshine. Them April showers are here now! Oh well, the ground has been very dry.
April 28th, 2020 02:12
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Maybe a \'battle\' to hold on to the sunshine. Them April showers are here now! Oh well, the ground has been very dry.
April 28th, 2020 02:12
Baiting.
Goldfinch60 said:
The moon is there for us to bait and in many ways the catch that we get from the moon are words written like yours Fay.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
The moon is there for us to bait and in many ways the catch that we get from the moon are words written like yours Fay.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 00:15
Baiting.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE FAY - Good Evening ! Thanks for informing us - that the Picture was your MUSE ! It happened to me once - frightening !
Sister Moon is always a source of Inspiration ! being a MAN I always treat Her with a Velvet Glove ! *Baiting the MOON is anathema* HOWEVER your cool lyric does bring LILY LUNA down to earth - just like NEIL ARMSTRONG & BUZZ ALDRIN did when they walked all over Her in 1969. Buzz referred to Her as the *Magnificent Desolation* !
Your *Ode to Luna* does make Sister Moon feel like a close Friend who is capable of a litthe baiting by her fellow Sisters including Yourself ! So let us all attempt a little *Moon Baiting* tonight !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
April 27th, 2020 17:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE FAY - Good Evening ! Thanks for informing us - that the Picture was your MUSE ! It happened to me once - frightening !
Sister Moon is always a source of Inspiration ! being a MAN I always treat Her with a Velvet Glove ! *Baiting the MOON is anathema* HOWEVER your cool lyric does bring LILY LUNA down to earth - just like NEIL ARMSTRONG & BUZZ ALDRIN did when they walked all over Her in 1969. Buzz referred to Her as the *Magnificent Desolation* !
Your *Ode to Luna* does make Sister Moon feel like a close Friend who is capable of a litthe baiting by her fellow Sisters including Yourself ! So let us all attempt a little *Moon Baiting* tonight !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
April 27th, 2020 17:29
Baiting.
dusk arising said:
Ah those carefree days of youth.... still in the mind but the flesh is.... erm well its wrinkled, flabby and besieged by aches and pains.
All i can manage is to bay at the moon physically. But i was there mentally reading your fine words today.
April 27th, 2020 14:19
dusk arising said:
Ah those carefree days of youth.... still in the mind but the flesh is.... erm well its wrinkled, flabby and besieged by aches and pains.
All i can manage is to bay at the moon physically. But i was there mentally reading your fine words today.
April 27th, 2020 14:19
Baiting.
orchidee said:
Oohh, you gonna rave now?! I might try a bit of that sort of raving too! Naked pleasures? Swoon! I might try a spot of that too, A dark horse I am! heehee.
Put up that red Notice of Absence - Orchi away on some naked pleasures. lol.
April 27th, 2020 10:17
orchidee said:
Oohh, you gonna rave now?! I might try a bit of that sort of raving too! Naked pleasures? Swoon! I might try a spot of that too, A dark horse I am! heehee.
Put up that red Notice of Absence - Orchi away on some naked pleasures. lol.
April 27th, 2020 10:17
Baiting.
Neville said:
tempted, hooked, played n landed .. feels so good..
just hope that come the morrow I aint gonna feel gutted.....
perfectly penned my friend....
April 27th, 2020 06:49
Neville said:
tempted, hooked, played n landed .. feels so good..
just hope that come the morrow I aint gonna feel gutted.....
perfectly penned my friend....
April 27th, 2020 06:49
Designed.
Neville said:
amazing innit, evolution and tis indeed such a beautiful world out there... I\'m with the Guinea pig a fine write Fay..
Neville
April 26th, 2020 12:29
Neville said:
amazing innit, evolution and tis indeed such a beautiful world out there... I\'m with the Guinea pig a fine write Fay..
Neville
April 26th, 2020 12:29
Tree-Towns.
Neville said:
woodland, forests, jungles even special places indeed.. provide sanctuary for some of us and hidey places for others.... their very fabric though under threat... for mans material desires.. if only we could harvest what we really needed and leave the rest to the birds n bees n those of us that need such places for our childrens childrens children...
April 25th, 2020 17:07
Neville said:
woodland, forests, jungles even special places indeed.. provide sanctuary for some of us and hidey places for others.... their very fabric though under threat... for mans material desires.. if only we could harvest what we really needed and leave the rest to the birds n bees n those of us that need such places for our childrens childrens children...
April 25th, 2020 17:07
Tree-Towns.
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Fay, it is so wonderful to walk with trees in such peaceful harmony.
Andy
April 24th, 2020 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Fay, it is so wonderful to walk with trees in such peaceful harmony.
Andy
April 24th, 2020 00:22
Tree-Towns.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hi Fay thanks for sharing about TREES
I think that I will never see
A thing as lovely as a Tree !
A weeping Willow by a lake is my FAVE. We have some lovely trees & bushes in our First garden. Acers - Birch - Beech - Appes & Pears & Fruit Bushes & A Yew Hedge @ the Bottom ! We also have a Woods close by with a Lake & A Willow. A matur OAK can be home to thousands of Creatures - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 23rd, 2020 14:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hi Fay thanks for sharing about TREES
I think that I will never see
A thing as lovely as a Tree !
A weeping Willow by a lake is my FAVE. We have some lovely trees & bushes in our First garden. Acers - Birch - Beech - Appes & Pears & Fruit Bushes & A Yew Hedge @ the Bottom ! We also have a Woods close by with a Lake & A Willow. A matur OAK can be home to thousands of Creatures - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 23rd, 2020 14:32
Tree-Towns.
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, Fay. I still remember driving on my motorcycle on the \'Avenue of the Giants\' , the famous road through the redwoods in Humboltd county in Northern California. Google \'Avenue of the Giants\' and click on \'images\'. They are awsome!
April 23rd, 2020 11:59
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, Fay. I still remember driving on my motorcycle on the \'Avenue of the Giants\' , the famous road through the redwoods in Humboltd county in Northern California. Google \'Avenue of the Giants\' and click on \'images\'. They are awsome!
April 23rd, 2020 11:59
Tree-Towns.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I love poems like this Fay. I can read them over and over again. I have a file full, by many authors, on the computer.
Kipling\'s \'Way Through The Woods\' is still top of the tree for me.
Ex animo, Alan
April 23rd, 2020 10:03
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I love poems like this Fay. I can read them over and over again. I have a file full, by many authors, on the computer.
Kipling\'s \'Way Through The Woods\' is still top of the tree for me.
Ex animo, Alan
April 23rd, 2020 10:03
Tree-Towns.
Fay Slimm. said:
Your comments are supportively kind D.A. and thank you for favouriting my humble tribute to the magnificence of Tree Towns.
April 23rd, 2020 04:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Your comments are supportively kind D.A. and thank you for favouriting my humble tribute to the magnificence of Tree Towns.
April 23rd, 2020 04:34
Tree-Towns.
dusk arising said:
Blissful, amazing, wonderful writing. I share your reverie for these beautiful living creations.
I was thrilled to read your post today. Mind you i am a lover of woodland, a place where we humans are the intruder.... i tread respectfully and feel the wonder. Maybe i leave with something of wisdom.
An absolute must for my favourites.
April 23rd, 2020 04:13
dusk arising said:
Blissful, amazing, wonderful writing. I share your reverie for these beautiful living creations.
I was thrilled to read your post today. Mind you i am a lover of woodland, a place where we humans are the intruder.... i tread respectfully and feel the wonder. Maybe i leave with something of wisdom.
An absolute must for my favourites.
April 23rd, 2020 04:13
Designed.
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s world is so wonderful at the moment without us spoiling it, I do hope people can see this and keep it that way in the future.
Good words as ever Fay.
Andy
April 22nd, 2020 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s world is so wonderful at the moment without us spoiling it, I do hope people can see this and keep it that way in the future.
Good words as ever Fay.
Andy
April 22nd, 2020 00:26
Designed.
dusk arising said:
I\'m sceptical since watching the Stephen Fry interview with Gay Byrne where Fry poses \'just how wonderful is the creator of life forms which capture another life form, disable it and inject it with eggs which will eat the second being alive from inside it. He went on to say, if god is that creator i don\'t want to worship him/her/it.
However, hopefully they are a minority and out of view. For most life forms i agree that creation is wonderful. We ourselves are far from a wonderful perfection of life ... we know all to well about our imperfection.
Difficult subject and i feel i\'m the fly in the ointment over this today. Apologies.
April 21st, 2020 16:14
dusk arising said:
I\'m sceptical since watching the Stephen Fry interview with Gay Byrne where Fry poses \'just how wonderful is the creator of life forms which capture another life form, disable it and inject it with eggs which will eat the second being alive from inside it. He went on to say, if god is that creator i don\'t want to worship him/her/it.
However, hopefully they are a minority and out of view. For most life forms i agree that creation is wonderful. We ourselves are far from a wonderful perfection of life ... we know all to well about our imperfection.
Difficult subject and i feel i\'m the fly in the ointment over this today. Apologies.
April 21st, 2020 16:14
Language.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, our walk with nature is certainly becoming more wonderful.
Andy
April 21st, 2020 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, our walk with nature is certainly becoming more wonderful.
Andy
April 21st, 2020 00:45
Language.
Gino said:
Amazing write Fay, you never fail to impress...And please to stay during this pandemic...
April 20th, 2020 22:40
Gino said:
Amazing write Fay, you never fail to impress...And please to stay during this pandemic...
April 20th, 2020 22:40
Language.
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes there is so much more meaning in silence than in the spoken word. You say it well.
April 20th, 2020 20:56
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes there is so much more meaning in silence than in the spoken word. You say it well.
April 20th, 2020 20:56
Language.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
wild and free a secret dream of us all
April 20th, 2020 14:36
ron parrish aka wordman said:
wild and free a secret dream of us all
April 20th, 2020 14:36
Language.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Talking of ants, I tried to save a flying ant thingy from a shop, but I could not. There was a risk of getting stung - a hornet? Maybe it wanted to go shopping?!
April 20th, 2020 11:41
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Talking of ants, I tried to save a flying ant thingy from a shop, but I could not. There was a risk of getting stung - a hornet? Maybe it wanted to go shopping?!
April 20th, 2020 11:41
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