Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Battle.
JaydeVictoria said:
Beautiful write and so descriptive, I really enjoyed this!
January 8th, 2020 06:55
JaydeVictoria said:
Beautiful write and so descriptive, I really enjoyed this!
January 8th, 2020 06:55
Battle.
dusk arising said:
And now you bring us the goddess of the sun as she slips into her night attire.
There i was considering you to be her handmaiden at each break of dawn.
Delightful.
January 8th, 2020 06:03
dusk arising said:
And now you bring us the goddess of the sun as she slips into her night attire.
There i was considering you to be her handmaiden at each break of dawn.
Delightful.
January 8th, 2020 06:03
Chance.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that passion exist forever in their lives and your writing Fay.
Andy
January 8th, 2020 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
May that passion exist forever in their lives and your writing Fay.
Andy
January 8th, 2020 00:58
Chance.
dusk arising said:
The thing we oldie singles pretend to fear yet it is inside us crying out to be sated. The need to be able to relax into a blissful togetherness.
All expressed so well in the depth of your words today.
January 7th, 2020 18:11
dusk arising said:
The thing we oldie singles pretend to fear yet it is inside us crying out to be sated. The need to be able to relax into a blissful togetherness.
All expressed so well in the depth of your words today.
January 7th, 2020 18:11
Chance.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Thanks for a beautiful Love Poem ! Brian & I had the same feeling that it was a forecast of how we will feel AFTER we are married ! Especially the (as yet) unknown pleasures we will experience *Love without Frontiers* ! As you know (and understand !) even though we are in our 30s we have never cohabited. It is counter to our Spiritual Values - also Brian is a Deacon in our Church and we are both Youth leaders ! Our self-control has made the anticipation of the Pleasure & Sexual Freedom - we will share in Marriage - all the more Sweeter ! Your POEM has given us a glimpse of uninhibited intimacy ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Coincidently it has spawned a Collaboration Poem by Brian & I - Title *Love & Marriage* - look out for it tomorrow !
Ble3ssings & Peace & Joy & Love
Your ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 7th, 2020 15:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Thanks for a beautiful Love Poem ! Brian & I had the same feeling that it was a forecast of how we will feel AFTER we are married ! Especially the (as yet) unknown pleasures we will experience *Love without Frontiers* ! As you know (and understand !) even though we are in our 30s we have never cohabited. It is counter to our Spiritual Values - also Brian is a Deacon in our Church and we are both Youth leaders ! Our self-control has made the anticipation of the Pleasure & Sexual Freedom - we will share in Marriage - all the more Sweeter ! Your POEM has given us a glimpse of uninhibited intimacy ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Coincidently it has spawned a Collaboration Poem by Brian & I - Title *Love & Marriage* - look out for it tomorrow !
Ble3ssings & Peace & Joy & Love
Your ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 7th, 2020 15:16
Chance.
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
A superb write.
Chance and opportunity are everything in life.
Keep writing FineB
January 7th, 2020 08:27
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
A superb write.
Chance and opportunity are everything in life.
Keep writing FineB
January 7th, 2020 08:27
Heart-Breakers..
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Great choice of Picture (Melancholy) to ameliorate the Poem ! Love the the structure of the Poem - such FLOW & RHYTHM !
Grieving for a loved One is always more intense in WINTER - when the days are not only LONELY but COLD also ! However when SPRING comes and we see signs of RESSURECTION and our grieving in a New Light ! And a promise of togetherness again ! In Love & Loss every Season has its own compensation - AMEN !
Blessines & Peace & Joy & Love !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 3rd, 2020 18:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Great choice of Picture (Melancholy) to ameliorate the Poem ! Love the the structure of the Poem - such FLOW & RHYTHM !
Grieving for a loved One is always more intense in WINTER - when the days are not only LONELY but COLD also ! However when SPRING comes and we see signs of RESSURECTION and our grieving in a New Light ! And a promise of togetherness again ! In Love & Loss every Season has its own compensation - AMEN !
Blessines & Peace & Joy & Love !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 3rd, 2020 18:29
Heart-Breakers..
myself and me said:
\"Tho\' drifts of bleak past
.................. may heighten grief\'s waves\"
Splendid, indeed.
January 3rd, 2020 12:23
myself and me said:
\"Tho\' drifts of bleak past
.................. may heighten grief\'s waves\"
Splendid, indeed.
January 3rd, 2020 12:23
Heart-Breakers..
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A good write and wonderfully atmospheric and vivid.
Keep writing FineB
January 3rd, 2020 06:05
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A good write and wonderfully atmospheric and vivid.
Keep writing FineB
January 3rd, 2020 06:05
Winter\'s Low Sun.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I knew good things would come this year Fay. Excellent.
Ex animo, Alan
January 2nd, 2020 15:55
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I knew good things would come this year Fay. Excellent.
Ex animo, Alan
January 2nd, 2020 15:55
Winter\'s Low Sun.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We\'re into the light evenings now - yes?! I\'m a bit early, though we\'ve passed the Shortest Day. Let\'s wisely spend that extra minute or two of daylight extra each day! lol.
January 2nd, 2020 12:30
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We\'re into the light evenings now - yes?! I\'m a bit early, though we\'ve passed the Shortest Day. Let\'s wisely spend that extra minute or two of daylight extra each day! lol.
January 2nd, 2020 12:30
New Leaves.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. May your New year be full of wonderful leaves and beautiful flowers.
January 2nd, 2020 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. May your New year be full of wonderful leaves and beautiful flowers.
January 2nd, 2020 01:37
New Leaves.
dusk arising said:
From one fallen leaf to another... this was a pleasure to read and behold. Wishing you many more seasons of foliage to contemplate.
January 1st, 2020 14:13
dusk arising said:
From one fallen leaf to another... this was a pleasure to read and behold. Wishing you many more seasons of foliage to contemplate.
January 1st, 2020 14:13
New Leaves.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good stuff Fay, I see that you\'re branching out (sorry).
HNY
Ex animo, Alan
January 1st, 2020 08:39
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good stuff Fay, I see that you\'re branching out (sorry).
HNY
Ex animo, Alan
January 1st, 2020 08:39
New Leaves.
Michael Edwards said:
Woew - some write - and a happy new year to you Fay - here\'s to another poetry laden 12 months.
January 1st, 2020 06:05
Michael Edwards said:
Woew - some write - and a happy new year to you Fay - here\'s to another poetry laden 12 months.
January 1st, 2020 06:05
New Leaves.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Happy 2020 Fay - Im honoured to be the first to comment on this very elegant ODE ! It is perfect in Rhyme - Rhythm & exact Topiary ! Also love the Message of OLD LEAVES being replaced by NEW ! This is very TRUE for BRIAN & I - New relationship HUSBAND & WIFE - New Home (some news to share later !) - & God Willing - the start of a NEW FAMILY - everything NEW ! Our thoughts and Prayers are with ANDY today as he bravely faces a NEW LIFE PHASE Today ! Nature has its purpose in the timing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 1st, 2020 05:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Happy 2020 Fay - Im honoured to be the first to comment on this very elegant ODE ! It is perfect in Rhyme - Rhythm & exact Topiary ! Also love the Message of OLD LEAVES being replaced by NEW ! This is very TRUE for BRIAN & I - New relationship HUSBAND & WIFE - New Home (some news to share later !) - & God Willing - the start of a NEW FAMILY - everything NEW ! Our thoughts and Prayers are with ANDY today as he bravely faces a NEW LIFE PHASE Today ! Nature has its purpose in the timing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 1st, 2020 05:50
Sparkle.
Goldfinch60 said:
May your New Year be filled with the light of glory and wonder Fay.
Andy.
January 1st, 2020 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
May your New Year be filled with the light of glory and wonder Fay.
Andy.
January 1st, 2020 02:21
Sparkle.
Suresh said:
May each sparkle shine like a bright thought, a selfless deed, and a warm welcoming heart.
December 31st, 2019 21:38
Suresh said:
May each sparkle shine like a bright thought, a selfless deed, and a warm welcoming heart.
December 31st, 2019 21:38
Sparkle.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good evening FAY - Im just catching up on MPS before the party starts @ 10pm in Brians Flat to welcome in 2020 - AMEN. 2019 has been dramatic for us because - not only were we together after 15 months 11,500 miles apart(why is NZ so so far away from the UK ? !) but also we know that we will be together for ever AMEN ! So 2020 will be a very special Year for US ! A real NEW BEGINNING ! We were shocked & saddened to read ANDYS News - though we had been forwarned - It seemed so final & so sudden ! We have promised Him our suport & our Prayers 24/7.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
December 31st, 2019 16:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good evening FAY - Im just catching up on MPS before the party starts @ 10pm in Brians Flat to welcome in 2020 - AMEN. 2019 has been dramatic for us because - not only were we together after 15 months 11,500 miles apart(why is NZ so so far away from the UK ? !) but also we know that we will be together for ever AMEN ! So 2020 will be a very special Year for US ! A real NEW BEGINNING ! We were shocked & saddened to read ANDYS News - though we had been forwarned - It seemed so final & so sudden ! We have promised Him our suport & our Prayers 24/7.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
December 31st, 2019 16:39
Sparkle.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Or if upper-class: \'Hurrah! Tally-ho!\' and all that posh rubbish! lol.
December 31st, 2019 12:13
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Or if upper-class: \'Hurrah! Tally-ho!\' and all that posh rubbish! lol.
December 31st, 2019 12:13
Sparkle.
Nicholas Browning said:
Lovely message to accompany your unique and refreshing style. Another enjoyable read, Fay.
December 31st, 2019 10:10
Nicholas Browning said:
Lovely message to accompany your unique and refreshing style. Another enjoyable read, Fay.
December 31st, 2019 10:10
Sparkle.
dusk arising said:
Could any night be darker when the chilled air is charged with expectation of a good years gifts ahead and the delight of a sky lit up with fireworks.
Yes, a good fireworks display is indeed an exciting, thrilling show.
Your words have lit my touch paper already.... an air of expectation is buzzing.
December 31st, 2019 09:40
dusk arising said:
Could any night be darker when the chilled air is charged with expectation of a good years gifts ahead and the delight of a sky lit up with fireworks.
Yes, a good fireworks display is indeed an exciting, thrilling show.
Your words have lit my touch paper already.... an air of expectation is buzzing.
December 31st, 2019 09:40
Sparkle.
Nemo said:
Well written 👌
I hope this year we can all be a better version of our selfs, and spread love and happiness. 🌹
December 31st, 2019 09:21
Nemo said:
Well written 👌
I hope this year we can all be a better version of our selfs, and spread love and happiness. 🌹
December 31st, 2019 09:21
Littleness.
Suresh said:
Nature is awesome inspiring indeed, whether the giant sequoias or in a miniature form.
Merry Christmas
December 25th, 2019 20:12
Suresh said:
Nature is awesome inspiring indeed, whether the giant sequoias or in a miniature form.
Merry Christmas
December 25th, 2019 20:12
Littleness.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Fay - Angela here (just enjoying my Horlics at MAMAS) - Its good to be home for a while after sharing a FLAT with RUTH and then 15 months in NZ ~ with Ruth. Little things mean a LOT! Great MANTRA and a Great Poem structure & subjectwise ! I love all the highlighted - little words - you use to amplify LITTLENESS !
Below - slowly - growing - flowing - whole - its own - blow
coats - my nose - burrows - unfolds - poem - soul !
Thnaks for sharing - Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡
December 22nd, 2019 17:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Fay - Angela here (just enjoying my Horlics at MAMAS) - Its good to be home for a while after sharing a FLAT with RUTH and then 15 months in NZ ~ with Ruth. Little things mean a LOT! Great MANTRA and a Great Poem structure & subjectwise ! I love all the highlighted - little words - you use to amplify LITTLENESS !
Below - slowly - growing - flowing - whole - its own - blow
coats - my nose - burrows - unfolds - poem - soul !
Thnaks for sharing - Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡
December 22nd, 2019 17:26
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