Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Battle.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for sharing we have saved as a FAVE ! As a ENVIRONMENTAL SCIENTIST I am aware that all life on EARTH depends on the SUN to maintain the avaerage temperature @ 16C ! Note that the radiation from the Sun we recieve is constant and deetermined by our distance form the SUN (93 million miles !) So if we increase CO2 more of the Suns Thermal Energy is trapped on earth causing GLOBAL WARMING !
I love all poems that showcase Brother Sun ! He likes centre stage and Clouds are a problem but they make his entrance (SUNRISE) and exit (SUNSET) very spectactular ! We have enjoyed SUNSETS in every Continent ! The SUN has provided Planet Earth with free energy for Millions of Years and will continue to do so ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 8th, 2020 16:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for sharing we have saved as a FAVE ! As a ENVIRONMENTAL SCIENTIST I am aware that all life on EARTH depends on the SUN to maintain the avaerage temperature @ 16C ! Note that the radiation from the Sun we recieve is constant and deetermined by our distance form the SUN (93 million miles !) So if we increase CO2 more of the Suns Thermal Energy is trapped on earth causing GLOBAL WARMING !
I love all poems that showcase Brother Sun ! He likes centre stage and Clouds are a problem but they make his entrance (SUNRISE) and exit (SUNSET) very spectactular ! We have enjoyed SUNSETS in every Continent ! The SUN has provided Planet Earth with free energy for Millions of Years and will continue to do so ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 8th, 2020 16:14
Battle.
JaydeVictoria said:
Beautiful write and so descriptive, I really enjoyed this!
January 8th, 2020 06:55
JaydeVictoria said:
Beautiful write and so descriptive, I really enjoyed this!
January 8th, 2020 06:55
Battle.
dusk arising said:
And now you bring us the goddess of the sun as she slips into her night attire.
There i was considering you to be her handmaiden at each break of dawn.
Delightful.
January 8th, 2020 06:03
dusk arising said:
And now you bring us the goddess of the sun as she slips into her night attire.
There i was considering you to be her handmaiden at each break of dawn.
Delightful.
January 8th, 2020 06:03
Chance.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that passion exist forever in their lives and your writing Fay.
Andy
January 8th, 2020 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
May that passion exist forever in their lives and your writing Fay.
Andy
January 8th, 2020 00:58
Chance.
dusk arising said:
The thing we oldie singles pretend to fear yet it is inside us crying out to be sated. The need to be able to relax into a blissful togetherness.
All expressed so well in the depth of your words today.
January 7th, 2020 18:11
dusk arising said:
The thing we oldie singles pretend to fear yet it is inside us crying out to be sated. The need to be able to relax into a blissful togetherness.
All expressed so well in the depth of your words today.
January 7th, 2020 18:11
Chance.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Thanks for a beautiful Love Poem ! Brian & I had the same feeling that it was a forecast of how we will feel AFTER we are married ! Especially the (as yet) unknown pleasures we will experience *Love without Frontiers* ! As you know (and understand !) even though we are in our 30s we have never cohabited. It is counter to our Spiritual Values - also Brian is a Deacon in our Church and we are both Youth leaders ! Our self-control has made the anticipation of the Pleasure & Sexual Freedom - we will share in Marriage - all the more Sweeter ! Your POEM has given us a glimpse of uninhibited intimacy ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Coincidently it has spawned a Collaboration Poem by Brian & I - Title *Love & Marriage* - look out for it tomorrow !
Ble3ssings & Peace & Joy & Love
Your ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 7th, 2020 15:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Thanks for a beautiful Love Poem ! Brian & I had the same feeling that it was a forecast of how we will feel AFTER we are married ! Especially the (as yet) unknown pleasures we will experience *Love without Frontiers* ! As you know (and understand !) even though we are in our 30s we have never cohabited. It is counter to our Spiritual Values - also Brian is a Deacon in our Church and we are both Youth leaders ! Our self-control has made the anticipation of the Pleasure & Sexual Freedom - we will share in Marriage - all the more Sweeter ! Your POEM has given us a glimpse of uninhibited intimacy ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Coincidently it has spawned a Collaboration Poem by Brian & I - Title *Love & Marriage* - look out for it tomorrow !
Ble3ssings & Peace & Joy & Love
Your ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 7th, 2020 15:16
Chance.
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
A superb write.
Chance and opportunity are everything in life.
Keep writing FineB
January 7th, 2020 08:27
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
A superb write.
Chance and opportunity are everything in life.
Keep writing FineB
January 7th, 2020 08:27
Heart-Breakers..
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Great choice of Picture (Melancholy) to ameliorate the Poem ! Love the the structure of the Poem - such FLOW & RHYTHM !
Grieving for a loved One is always more intense in WINTER - when the days are not only LONELY but COLD also ! However when SPRING comes and we see signs of RESSURECTION and our grieving in a New Light ! And a promise of togetherness again ! In Love & Loss every Season has its own compensation - AMEN !
Blessines & Peace & Joy & Love !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 3rd, 2020 18:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Great choice of Picture (Melancholy) to ameliorate the Poem ! Love the the structure of the Poem - such FLOW & RHYTHM !
Grieving for a loved One is always more intense in WINTER - when the days are not only LONELY but COLD also ! However when SPRING comes and we see signs of RESSURECTION and our grieving in a New Light ! And a promise of togetherness again ! In Love & Loss every Season has its own compensation - AMEN !
Blessines & Peace & Joy & Love !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 3rd, 2020 18:29
Heart-Breakers..
myself and me said:
\"Tho\' drifts of bleak past
.................. may heighten grief\'s waves\"
Splendid, indeed.
January 3rd, 2020 12:23
myself and me said:
\"Tho\' drifts of bleak past
.................. may heighten grief\'s waves\"
Splendid, indeed.
January 3rd, 2020 12:23
Heart-Breakers..
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A good write and wonderfully atmospheric and vivid.
Keep writing FineB
January 3rd, 2020 06:05
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A good write and wonderfully atmospheric and vivid.
Keep writing FineB
January 3rd, 2020 06:05
Winter\'s Low Sun.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I knew good things would come this year Fay. Excellent.
Ex animo, Alan
January 2nd, 2020 15:55
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I knew good things would come this year Fay. Excellent.
Ex animo, Alan
January 2nd, 2020 15:55
Winter\'s Low Sun.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We\'re into the light evenings now - yes?! I\'m a bit early, though we\'ve passed the Shortest Day. Let\'s wisely spend that extra minute or two of daylight extra each day! lol.
January 2nd, 2020 12:30
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We\'re into the light evenings now - yes?! I\'m a bit early, though we\'ve passed the Shortest Day. Let\'s wisely spend that extra minute or two of daylight extra each day! lol.
January 2nd, 2020 12:30
New Leaves.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. May your New year be full of wonderful leaves and beautiful flowers.
January 2nd, 2020 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. May your New year be full of wonderful leaves and beautiful flowers.
January 2nd, 2020 01:37
New Leaves.
dusk arising said:
From one fallen leaf to another... this was a pleasure to read and behold. Wishing you many more seasons of foliage to contemplate.
January 1st, 2020 14:13
dusk arising said:
From one fallen leaf to another... this was a pleasure to read and behold. Wishing you many more seasons of foliage to contemplate.
January 1st, 2020 14:13
New Leaves.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good stuff Fay, I see that you\'re branching out (sorry).
HNY
Ex animo, Alan
January 1st, 2020 08:39
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good stuff Fay, I see that you\'re branching out (sorry).
HNY
Ex animo, Alan
January 1st, 2020 08:39
New Leaves.
Michael Edwards said:
Woew - some write - and a happy new year to you Fay - here\'s to another poetry laden 12 months.
January 1st, 2020 06:05
Michael Edwards said:
Woew - some write - and a happy new year to you Fay - here\'s to another poetry laden 12 months.
January 1st, 2020 06:05
New Leaves.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Happy 2020 Fay - Im honoured to be the first to comment on this very elegant ODE ! It is perfect in Rhyme - Rhythm & exact Topiary ! Also love the Message of OLD LEAVES being replaced by NEW ! This is very TRUE for BRIAN & I - New relationship HUSBAND & WIFE - New Home (some news to share later !) - & God Willing - the start of a NEW FAMILY - everything NEW ! Our thoughts and Prayers are with ANDY today as he bravely faces a NEW LIFE PHASE Today ! Nature has its purpose in the timing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 1st, 2020 05:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Happy 2020 Fay - Im honoured to be the first to comment on this very elegant ODE ! It is perfect in Rhyme - Rhythm & exact Topiary ! Also love the Message of OLD LEAVES being replaced by NEW ! This is very TRUE for BRIAN & I - New relationship HUSBAND & WIFE - New Home (some news to share later !) - & God Willing - the start of a NEW FAMILY - everything NEW ! Our thoughts and Prayers are with ANDY today as he bravely faces a NEW LIFE PHASE Today ! Nature has its purpose in the timing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 1st, 2020 05:50
Sparkle.
Goldfinch60 said:
May your New Year be filled with the light of glory and wonder Fay.
Andy.
January 1st, 2020 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
May your New Year be filled with the light of glory and wonder Fay.
Andy.
January 1st, 2020 02:21
Sparkle.
Suresh said:
May each sparkle shine like a bright thought, a selfless deed, and a warm welcoming heart.
December 31st, 2019 21:38
Suresh said:
May each sparkle shine like a bright thought, a selfless deed, and a warm welcoming heart.
December 31st, 2019 21:38
Sparkle.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good evening FAY - Im just catching up on MPS before the party starts @ 10pm in Brians Flat to welcome in 2020 - AMEN. 2019 has been dramatic for us because - not only were we together after 15 months 11,500 miles apart(why is NZ so so far away from the UK ? !) but also we know that we will be together for ever AMEN ! So 2020 will be a very special Year for US ! A real NEW BEGINNING ! We were shocked & saddened to read ANDYS News - though we had been forwarned - It seemed so final & so sudden ! We have promised Him our suport & our Prayers 24/7.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
December 31st, 2019 16:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good evening FAY - Im just catching up on MPS before the party starts @ 10pm in Brians Flat to welcome in 2020 - AMEN. 2019 has been dramatic for us because - not only were we together after 15 months 11,500 miles apart(why is NZ so so far away from the UK ? !) but also we know that we will be together for ever AMEN ! So 2020 will be a very special Year for US ! A real NEW BEGINNING ! We were shocked & saddened to read ANDYS News - though we had been forwarned - It seemed so final & so sudden ! We have promised Him our suport & our Prayers 24/7.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
December 31st, 2019 16:39
Sparkle.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Or if upper-class: \'Hurrah! Tally-ho!\' and all that posh rubbish! lol.
December 31st, 2019 12:13
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Or if upper-class: \'Hurrah! Tally-ho!\' and all that posh rubbish! lol.
December 31st, 2019 12:13
Sparkle.
Nicholas Browning said:
Lovely message to accompany your unique and refreshing style. Another enjoyable read, Fay.
December 31st, 2019 10:10
Nicholas Browning said:
Lovely message to accompany your unique and refreshing style. Another enjoyable read, Fay.
December 31st, 2019 10:10
Sparkle.
dusk arising said:
Could any night be darker when the chilled air is charged with expectation of a good years gifts ahead and the delight of a sky lit up with fireworks.
Yes, a good fireworks display is indeed an exciting, thrilling show.
Your words have lit my touch paper already.... an air of expectation is buzzing.
December 31st, 2019 09:40
dusk arising said:
Could any night be darker when the chilled air is charged with expectation of a good years gifts ahead and the delight of a sky lit up with fireworks.
Yes, a good fireworks display is indeed an exciting, thrilling show.
Your words have lit my touch paper already.... an air of expectation is buzzing.
December 31st, 2019 09:40
Sparkle.
Nemo said:
Well written 👌
I hope this year we can all be a better version of our selfs, and spread love and happiness. 🌹
December 31st, 2019 09:21
Nemo said:
Well written 👌
I hope this year we can all be a better version of our selfs, and spread love and happiness. 🌹
December 31st, 2019 09:21
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