Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Stirrings.
dusk arising said:
You are so right. This is something which cannot be taught but rather has to be learned.
Learning too to reflect upon the positives of the past rather than dwell upon the negatives can transform how one feels about ones life existence and self worth.
A wholesome message conveyed in your poem today.
January 23rd, 2020 05:15
dusk arising said:
You are so right. This is something which cannot be taught but rather has to be learned.
Learning too to reflect upon the positives of the past rather than dwell upon the negatives can transform how one feels about ones life existence and self worth.
A wholesome message conveyed in your poem today.
January 23rd, 2020 05:15
A Given Day.
Goldfinch60 said:
May those \'given days\' be forever with you (and us) Fay.
Andy
January 23rd, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May those \'given days\' be forever with you (and us) Fay.
Andy
January 23rd, 2020 00:16
A Given Day.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Thank you for giving us the day...Fay.
An endearing write, the cream of Cornwall.
Ex animo, Alan
January 22nd, 2020 15:05
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Thank you for giving us the day...Fay.
An endearing write, the cream of Cornwall.
Ex animo, Alan
January 22nd, 2020 15:05
A Given Day.
dusk arising said:
Your old friend sounds a real treasure. Your words today brought some of her character to me and I warmed to her straight away.
January 22nd, 2020 11:32
dusk arising said:
Your old friend sounds a real treasure. Your words today brought some of her character to me and I warmed to her straight away.
January 22nd, 2020 11:32
A Given Day.
Neville said:
Perfectly poemed our Fay...
Yes good old Daphne DM....and her Kernow mackerel sky... Oh and happy birthday too x
January 22nd, 2020 06:14
Neville said:
Perfectly poemed our Fay...
Yes good old Daphne DM....and her Kernow mackerel sky... Oh and happy birthday too x
January 22nd, 2020 06:14
We There.
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Wrapped in immortality’s folds\" - what wonderful words I can believe that this is where my loved one is.
Great write Fay.
January 21st, 2020 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Wrapped in immortality’s folds\" - what wonderful words I can believe that this is where my loved one is.
Great write Fay.
January 21st, 2020 01:03
We There.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Ahhh Fay if only DEJA VU could carry us back to our trysting places ! However in this life we only really have one chance to relish the eagerness & inhibition of *Young Love* ! At 31 & 36 Brian & I are enjoying it now and will explore it much much deeper after April ! However in 50 years time we will need DEJA VU to relive it ! But for us now *The new is ceaseless ! * Thanks for caring & sharing - AMEN
Blessings - Peace - Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 20th, 2020 18:00
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Ahhh Fay if only DEJA VU could carry us back to our trysting places ! However in this life we only really have one chance to relish the eagerness & inhibition of *Young Love* ! At 31 & 36 Brian & I are enjoying it now and will explore it much much deeper after April ! However in 50 years time we will need DEJA VU to relive it ! But for us now *The new is ceaseless ! * Thanks for caring & sharing - AMEN
Blessings - Peace - Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 20th, 2020 18:00
We There.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very nice quatorzain Fay. Well executed, in my view, and a pleasure to read.
Ex animo, Alan
January 20th, 2020 15:29
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very nice quatorzain Fay. Well executed, in my view, and a pleasure to read.
Ex animo, Alan
January 20th, 2020 15:29
We There.
dusk arising said:
The wonderful thing which love is creates a treasure within us which, given the right moment or scenario, we can tap into and experience the high in our heart again. Leaving us with a wry grin thinking \'well i know i didnt miss out on THAT part of living did I?
But hey, it\'s never too late and, who knows, it could be even better were it to visit the heart later in life. I\'m game LOL.
January 20th, 2020 07:57
dusk arising said:
The wonderful thing which love is creates a treasure within us which, given the right moment or scenario, we can tap into and experience the high in our heart again. Leaving us with a wry grin thinking \'well i know i didnt miss out on THAT part of living did I?
But hey, it\'s never too late and, who knows, it could be even better were it to visit the heart later in life. I\'m game LOL.
January 20th, 2020 07:57
We There.
Nemo said:
Wow, Fay this an amazing write 🌹
Was a delightful read ❤️
January 20th, 2020 05:08
Nemo said:
Wow, Fay this an amazing write 🌹
Was a delightful read ❤️
January 20th, 2020 05:08
Rivering.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, may those rivers always be with us and full of life.
January 20th, 2020 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, may those rivers always be with us and full of life.
January 20th, 2020 01:38
Rivering.
dusk arising said:
The magic of naturally flowing water.
Taken to the bank upon your words again to marvel at this majesty where the tranquil past of yesterday gently haunts our very soul.
Deeply inspiring writing from you here Fay.
January 19th, 2020 18:45
dusk arising said:
The magic of naturally flowing water.
Taken to the bank upon your words again to marvel at this majesty where the tranquil past of yesterday gently haunts our very soul.
Deeply inspiring writing from you here Fay.
January 19th, 2020 18:45
Rivering.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Evening FAY thanks for an elegant poem with an excellent theme ! I lived in the Mersey and my first Girl Friend lived on the Dee (Neston) All rivers have a life of their own and Coastal Rivers ebb & flow with the tde. Rivers are a very important food source in the natural Food Chains & Food Webs ! The variety of life in British Rivers is more than 100 species not counting microorganisms ! Furry animals Stoat - Vole - Otter - Beaver etc are especially interesting ! Rivers & Aquaspirits are important in Folk Lore ! Thanks for sharing - A GEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
Please check our FUSION *DESERTED PLACES* - Thanks !
January 19th, 2020 18:06
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Evening FAY thanks for an elegant poem with an excellent theme ! I lived in the Mersey and my first Girl Friend lived on the Dee (Neston) All rivers have a life of their own and Coastal Rivers ebb & flow with the tde. Rivers are a very important food source in the natural Food Chains & Food Webs ! The variety of life in British Rivers is more than 100 species not counting microorganisms ! Furry animals Stoat - Vole - Otter - Beaver etc are especially interesting ! Rivers & Aquaspirits are important in Folk Lore ! Thanks for sharing - A GEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
Please check our FUSION *DESERTED PLACES* - Thanks !
January 19th, 2020 18:06
Rivering.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Evening FAY thanks for an elegant poem with an excellent theme ! I lived in the Mersey and my first Girl Friend lived on the Dee (Neston) All rivers have a life of theirown and Coastal Rivers ebb & flow with the tde. Rivers are a very important food source in the natural Food Chains & Food Webs ! The variety of life in British Rivers is more than 100 species not counting microorganisms ! Furry animals Stoat - Vole - Otter - Beaver etc are especially interesting ! Rivers & Aquaspirits are important in Folk Lore ! Thnaks for sharing - A GEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
January 19th, 2020 18:06
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Evening FAY thanks for an elegant poem with an excellent theme ! I lived in the Mersey and my first Girl Friend lived on the Dee (Neston) All rivers have a life of theirown and Coastal Rivers ebb & flow with the tde. Rivers are a very important food source in the natural Food Chains & Food Webs ! The variety of life in British Rivers is more than 100 species not counting microorganisms ! Furry animals Stoat - Vole - Otter - Beaver etc are especially interesting ! Rivers & Aquaspirits are important in Folk Lore ! Thnaks for sharing - A GEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
January 19th, 2020 18:06
Rivering.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... You do you so well, I was captivated by this wonders spell, it was a difficult read for me as I have no shame in slowly down to absorb new words for me... Thank you
January 19th, 2020 15:51
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... You do you so well, I was captivated by this wonders spell, it was a difficult read for me as I have no shame in slowly down to absorb new words for me... Thank you
January 19th, 2020 15:51
Rivering.
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this quite a bit. It tells of rivers, and their story. To describe the life in something that many simply overlook as a \"Little thing\" is already incredible. I like how you gave them all their fair chance. A wonderful write, Fay.
January 19th, 2020 11:07
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this quite a bit. It tells of rivers, and their story. To describe the life in something that many simply overlook as a \"Little thing\" is already incredible. I like how you gave them all their fair chance. A wonderful write, Fay.
January 19th, 2020 11:07
Rivering.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This eloquent piece flows with the current Fay. What a wonderful title too!
Will net it for my Fayve\'s if that\'s ok.
Ex animo, Alan
January 19th, 2020 08:20
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This eloquent piece flows with the current Fay. What a wonderful title too!
Will net it for my Fayve\'s if that\'s ok.
Ex animo, Alan
January 19th, 2020 08:20
Dawn\'s Finish.
Gino said:
Beautiful write Fay,...What a beautiful dawn you\'ve covered with such a token of words...
January 19th, 2020 04:32
Gino said:
Beautiful write Fay,...What a beautiful dawn you\'ve covered with such a token of words...
January 19th, 2020 04:32
Dawn\'s Finish.
Gino said:
Beautiful write Fay,...What a beautiful dawn you\'ve covered with such a token of words...
January 19th, 2020 04:29
Gino said:
Beautiful write Fay,...What a beautiful dawn you\'ve covered with such a token of words...
January 19th, 2020 04:29
Dawn\'s Finish.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
Wow! Awesome you have captured dawn in all its splendour!
Good write.
Keep writing
FineB
January 17th, 2020 07:11
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
Wow! Awesome you have captured dawn in all its splendour!
Good write.
Keep writing
FineB
January 17th, 2020 07:11
Challenge.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good, good write Fay. Reminds me of a Neil Innes song from 1968:-
The Urban Spaceman.
\'I don\'t feel sorrow
I don\'t feel pain:
If you were to knock me down
I\'d just stand up again.
Ex animo, Alan
January 16th, 2020 16:43
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good, good write Fay. Reminds me of a Neil Innes song from 1968:-
The Urban Spaceman.
\'I don\'t feel sorrow
I don\'t feel pain:
If you were to knock me down
I\'d just stand up again.
Ex animo, Alan
January 16th, 2020 16:43
Challenge.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! A beautifully crafted Poem on life*s vicisitudes !
V1. The challenge that I find in the Mountains fo my mind !
V2. I never distain the forbidding of the Plain !
V3. She who strikes the Anvil - always gains the prize !
Blessings & Peace & Joy !
Love Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡
January 16th, 2020 15:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! A beautifully crafted Poem on life*s vicisitudes !
V1. The challenge that I find in the Mountains fo my mind !
V2. I never distain the forbidding of the Plain !
V3. She who strikes the Anvil - always gains the prize !
Blessings & Peace & Joy !
Love Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡
January 16th, 2020 15:46
Challenge.
dusk arising said:
Let us not judge him/her by the goals he/she achieved but rather by the obstacles deftly negotiated and succeeded.
January 16th, 2020 14:02
dusk arising said:
Let us not judge him/her by the goals he/she achieved but rather by the obstacles deftly negotiated and succeeded.
January 16th, 2020 14:02
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