Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Love\'s Dues
dusk arising said:
Indeed love can become a duel, fought at dawn and lasting all week till somebody sensible - the male of course - gives in when he realises her last two hubbies died of food poisoning.
February 14th, 2022 04:34
dusk arising said:
Indeed love can become a duel, fought at dawn and lasting all week till somebody sensible - the male of course - gives in when he realises her last two hubbies died of food poisoning.
February 14th, 2022 04:34
Armed Rules
Garth Rakumakoe said:
What a reflective write this is, dear Fay. I love the way you close it. Ribbon tied. Compelling all the way!
February 12th, 2022 04:46
Garth Rakumakoe said:
What a reflective write this is, dear Fay. I love the way you close it. Ribbon tied. Compelling all the way!
February 12th, 2022 04:46
Armed Rules
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine and true words Fay, the wars that we have had have taught those supposedly in charge of countries no lessons at all.
“MAKE LOVE, NOT WAR!”
Andy
February 12th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine and true words Fay, the wars that we have had have taught those supposedly in charge of countries no lessons at all.
“MAKE LOVE, NOT WAR!”
Andy
February 12th, 2022 01:49
Armed Rules
Doggerel Dave said:
Thank you Fay for your polished poetry.. But I\'ve got nothing to add on this topic; I\'m exhausted by it.
February 11th, 2022 19:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Thank you Fay for your polished poetry.. But I\'ve got nothing to add on this topic; I\'m exhausted by it.
February 11th, 2022 19:15
Armed Rules
L. B. Mek said:
\'harm no longer\', morphed
in-to, \'insane for rage\'
till we\'re all doomed, by
\'terror will capture\'
and once more
\'Celled
in same grief enemies readily call\'
all because, a few days of peace
makes us forget
and we\'re unable to discourage:
\'fellow-despoilers to cease from war.\'
(such true words
on the grim realities of humanity\'s warmongering, hereditary plague..)
how I cherish, this wisdom you so generously
choose to share with us, dear Fay
thank you!
(please, forgive me
for playing around with your words
I meant no disrespect)
February 11th, 2022 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'harm no longer\', morphed
in-to, \'insane for rage\'
till we\'re all doomed, by
\'terror will capture\'
and once more
\'Celled
in same grief enemies readily call\'
all because, a few days of peace
makes us forget
and we\'re unable to discourage:
\'fellow-despoilers to cease from war.\'
(such true words
on the grim realities of humanity\'s warmongering, hereditary plague..)
how I cherish, this wisdom you so generously
choose to share with us, dear Fay
thank you!
(please, forgive me
for playing around with your words
I meant no disrespect)
February 11th, 2022 07:05
Armed Rules
spilleronsheet said:
A heart plunging take is a war
And you wove those expressions so effortlessly
I always feel sad to think that peace is so expensive
At the loss of so many lives….you wrote effortlessly with poignant imagery…..a sadness crept over….Miss Fay you captured the emotions so well
February 11th, 2022 07:02
spilleronsheet said:
A heart plunging take is a war
And you wove those expressions so effortlessly
I always feel sad to think that peace is so expensive
At the loss of so many lives….you wrote effortlessly with poignant imagery…..a sadness crept over….Miss Fay you captured the emotions so well
February 11th, 2022 07:02
Armed Rules
dusk arising said:
The disgusting confused savage pointless slaughter that is war looms over us once more around Ukraine. Where every bullet plants an acorn of vengence to blossom, watered again by bloodloss.
Survivng combatants know all this and the wisdom of your words today. But mothers will speak of loss through their tears and young in years, tomorrows aspiring heroes listen to nourishment of hatred. Oiling the cycle wheels of war and peace.
February 11th, 2022 06:35
dusk arising said:
The disgusting confused savage pointless slaughter that is war looms over us once more around Ukraine. Where every bullet plants an acorn of vengence to blossom, watered again by bloodloss.
Survivng combatants know all this and the wisdom of your words today. But mothers will speak of loss through their tears and young in years, tomorrows aspiring heroes listen to nourishment of hatred. Oiling the cycle wheels of war and peace.
February 11th, 2022 06:35
Timed
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, each new dawning is so wonderful to see and to arise in.
Andy
February 11th, 2022 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, each new dawning is so wonderful to see and to arise in.
Andy
February 11th, 2022 01:27
Timed
spilleronsheet said:
“Desire for his Lady of changeable form
sees Knight\'s won glory
now timed to break, rising
when victorious Dawn realizes
with Venus unveiled new morning can smile.”
A majestic poetry displaying the sun, q celestial being caught in my eyes
How well you wedded the imagery with the sunrise
A beautiful poetry transcends across the time
Catching the space in readers’ ‘mind
Sunrise and sunset are beautiful
But they turned more after going through your piece
Marvellous dear Fay
Well penned
February 10th, 2022 20:25
spilleronsheet said:
“Desire for his Lady of changeable form
sees Knight\'s won glory
now timed to break, rising
when victorious Dawn realizes
with Venus unveiled new morning can smile.”
A majestic poetry displaying the sun, q celestial being caught in my eyes
How well you wedded the imagery with the sunrise
A beautiful poetry transcends across the time
Catching the space in readers’ ‘mind
Sunrise and sunset are beautiful
But they turned more after going through your piece
Marvellous dear Fay
Well penned
February 10th, 2022 20:25
Timed
Michael Edwards said:
Just read dusks SOL and now this - a double bonus day to be sure
February 10th, 2022 12:08
Michael Edwards said:
Just read dusks SOL and now this - a double bonus day to be sure
February 10th, 2022 12:08
Timed
dusk arising said:
Delightful poetry. A similar subject for my humble offering today also.
The dawning is always different and there are so many ways to consider it and to address it. Something quite beautiful which you write of with a real appreciation of it\'s splendour - showing us new ways to look heavenward.
February 10th, 2022 06:44
dusk arising said:
Delightful poetry. A similar subject for my humble offering today also.
The dawning is always different and there are so many ways to consider it and to address it. Something quite beautiful which you write of with a real appreciation of it\'s splendour - showing us new ways to look heavenward.
February 10th, 2022 06:44
Timed
L. B. Mek said:
\'rides Ol\' Sol\'s wild horses,
rays of white light
moving in sequence saddle silence\'..
what Sublime wording of yearning
one of your very best poems!
and that\'s not said, lightly
trust me..
I thank you! for choosing to share
your transcendent poetic talent
with the utmost sincerity, dear Fay
February 10th, 2022 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'rides Ol\' Sol\'s wild horses,
rays of white light
moving in sequence saddle silence\'..
what Sublime wording of yearning
one of your very best poems!
and that\'s not said, lightly
trust me..
I thank you! for choosing to share
your transcendent poetic talent
with the utmost sincerity, dear Fay
February 10th, 2022 05:44
Tonight
Lorna said:
The most magical time of day made more magical by you Fay.....
February 8th, 2022 15:06
Lorna said:
The most magical time of day made more magical by you Fay.....
February 8th, 2022 15:06
Tonight
Rozina said:
Holding my breath reading this beautiful poem. To be able to write like this....
February 7th, 2022 22:10
Rozina said:
Holding my breath reading this beautiful poem. To be able to write like this....
February 7th, 2022 22:10
Tonight
spilleronsheet said:
A thousand claps
A wonderful imagery
An audience witnessing a beautiful orchestra
Where you play with melodies of words
And the night changes into day
Very lovely dear Fay
February 7th, 2022 16:41
spilleronsheet said:
A thousand claps
A wonderful imagery
An audience witnessing a beautiful orchestra
Where you play with melodies of words
And the night changes into day
Very lovely dear Fay
February 7th, 2022 16:41
Tonight
Doggerel Dave said:
Picture is surplus to requirements, Fay. All revealed in your disciplined but rich poetry. Lovely.
February 7th, 2022 16:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Picture is surplus to requirements, Fay. All revealed in your disciplined but rich poetry. Lovely.
February 7th, 2022 16:38
Tonight
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, this is so beautiful. I love the images going on and the rainbow finale is so picturesque. Good job! 💖
February 7th, 2022 14:06
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, this is so beautiful. I love the images going on and the rainbow finale is so picturesque. Good job! 💖
February 7th, 2022 14:06
Tonight
dusk arising said:
Some lovely pictures there Fay as day takes it\'s curtain call and majestic night cloaks it\'s secrets to enthrall.
A favourite time of day for me in milder times when i am prepared to sit out and take it all in after being serenaded by one of my favourite blackbird\'s songs.
February 7th, 2022 11:18
dusk arising said:
Some lovely pictures there Fay as day takes it\'s curtain call and majestic night cloaks it\'s secrets to enthrall.
A favourite time of day for me in milder times when i am prepared to sit out and take it all in after being serenaded by one of my favourite blackbird\'s songs.
February 7th, 2022 11:18
Beauty
Doggerel Dave said:
So full of texture, Fay. If beauty is in the eye of the beholder (not sure this is relevant, but still...) then it is good of you not to keep it to yourself.
February 2nd, 2022 19:58
Doggerel Dave said:
So full of texture, Fay. If beauty is in the eye of the beholder (not sure this is relevant, but still...) then it is good of you not to keep it to yourself.
February 2nd, 2022 19:58
Beauty
spilleronsheet said:
So calm
A serene beauty
A must for me to settle the chaos of mind
Thanks a ton for this soothing poetry dear Fay
Fell in love with these lines…
February 2nd, 2022 12:13
spilleronsheet said:
So calm
A serene beauty
A must for me to settle the chaos of mind
Thanks a ton for this soothing poetry dear Fay
Fell in love with these lines…
February 2nd, 2022 12:13
Beauty
Rozina said:
A real appreciation of nature. Such a lovely description.
February 2nd, 2022 08:42
Rozina said:
A real appreciation of nature. Such a lovely description.
February 2nd, 2022 08:42
Beauty
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in beauty. Well, I know now, by this good write!
February 2nd, 2022 07:58
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in beauty. Well, I know now, by this good write!
February 2nd, 2022 07:58
Beauty
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Fay, the beauty of Nature is so wonderful and every time I am with it, it astounds me even more, as do your words today.
Andy
February 2nd, 2022 07:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Fay, the beauty of Nature is so wonderful and every time I am with it, it astounds me even more, as do your words today.
Andy
February 2nd, 2022 07:00
Beauty
dusk arising said:
After running the race of young ignorance, overlooking nature\'s charms, we arrive here and begin an appreciation of the gifts surrounding us. Such a beautiful appreciation you give us today. How plain would our world be without those finer details you highlight like those sand ridges from tides motion, so easily overlooked but a mystery in themselves.
I\'m drawn in to wonder yet more over the displayed jewels within your words here.
into my fav\'s.
February 2nd, 2022 04:28
dusk arising said:
After running the race of young ignorance, overlooking nature\'s charms, we arrive here and begin an appreciation of the gifts surrounding us. Such a beautiful appreciation you give us today. How plain would our world be without those finer details you highlight like those sand ridges from tides motion, so easily overlooked but a mystery in themselves.
I\'m drawn in to wonder yet more over the displayed jewels within your words here.
into my fav\'s.
February 2nd, 2022 04:28
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