Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
New Leaves.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. May your New year be full of wonderful leaves and beautiful flowers.
January 2nd, 2020 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. May your New year be full of wonderful leaves and beautiful flowers.
January 2nd, 2020 01:37
New Leaves.
dusk arising said:
From one fallen leaf to another... this was a pleasure to read and behold. Wishing you many more seasons of foliage to contemplate.
January 1st, 2020 14:13
dusk arising said:
From one fallen leaf to another... this was a pleasure to read and behold. Wishing you many more seasons of foliage to contemplate.
January 1st, 2020 14:13
New Leaves.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good stuff Fay, I see that you\'re branching out (sorry).
HNY
Ex animo, Alan
January 1st, 2020 08:39
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good stuff Fay, I see that you\'re branching out (sorry).
HNY
Ex animo, Alan
January 1st, 2020 08:39
New Leaves.
Michael Edwards said:
Woew - some write - and a happy new year to you Fay - here\'s to another poetry laden 12 months.
January 1st, 2020 06:05
Michael Edwards said:
Woew - some write - and a happy new year to you Fay - here\'s to another poetry laden 12 months.
January 1st, 2020 06:05
New Leaves.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Happy 2020 Fay - Im honoured to be the first to comment on this very elegant ODE ! It is perfect in Rhyme - Rhythm & exact Topiary ! Also love the Message of OLD LEAVES being replaced by NEW ! This is very TRUE for BRIAN & I - New relationship HUSBAND & WIFE - New Home (some news to share later !) - & God Willing - the start of a NEW FAMILY - everything NEW ! Our thoughts and Prayers are with ANDY today as he bravely faces a NEW LIFE PHASE Today ! Nature has its purpose in the timing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 1st, 2020 05:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Happy 2020 Fay - Im honoured to be the first to comment on this very elegant ODE ! It is perfect in Rhyme - Rhythm & exact Topiary ! Also love the Message of OLD LEAVES being replaced by NEW ! This is very TRUE for BRIAN & I - New relationship HUSBAND & WIFE - New Home (some news to share later !) - & God Willing - the start of a NEW FAMILY - everything NEW ! Our thoughts and Prayers are with ANDY today as he bravely faces a NEW LIFE PHASE Today ! Nature has its purpose in the timing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 1st, 2020 05:50
Sparkle.
Goldfinch60 said:
May your New Year be filled with the light of glory and wonder Fay.
Andy.
January 1st, 2020 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
May your New Year be filled with the light of glory and wonder Fay.
Andy.
January 1st, 2020 02:21
Sparkle.
Suresh said:
May each sparkle shine like a bright thought, a selfless deed, and a warm welcoming heart.
December 31st, 2019 21:38
Suresh said:
May each sparkle shine like a bright thought, a selfless deed, and a warm welcoming heart.
December 31st, 2019 21:38
Sparkle.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good evening FAY - Im just catching up on MPS before the party starts @ 10pm in Brians Flat to welcome in 2020 - AMEN. 2019 has been dramatic for us because - not only were we together after 15 months 11,500 miles apart(why is NZ so so far away from the UK ? !) but also we know that we will be together for ever AMEN ! So 2020 will be a very special Year for US ! A real NEW BEGINNING ! We were shocked & saddened to read ANDYS News - though we had been forwarned - It seemed so final & so sudden ! We have promised Him our suport & our Prayers 24/7.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
December 31st, 2019 16:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good evening FAY - Im just catching up on MPS before the party starts @ 10pm in Brians Flat to welcome in 2020 - AMEN. 2019 has been dramatic for us because - not only were we together after 15 months 11,500 miles apart(why is NZ so so far away from the UK ? !) but also we know that we will be together for ever AMEN ! So 2020 will be a very special Year for US ! A real NEW BEGINNING ! We were shocked & saddened to read ANDYS News - though we had been forwarned - It seemed so final & so sudden ! We have promised Him our suport & our Prayers 24/7.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
December 31st, 2019 16:39
Sparkle.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Or if upper-class: \'Hurrah! Tally-ho!\' and all that posh rubbish! lol.
December 31st, 2019 12:13
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Or if upper-class: \'Hurrah! Tally-ho!\' and all that posh rubbish! lol.
December 31st, 2019 12:13
Sparkle.
Nicholas Browning said:
Lovely message to accompany your unique and refreshing style. Another enjoyable read, Fay.
December 31st, 2019 10:10
Nicholas Browning said:
Lovely message to accompany your unique and refreshing style. Another enjoyable read, Fay.
December 31st, 2019 10:10
Sparkle.
dusk arising said:
Could any night be darker when the chilled air is charged with expectation of a good years gifts ahead and the delight of a sky lit up with fireworks.
Yes, a good fireworks display is indeed an exciting, thrilling show.
Your words have lit my touch paper already.... an air of expectation is buzzing.
December 31st, 2019 09:40
dusk arising said:
Could any night be darker when the chilled air is charged with expectation of a good years gifts ahead and the delight of a sky lit up with fireworks.
Yes, a good fireworks display is indeed an exciting, thrilling show.
Your words have lit my touch paper already.... an air of expectation is buzzing.
December 31st, 2019 09:40
Sparkle.
Nemo said:
Well written 👌
I hope this year we can all be a better version of our selfs, and spread love and happiness. 🌹
December 31st, 2019 09:21
Nemo said:
Well written 👌
I hope this year we can all be a better version of our selfs, and spread love and happiness. 🌹
December 31st, 2019 09:21
Littleness.
Suresh said:
Nature is awesome inspiring indeed, whether the giant sequoias or in a miniature form.
Merry Christmas
December 25th, 2019 20:12
Suresh said:
Nature is awesome inspiring indeed, whether the giant sequoias or in a miniature form.
Merry Christmas
December 25th, 2019 20:12
Littleness.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Fay - Angela here (just enjoying my Horlics at MAMAS) - Its good to be home for a while after sharing a FLAT with RUTH and then 15 months in NZ ~ with Ruth. Little things mean a LOT! Great MANTRA and a Great Poem structure & subjectwise ! I love all the highlighted - little words - you use to amplify LITTLENESS !
Below - slowly - growing - flowing - whole - its own - blow
coats - my nose - burrows - unfolds - poem - soul !
Thnaks for sharing - Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡
December 22nd, 2019 17:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Fay - Angela here (just enjoying my Horlics at MAMAS) - Its good to be home for a while after sharing a FLAT with RUTH and then 15 months in NZ ~ with Ruth. Little things mean a LOT! Great MANTRA and a Great Poem structure & subjectwise ! I love all the highlighted - little words - you use to amplify LITTLENESS !
Below - slowly - growing - flowing - whole - its own - blow
coats - my nose - burrows - unfolds - poem - soul !
Thnaks for sharing - Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡
December 22nd, 2019 17:26
Littleness.
Nicholas Browning said:
The little things, indeed. Still appreciate the way you weave words.
December 21st, 2019 15:05
Nicholas Browning said:
The little things, indeed. Still appreciate the way you weave words.
December 21st, 2019 15:05
Littleness.
Goldfinch60 said:
Another beautiful poem Fay, nature is so wonderful and so inspiring.
December 21st, 2019 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Another beautiful poem Fay, nature is so wonderful and so inspiring.
December 21st, 2019 01:21
Littleness.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a very special poem I think Fay. \'Grass blades creak\' (why didn\'t I think of that?) A must for one of my Fayves if I may.
Thank you
Ex animo, Alan
December 20th, 2019 12:43
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a very special poem I think Fay. \'Grass blades creak\' (why didn\'t I think of that?) A must for one of my Fayves if I may.
Thank you
Ex animo, Alan
December 20th, 2019 12:43
Shore-Song.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Can hear the music Fay. The timpani highlights the crashing waves.
Ex animo, Alan
December 19th, 2019 15:01
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Can hear the music Fay. The timpani highlights the crashing waves.
Ex animo, Alan
December 19th, 2019 15:01
Shore-Song.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
An atmospheric and evocative poem.
Waves are a force in themselves.
Keep writing FineB
December 19th, 2019 06:15
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
An atmospheric and evocative poem.
Waves are a force in themselves.
Keep writing FineB
December 19th, 2019 06:15
Regeneration.
SerenWise said:
A gorgeous write... I can almost feel the calm of nature settling on my mind.
December 17th, 2019 21:02
SerenWise said:
A gorgeous write... I can almost feel the calm of nature settling on my mind.
December 17th, 2019 21:02
Regeneration.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful calm laden write Fay.
Into favourites it goes.
December 17th, 2019 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful calm laden write Fay.
Into favourites it goes.
December 17th, 2019 01:45
Regeneration.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for another perfect POEM ! A beautiful reminder that while we lie awake ~ fretting about BREXIT ~ NATURE rest peacefully and then awakens each Morning for our enjoyment ! Soundless - Healing - Wonder - Stillness - Contentment - Redemption & Regeneration. When we were YOUNG (in our respective Spheres) we both enjoyed CAMPING and that 5am feeling (when one left the confines of the Tent for a call of nature !) can really never again be recaptured ~ BUT your Poem does perfectly ! Your Poem stirred subconscious memories for both of us ~ AMEN ! We msut all learn to commune with Mother Nature to bring us back down from HI-TECH living to Mother Earth _ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 16th, 2019 19:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for another perfect POEM ! A beautiful reminder that while we lie awake ~ fretting about BREXIT ~ NATURE rest peacefully and then awakens each Morning for our enjoyment ! Soundless - Healing - Wonder - Stillness - Contentment - Redemption & Regeneration. When we were YOUNG (in our respective Spheres) we both enjoyed CAMPING and that 5am feeling (when one left the confines of the Tent for a call of nature !) can really never again be recaptured ~ BUT your Poem does perfectly ! Your Poem stirred subconscious memories for both of us ~ AMEN ! We msut all learn to commune with Mother Nature to bring us back down from HI-TECH living to Mother Earth _ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 16th, 2019 19:07
Regeneration.
Michael Edwards said:
Tis indeed another mistress class of a wrote - super write Fay.
December 16th, 2019 11:14
Michael Edwards said:
Tis indeed another mistress class of a wrote - super write Fay.
December 16th, 2019 11:14
Foremost.
Suresh said:
Love is the strength of the weak -
- and the weakness of the strong.
December 14th, 2019 22:00
Suresh said:
Love is the strength of the weak -
- and the weakness of the strong.
December 14th, 2019 22:00
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