Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Valentine Moon.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

February 13th, 2020 04:42

Beginnings.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful tribute Fay, as we get older we enjoy life more and more, I certainly am.
RIP Kevin - you will be missed.

Andy

February 13th, 2020 02:57

Beginnings.
FredPeyer said:

Fay, you wrote a very fine tribute to Kevin. I am going to miss his writing too. But that is life. We come and we go. Hopefully we can do something worthwhile during our short time on this earth.

February 13th, 2020 02:33

Beginnings.
Neville said:

This is so fitting for such a very, very sad occasion..
I had such a lot of time and respect for Kevin may he now RIP

Great words & a fine tribute Fay

Neville

February 12th, 2020 14:39

Beginnings.
dusk arising said:

You\'ve so well encompassed the joy of life in advancing years here. I felt you were writing my own feelings.

Sadness though in us all today with the news of Kevin. A unique and exceptional poet. Artistically painting mood with his words. A true romantic who shared with us his lust for life as well as his fragility.


I wish you well as you move to the great beyond poet friend.

February 12th, 2020 13:38

Beginnings.
orchidee said:

A fine tribute Fay.

February 12th, 2020 12:24

SHALL WE ?
dusk arising said:

Oh for contentment! That knowing togetherness bred of love trust and respect. Oft the aftermath of the intellectual skirmishes of besting whilst getting to know and test the other.

February 12th, 2020 03:31

SHALL WE ?
FredPeyer said:

There is definitely something to \"Silence is Golden\", and you wrote about it beautifully. As always!

February 11th, 2020 21:52

SHALL WE ?
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Power in your words Fay. Delightfully composed, delightfully received.

Ex animo, Alan

February 11th, 2020 15:31

SHALL WE ?
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes minds can write to each other.

Andy

February 11th, 2020 15:26

SHALL WE ?
Neville said:

Oh’ how I envy your pen and your keyboard.. Like the late great L.N Cohen wrote.... β€˜and her fingers, like a weavers, quick and cool’

Neville

February 11th, 2020 10:36

SHALL WE ?
Poetic Dan said:

Small we! O my days what a read, the love that words can fail but yet some how you prevail... How tender your vibration must be, thank you kindly for this pleasure indeed!

February 11th, 2020 09:37

SHALL WE ?
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

February 11th, 2020 07:20

Resolutions.
Goldfinch60 said:

In our life we learn from our experiences both good and bad and we can then reach that euphoria as brilliantly found in your wonderful words Fay.

Andy

February 11th, 2020 01:41

Resolutions.
orchidee said:

I never knew there was so much (verbosely) to making resolutions! heehee.

February 10th, 2020 16:21

Resolutions.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - A beautiful Poem FAY on one of my fave fads RESOLUTIONS ! At the beginning of each New Yera we all make Resolutions to ameliorate our lives. We resolve to be more focussed and we pray for new Opportunities ! If we are Optimists - when we break our Resolutions (usually in February ! ) we simply make new Ones ! We push ahead scything new Paths to eliminate past Failures ! This year after April - BRIAN & I will have to make Resolutions in TANDEM ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

February 10th, 2020 15:50

Resolutions.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - A beautiful Poem FAY on one of my fave fads RESOLUTIONS ! At the beginning of each New Yera we all make Resolutions to ameliorate our lives. We resolve to be more focussed and we pray for new Opportunities ! If we are Optimists - when we break our resoltions (usually in February ! ) we simply make new Ones ! We push ahead scything new Paths to eliminate past Failures ! This year after April - BRIAN & I will hav eto make Resoltions in TANDEM ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

February 10th, 2020 15:50

Resolutions.
Nemo said:

Well I feel motivated now 😁
Great write, as always 🌹

February 10th, 2020 14:55

Resolutions.
Daydream Believer said:

I read this a few times and it got better each time I read it. To not be afraid to make changes. To accept mistakes are lessons to help us achieve better things. But to grasp change and not stall it. To make life it’s greatest adventure

Wonderful poem

February 10th, 2020 13:09

Resolutions.
dusk arising said:

Do you know, after reading this piece, i\'m getting all enthusiastic. If only that damned wind would stop blowing i\'d be out there repairing my fences and building the shed that needs to be built.

Yep, you\'ve done it.... got me all rowsted up and ready to go....
....... but it\'s raining now as well.

February 10th, 2020 10:22

Resolutions.
Mil57Man said:

The ultimate test we call life. live and learn for we have one time to get it right. When you feel you can no longer stand. You can always reach out and tag Heavenly Hands. Beautiful poem Fay Slimm.

February 10th, 2020 09:57

Resolutions.
Neville said:

You sure have this poetry lark off to a fine art my friend and pon my word, a philosopher too.....

Yes.. be yourself is sound advice..... N

February 10th, 2020 05:17

Lovescape.
Neville said:

I would be with thee now my Lady if not for these angry storms here now, this knight abhors and true...…

verily well writ and tempting to venture out write now By Saint John..

N

February 9th, 2020 06:04

Lovescape.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

A moth to a flame Fay wonderful piece Bravo!

February 6th, 2020 09:58

Lovescape.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Queen Fay.

Andy

February 6th, 2020 01:06

Lovescape.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

So very nice, again, Fay. A most enjoyable read and the language is wonderful.

Ex animo, Alan



February 5th, 2020 15:47

Lovescape.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

February 5th, 2020 11:24

Lovescape.
dusk arising said:

Blimey.... to think how language matured over the years... in the parlance of the sixties this would have become \"Come and get me big boy\".
But am i in a quandary over which is the most romantic? Nay, forsooth, thou hast cast a spell upon which to tarry whilst the very warmth therein pervades my breast.


February 5th, 2020 07:42

Greeting.
Nicholas Browning said:

I\'m honestly so ready for those flowers to wave at me. It\'s been months since I\'ve seen them!

February 4th, 2020 22:27

Greeting.
dusk arising said:

This to usher in early spring. Let us hope frosts will not punish such brave and welcome cheer.

February 4th, 2020 16:08



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