Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Challenge.
kevin browne said:
You show so many colours towards life reealing the beauty inside your wonderful poem. Short, powerful and sweet. Just perfect I\'d say...!!!
January 16th, 2020 11:24
kevin browne said:
You show so many colours towards life reealing the beauty inside your wonderful poem. Short, powerful and sweet. Just perfect I\'d say...!!!
January 16th, 2020 11:24
Challenge.
Michael Edwards said:
If there is no chance that you may fall then there is no chance that you can climb. Sorry just love writing these little snippets and this one goes with youe excellent write.
January 16th, 2020 09:25
Michael Edwards said:
If there is no chance that you may fall then there is no chance that you can climb. Sorry just love writing these little snippets and this one goes with youe excellent write.
January 16th, 2020 09:25
Breaking Through.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very happy and meaningful write I think Fay.
Ex animo, Alan
January 15th, 2020 07:17
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very happy and meaningful write I think Fay.
Ex animo, Alan
January 15th, 2020 07:17
Breaking Through.
Michael Edwards said:
And froiendship - it does - another brill piece Fay.
January 15th, 2020 06:30
Michael Edwards said:
And froiendship - it does - another brill piece Fay.
January 15th, 2020 06:30
Turbulence.
kevin browne said:
I\'ve wridden on the waves you so beautifully express about in the English Channel. The sea I worked on fishing boats 4 years for the first 5 years of my life, yet I can still smell it, felt it and love it and that the salty water still lingers on the tip of my tongue. Beautifully written..!!
January 14th, 2020 03:45
kevin browne said:
I\'ve wridden on the waves you so beautifully express about in the English Channel. The sea I worked on fishing boats 4 years for the first 5 years of my life, yet I can still smell it, felt it and love it and that the salty water still lingers on the tip of my tongue. Beautifully written..!!
January 14th, 2020 03:45
Turbulence.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, I was there in my minds eye.
Andy
January 14th, 2020 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, I was there in my minds eye.
Andy
January 14th, 2020 01:03
Turbulence.
Nicholas Browning said:
Unhinged language woven like this can be quite lovely, and that it is. A job well done, Fay.
January 13th, 2020 22:24
Nicholas Browning said:
Unhinged language woven like this can be quite lovely, and that it is. A job well done, Fay.
January 13th, 2020 22:24
Turbulence.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
very mighty piece of creation,you painted it well
January 13th, 2020 20:30
ron parrish aka wordman said:
very mighty piece of creation,you painted it well
January 13th, 2020 20:30
Turbulence.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing FAY ! Love the shape ~ three neat blank verse quadrilaterals ! Reminded me of the six margarine boxes of veggie soup ~ I make on a Saturday Morning ~ with a little help from Sous-Chef Angela ! I then freeze them for use in the week. Of such activities is True Love forged ! Cauliflower & Stilton last Saturday !
Each of your elegant quadrilaterals contained an apt description of the waves crashing in the North Cornish Coast ~ which I have witnessed (and sailed in) awesome !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 13th, 2020 18:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing FAY ! Love the shape ~ three neat blank verse quadrilaterals ! Reminded me of the six margarine boxes of veggie soup ~ I make on a Saturday Morning ~ with a little help from Sous-Chef Angela ! I then freeze them for use in the week. Of such activities is True Love forged ! Cauliflower & Stilton last Saturday !
Each of your elegant quadrilaterals contained an apt description of the waves crashing in the North Cornish Coast ~ which I have witnessed (and sailed in) awesome !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 13th, 2020 18:56
Turbulence.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very vivid portrayal of coastal mightiness. Although 60 miles from the sea you have taken me there. I am soaking wet but it was worth it.
Ex animo, Alan
January 13th, 2020 07:30
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very vivid portrayal of coastal mightiness. Although 60 miles from the sea you have taken me there. I am soaking wet but it was worth it.
Ex animo, Alan
January 13th, 2020 07:30
Folly
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Brian & I are both pacifists becaus in our own Extended Families we can trace the Agony & Ecstasy & Price of WAR ! Donald Trump ordered the assasnation of ONE MAN - An Iranian General ! 56 Iranian Civilians died in the Funeral Stampede & 176 in the Ukranian Plane - 52 Canadians & 4 Brits = 232 for ONE MAN - thats how WAR eascalate. If there is not a TRUCE then thousands more will die !
Your very elegany POEM discusses the Development of War ! V1 It starts V2 It escalates V3 It outstrips its cause V4 It ceases ! Love the final doublet :
Called in the same grief - DEATH readily calls
For opposing despoilers - to cease from WAR - AMEN !
When will they ever LEARN - When will they ever LEARN ?
Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 11th, 2020 15:59
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Brian & I are both pacifists becaus in our own Extended Families we can trace the Agony & Ecstasy & Price of WAR ! Donald Trump ordered the assasnation of ONE MAN - An Iranian General ! 56 Iranian Civilians died in the Funeral Stampede & 176 in the Ukranian Plane - 52 Canadians & 4 Brits = 232 for ONE MAN - thats how WAR eascalate. If there is not a TRUCE then thousands more will die !
Your very elegany POEM discusses the Development of War ! V1 It starts V2 It escalates V3 It outstrips its cause V4 It ceases ! Love the final doublet :
Called in the same grief - DEATH readily calls
For opposing despoilers - to cease from WAR - AMEN !
When will they ever LEARN - When will they ever LEARN ?
Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 11th, 2020 15:59
Folly
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, the folly of war is known to all who are sent but they are only be forced to fight by their so called leaders.
May Peace be with us all .
January 11th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, the folly of war is known to all who are sent but they are only be forced to fight by their so called leaders.
May Peace be with us all .
January 11th, 2020 01:35
Folly
FineB said:
Hi Fay,
A good and insightful write.
Very relevant today.
People need to be kinder to one another.
Lets avoid wars at all cost.
Keep writing FineB
January 10th, 2020 09:44
FineB said:
Hi Fay,
A good and insightful write.
Very relevant today.
People need to be kinder to one another.
Lets avoid wars at all cost.
Keep writing FineB
January 10th, 2020 09:44
Folly
dusk arising said:
A fine message today.
If only mans macho, vengeful nature would not get in the way.
January 10th, 2020 05:55
dusk arising said:
A fine message today.
If only mans macho, vengeful nature would not get in the way.
January 10th, 2020 05:55
Folly
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
The earth is hushed, A silent chill,
Serene and blushed ~ calm and still.
When nought is heard and nought is said,
No more wars for we\'re all dead.
Ex animo, Alan
January 10th, 2020 05:05
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
The earth is hushed, A silent chill,
Serene and blushed ~ calm and still.
When nought is heard and nought is said,
No more wars for we\'re all dead.
Ex animo, Alan
January 10th, 2020 05:05
IF.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, may he come to you in dreams and reality.
January 10th, 2020 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, may he come to you in dreams and reality.
January 10th, 2020 00:56
IF.
Heather T said:
You\'ve broken my heart with this beauty and haven\'t wasted a single syllable. I\'m always amazed at the way you wring the language for everything it\'s worth.
January 10th, 2020 00:12
Heather T said:
You\'ve broken my heart with this beauty and haven\'t wasted a single syllable. I\'m always amazed at the way you wring the language for everything it\'s worth.
January 10th, 2020 00:12
IF.
dusk arising said:
This is quite beautiful Fay. You have found words to describe the intangible lingering romance within the heart which lives on.
You show your mastery here.
January 9th, 2020 12:48
dusk arising said:
This is quite beautiful Fay. You have found words to describe the intangible lingering romance within the heart which lives on.
You show your mastery here.
January 9th, 2020 12:48
IF.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Another excellent composition Fay. This is how it should be done.
Hopefully you will allow me to re-route it into my Fayves so that it is easy to recall when all is quiet with me and it\'s time for nice things.
Ex animo, Alan
January 9th, 2020 08:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Another excellent composition Fay. This is how it should be done.
Hopefully you will allow me to re-route it into my Fayves so that it is easy to recall when all is quiet with me and it\'s time for nice things.
Ex animo, Alan
January 9th, 2020 08:58
Battle.
myself and me said:
The setting moment could be so beautiful and so powerful as well. Beautiful writing.
January 8th, 2020 18:13
myself and me said:
The setting moment could be so beautiful and so powerful as well. Beautiful writing.
January 8th, 2020 18:13
Battle.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for sharing we have saved as a FAVE ! As a ENVIRONMENTAL SCIENTIST I am aware that all life on EARTH depends on the SUN to maintain the avaerage temperature @ 16C ! Note that the radiation from the Sun we recieve is constant and deetermined by our distance form the SUN (93 million miles !) So if we increase CO2 more of the Suns Thermal Energy is trapped on earth causing GLOBAL WARMING !
I love all poems that showcase Brother Sun ! He likes centre stage and Clouds are a problem but they make his entrance (SUNRISE) and exit (SUNSET) very spectactular ! We have enjoyed SUNSETS in every Continent ! The SUN has provided Planet Earth with free energy for Millions of Years and will continue to do so ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 8th, 2020 16:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for sharing we have saved as a FAVE ! As a ENVIRONMENTAL SCIENTIST I am aware that all life on EARTH depends on the SUN to maintain the avaerage temperature @ 16C ! Note that the radiation from the Sun we recieve is constant and deetermined by our distance form the SUN (93 million miles !) So if we increase CO2 more of the Suns Thermal Energy is trapped on earth causing GLOBAL WARMING !
I love all poems that showcase Brother Sun ! He likes centre stage and Clouds are a problem but they make his entrance (SUNRISE) and exit (SUNSET) very spectactular ! We have enjoyed SUNSETS in every Continent ! The SUN has provided Planet Earth with free energy for Millions of Years and will continue to do so ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 8th, 2020 16:14
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