Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Valentine Moon.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful valentines write Fay.
Good artwork as well - Dali?
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful valentines write Fay.
Good artwork as well - Dali?
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:00
Winged Hearts.
MendedFences27 said:
If only an open heart were \"unassailable\" never to be broken. Somehow I assume that a \"winged heart\" can fly and bond with another. Sounds like a perfect description of Love. - Phil A.
February 14th, 2020 16:44
MendedFences27 said:
If only an open heart were \"unassailable\" never to be broken. Somehow I assume that a \"winged heart\" can fly and bond with another. Sounds like a perfect description of Love. - Phil A.
February 14th, 2020 16:44
Winged Hearts.
Neville said:
How good is this ….
Very and it V Da too innit…..
Hope you got loads my friend...
February 14th, 2020 09:59
Neville said:
How good is this ….
Very and it V Da too innit…..
Hope you got loads my friend...
February 14th, 2020 09:59
Winged Hearts.
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem Fay Powerful and strong, yet gentle as a feather
February 14th, 2020 08:11
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem Fay Powerful and strong, yet gentle as a feather
February 14th, 2020 08:11
Valentine Moon.
Neville said:
I don\'t do Valentines as a rule but loved these words …
hope you get loadsa cards, roses and stuff dear Fay.... x
February 13th, 2020 18:15
Neville said:
I don\'t do Valentines as a rule but loved these words …
hope you get loadsa cards, roses and stuff dear Fay.... x
February 13th, 2020 18:15
Valentine Moon.
Clara said:
Aw wow. This is really good! A valentines poem like no other I\'ve ever read before. Thanks for sharing!
February 13th, 2020 17:23
Clara said:
Aw wow. This is really good! A valentines poem like no other I\'ve ever read before. Thanks for sharing!
February 13th, 2020 17:23
Valentine Moon.
dusk arising said:
Please, please send me a valentines Missy Moon for the crater good of mankind i plea.
Although, to be honest it breaks my heart having to throw away all those envelopes which land on my doormat each year. Such a waste of wonderful trees.
February 13th, 2020 17:20
dusk arising said:
Please, please send me a valentines Missy Moon for the crater good of mankind i plea.
Although, to be honest it breaks my heart having to throw away all those envelopes which land on my doormat each year. Such a waste of wonderful trees.
February 13th, 2020 17:20
Valentine Moon.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - ANGELA here. Love the visual very whistful thinking - reflects the final doublet ! In the folklore of many Civilisations *Sister Moon* especially the New Moon - is associated with LOVE and there are many songs embellishing this theme ! The MOON can be large & luminous in February - provided its not to cloudy ! In the N Hemisphere it usually too cold - in February - to spoon al fresco in the Moonlight but Brian & I can enjoy it through the double glazed picture window ! Last year (2019) I was all alone in NZ on Valentines Evening ! The Moon was big and the air was balmy so I clung to Ruth (who was missing David) because the Tall Handsome KIWIS always had their eye to the main chance. We did get a few *Brotherly* hugs and kisses at the Catholic Church Valentines Dance but we remained Sober & Faithful - HONEST ! Brian I I love Valentines Day and Im staying at Brians Flat tonight (special concession) so we can have a Valentines Breakfast Together before work ! There is a Valentines Dinner & Dance tomorrow evening at the Catholic Church - We like to honour our SAINTS ! Please check my Poem Tomorrow *SAINT VALENTINE* an Acrostic 5 9 Sonnet !
Thanks for a beautiful Valentine Poem
Love the nuances in the Final Doublet !
LOVE Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
February 13th, 2020 15:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - ANGELA here. Love the visual very whistful thinking - reflects the final doublet ! In the folklore of many Civilisations *Sister Moon* especially the New Moon - is associated with LOVE and there are many songs embellishing this theme ! The MOON can be large & luminous in February - provided its not to cloudy ! In the N Hemisphere it usually too cold - in February - to spoon al fresco in the Moonlight but Brian & I can enjoy it through the double glazed picture window ! Last year (2019) I was all alone in NZ on Valentines Evening ! The Moon was big and the air was balmy so I clung to Ruth (who was missing David) because the Tall Handsome KIWIS always had their eye to the main chance. We did get a few *Brotherly* hugs and kisses at the Catholic Church Valentines Dance but we remained Sober & Faithful - HONEST ! Brian I I love Valentines Day and Im staying at Brians Flat tonight (special concession) so we can have a Valentines Breakfast Together before work ! There is a Valentines Dinner & Dance tomorrow evening at the Catholic Church - We like to honour our SAINTS ! Please check my Poem Tomorrow *SAINT VALENTINE* an Acrostic 5 9 Sonnet !
Thanks for a beautiful Valentine Poem
Love the nuances in the Final Doublet !
LOVE Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
February 13th, 2020 15:27
Valentine Moon.
MendedFences27 said:
Nothing says Valentine\'s romance like a gorgeous moonlight. Hearts tonight will be waiting to see if their \"crush\" will call.
A beautiful poem Fay. A great description of the angst of the day. Some may get broken, but many will rejoice.
Happy V-Day - Phil A.
February 13th, 2020 14:19
MendedFences27 said:
Nothing says Valentine\'s romance like a gorgeous moonlight. Hearts tonight will be waiting to see if their \"crush\" will call.
A beautiful poem Fay. A great description of the angst of the day. Some may get broken, but many will rejoice.
Happy V-Day - Phil A.
February 13th, 2020 14:19
Valentine Moon.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good poem of course Fay, Lovely subject from your silver tongue. Hope you get all you wish for tomorrow. We have just adopted a beautiful new mare here in Yorks so she will be getting my valentine and a bunch of carrots. I will send her a card though ~ via moonpig!
Ex animo, Alan
February 13th, 2020 08:02
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good poem of course Fay, Lovely subject from your silver tongue. Hope you get all you wish for tomorrow. We have just adopted a beautiful new mare here in Yorks so she will be getting my valentine and a bunch of carrots. I will send her a card though ~ via moonpig!
Ex animo, Alan
February 13th, 2020 08:02
Beginnings.
Poetic Dan said:
exultation.. Was a new one for me ;) thank you so much for bringing me her, I glad not to miss it!
I still need to absorb it all better but it felt Regenerating for me, guess it is the willingness to understand something new.
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
February 13th, 2020 07:06
Poetic Dan said:
exultation.. Was a new one for me ;) thank you so much for bringing me her, I glad not to miss it!
I still need to absorb it all better but it felt Regenerating for me, guess it is the willingness to understand something new.
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
February 13th, 2020 07:06
Beginnings.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Fay, as we get older we enjoy life more and more, I certainly am.
RIP Kevin - you will be missed.
Andy
February 13th, 2020 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Fay, as we get older we enjoy life more and more, I certainly am.
RIP Kevin - you will be missed.
Andy
February 13th, 2020 02:57
Beginnings.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you wrote a very fine tribute to Kevin. I am going to miss his writing too. But that is life. We come and we go. Hopefully we can do something worthwhile during our short time on this earth.
February 13th, 2020 02:33
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you wrote a very fine tribute to Kevin. I am going to miss his writing too. But that is life. We come and we go. Hopefully we can do something worthwhile during our short time on this earth.
February 13th, 2020 02:33
Beginnings.
Neville said:
This is so fitting for such a very, very sad occasion..
I had such a lot of time and respect for Kevin may he now RIP
Great words & a fine tribute Fay
Neville
February 12th, 2020 14:39
Neville said:
This is so fitting for such a very, very sad occasion..
I had such a lot of time and respect for Kevin may he now RIP
Great words & a fine tribute Fay
Neville
February 12th, 2020 14:39
Beginnings.
dusk arising said:
You\'ve so well encompassed the joy of life in advancing years here. I felt you were writing my own feelings.
Sadness though in us all today with the news of Kevin. A unique and exceptional poet. Artistically painting mood with his words. A true romantic who shared with us his lust for life as well as his fragility.
I wish you well as you move to the great beyond poet friend.
February 12th, 2020 13:38
dusk arising said:
You\'ve so well encompassed the joy of life in advancing years here. I felt you were writing my own feelings.
Sadness though in us all today with the news of Kevin. A unique and exceptional poet. Artistically painting mood with his words. A true romantic who shared with us his lust for life as well as his fragility.
I wish you well as you move to the great beyond poet friend.
February 12th, 2020 13:38
SHALL WE ?
dusk arising said:
Oh for contentment! That knowing togetherness bred of love trust and respect. Oft the aftermath of the intellectual skirmishes of besting whilst getting to know and test the other.
February 12th, 2020 03:31
dusk arising said:
Oh for contentment! That knowing togetherness bred of love trust and respect. Oft the aftermath of the intellectual skirmishes of besting whilst getting to know and test the other.
February 12th, 2020 03:31
SHALL WE ?
FredPeyer said:
There is definitely something to \"Silence is Golden\", and you wrote about it beautifully. As always!
February 11th, 2020 21:52
FredPeyer said:
There is definitely something to \"Silence is Golden\", and you wrote about it beautifully. As always!
February 11th, 2020 21:52
SHALL WE ?
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Power in your words Fay. Delightfully composed, delightfully received.
Ex animo, Alan
February 11th, 2020 15:31
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Power in your words Fay. Delightfully composed, delightfully received.
Ex animo, Alan
February 11th, 2020 15:31
SHALL WE ?
Neville said:
Oh’ how I envy your pen and your keyboard.. Like the late great L.N Cohen wrote.... ‘and her fingers, like a weavers, quick and cool’
Neville
February 11th, 2020 10:36
Neville said:
Oh’ how I envy your pen and your keyboard.. Like the late great L.N Cohen wrote.... ‘and her fingers, like a weavers, quick and cool’
Neville
February 11th, 2020 10:36
SHALL WE ?
Poetic Dan said:
Small we! O my days what a read, the love that words can fail but yet some how you prevail... How tender your vibration must be, thank you kindly for this pleasure indeed!
February 11th, 2020 09:37
Poetic Dan said:
Small we! O my days what a read, the love that words can fail but yet some how you prevail... How tender your vibration must be, thank you kindly for this pleasure indeed!
February 11th, 2020 09:37
Resolutions.
Goldfinch60 said:
In our life we learn from our experiences both good and bad and we can then reach that euphoria as brilliantly found in your wonderful words Fay.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
In our life we learn from our experiences both good and bad and we can then reach that euphoria as brilliantly found in your wonderful words Fay.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 01:41
Resolutions.
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much (verbosely) to making resolutions! heehee.
February 10th, 2020 16:21
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much (verbosely) to making resolutions! heehee.
February 10th, 2020 16:21
Resolutions.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - A beautiful Poem FAY on one of my fave fads RESOLUTIONS ! At the beginning of each New Yera we all make Resolutions to ameliorate our lives. We resolve to be more focussed and we pray for new Opportunities ! If we are Optimists - when we break our Resolutions (usually in February ! ) we simply make new Ones ! We push ahead scything new Paths to eliminate past Failures ! This year after April - BRIAN & I will have to make Resolutions in TANDEM ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
February 10th, 2020 15:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - A beautiful Poem FAY on one of my fave fads RESOLUTIONS ! At the beginning of each New Yera we all make Resolutions to ameliorate our lives. We resolve to be more focussed and we pray for new Opportunities ! If we are Optimists - when we break our Resolutions (usually in February ! ) we simply make new Ones ! We push ahead scything new Paths to eliminate past Failures ! This year after April - BRIAN & I will have to make Resolutions in TANDEM ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
February 10th, 2020 15:50
Resolutions.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - A beautiful Poem FAY on one of my fave fads RESOLUTIONS ! At the beginning of each New Yera we all make Resolutions to ameliorate our lives. We resolve to be more focussed and we pray for new Opportunities ! If we are Optimists - when we break our resoltions (usually in February ! ) we simply make new Ones ! We push ahead scything new Paths to eliminate past Failures ! This year after April - BRIAN & I will hav eto make Resoltions in TANDEM ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
February 10th, 2020 15:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - A beautiful Poem FAY on one of my fave fads RESOLUTIONS ! At the beginning of each New Yera we all make Resolutions to ameliorate our lives. We resolve to be more focussed and we pray for new Opportunities ! If we are Optimists - when we break our resoltions (usually in February ! ) we simply make new Ones ! We push ahead scything new Paths to eliminate past Failures ! This year after April - BRIAN & I will hav eto make Resoltions in TANDEM ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
February 10th, 2020 15:50
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