Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Only Love.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks FAY for a very precious Love Poem ~ All about us!

ANGELA ~ Only SHE could make this change in ME
Only SHE could seal my Destiny
Only SHE and SHE alone ~ could thrill me like SHE do
And fill my Heart with Love ~ the whole Day through .......

ANGELA ~ the same Yesterday ~ Today & Forever
Because together we have found TRUE LOVE ~ AMEN

Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿค๐Ÿงก

March 7th, 2020 12:48

Over ?
Neville said:

Its not over until the fat lady sings..... You have crafted a little belter here Fay.... dunno why I suddenly felt a pang of guilt...

Neville x


March 7th, 2020 12:46

Only Love.
Saxon Crow said:

So so true. Love does only understand love. Where do your words all come from Fay? Mesmerising!

March 6th, 2020 16:57

Only Love.
Clara said:

Oh the romance... Blissful poem today Fay!

March 6th, 2020 16:43

Only Love.
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Fay.

Andy

March 6th, 2020 15:55

Only Love.
Michael Edwards said:

Love - such a wonderful thing - mind you after 56 years of marriage we couldn\'t give a darn whether or not the lights on or off. Just so pleased to be still together.

March 6th, 2020 14:15

Only Love.
FredPeyer said:

Fay, from nature to human nature, you really know how to say it well. Kudos!

March 6th, 2020 11:57

Only Love.
dusk arising said:

OK I get it, so you only see your lover when the lights are out. Least ways its the image of him in dim light which stays with you... hmmmm mind wandering now.... why would that be so?

Very sensual poetic Fay today.

March 6th, 2020 10:32

Only Love.
Neville said:

A seriously sublime and somewhat subtly sensual love ๐Ÿ’• poem is what we have here, thanks to thee dear Fay... Cheers ๐Ÿท

Neville ๐Ÿ˜Ž

March 6th, 2020 08:37

Only Love.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. Only love makes me swoon! Poor old Orchi. Will it be too much for him?! heehee.

March 6th, 2020 03:52

Mischief.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Fay, that wind can be very tormenting at times.

Andy

March 6th, 2020 01:23

Mischief.
Clara said:

Oh, this is such a fun little piece. Aptly titled... Very much enjoyed it.

March 5th, 2020 14:36

Mischief.
FredPeyer said:

Der Wind, der Wind, das himmlische Kind! Your poem really is full of mischief. Like it lot.

March 5th, 2020 12:43

Mischief.
Michael Edwards said:

Super stuff Fay.

March 5th, 2020 12:38

Mischief.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

March 5th, 2020 11:07

Mischief.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

You have blown me away Fay. Love your blustery poem.

Ex animo, Alan

March 5th, 2020 10:59

Mischief.
dusk arising said:

LOVE IT love it love it! I have just read Saxon Crow\'s windy piece and i am well in the mood for the blustery bustle.
What sheer joy your poem is today. You REALLY capture the excitement of the wind. As did Saxon\'s writing today, this brought back childhood adventure and zest to my imagination.

Your poem is one which I know would delight Children all over - and not just the young one\'s LOL.

Yes, a MUST for my favourites. Thank you.

March 5th, 2020 05:43

Mischief.
Saxon Crow said:

Oooooooo Fay we must be psychically in tune. I\'ve literally just posted a windy poem!!! I enjoyed yours very much

March 5th, 2020 05:26

Yellowness.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for a lovely tribute to the Daffodil. For me the yellow colour speaks of Sunshine and the sunny days of May ! Your Poem has done the humble DAFF very proud - AMEN

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

March 4th, 2020 17:19

Yellowness.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

...sets your mind to wandering, as a cloud. Yellow is the colour of the springtime of my youth. The trumpeted fanfare announces it\'s arrival... Thanks for the memoy Fay.

Ex animo, Alan

March 4th, 2020 15:10

Yellowness.
Michael Edwards said:

Super write and, like Fred, I love the concluding two lines.

March 4th, 2020 12:23

Yellowness.
FredPeyer said:

Love that last stanza, Fay! And according to quantum theory, all we are is vibrations!

March 4th, 2020 12:16

Yellowness.
Saxon Crow said:

with Flora\'s alchemic potions, acclaimed
as therapy\'s finest.

Best line ever. Another masterpiece Fay :)

March 4th, 2020 10:30

Yellowness.
dusk arising said:

Envious of your getting down to eye level these beauties.... at sea with daffodils. Not many around me at the moment but i\'m staying indoors a lot anyway.
Your words remind me of the time i had an apartment in a stately home... the gardens awash with yellow and over enthusiastic little girls innocently harvesting the \'crop\' to bring indoors and adorn the hallways.

Ah springtime enters amidst the fanfare of yellow trumpets..... beckoning our minds to look forward to sweltering summer ahead.

March 4th, 2020 08:34

Yellowness.
Neville said:

You could not have chosen a more appropriate colour to announce the nearness and coming of spring.. Nor all those other things that make one smile whilst still on the very cusp of it

Neville

March 4th, 2020 07:20

Yellowness.
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful write Fay, is was also laying in the field of your words.

Andy

March 4th, 2020 05:42

Yellowness.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

March 4th, 2020 05:00

Richer.
Goldfinch60 said:

What could be richer indeed Fay, nature in all its glory is priceless.

March 4th, 2020 01:48

Richer.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Evenng Fay just finished having a coffee with Brian before we watch the Liverpool Chelsea Cup Tie ! Loved the quote ! As you well know Brian & I are very very rich because we have discovered TRUE LOVE in each other and and that is priceless and will se us through the rest of our lives OGETHER - AMEN !
Because GOD *Created life on Earth* I see Beauy - Purpose - Order & Design in all Natural Things. Brian has a large collection of sem-precious gem stones which he uses in his teaching and the College in its safe has a small collection of Precious Gemstones which they use on the Gemmology Course. I like Jewellry but I use MAMAS rather than building up a Collection of my own - We have a House to Furnish ! What intrigues me about Gemstones is their COLOUR and their CUT to enhance the colour. They are STATIC so they can be examined at leisure. The colours of the GEMSTONES are repeated in the Flora & Fauna which are Dynamic which influences the dimension of movement and interction with Sunlight. In the tail of Peacock - the scales of the Rainbow Trout - the plumage of the Kingfisher - the clours of Spring Flowers and the multihued Millions of Global Sunrises & Sunsets every Year everyone a perect dynamic gemstone. God knew He has created a Planet of infinite beauty so he created Man & Woman with an incredible set of sences - Sight - Scent - Sound - Savour & Sense of touch so we could all *Say to Ourselves - What a Wonderful World* AMEN. Your elegant Poem just gives us a glimpse inside Gods Treasure House of infinite Beauty. Each of us has a great responsibilty to Protect & Preserve the only *Living Planet* we are aware of in our Galaxy - AMEN ! Sorry for rambling on but Brian & I are very passionate obout Our Amazing Planet and the negect of Man to care for it. Thanks for caring & sharing.

Blessings & Peace & Joy in beautiful Cornwall !
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

March 3rd, 2020 15:17

Richer.
myself and me said:

Your writing interpret the quote perfectly.

March 3rd, 2020 14:30



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