Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Seasoned.
JudyStella said:
Just by reading this poem, I felt refreshed by the lines
for Spring explodes banquets
of luscious greens
Beautiful piece of work!
May 24th, 2022 01:49
JudyStella said:
Just by reading this poem, I felt refreshed by the lines
for Spring explodes banquets
of luscious greens
Beautiful piece of work!
May 24th, 2022 01:49
Seasoned.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Erm, my poem goes: \'Such wakening this, Around midnight, By flashes of lightning\'. True for one night last week.
May 24th, 2022 01:42
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Erm, my poem goes: \'Such wakening this, Around midnight, By flashes of lightning\'. True for one night last week.
May 24th, 2022 01:42
Diversity
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Fay, if we were all the same in this world life would be so boring.
Andy.
May 21st, 2022 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Fay, if we were all the same in this world life would be so boring.
Andy.
May 21st, 2022 00:25
Diversity
Rozina said:
Unity in Diversity, the politicians drum it into the public which is made up of many races and religions in Malaysia. But the politicians draw up the diverse laws! A great write Fay.
May 20th, 2022 18:20
Rozina said:
Unity in Diversity, the politicians drum it into the public which is made up of many races and religions in Malaysia. But the politicians draw up the diverse laws! A great write Fay.
May 20th, 2022 18:20
Diversity
Rocky Lagou said:
This is beautiful Fay. Our world is in desperate need of change and acceptance. Because of people\'s distorted preconceptions and prejudices it can feel like those who aren\'t \"normal\" or simply in the minority are the ones causing this mess. But in reality it is the ones who can\'t accept change. Love is love, despite who it is for, and skin is skin, despite the color.
May 20th, 2022 08:33
Rocky Lagou said:
This is beautiful Fay. Our world is in desperate need of change and acceptance. Because of people\'s distorted preconceptions and prejudices it can feel like those who aren\'t \"normal\" or simply in the minority are the ones causing this mess. But in reality it is the ones who can\'t accept change. Love is love, despite who it is for, and skin is skin, despite the color.
May 20th, 2022 08:33
Diversity
L. B. Mek said:
there is undoubted, otherworldly
genius
and design in our diverse, make-ups..
despite
some zealot mindset\'s, convinced
their
narrow minded, blinkered versions
of supposed, righteousness
is all the Truth, we
All
need, in Our world..
sadly
diversity, doesn\'t equate
when made to-fit
under duress
to a single
perception of worth
in a life...
Equal status and respect
for all, life!
\'thunder
when ignorance disdains proof.
Oh Word, praise to thee
who voiced thine Self into gross
sameness eons
ago to teach needed difference
by creative diversity\'
(a wonderful write, and message
dear Fay, thank you!)
May 20th, 2022 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
there is undoubted, otherworldly
genius
and design in our diverse, make-ups..
despite
some zealot mindset\'s, convinced
their
narrow minded, blinkered versions
of supposed, righteousness
is all the Truth, we
All
need, in Our world..
sadly
diversity, doesn\'t equate
when made to-fit
under duress
to a single
perception of worth
in a life...
Equal status and respect
for all, life!
\'thunder
when ignorance disdains proof.
Oh Word, praise to thee
who voiced thine Self into gross
sameness eons
ago to teach needed difference
by creative diversity\'
(a wonderful write, and message
dear Fay, thank you!)
May 20th, 2022 05:51
Paint\'s Heat.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Signed by Van Gough paint\'s heat
never goes cold.\'
like your Poetry, dear Fay
never! gets old...
a beautifully worded dedication
thank you!
May 20th, 2022 03:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'Signed by Van Gough paint\'s heat
never goes cold.\'
like your Poetry, dear Fay
never! gets old...
a beautifully worded dedication
thank you!
May 20th, 2022 03:28
Mind-Food
arqios said:
Love that feeds the mind as well, is love that whose depth is unfathomable. Thanks for having shared this poem, Fay. /Rik.
May 10th, 2022 04:44
arqios said:
Love that feeds the mind as well, is love that whose depth is unfathomable. Thanks for having shared this poem, Fay. /Rik.
May 10th, 2022 04:44
Ready
SureshG said:
When the heavenly beauty of blossoms shed their petals, they, for one last time carpet the ground with that beauty, and in their shedding is hidden the seeds of fruits.
Entrapment of the senses, this post
May 8th, 2022 15:51
SureshG said:
When the heavenly beauty of blossoms shed their petals, they, for one last time carpet the ground with that beauty, and in their shedding is hidden the seeds of fruits.
Entrapment of the senses, this post
May 8th, 2022 15:51
Ready
Neville said:
gloriously pretty in pink .. oh\' my what a turnout .. and as always superb .. x
May 8th, 2022 03:00
Neville said:
gloriously pretty in pink .. oh\' my what a turnout .. and as always superb .. x
May 8th, 2022 03:00
Ready
Goldfinch60 said:
That confetti has started blowing all around us now Fay.
Andy
May 8th, 2022 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
That confetti has started blowing all around us now Fay.
Andy
May 8th, 2022 02:21
Tactics
SureshG said:
Passion not only ignites the bodies, but within your words, mind too.
May 7th, 2022 10:44
SureshG said:
Passion not only ignites the bodies, but within your words, mind too.
May 7th, 2022 10:44
Tactics
Rozina said:
A super write. When someone is in the beginning of a great love affair or lust affair maybe they don\'t have any actual tactics planned, just go wherever the flow goes! But later as the situation pans out tactical manoeuvres start to come in? I absolutely agree about respect and consideration, always.
May 6th, 2022 18:20
Rozina said:
A super write. When someone is in the beginning of a great love affair or lust affair maybe they don\'t have any actual tactics planned, just go wherever the flow goes! But later as the situation pans out tactical manoeuvres start to come in? I absolutely agree about respect and consideration, always.
May 6th, 2022 18:20
Tactics
MendedFences27 said:
The road to a sustained relationship is littered with nodes of decision such as this. I love the idea of \"no time for betweenness.\"
OH, the self-questioning along the road to romance. Your poem speaks truth and entertains. It\'s a gem. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2022 15:03
MendedFences27 said:
The road to a sustained relationship is littered with nodes of decision such as this. I love the idea of \"no time for betweenness.\"
OH, the self-questioning along the road to romance. Your poem speaks truth and entertains. It\'s a gem. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2022 15:03
Tactics
L. B. Mek said:
(a great write, as-ever
dear Fay
forgive me, I couldn\'t help
attempting a feeble reply
to reflect my alignment
with my interpretation
of your poetry\'s, sentiments)..
when knowing the difference
between
actions with intensions
to yield connections
of heart reciprocated, affections
and
sinister plotting, for minutes
of futile gratification..
we evolve
from being mindless people
enslaved
by our animalistic instincts
to human\'s
empowered by our innate
feelings and natural attractions...
(you don\'t have to approach
every potential, romantic interest
with intent to marry
and love for eternity
but
you do owe, that individual
the consideration and respect
you would like
to be afforded to you..
May 6th, 2022 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
(a great write, as-ever
dear Fay
forgive me, I couldn\'t help
attempting a feeble reply
to reflect my alignment
with my interpretation
of your poetry\'s, sentiments)..
when knowing the difference
between
actions with intensions
to yield connections
of heart reciprocated, affections
and
sinister plotting, for minutes
of futile gratification..
we evolve
from being mindless people
enslaved
by our animalistic instincts
to human\'s
empowered by our innate
feelings and natural attractions...
(you don\'t have to approach
every potential, romantic interest
with intent to marry
and love for eternity
but
you do owe, that individual
the consideration and respect
you would like
to be afforded to you..
May 6th, 2022 05:38
Tactics
orchidee said:
It\'s that May friskiness again.
I wouldn\'t know of it. Fido says friskiness is bad for me! lol.
May 6th, 2022 04:45
orchidee said:
It\'s that May friskiness again.
I wouldn\'t know of it. Fido says friskiness is bad for me! lol.
May 6th, 2022 04:45
Tactics
Neville said:
and there\'s me with no sense of direction .. once zeroed in that\'s it no deviation ... they did call me Bullet you know ................... super post today tho\' .......... Neville x
May 6th, 2022 03:52
Neville said:
and there\'s me with no sense of direction .. once zeroed in that\'s it no deviation ... they did call me Bullet you know ................... super post today tho\' .......... Neville x
May 6th, 2022 03:52
Mind-Food
Goldfinch60 said:
Love certainly does taste good Fay and may it forever be that way.
Andy
May 6th, 2022 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Love certainly does taste good Fay and may it forever be that way.
Andy
May 6th, 2022 00:28
Mind-Food
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ended the dream
yet
its memory lingers, in treasured
regret-proof
coats of repeat. My best
sleepless
mind-food, tastes again two.
Need, brought
us together and love
felt good.\'
(another Chapter
in our buffet
of Mind-Food
solutions, born
of solitary
contemplations..)
simply Brilliant, dear Fay
words and image
combine, to deliver Poetry
far more
than the sum of its
4-3 off beat, symmetry
or 30 words of insightfully, succinct
eloquence!
May 5th, 2022 06:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ended the dream
yet
its memory lingers, in treasured
regret-proof
coats of repeat. My best
sleepless
mind-food, tastes again two.
Need, brought
us together and love
felt good.\'
(another Chapter
in our buffet
of Mind-Food
solutions, born
of solitary
contemplations..)
simply Brilliant, dear Fay
words and image
combine, to deliver Poetry
far more
than the sum of its
4-3 off beat, symmetry
or 30 words of insightfully, succinct
eloquence!
May 5th, 2022 06:06
Mind-Food
Neville said:
made me hungry all over again so ya did & I\'ve only just had breakfast .... you are just so damned good at this game our Fay ............ N x
May 5th, 2022 03:53
Neville said:
made me hungry all over again so ya did & I\'ve only just had breakfast .... you are just so damned good at this game our Fay ............ N x
May 5th, 2022 03:53
Mind-Food
dusk arising said:
I guess that once tasted the flavour of the sweetest honey haunts the palate.
Odd then that we are hesitant to open one of those lovely looking jars upon the shelf.
Oh but that sweetness... maybe one day.
May 5th, 2022 03:48
dusk arising said:
I guess that once tasted the flavour of the sweetest honey haunts the palate.
Odd then that we are hesitant to open one of those lovely looking jars upon the shelf.
Oh but that sweetness... maybe one day.
May 5th, 2022 03:48
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