Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Rivering.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Evening FAY thanks for an elegant poem with an excellent theme ! I lived in the Mersey and my first Girl Friend lived on the Dee (Neston) All rivers have a life of theirown and Coastal Rivers ebb & flow with the tde. Rivers are a very important food source in the natural Food Chains & Food Webs ! The variety of life in British Rivers is more than 100 species not counting microorganisms ! Furry animals Stoat - Vole - Otter - Beaver etc are especially interesting ! Rivers & Aquaspirits are important in Folk Lore ! Thnaks for sharing - A GEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
January 19th, 2020 18:06
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Evening FAY thanks for an elegant poem with an excellent theme ! I lived in the Mersey and my first Girl Friend lived on the Dee (Neston) All rivers have a life of theirown and Coastal Rivers ebb & flow with the tde. Rivers are a very important food source in the natural Food Chains & Food Webs ! The variety of life in British Rivers is more than 100 species not counting microorganisms ! Furry animals Stoat - Vole - Otter - Beaver etc are especially interesting ! Rivers & Aquaspirits are important in Folk Lore ! Thnaks for sharing - A GEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
January 19th, 2020 18:06
Rivering.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... You do you so well, I was captivated by this wonders spell, it was a difficult read for me as I have no shame in slowly down to absorb new words for me... Thank you
January 19th, 2020 15:51
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... You do you so well, I was captivated by this wonders spell, it was a difficult read for me as I have no shame in slowly down to absorb new words for me... Thank you
January 19th, 2020 15:51
Rivering.
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this quite a bit. It tells of rivers, and their story. To describe the life in something that many simply overlook as a \"Little thing\" is already incredible. I like how you gave them all their fair chance. A wonderful write, Fay.
January 19th, 2020 11:07
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this quite a bit. It tells of rivers, and their story. To describe the life in something that many simply overlook as a \"Little thing\" is already incredible. I like how you gave them all their fair chance. A wonderful write, Fay.
January 19th, 2020 11:07
Rivering.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This eloquent piece flows with the current Fay. What a wonderful title too!
Will net it for my Fayve\'s if that\'s ok.
Ex animo, Alan
January 19th, 2020 08:20
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This eloquent piece flows with the current Fay. What a wonderful title too!
Will net it for my Fayve\'s if that\'s ok.
Ex animo, Alan
January 19th, 2020 08:20
Dawn\'s Finish.
Gino said:
Beautiful write Fay,...What a beautiful dawn you\'ve covered with such a token of words...
January 19th, 2020 04:32
Gino said:
Beautiful write Fay,...What a beautiful dawn you\'ve covered with such a token of words...
January 19th, 2020 04:32
Dawn\'s Finish.
Gino said:
Beautiful write Fay,...What a beautiful dawn you\'ve covered with such a token of words...
January 19th, 2020 04:29
Gino said:
Beautiful write Fay,...What a beautiful dawn you\'ve covered with such a token of words...
January 19th, 2020 04:29
Dawn\'s Finish.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
Wow! Awesome you have captured dawn in all its splendour!
Good write.
Keep writing
FineB
January 17th, 2020 07:11
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
Wow! Awesome you have captured dawn in all its splendour!
Good write.
Keep writing
FineB
January 17th, 2020 07:11
Challenge.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good, good write Fay. Reminds me of a Neil Innes song from 1968:-
The Urban Spaceman.
\'I don\'t feel sorrow
I don\'t feel pain:
If you were to knock me down
I\'d just stand up again.
Ex animo, Alan
January 16th, 2020 16:43
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good, good write Fay. Reminds me of a Neil Innes song from 1968:-
The Urban Spaceman.
\'I don\'t feel sorrow
I don\'t feel pain:
If you were to knock me down
I\'d just stand up again.
Ex animo, Alan
January 16th, 2020 16:43
Challenge.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! A beautifully crafted Poem on life*s vicisitudes !
V1. The challenge that I find in the Mountains fo my mind !
V2. I never distain the forbidding of the Plain !
V3. She who strikes the Anvil - always gains the prize !
Blessings & Peace & Joy !
Love Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡
January 16th, 2020 15:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! A beautifully crafted Poem on life*s vicisitudes !
V1. The challenge that I find in the Mountains fo my mind !
V2. I never distain the forbidding of the Plain !
V3. She who strikes the Anvil - always gains the prize !
Blessings & Peace & Joy !
Love Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡
January 16th, 2020 15:46
Challenge.
dusk arising said:
Let us not judge him/her by the goals he/she achieved but rather by the obstacles deftly negotiated and succeeded.
January 16th, 2020 14:02
dusk arising said:
Let us not judge him/her by the goals he/she achieved but rather by the obstacles deftly negotiated and succeeded.
January 16th, 2020 14:02
Challenge.
kevin browne said:
You show so many colours towards life reealing the beauty inside your wonderful poem. Short, powerful and sweet. Just perfect I\'d say...!!!
January 16th, 2020 11:24
kevin browne said:
You show so many colours towards life reealing the beauty inside your wonderful poem. Short, powerful and sweet. Just perfect I\'d say...!!!
January 16th, 2020 11:24
Challenge.
Michael Edwards said:
If there is no chance that you may fall then there is no chance that you can climb. Sorry just love writing these little snippets and this one goes with youe excellent write.
January 16th, 2020 09:25
Michael Edwards said:
If there is no chance that you may fall then there is no chance that you can climb. Sorry just love writing these little snippets and this one goes with youe excellent write.
January 16th, 2020 09:25
Breaking Through.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very happy and meaningful write I think Fay.
Ex animo, Alan
January 15th, 2020 07:17
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very happy and meaningful write I think Fay.
Ex animo, Alan
January 15th, 2020 07:17
Breaking Through.
Michael Edwards said:
And froiendship - it does - another brill piece Fay.
January 15th, 2020 06:30
Michael Edwards said:
And froiendship - it does - another brill piece Fay.
January 15th, 2020 06:30
Turbulence.
kevin browne said:
I\'ve wridden on the waves you so beautifully express about in the English Channel. The sea I worked on fishing boats 4 years for the first 5 years of my life, yet I can still smell it, felt it and love it and that the salty water still lingers on the tip of my tongue. Beautifully written..!!
January 14th, 2020 03:45
kevin browne said:
I\'ve wridden on the waves you so beautifully express about in the English Channel. The sea I worked on fishing boats 4 years for the first 5 years of my life, yet I can still smell it, felt it and love it and that the salty water still lingers on the tip of my tongue. Beautifully written..!!
January 14th, 2020 03:45
Turbulence.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, I was there in my minds eye.
Andy
January 14th, 2020 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, I was there in my minds eye.
Andy
January 14th, 2020 01:03
Turbulence.
Nicholas Browning said:
Unhinged language woven like this can be quite lovely, and that it is. A job well done, Fay.
January 13th, 2020 22:24
Nicholas Browning said:
Unhinged language woven like this can be quite lovely, and that it is. A job well done, Fay.
January 13th, 2020 22:24
Turbulence.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
very mighty piece of creation,you painted it well
January 13th, 2020 20:30
ron parrish aka wordman said:
very mighty piece of creation,you painted it well
January 13th, 2020 20:30
Turbulence.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing FAY ! Love the shape ~ three neat blank verse quadrilaterals ! Reminded me of the six margarine boxes of veggie soup ~ I make on a Saturday Morning ~ with a little help from Sous-Chef Angela ! I then freeze them for use in the week. Of such activities is True Love forged ! Cauliflower & Stilton last Saturday !
Each of your elegant quadrilaterals contained an apt description of the waves crashing in the North Cornish Coast ~ which I have witnessed (and sailed in) awesome !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 13th, 2020 18:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing FAY ! Love the shape ~ three neat blank verse quadrilaterals ! Reminded me of the six margarine boxes of veggie soup ~ I make on a Saturday Morning ~ with a little help from Sous-Chef Angela ! I then freeze them for use in the week. Of such activities is True Love forged ! Cauliflower & Stilton last Saturday !
Each of your elegant quadrilaterals contained an apt description of the waves crashing in the North Cornish Coast ~ which I have witnessed (and sailed in) awesome !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 13th, 2020 18:56
Turbulence.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very vivid portrayal of coastal mightiness. Although 60 miles from the sea you have taken me there. I am soaking wet but it was worth it.
Ex animo, Alan
January 13th, 2020 07:30
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very vivid portrayal of coastal mightiness. Although 60 miles from the sea you have taken me there. I am soaking wet but it was worth it.
Ex animo, Alan
January 13th, 2020 07:30
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