Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Folly
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Brian & I are both pacifists becaus in our own Extended Families we can trace the Agony & Ecstasy & Price of WAR ! Donald Trump ordered the assasnation of ONE MAN - An Iranian General ! 56 Iranian Civilians died in the Funeral Stampede & 176 in the Ukranian Plane - 52 Canadians & 4 Brits = 232 for ONE MAN - thats how WAR eascalate. If there is not a TRUCE then thousands more will die !
Your very elegany POEM discusses the Development of War ! V1 It starts V2 It escalates V3 It outstrips its cause V4 It ceases ! Love the final doublet :
Called in the same grief - DEATH readily calls
For opposing despoilers - to cease from WAR - AMEN !
When will they ever LEARN - When will they ever LEARN ?
Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 11th, 2020 15:59
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Brian & I are both pacifists becaus in our own Extended Families we can trace the Agony & Ecstasy & Price of WAR ! Donald Trump ordered the assasnation of ONE MAN - An Iranian General ! 56 Iranian Civilians died in the Funeral Stampede & 176 in the Ukranian Plane - 52 Canadians & 4 Brits = 232 for ONE MAN - thats how WAR eascalate. If there is not a TRUCE then thousands more will die !
Your very elegany POEM discusses the Development of War ! V1 It starts V2 It escalates V3 It outstrips its cause V4 It ceases ! Love the final doublet :
Called in the same grief - DEATH readily calls
For opposing despoilers - to cease from WAR - AMEN !
When will they ever LEARN - When will they ever LEARN ?
Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 11th, 2020 15:59
Folly
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, the folly of war is known to all who are sent but they are only be forced to fight by their so called leaders.
May Peace be with us all .
January 11th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, the folly of war is known to all who are sent but they are only be forced to fight by their so called leaders.
May Peace be with us all .
January 11th, 2020 01:35
Folly
FineB said:
Hi Fay,
A good and insightful write.
Very relevant today.
People need to be kinder to one another.
Lets avoid wars at all cost.
Keep writing FineB
January 10th, 2020 09:44
FineB said:
Hi Fay,
A good and insightful write.
Very relevant today.
People need to be kinder to one another.
Lets avoid wars at all cost.
Keep writing FineB
January 10th, 2020 09:44
Folly
dusk arising said:
A fine message today.
If only mans macho, vengeful nature would not get in the way.
January 10th, 2020 05:55
dusk arising said:
A fine message today.
If only mans macho, vengeful nature would not get in the way.
January 10th, 2020 05:55
Folly
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
The earth is hushed, A silent chill,
Serene and blushed ~ calm and still.
When nought is heard and nought is said,
No more wars for we\'re all dead.
Ex animo, Alan
January 10th, 2020 05:05
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
The earth is hushed, A silent chill,
Serene and blushed ~ calm and still.
When nought is heard and nought is said,
No more wars for we\'re all dead.
Ex animo, Alan
January 10th, 2020 05:05
IF.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, may he come to you in dreams and reality.
January 10th, 2020 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, may he come to you in dreams and reality.
January 10th, 2020 00:56
IF.
Heather T said:
You\'ve broken my heart with this beauty and haven\'t wasted a single syllable. I\'m always amazed at the way you wring the language for everything it\'s worth.
January 10th, 2020 00:12
Heather T said:
You\'ve broken my heart with this beauty and haven\'t wasted a single syllable. I\'m always amazed at the way you wring the language for everything it\'s worth.
January 10th, 2020 00:12
IF.
dusk arising said:
This is quite beautiful Fay. You have found words to describe the intangible lingering romance within the heart which lives on.
You show your mastery here.
January 9th, 2020 12:48
dusk arising said:
This is quite beautiful Fay. You have found words to describe the intangible lingering romance within the heart which lives on.
You show your mastery here.
January 9th, 2020 12:48
IF.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Another excellent composition Fay. This is how it should be done.
Hopefully you will allow me to re-route it into my Fayves so that it is easy to recall when all is quiet with me and it\'s time for nice things.
Ex animo, Alan
January 9th, 2020 08:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Another excellent composition Fay. This is how it should be done.
Hopefully you will allow me to re-route it into my Fayves so that it is easy to recall when all is quiet with me and it\'s time for nice things.
Ex animo, Alan
January 9th, 2020 08:58
Battle.
myself and me said:
The setting moment could be so beautiful and so powerful as well. Beautiful writing.
January 8th, 2020 18:13
myself and me said:
The setting moment could be so beautiful and so powerful as well. Beautiful writing.
January 8th, 2020 18:13
Battle.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for sharing we have saved as a FAVE ! As a ENVIRONMENTAL SCIENTIST I am aware that all life on EARTH depends on the SUN to maintain the avaerage temperature @ 16C ! Note that the radiation from the Sun we recieve is constant and deetermined by our distance form the SUN (93 million miles !) So if we increase CO2 more of the Suns Thermal Energy is trapped on earth causing GLOBAL WARMING !
I love all poems that showcase Brother Sun ! He likes centre stage and Clouds are a problem but they make his entrance (SUNRISE) and exit (SUNSET) very spectactular ! We have enjoyed SUNSETS in every Continent ! The SUN has provided Planet Earth with free energy for Millions of Years and will continue to do so ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 8th, 2020 16:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for sharing we have saved as a FAVE ! As a ENVIRONMENTAL SCIENTIST I am aware that all life on EARTH depends on the SUN to maintain the avaerage temperature @ 16C ! Note that the radiation from the Sun we recieve is constant and deetermined by our distance form the SUN (93 million miles !) So if we increase CO2 more of the Suns Thermal Energy is trapped on earth causing GLOBAL WARMING !
I love all poems that showcase Brother Sun ! He likes centre stage and Clouds are a problem but they make his entrance (SUNRISE) and exit (SUNSET) very spectactular ! We have enjoyed SUNSETS in every Continent ! The SUN has provided Planet Earth with free energy for Millions of Years and will continue to do so ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 8th, 2020 16:14
Battle.
JaydeVictoria said:
Beautiful write and so descriptive, I really enjoyed this!
January 8th, 2020 06:55
JaydeVictoria said:
Beautiful write and so descriptive, I really enjoyed this!
January 8th, 2020 06:55
Battle.
dusk arising said:
And now you bring us the goddess of the sun as she slips into her night attire.
There i was considering you to be her handmaiden at each break of dawn.
Delightful.
January 8th, 2020 06:03
dusk arising said:
And now you bring us the goddess of the sun as she slips into her night attire.
There i was considering you to be her handmaiden at each break of dawn.
Delightful.
January 8th, 2020 06:03
Chance.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that passion exist forever in their lives and your writing Fay.
Andy
January 8th, 2020 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
May that passion exist forever in their lives and your writing Fay.
Andy
January 8th, 2020 00:58
Chance.
dusk arising said:
The thing we oldie singles pretend to fear yet it is inside us crying out to be sated. The need to be able to relax into a blissful togetherness.
All expressed so well in the depth of your words today.
January 7th, 2020 18:11
dusk arising said:
The thing we oldie singles pretend to fear yet it is inside us crying out to be sated. The need to be able to relax into a blissful togetherness.
All expressed so well in the depth of your words today.
January 7th, 2020 18:11
Chance.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Thanks for a beautiful Love Poem ! Brian & I had the same feeling that it was a forecast of how we will feel AFTER we are married ! Especially the (as yet) unknown pleasures we will experience *Love without Frontiers* ! As you know (and understand !) even though we are in our 30s we have never cohabited. It is counter to our Spiritual Values - also Brian is a Deacon in our Church and we are both Youth leaders ! Our self-control has made the anticipation of the Pleasure & Sexual Freedom - we will share in Marriage - all the more Sweeter ! Your POEM has given us a glimpse of uninhibited intimacy ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Coincidently it has spawned a Collaboration Poem by Brian & I - Title *Love & Marriage* - look out for it tomorrow !
Ble3ssings & Peace & Joy & Love
Your ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 7th, 2020 15:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Thanks for a beautiful Love Poem ! Brian & I had the same feeling that it was a forecast of how we will feel AFTER we are married ! Especially the (as yet) unknown pleasures we will experience *Love without Frontiers* ! As you know (and understand !) even though we are in our 30s we have never cohabited. It is counter to our Spiritual Values - also Brian is a Deacon in our Church and we are both Youth leaders ! Our self-control has made the anticipation of the Pleasure & Sexual Freedom - we will share in Marriage - all the more Sweeter ! Your POEM has given us a glimpse of uninhibited intimacy ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Coincidently it has spawned a Collaboration Poem by Brian & I - Title *Love & Marriage* - look out for it tomorrow !
Ble3ssings & Peace & Joy & Love
Your ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 7th, 2020 15:16
Chance.
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
A superb write.
Chance and opportunity are everything in life.
Keep writing FineB
January 7th, 2020 08:27
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
A superb write.
Chance and opportunity are everything in life.
Keep writing FineB
January 7th, 2020 08:27
Heart-Breakers..
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Great choice of Picture (Melancholy) to ameliorate the Poem ! Love the the structure of the Poem - such FLOW & RHYTHM !
Grieving for a loved One is always more intense in WINTER - when the days are not only LONELY but COLD also ! However when SPRING comes and we see signs of RESSURECTION and our grieving in a New Light ! And a promise of togetherness again ! In Love & Loss every Season has its own compensation - AMEN !
Blessines & Peace & Joy & Love !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 3rd, 2020 18:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Great choice of Picture (Melancholy) to ameliorate the Poem ! Love the the structure of the Poem - such FLOW & RHYTHM !
Grieving for a loved One is always more intense in WINTER - when the days are not only LONELY but COLD also ! However when SPRING comes and we see signs of RESSURECTION and our grieving in a New Light ! And a promise of togetherness again ! In Love & Loss every Season has its own compensation - AMEN !
Blessines & Peace & Joy & Love !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 3rd, 2020 18:29
Heart-Breakers..
myself and me said:
\"Tho\' drifts of bleak past
.................. may heighten grief\'s waves\"
Splendid, indeed.
January 3rd, 2020 12:23
myself and me said:
\"Tho\' drifts of bleak past
.................. may heighten grief\'s waves\"
Splendid, indeed.
January 3rd, 2020 12:23
Heart-Breakers..
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A good write and wonderfully atmospheric and vivid.
Keep writing FineB
January 3rd, 2020 06:05
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A good write and wonderfully atmospheric and vivid.
Keep writing FineB
January 3rd, 2020 06:05
Winter\'s Low Sun.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I knew good things would come this year Fay. Excellent.
Ex animo, Alan
January 2nd, 2020 15:55
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I knew good things would come this year Fay. Excellent.
Ex animo, Alan
January 2nd, 2020 15:55
Winter\'s Low Sun.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We\'re into the light evenings now - yes?! I\'m a bit early, though we\'ve passed the Shortest Day. Let\'s wisely spend that extra minute or two of daylight extra each day! lol.
January 2nd, 2020 12:30
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We\'re into the light evenings now - yes?! I\'m a bit early, though we\'ve passed the Shortest Day. Let\'s wisely spend that extra minute or two of daylight extra each day! lol.
January 2nd, 2020 12:30
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