Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Musing
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good Evening FAY - Thanks for your elegant POEM it struck a BELL ! For all of US in everyday life there is some life changing - Changes & even Decay ! The lives of Angela & I will change rapidly after APRIL New House - New Cat - New Neighbours - New Experiences (as a Husband & Wife) and eventually a New Family ! How will we cope having both been single fior over 30 years ? We are both MUSING and both praying for BLUE SKIES AHEAD ~ HELP !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💙🧡💙
January 27th, 2020 18:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good Evening FAY - Thanks for your elegant POEM it struck a BELL ! For all of US in everyday life there is some life changing - Changes & even Decay ! The lives of Angela & I will change rapidly after APRIL New House - New Cat - New Neighbours - New Experiences (as a Husband & Wife) and eventually a New Family ! How will we cope having both been single fior over 30 years ? We are both MUSING and both praying for BLUE SKIES AHEAD ~ HELP !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💙🧡💙
January 27th, 2020 18:09
Musing
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good to record this and play it back with closed eyes Fay.
Reminds me of Mnemosyne\'s daughter, Erato.
Ex animo, Alan
January 27th, 2020 06:56
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good to record this and play it back with closed eyes Fay.
Reminds me of Mnemosyne\'s daughter, Erato.
Ex animo, Alan
January 27th, 2020 06:56
Musing
dusk arising said:
\"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies, coming my way\".
No matter what is thrown, faith is enduring and recollection of past battle reinforces steadfast faith.
Nonetheless your words speak of the worries and torment within as we balance fate and faith.
Beautifully written as per.
January 27th, 2020 05:59
dusk arising said:
\"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies, coming my way\".
No matter what is thrown, faith is enduring and recollection of past battle reinforces steadfast faith.
Nonetheless your words speak of the worries and torment within as we balance fate and faith.
Beautifully written as per.
January 27th, 2020 05:59
Unforgettable.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive write Fay, that love will go on for eternity.
Andy
January 25th, 2020 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive write Fay, that love will go on for eternity.
Andy
January 25th, 2020 01:05
Unforgettable.
markziff said:
Tears come to me where words do not, thank you. 😢
January 24th, 2020 18:55
markziff said:
Tears come to me where words do not, thank you. 😢
January 24th, 2020 18:55
Unforgettable.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Once again in an exqusite Love Song you have mirrored all that I hope to share & experience with Angela when we are married ! For Spiritual Rasons we have only sipped the Aperitif of our Love. But we have been more than staisfied till we EXTERIENCE the Full Menu ! Each verse brings us neaarer to the fulfilment of experiental Love ~ Beautiful !
I trust that when ~ at the appointed Time ~ I pass from the Pysical to the Spiritual dimension ~Angela could read this ~ as an Testimony to ME ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE ~ BRIAN 💜💜💜
January 24th, 2020 18:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Once again in an exqusite Love Song you have mirrored all that I hope to share & experience with Angela when we are married ! For Spiritual Rasons we have only sipped the Aperitif of our Love. But we have been more than staisfied till we EXTERIENCE the Full Menu ! Each verse brings us neaarer to the fulfilment of experiental Love ~ Beautiful !
I trust that when ~ at the appointed Time ~ I pass from the Pysical to the Spiritual dimension ~Angela could read this ~ as an Testimony to ME ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE ~ BRIAN 💜💜💜
January 24th, 2020 18:05
Unforgettable.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
It was good to read this today....Fay. Your usual \'putting music to words without the notes\'
Unforgettabubble.
Ex animo, Alan
January 24th, 2020 14:45
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
It was good to read this today....Fay. Your usual \'putting music to words without the notes\'
Unforgettabubble.
Ex animo, Alan
January 24th, 2020 14:45
Unforgettable.
dusk arising said:
I found this really really moving. You touch places where the concealed yearning in older singles cries out to be touched and sated.
Life is wonderful, life is cruel, life is love.
January 24th, 2020 12:00
dusk arising said:
I found this really really moving. You touch places where the concealed yearning in older singles cries out to be touched and sated.
Life is wonderful, life is cruel, life is love.
January 24th, 2020 12:00
Stirrings.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Fay, we must all move forward in our lives.
Andy
January 24th, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Fay, we must all move forward in our lives.
Andy
January 24th, 2020 01:22
Stirrings.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
One of life\'s lessons I think Fay. And so very well described.
Ex animo, Alan
January 23rd, 2020 08:04
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
One of life\'s lessons I think Fay. And so very well described.
Ex animo, Alan
January 23rd, 2020 08:04
Stirrings.
dusk arising said:
You are so right. This is something which cannot be taught but rather has to be learned.
Learning too to reflect upon the positives of the past rather than dwell upon the negatives can transform how one feels about ones life existence and self worth.
A wholesome message conveyed in your poem today.
January 23rd, 2020 05:15
dusk arising said:
You are so right. This is something which cannot be taught but rather has to be learned.
Learning too to reflect upon the positives of the past rather than dwell upon the negatives can transform how one feels about ones life existence and self worth.
A wholesome message conveyed in your poem today.
January 23rd, 2020 05:15
A Given Day.
Goldfinch60 said:
May those \'given days\' be forever with you (and us) Fay.
Andy
January 23rd, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May those \'given days\' be forever with you (and us) Fay.
Andy
January 23rd, 2020 00:16
A Given Day.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Thank you for giving us the day...Fay.
An endearing write, the cream of Cornwall.
Ex animo, Alan
January 22nd, 2020 15:05
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Thank you for giving us the day...Fay.
An endearing write, the cream of Cornwall.
Ex animo, Alan
January 22nd, 2020 15:05
A Given Day.
dusk arising said:
Your old friend sounds a real treasure. Your words today brought some of her character to me and I warmed to her straight away.
January 22nd, 2020 11:32
dusk arising said:
Your old friend sounds a real treasure. Your words today brought some of her character to me and I warmed to her straight away.
January 22nd, 2020 11:32
A Given Day.
Neville said:
Perfectly poemed our Fay...
Yes good old Daphne DM....and her Kernow mackerel sky... Oh and happy birthday too x
January 22nd, 2020 06:14
Neville said:
Perfectly poemed our Fay...
Yes good old Daphne DM....and her Kernow mackerel sky... Oh and happy birthday too x
January 22nd, 2020 06:14
We There.
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Wrapped in immortality’s folds\" - what wonderful words I can believe that this is where my loved one is.
Great write Fay.
January 21st, 2020 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Wrapped in immortality’s folds\" - what wonderful words I can believe that this is where my loved one is.
Great write Fay.
January 21st, 2020 01:03
We There.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Ahhh Fay if only DEJA VU could carry us back to our trysting places ! However in this life we only really have one chance to relish the eagerness & inhibition of *Young Love* ! At 31 & 36 Brian & I are enjoying it now and will explore it much much deeper after April ! However in 50 years time we will need DEJA VU to relive it ! But for us now *The new is ceaseless ! * Thanks for caring & sharing - AMEN
Blessings - Peace - Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 20th, 2020 18:00
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Ahhh Fay if only DEJA VU could carry us back to our trysting places ! However in this life we only really have one chance to relish the eagerness & inhibition of *Young Love* ! At 31 & 36 Brian & I are enjoying it now and will explore it much much deeper after April ! However in 50 years time we will need DEJA VU to relive it ! But for us now *The new is ceaseless ! * Thanks for caring & sharing - AMEN
Blessings - Peace - Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 20th, 2020 18:00
We There.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very nice quatorzain Fay. Well executed, in my view, and a pleasure to read.
Ex animo, Alan
January 20th, 2020 15:29
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A very nice quatorzain Fay. Well executed, in my view, and a pleasure to read.
Ex animo, Alan
January 20th, 2020 15:29
We There.
dusk arising said:
The wonderful thing which love is creates a treasure within us which, given the right moment or scenario, we can tap into and experience the high in our heart again. Leaving us with a wry grin thinking \'well i know i didnt miss out on THAT part of living did I?
But hey, it\'s never too late and, who knows, it could be even better were it to visit the heart later in life. I\'m game LOL.
January 20th, 2020 07:57
dusk arising said:
The wonderful thing which love is creates a treasure within us which, given the right moment or scenario, we can tap into and experience the high in our heart again. Leaving us with a wry grin thinking \'well i know i didnt miss out on THAT part of living did I?
But hey, it\'s never too late and, who knows, it could be even better were it to visit the heart later in life. I\'m game LOL.
January 20th, 2020 07:57
We There.
Nemo said:
Wow, Fay this an amazing write 🌹
Was a delightful read ❤️
January 20th, 2020 05:08
Nemo said:
Wow, Fay this an amazing write 🌹
Was a delightful read ❤️
January 20th, 2020 05:08
Rivering.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, may those rivers always be with us and full of life.
January 20th, 2020 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, may those rivers always be with us and full of life.
January 20th, 2020 01:38
Rivering.
dusk arising said:
The magic of naturally flowing water.
Taken to the bank upon your words again to marvel at this majesty where the tranquil past of yesterday gently haunts our very soul.
Deeply inspiring writing from you here Fay.
January 19th, 2020 18:45
dusk arising said:
The magic of naturally flowing water.
Taken to the bank upon your words again to marvel at this majesty where the tranquil past of yesterday gently haunts our very soul.
Deeply inspiring writing from you here Fay.
January 19th, 2020 18:45
Rivering.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Evening FAY thanks for an elegant poem with an excellent theme ! I lived in the Mersey and my first Girl Friend lived on the Dee (Neston) All rivers have a life of their own and Coastal Rivers ebb & flow with the tde. Rivers are a very important food source in the natural Food Chains & Food Webs ! The variety of life in British Rivers is more than 100 species not counting microorganisms ! Furry animals Stoat - Vole - Otter - Beaver etc are especially interesting ! Rivers & Aquaspirits are important in Folk Lore ! Thanks for sharing - A GEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
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January 19th, 2020 18:06
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Evening FAY thanks for an elegant poem with an excellent theme ! I lived in the Mersey and my first Girl Friend lived on the Dee (Neston) All rivers have a life of their own and Coastal Rivers ebb & flow with the tde. Rivers are a very important food source in the natural Food Chains & Food Webs ! The variety of life in British Rivers is more than 100 species not counting microorganisms ! Furry animals Stoat - Vole - Otter - Beaver etc are especially interesting ! Rivers & Aquaspirits are important in Folk Lore ! Thanks for sharing - A GEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
Please check our FUSION *DESERTED PLACES* - Thanks !
January 19th, 2020 18:06
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