Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
First Flush
dusk arising said:
Ah - there you are Fay, I wondered where you\'d gone.
Is that the vase shape of the inner daffodil flower I see before my eyes? Yes, but in words this day it heralds beautifully the onset of our most welcome change of seasons.
Like the return of opening buds it\'s so good to welcome you back to my humble screen with your warmth of words. Hi there! - how are you... are you staying a while?
April 25th, 2022 12:57
dusk arising said:
Ah - there you are Fay, I wondered where you\'d gone.
Is that the vase shape of the inner daffodil flower I see before my eyes? Yes, but in words this day it heralds beautifully the onset of our most welcome change of seasons.
Like the return of opening buds it\'s so good to welcome you back to my humble screen with your warmth of words. Hi there! - how are you... are you staying a while?
April 25th, 2022 12:57
First Flush
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Happy to ‘see’ you today. Reading your poem has brightened my day. It’s cold and wintry like today where I am.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
April 25th, 2022 11:21
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Happy to ‘see’ you today. Reading your poem has brightened my day. It’s cold and wintry like today where I am.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
April 25th, 2022 11:21
First Flush
Rocky Lagou said:
What a blessing your poetry is! I enjoy the way the poem tapers in length as the reader journeys further. Great display!
April 25th, 2022 10:19
Rocky Lagou said:
What a blessing your poetry is! I enjoy the way the poem tapers in length as the reader journeys further. Great display!
April 25th, 2022 10:19
First Flush
Neville said:
aesthetically pleasing and magnificently appropriate .. reads well too, what\'s not to like on a page such as this ...move over spring, summers on the horizon ..
April 25th, 2022 07:47
Neville said:
aesthetically pleasing and magnificently appropriate .. reads well too, what\'s not to like on a page such as this ...move over spring, summers on the horizon ..
April 25th, 2022 07:47
First Flush
L. B. Mek said:
\'of making Nature blush
with bud-burst notions
and whispers blown
thru\' each petal\'..
ahh, dear Fay
our MPS, Nature Poet
par excellence!
\'making us, drift
and glide, on your wings
of ink..
as our fingertips, type
on QWERTY, keys
as-if, we\'re brushing
Nature\'s, velvet leafed
verdure cheeks...!
April 25th, 2022 07:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'of making Nature blush
with bud-burst notions
and whispers blown
thru\' each petal\'..
ahh, dear Fay
our MPS, Nature Poet
par excellence!
\'making us, drift
and glide, on your wings
of ink..
as our fingertips, type
on QWERTY, keys
as-if, we\'re brushing
Nature\'s, velvet leafed
verdure cheeks...!
April 25th, 2022 07:06
First Flush
Christina8 said:
Oh I love this poem! With the color and the shape of the poem, what\'s not to like? I wish spring would come where I live so I just live vicariously through this poem. Thanks!
April 25th, 2022 06:30
Christina8 said:
Oh I love this poem! With the color and the shape of the poem, what\'s not to like? I wish spring would come where I live so I just live vicariously through this poem. Thanks!
April 25th, 2022 06:30
First Flush
spilleronsheet said:
So beautiful and serene…nothing bit a poetry of nature’s beauty can ascend a tired mind…very lovely work penned dear Fay….
April 25th, 2022 05:53
spilleronsheet said:
So beautiful and serene…nothing bit a poetry of nature’s beauty can ascend a tired mind…very lovely work penned dear Fay….
April 25th, 2022 05:53
First Flush
orchidee said:
A good flowerpot shaped poem Fay. One of our cats sleeps in a big flowerpot. Ahhh!
April 25th, 2022 05:35
orchidee said:
A good flowerpot shaped poem Fay. One of our cats sleeps in a big flowerpot. Ahhh!
April 25th, 2022 05:35
Cajoled
SureshG said:
Just as seasons change so does our mood,
But may I offer ‘thoughts of food’,
In bitter cold of Winter, we long for Spring
Borrow your words of wisdom n warmth, waiting to spring
April 21st, 2022 06:50
SureshG said:
Just as seasons change so does our mood,
But may I offer ‘thoughts of food’,
In bitter cold of Winter, we long for Spring
Borrow your words of wisdom n warmth, waiting to spring
April 21st, 2022 06:50
Cajoled
Neville said:
tis a fact, a sure fact of life that this happens & so often .. dreams are shattered, sometimes in an instant .. and sometimes over varying periods of time ... you have painted a most vivid picture of a process that none of us look forward to .. x5 stars awarded .............. N x
April 16th, 2022 01:14
Neville said:
tis a fact, a sure fact of life that this happens & so often .. dreams are shattered, sometimes in an instant .. and sometimes over varying periods of time ... you have painted a most vivid picture of a process that none of us look forward to .. x5 stars awarded .............. N x
April 16th, 2022 01:14
Cajoled
Rozina said:
I felt sad reading the last few lines of your poem. A beautiful piece.
April 15th, 2022 18:02
Rozina said:
I felt sad reading the last few lines of your poem. A beautiful piece.
April 15th, 2022 18:02
Cajoled
jarcher54 said:
Fay, you seldom include yourself expressly in your poems, and that is an admirable, challenging thing you do so magnificently... but when you become confessional, it is perfect!
April 15th, 2022 12:40
jarcher54 said:
Fay, you seldom include yourself expressly in your poems, and that is an admirable, challenging thing you do so magnificently... but when you become confessional, it is perfect!
April 15th, 2022 12:40
Cajoled
dusk arising said:
Oh crikey, story of my life or what? Straight away i know this is going in my favourites.
Beautifully written soulful poetry of life. \'Killing me softly\'
April 15th, 2022 10:26
dusk arising said:
Oh crikey, story of my life or what? Straight away i know this is going in my favourites.
Beautifully written soulful poetry of life. \'Killing me softly\'
April 15th, 2022 10:26
Cajoled
spilleronsheet said:
These lines are very precious dear Fay
It seeks the individuals
It seeks nations wide
Tomorrow holds a promising future
So we walk merrily
Persuaded in our heart
Everyday shall be a glory
Yet at times life takes by surprise
We may end up somewhere far off where we thought to be
I could see your lines reflecting in our lives
So true dear Fay
April 15th, 2022 04:27
spilleronsheet said:
These lines are very precious dear Fay
It seeks the individuals
It seeks nations wide
Tomorrow holds a promising future
So we walk merrily
Persuaded in our heart
Everyday shall be a glory
Yet at times life takes by surprise
We may end up somewhere far off where we thought to be
I could see your lines reflecting in our lives
So true dear Fay
April 15th, 2022 04:27
Dividends
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fay, love\'s dividends are so powerful.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fay, love\'s dividends are so powerful.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:40
Dividends
Rozina said:
Such a complex subject crafted so cleverly in these dozen lines. So good.
April 14th, 2022 17:53
Rozina said:
Such a complex subject crafted so cleverly in these dozen lines. So good.
April 14th, 2022 17:53
Dividends
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, and yes Fay. You have so much wisdom, I admire the way you can craft poems in such nice and neat ways. Love is at the center, if we play our cards right, we will reap that \"delivered success\" you proclaim. Amazing.
April 14th, 2022 10:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, and yes Fay. You have so much wisdom, I admire the way you can craft poems in such nice and neat ways. Love is at the center, if we play our cards right, we will reap that \"delivered success\" you proclaim. Amazing.
April 14th, 2022 10:16
Dividends
Neville said:
cor blimey missus Fay .. say it like it really is why dont\'cha .. and darn it, as much as I used to love patches and the occasional fray .. I now think it makes more sense to be up front write from the start & until the very end ................ Neville
April 14th, 2022 09:39
Neville said:
cor blimey missus Fay .. say it like it really is why dont\'cha .. and darn it, as much as I used to love patches and the occasional fray .. I now think it makes more sense to be up front write from the start & until the very end ................ Neville
April 14th, 2022 09:39
Maybe.
Rozina said:
I can imagine this scene you have crafted so well. The anxiety, the hope, the fear, the longing...
April 14th, 2022 04:47
Rozina said:
I can imagine this scene you have crafted so well. The anxiety, the hope, the fear, the longing...
April 14th, 2022 04:47
Maybe.
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
studied metaphors that engaged
me with images
Tucked away yearning
awakens and persists
I can see the memory
in the shape of the pillow
stronger images of dawnlight
creeping the gentleness of beckoning fingers
I can see you in a house on a Portsmouth cliff looking out to sea
April 13th, 2022 20:37
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
studied metaphors that engaged
me with images
Tucked away yearning
awakens and persists
I can see the memory
in the shape of the pillow
stronger images of dawnlight
creeping the gentleness of beckoning fingers
I can see you in a house on a Portsmouth cliff looking out to sea
April 13th, 2022 20:37
Maybe.
dusk arising said:
A long time ago there was a hit called \'sailor\' - \"as i call across the sea, come home to me\" remember it?
Your reader can\'t help but feel the yearning and perhaps a little fear in your finely tuned words today Fay. Allsorts of picture themes spring to mind. These emotions you express go so far back in history yet are as relevant today as they ever were. Easy to picture you in that cottage going about your day to day yet tied to glancing from that window, eagerly ready to dash down to the shoreline.
April 13th, 2022 18:09
dusk arising said:
A long time ago there was a hit called \'sailor\' - \"as i call across the sea, come home to me\" remember it?
Your reader can\'t help but feel the yearning and perhaps a little fear in your finely tuned words today Fay. Allsorts of picture themes spring to mind. These emotions you express go so far back in history yet are as relevant today as they ever were. Easy to picture you in that cottage going about your day to day yet tied to glancing from that window, eagerly ready to dash down to the shoreline.
April 13th, 2022 18:09
Maybe.
Michael Edwards said:
It transports the mind - the magic of your words.
April 13th, 2022 14:27
Michael Edwards said:
It transports the mind - the magic of your words.
April 13th, 2022 14:27
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