Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Swansong.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Fay, those whopper swans are magnificent birds. We had some fly over the croquet lawn a few days ago.
Andy
February 25th, 2020 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Fay, those whopper swans are magnificent birds. We had some fly over the croquet lawn a few days ago.
Andy
February 25th, 2020 01:43
Swansong.
dusk arising said:
Don\'t we all share your wish too.
Lovely short piece today which made me grin with your bugling and honkings.
February 24th, 2020 10:24
dusk arising said:
Don\'t we all share your wish too.
Lovely short piece today which made me grin with your bugling and honkings.
February 24th, 2020 10:24
Swansong.
Saxon Crow said:
Ypur imagination clearly gives you wings. Good poem Fay
February 24th, 2020 07:36
Saxon Crow said:
Ypur imagination clearly gives you wings. Good poem Fay
February 24th, 2020 07:36
Swansong.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Those birds coming or going at this season?
February 24th, 2020 05:48
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Those birds coming or going at this season?
February 24th, 2020 05:48
Swansong.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing FAY - just catching up on MPS before work ! Hope you*re not thinking of leaving. Bird Migration is a Mystery but also a neccessity. Like Human Migration. Love the PIC love the POEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Loe Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙
February 24th, 2020 04:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing FAY - just catching up on MPS before work ! Hope you*re not thinking of leaving. Bird Migration is a Mystery but also a neccessity. Like Human Migration. Love the PIC love the POEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Loe Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙
February 24th, 2020 04:46
She Rises.
Goldfinch60 said:
The sun in our lives is there every morning and always will be, great write Fay.
Andy
February 22nd, 2020 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
The sun in our lives is there every morning and always will be, great write Fay.
Andy
February 22nd, 2020 01:05
She Rises.
dusk arising said:
Overpowered by majestic sun
darkness hides in shadows
until, reaching it\'s zenith
darkness recedes beneath
where rat and damp foulness
give solace
Fay sometimes you create a vision in my mind ,with your writing, that has to \'out\'. Such was today.
\'Over first tremble of her prelude to fire\' what an amazing line of poetry.
February 21st, 2020 19:20
dusk arising said:
Overpowered by majestic sun
darkness hides in shadows
until, reaching it\'s zenith
darkness recedes beneath
where rat and damp foulness
give solace
Fay sometimes you create a vision in my mind ,with your writing, that has to \'out\'. Such was today.
\'Over first tremble of her prelude to fire\' what an amazing line of poetry.
February 21st, 2020 19:20
She Rises.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good evening Fay ! Thanks for a great tribute to Brother Sun the sustainer of all life on Earth through Photosynthesis and maintainng the ambient Temperature - currently at 16C (= 61F).
V 1. Let there be light
V 2. Let the sunlight define the DAY
V 3. Yes indeed each New Day is a Surprise but it is also
a Provision. One of our Creators sublime Gifts to Mankind.
It behoves us not to agravate the SUN into Global Warming !
The SUN is mechanistic and responds to Our Excesses !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
February 21st, 2020 16:54
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good evening Fay ! Thanks for a great tribute to Brother Sun the sustainer of all life on Earth through Photosynthesis and maintainng the ambient Temperature - currently at 16C (= 61F).
V 1. Let there be light
V 2. Let the sunlight define the DAY
V 3. Yes indeed each New Day is a Surprise but it is also
a Provision. One of our Creators sublime Gifts to Mankind.
It behoves us not to agravate the SUN into Global Warming !
The SUN is mechanistic and responds to Our Excesses !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
February 21st, 2020 16:54
She Rises.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A warming write for today Fay, well done
\'The blush of dawn may yet restore
Our light and joy and hope once more.
Sad soul, take comfort, nor forget
That sunrise never failed us yet\'.
~ Celia Thaxter.
Ex animo, Alan
February 21st, 2020 10:10
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A warming write for today Fay, well done
\'The blush of dawn may yet restore
Our light and joy and hope once more.
Sad soul, take comfort, nor forget
That sunrise never failed us yet\'.
~ Celia Thaxter.
Ex animo, Alan
February 21st, 2020 10:10
She Rises.
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s sunshine on the horizon - super write Fay.
February 21st, 2020 03:21
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s sunshine on the horizon - super write Fay.
February 21st, 2020 03:21
She Rises.
Fay Slimm. said:
I wrote these few lines after sight of a sun-rise last summer - - - hope it helps to illuminate the waiting until summer arrives in the U.K. again.
February 21st, 2020 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
I wrote these few lines after sight of a sun-rise last summer - - - hope it helps to illuminate the waiting until summer arrives in the U.K. again.
February 21st, 2020 03:19
Knowing.
Goldfinch60 said:
That mystery of love is always in us and looking for the answer to the mystery always pulls us further into the depths of love.
Another wonderful write Fay, this will have to go into favourites.
Andy
February 21st, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That mystery of love is always in us and looking for the answer to the mystery always pulls us further into the depths of love.
Another wonderful write Fay, this will have to go into favourites.
Andy
February 21st, 2020 01:41
Knowing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing & caring with this awesome Ode ! The experience of Love & being in Love is indeed a many splendoured thng ! When it enters our LIVES we surely KNOW it even though we cant always epressit verbally. Love is indeed better felt than telt ! All those we love (or have loved) are firmly etched in our sub-conscious. Recall can result in intense joy but also intense pain ! Love never wilts and from time to time our minds (and hormones !) release a fresh bredth & depth of Love ! Thats how it is with US ~ Amen. Thanks for undestanding !
Love - Joy & Peace to YOU
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
February 20th, 2020 18:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing & caring with this awesome Ode ! The experience of Love & being in Love is indeed a many splendoured thng ! When it enters our LIVES we surely KNOW it even though we cant always epressit verbally. Love is indeed better felt than telt ! All those we love (or have loved) are firmly etched in our sub-conscious. Recall can result in intense joy but also intense pain ! Love never wilts and from time to time our minds (and hormones !) release a fresh bredth & depth of Love ! Thats how it is with US ~ Amen. Thanks for undestanding !
Love - Joy & Peace to YOU
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
February 20th, 2020 18:46
Knowing.
dusk arising said:
The last verse got me. To me it speaks of repressed desire now released upon sharing the wealth of true love again.
Wonderful weaving of embroidered metaphor throughout.
February 20th, 2020 13:04
dusk arising said:
The last verse got me. To me it speaks of repressed desire now released upon sharing the wealth of true love again.
Wonderful weaving of embroidered metaphor throughout.
February 20th, 2020 13:04
Knowing.
Michael Edwards said:
I knew I\'d like this before I read it - great stuff Fay.
February 20th, 2020 11:00
Michael Edwards said:
I knew I\'d like this before I read it - great stuff Fay.
February 20th, 2020 11:00
Knowing.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I never knew there was so much in knowing!
February 20th, 2020 08:07
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I never knew there was so much in knowing!
February 20th, 2020 08:07
Knowing.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very fine piece Fay and another delight to read.
\'The most beautiful and deepest experience a man or a woman can have is the sense of mysterious\'. ~ A. Einstein
Ex animo, Alan
February 20th, 2020 05:56
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very fine piece Fay and another delight to read.
\'The most beautiful and deepest experience a man or a woman can have is the sense of mysterious\'. ~ A. Einstein
Ex animo, Alan
February 20th, 2020 05:56
Besting.
Goldfinch60 said:
Another wonderful poem Fay, that last verse is so meaningful and I miss it so much.
Andy
February 20th, 2020 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Another wonderful poem Fay, that last verse is so meaningful and I miss it so much.
Andy
February 20th, 2020 01:55
Besting.
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem, although myvwife informs my gentle whispers are in fact snores!
February 19th, 2020 23:45
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem, although myvwife informs my gentle whispers are in fact snores!
February 19th, 2020 23:45
Besting.
Michael Edwards said:
A super write but then I wouldn\'t expect anything less from your talented pen dear Fay.
February 19th, 2020 16:25
Michael Edwards said:
A super write but then I wouldn\'t expect anything less from your talented pen dear Fay.
February 19th, 2020 16:25
Besting.
MendedFences27 said:
The chorus of Cicadas chirping close to Sunset on a Summer\'s night..
A host of brilliant rhythms poetically presented. The last a stunning one. a beautiful poem, Fay.- Phil A..
February 19th, 2020 15:08
MendedFences27 said:
The chorus of Cicadas chirping close to Sunset on a Summer\'s night..
A host of brilliant rhythms poetically presented. The last a stunning one. a beautiful poem, Fay.- Phil A..
February 19th, 2020 15:08
Besting.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Lots and lots of metaphors here Fay.
Very cleverly executed. I doubt it could be bested.
Ex animo, Alan
February 19th, 2020 14:09
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Lots and lots of metaphors here Fay.
Very cleverly executed. I doubt it could be bested.
Ex animo, Alan
February 19th, 2020 14:09
Scaled
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. Love can never be stopped by anything in our worlds.
Andy
February 19th, 2020 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. Love can never be stopped by anything in our worlds.
Andy
February 19th, 2020 02:49
Scaled
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Fay ~ love the visuals ! Thnaks for a very challenguing Poem. Bcause MEN are from Mars & LADIES are from Venus their understanding of & expectation from Love is very different ! In Youth Men are looking for *FLINGS* and Ladies for *FULFILMENT* This explains some of the frustrations of early couurtship ! I worked hard at it for over 15 years (17 - 33) then i met Angela when I was 33. A strong minded YANG met a strong minded YIN ! Our UNION worked because at a deeper level True Love i the same for YIN & YANG so we resonated and two isolated HEARTS became ONE ~ AMEN ! It is the superficial aspects of LOVE that clash and result in incompatibility ! TRUE LOVE is beyond human comprehension so it is not something to be debated but something to be EXPERIENCED & ENJOYED ! We would rather be together than with anyone else on Earth. We have now found what we were searching for in our Teens and twenties ~ AMEN Thanks for the challenge !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Brian & Angela 💛💛💛💛💛
February 18th, 2020 18:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Fay ~ love the visuals ! Thnaks for a very challenguing Poem. Bcause MEN are from Mars & LADIES are from Venus their understanding of & expectation from Love is very different ! In Youth Men are looking for *FLINGS* and Ladies for *FULFILMENT* This explains some of the frustrations of early couurtship ! I worked hard at it for over 15 years (17 - 33) then i met Angela when I was 33. A strong minded YANG met a strong minded YIN ! Our UNION worked because at a deeper level True Love i the same for YIN & YANG so we resonated and two isolated HEARTS became ONE ~ AMEN ! It is the superficial aspects of LOVE that clash and result in incompatibility ! TRUE LOVE is beyond human comprehension so it is not something to be debated but something to be EXPERIENCED & ENJOYED ! We would rather be together than with anyone else on Earth. We have now found what we were searching for in our Teens and twenties ~ AMEN Thanks for the challenge !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Brian & Angela 💛💛💛💛💛
February 18th, 2020 18:34
Scaled
MendedFences27 said:
Simply irresistible!
Love shatters all defenses. It can be an immediate crashing , or a slow erosion. Hearts on fire will never be denied. Each and every home is a castle.
A terrific statement on true love. Great imagery and well chosen words. A nice way to start my day. -
Phil A.
February 18th, 2020 10:22
MendedFences27 said:
Simply irresistible!
Love shatters all defenses. It can be an immediate crashing , or a slow erosion. Hearts on fire will never be denied. Each and every home is a castle.
A terrific statement on true love. Great imagery and well chosen words. A nice way to start my day. -
Phil A.
February 18th, 2020 10:22
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