Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Thoughts.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
YESTERDAY ~ Love was such
An easy Game to play
O We remember Yesterday !
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing FAY. When Angela & I first met (She was 28 - I was 33) we both felt we could share our experiences of those we had Loved & Lost. Especialy as neither of us had been Engaged or Married. The *words* in your Poem ~ ring very true in both our experiences. We still *Remember Yesterday* but it makes what we have NOW even more precious ! Married (for almost a Month !) & in our first Home together ~ AWESOME !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
April 16th, 2020 17:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
YESTERDAY ~ Love was such
An easy Game to play
O We remember Yesterday !
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing FAY. When Angela & I first met (She was 28 - I was 33) we both felt we could share our experiences of those we had Loved & Lost. Especialy as neither of us had been Engaged or Married. The *words* in your Poem ~ ring very true in both our experiences. We still *Remember Yesterday* but it makes what we have NOW even more precious ! Married (for almost a Month !) & in our first Home together ~ AWESOME !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
April 16th, 2020 17:12
Thoughts.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, may that destiny return for your love to continue to its own destiny.
Andy
April 16th, 2020 15:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, may that destiny return for your love to continue to its own destiny.
Andy
April 16th, 2020 15:12
Thoughts.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, great poem, and that first line \'harbor of need\' is just incredible. We are all like ships hoping to dock in the \'harbor of need\' every once in a while to load up on that need, just to sail away again.
April 16th, 2020 12:07
FredPeyer said:
Fay, great poem, and that first line \'harbor of need\' is just incredible. We are all like ships hoping to dock in the \'harbor of need\' every once in a while to load up on that need, just to sail away again.
April 16th, 2020 12:07
Thoughts.
Fay Slimm. said:
I certainly do like to think my picture-words stay in readers minds to help resurrect their own stories D.A. - - and your generous comment as always is extremely appreciated my friend.
April 16th, 2020 04:30
Fay Slimm. said:
I certainly do like to think my picture-words stay in readers minds to help resurrect their own stories D.A. - - and your generous comment as always is extremely appreciated my friend.
April 16th, 2020 04:30
Thoughts.
dusk arising said:
Once tasted, the richest flavour remains in our souls to drain our resources of desire.
Along comes the practicality of common sense and erects a barrier of \"i can do without more of that wrecking my life\" safely around us.
But oh dear,.. we erected it ourselves and we know just where to find it\'s weak spots..... and somehow so do the enemy.
Dontcha just love it when ya see the pictures ya paint in the minds of yareaders.... or not maybe lol
April 16th, 2020 04:24
dusk arising said:
Once tasted, the richest flavour remains in our souls to drain our resources of desire.
Along comes the practicality of common sense and erects a barrier of \"i can do without more of that wrecking my life\" safely around us.
But oh dear,.. we erected it ourselves and we know just where to find it\'s weak spots..... and somehow so do the enemy.
Dontcha just love it when ya see the pictures ya paint in the minds of yareaders.... or not maybe lol
April 16th, 2020 04:24
Revealed.
Goldfinch60 said:
The hurts from the past will be healed from the trip into a wonderful future Fay.
Wonderful emotive write.
Andy
April 16th, 2020 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The hurts from the past will be healed from the trip into a wonderful future Fay.
Wonderful emotive write.
Andy
April 16th, 2020 00:45
Revealed.
dusk arising said:
Do I read betrayal of the most sacred trust revealed here.
A hurt so personal. A hurt which could only be inflicted by the most important person in one\'s life. No other hurt could cut so deeply. Cutting through bonds as it stabs to the heart, killing a flame kindled for years. Nothing compares to the anguish of the moments of accepting this worst of all treachery is a certainty.
And then of course the \"what do I do now\" situation to be addressed.
All there in your words today, all the more vivvid to those who\'ve worn the T-shirt.
April 15th, 2020 05:37
dusk arising said:
Do I read betrayal of the most sacred trust revealed here.
A hurt so personal. A hurt which could only be inflicted by the most important person in one\'s life. No other hurt could cut so deeply. Cutting through bonds as it stabs to the heart, killing a flame kindled for years. Nothing compares to the anguish of the moments of accepting this worst of all treachery is a certainty.
And then of course the \"what do I do now\" situation to be addressed.
All there in your words today, all the more vivvid to those who\'ve worn the T-shirt.
April 15th, 2020 05:37
Revealed.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ *All alone again naturally* ANGEL is back on the Front Line. COVID 19 is taking its toll on us all ! As you imply *QUE SERA SERA* ! COVID 19 has opened Pandoras Box & released into our Souls ~ Relentless thought ~ Candour ~ Abject Unbalance ~ Tear sieved seeds & Mistrust ~ QUE SERA SERA ! Mis Otis & I regret we*re unable to post today !
Love - Peace & Joy
B & A 💛💛💛💛💛
April 15th, 2020 03:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ *All alone again naturally* ANGEL is back on the Front Line. COVID 19 is taking its toll on us all ! As you imply *QUE SERA SERA* ! COVID 19 has opened Pandoras Box & released into our Souls ~ Relentless thought ~ Candour ~ Abject Unbalance ~ Tear sieved seeds & Mistrust ~ QUE SERA SERA ! Mis Otis & I regret we*re unable to post today !
Love - Peace & Joy
B & A 💛💛💛💛💛
April 15th, 2020 03:50
Redefining.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, there is nothing quite as wonderful as sitting by quiet waters.
Andy
April 15th, 2020 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, there is nothing quite as wonderful as sitting by quiet waters.
Andy
April 15th, 2020 00:25
Redefining.
orchidee said:
It surely does - if we can get out for our permitted daily exercise, to see it!
April 14th, 2020 06:24
orchidee said:
It surely does - if we can get out for our permitted daily exercise, to see it!
April 14th, 2020 06:24
Redefining.
dusk arising said:
So do you reckon i should go for a paddle?
I was of course thinking of a skinny dip but the last time i tried that my reflection scared me to bits and the birds stopped singing.
April 14th, 2020 05:27
dusk arising said:
So do you reckon i should go for a paddle?
I was of course thinking of a skinny dip but the last time i tried that my reflection scared me to bits and the birds stopped singing.
April 14th, 2020 05:27
Intake.
Neville said:
Aye.. what a picture... tis another new morn and almost as glorious as you first sketched here on 14:08.2017....
I thought these words could do with an airing...…
Neville
April 14th, 2020 04:08
Neville said:
Aye.. what a picture... tis another new morn and almost as glorious as you first sketched here on 14:08.2017....
I thought these words could do with an airing...…
Neville
April 14th, 2020 04:08
Nearest.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, Dandelions are beautiful to gaze upon.
Andy
April 14th, 2020 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, Dandelions are beautiful to gaze upon.
Andy
April 14th, 2020 00:55
Nearest.
FredPeyer said:
I always liked dandelions, and now after reading your poem I like them even more!
April 13th, 2020 18:42
FredPeyer said:
I always liked dandelions, and now after reading your poem I like them even more!
April 13th, 2020 18:42
Nearest.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Fay ~ I love DANDELIONS in all their stages. Elegant BUD - Beautiful Flower perfect structure - Awesome YELLOW HUE - Delicate in Parachute Form - I always blow them to the four winds to generate more & more beautiful FLOWERS ! My Gramps made delicious Dandelion & Burdock from Dandelion roots. As your poem says the Dandelion has its place in the Food Chains & Food Webs. Who are we (mere mortals) to argur with that ! I teach my Nursery Nurses (Environmental Studies) to teach the Children - to respect all Flora & Fauna & Insectivora equally and never to destroy it ! Some of them have never handled a Worm or a Spider and unfortunately they pass their PHOBIAS on to the Kids. If we are wise we wont upset Mother nature (again) by despising one of her most lovely of FLOWERS - the DANDELION - AMEN !
Blessings - Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
April 13th, 2020 14:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Fay ~ I love DANDELIONS in all their stages. Elegant BUD - Beautiful Flower perfect structure - Awesome YELLOW HUE - Delicate in Parachute Form - I always blow them to the four winds to generate more & more beautiful FLOWERS ! My Gramps made delicious Dandelion & Burdock from Dandelion roots. As your poem says the Dandelion has its place in the Food Chains & Food Webs. Who are we (mere mortals) to argur with that ! I teach my Nursery Nurses (Environmental Studies) to teach the Children - to respect all Flora & Fauna & Insectivora equally and never to destroy it ! Some of them have never handled a Worm or a Spider and unfortunately they pass their PHOBIAS on to the Kids. If we are wise we wont upset Mother nature (again) by despising one of her most lovely of FLOWERS - the DANDELION - AMEN !
Blessings - Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
April 13th, 2020 14:46
Nearest.
Michael Edwards said:
I am one of those who love the humble dandelion - there are banks of them locally and their bright cheerful blooms are a sheer delight. Fine tribute to a great plant.
April 13th, 2020 12:50
Michael Edwards said:
I am one of those who love the humble dandelion - there are banks of them locally and their bright cheerful blooms are a sheer delight. Fine tribute to a great plant.
April 13th, 2020 12:50
Nearest.
Neville said:
these \'piss the beds\' are without doubt beautiful to look at... but I prefer to view them in someone else\'s garden
I guess they are a bit like Marmite.. well depicted here....
Neville
April 13th, 2020 08:37
Neville said:
these \'piss the beds\' are without doubt beautiful to look at... but I prefer to view them in someone else\'s garden
I guess they are a bit like Marmite.. well depicted here....
Neville
April 13th, 2020 08:37
Nearest.
dusk arising said:
Indeed the dandelion is a beautiful creation though scorned by me and most for its reproductive efficiency mocking our desire for bowling green lawns of unnatural domination.
A wonderful tribute to the positives of this plant/weed/abomination/curse. At a time when most gardners are engaged in a war upon it. Why are we robbed of our elms when it could have been the dandy?
April 13th, 2020 07:02
dusk arising said:
Indeed the dandelion is a beautiful creation though scorned by me and most for its reproductive efficiency mocking our desire for bowling green lawns of unnatural domination.
A wonderful tribute to the positives of this plant/weed/abomination/curse. At a time when most gardners are engaged in a war upon it. Why are we robbed of our elms when it could have been the dandy?
April 13th, 2020 07:02
Nearest.
orchidee said:
A lovely write and pic Fay. I saw an insect thingy - alive, but about half-a-millimetre long!
April 13th, 2020 04:44
orchidee said:
A lovely write and pic Fay. I saw an insect thingy - alive, but about half-a-millimetre long!
April 13th, 2020 04:44
Nearest.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful Fay
A much hated weed by the lawn-lovers
but such a display to achieve it\'s potential
I like it when they go to seed but don\'t tell the neighbors
April 13th, 2020 03:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful Fay
A much hated weed by the lawn-lovers
but such a display to achieve it\'s potential
I like it when they go to seed but don\'t tell the neighbors
April 13th, 2020 03:50
Enchanted.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela Here - Ahhhhhhh FAY the many many Glories of Spring - Birds & Bird Song & Fledglings. We inherited four Birdboxes with our New Home. We cleaned them up amd replaced them ! Now we have ROBINS - nesting in one & BLUE TITS in another. We see this as a sign that we will be very happy here ! Love the visual & Poem - thanks for Caring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 10th, 2020 14:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela Here - Ahhhhhhh FAY the many many Glories of Spring - Birds & Bird Song & Fledglings. We inherited four Birdboxes with our New Home. We cleaned them up amd replaced them ! Now we have ROBINS - nesting in one & BLUE TITS in another. We see this as a sign that we will be very happy here ! Love the visual & Poem - thanks for Caring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 10th, 2020 14:39
Enchanted.
Neville said:
impossible to read without the corners of me mouth movin heavenward and showing off my crow\'s-feet big time..... this is smashin Fay...….
Neville
April 10th, 2020 07:50
Neville said:
impossible to read without the corners of me mouth movin heavenward and showing off my crow\'s-feet big time..... this is smashin Fay...….
Neville
April 10th, 2020 07:50
Enchanted.
dusk arising said:
This is just such pleasure, so pleasing to read and i\'ll bet it gave you much pleasure to see what you had written.
A favourite for sure.
April 10th, 2020 07:22
dusk arising said:
This is just such pleasure, so pleasing to read and i\'ll bet it gave you much pleasure to see what you had written.
A favourite for sure.
April 10th, 2020 07:22
Enchanted.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful wards and picture Fay. New life is so precious.
Andy
April 10th, 2020 05:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful wards and picture Fay. New life is so precious.
Andy
April 10th, 2020 05:40
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