Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Sounds
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh come on Fay - cut to the chase: on second reading I couldn\'t wait to get to the last three lines, which do it for me...! 😊
PS: like the new photo ID - you lookin at me ??
September 12th, 2021 07:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh come on Fay - cut to the chase: on second reading I couldn\'t wait to get to the last three lines, which do it for me...! 😊
PS: like the new photo ID - you lookin at me ??
September 12th, 2021 07:43
Unsaid.
Neville said:
Amazingly good .. or Supa as we say in Bulgaria ....................................... x
September 11th, 2021 03:12
Neville said:
Amazingly good .. or Supa as we say in Bulgaria ....................................... x
September 11th, 2021 03:12
Unsaid.
dusk arising said:
Oh wow! I really like this little gem.
It\'s favourites time !! lol
September 11th, 2021 02:55
dusk arising said:
Oh wow! I really like this little gem.
It\'s favourites time !! lol
September 11th, 2021 02:55
Autumn Comes Running.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay for my favourite season of them all.
Andy
September 11th, 2021 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay for my favourite season of them all.
Andy
September 11th, 2021 00:04
Autumn Comes Running.
Neville said:
this should be an annual celebration x
September 10th, 2021 09:18
Neville said:
this should be an annual celebration x
September 10th, 2021 09:18
Autumn Comes Running.
L. B. Mek said:
\'It tosses relentless as with bounty it plays
and douses growth\'s hold by raining days\'..
I just love the moody, crunching cadence of early autumnal atmosphere
that quietude lull, as summer\'s vibrancy dials down and our sky\'s start to get a little dusky
but still, we\'re gifted with sublime sunshine moments in-between the life nourishing droplets of nature\'s abundance,
such a unique season and how quickly it comes and goes, sandwiched between lethargic Summer and far too eager, Winter...
(a great read, dear Fay
thank you, for sharing it again)
September 10th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'It tosses relentless as with bounty it plays
and douses growth\'s hold by raining days\'..
I just love the moody, crunching cadence of early autumnal atmosphere
that quietude lull, as summer\'s vibrancy dials down and our sky\'s start to get a little dusky
but still, we\'re gifted with sublime sunshine moments in-between the life nourishing droplets of nature\'s abundance,
such a unique season and how quickly it comes and goes, sandwiched between lethargic Summer and far too eager, Winter...
(a great read, dear Fay
thank you, for sharing it again)
September 10th, 2021 05:06
Autumn Comes Running.
Saxon Crow said:
Very well encapsulated poem Fay. You\'ve mailed that autumnal feel perfectly
September 10th, 2021 03:05
Saxon Crow said:
Very well encapsulated poem Fay. You\'ve mailed that autumnal feel perfectly
September 10th, 2021 03:05
Autumn Comes Running.
dusk arising said:
Heralded by amber leaf-fall the shudder of winters proximity taints these late sunshiney warm days.
The sadness of losr summer runs between your lines as well you depict this seasonal demise. Bills pecking at your windowsill brings reassurance of homely warmth and continuance.
September 10th, 2021 02:54
dusk arising said:
Heralded by amber leaf-fall the shudder of winters proximity taints these late sunshiney warm days.
The sadness of losr summer runs between your lines as well you depict this seasonal demise. Bills pecking at your windowsill brings reassurance of homely warmth and continuance.
September 10th, 2021 02:54
Finding
L. B. Mek said:
Inspiration, in every gust
(a lovely depiction
succinct and light in tone, but deep in its layered meaning)
a wonderful read, dear Fay
September 9th, 2021 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
Inspiration, in every gust
(a lovely depiction
succinct and light in tone, but deep in its layered meaning)
a wonderful read, dear Fay
September 9th, 2021 05:30
Finding
dusk arising said:
That fairly describes how inspiration falls and mists clear as one\'s poetic creativity leads a trail.
September 9th, 2021 04:46
dusk arising said:
That fairly describes how inspiration falls and mists clear as one\'s poetic creativity leads a trail.
September 9th, 2021 04:46
Fused
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I might swoon and blow a fuse - or vice versa?! lol.
September 8th, 2021 10:57
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I might swoon and blow a fuse - or vice versa?! lol.
September 8th, 2021 10:57
Fused
dusk arising said:
OMG put that cover back on the fusebox... the sparks flying in your poetry today have me... mmm was going to say worried but.... smiling is better.
\"ello... is that Penzance plumbing and electrics.... can you send a man round please.......\"
September 8th, 2021 06:00
dusk arising said:
OMG put that cover back on the fusebox... the sparks flying in your poetry today have me... mmm was going to say worried but.... smiling is better.
\"ello... is that Penzance plumbing and electrics.... can you send a man round please.......\"
September 8th, 2021 06:00
Fused
Neville said:
this is absolutely lovely Fay .. hot wired so ya are ............ while there\'s me, well earthed and yet not entirely grounded ..................................... x
September 8th, 2021 03:42
Neville said:
this is absolutely lovely Fay .. hot wired so ya are ............ while there\'s me, well earthed and yet not entirely grounded ..................................... x
September 8th, 2021 03:42
Fused
Goldfinch60 said:
May we all be of one mind on this earth and all will be well Fay.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 03:30
Goldfinch60 said:
May we all be of one mind on this earth and all will be well Fay.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 03:30
Untamed
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful description of a place you are obviously totally enthralled with Fay.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful description of a place you are obviously totally enthralled with Fay.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 00:10
Untamed
Neville said:
tis ragged and real is our Kernow .. a most marvelous place indeed and beautifully captured here in nothing but words gurt lush words o course .. :) x
September 7th, 2021 09:00
Neville said:
tis ragged and real is our Kernow .. a most marvelous place indeed and beautifully captured here in nothing but words gurt lush words o course .. :) x
September 7th, 2021 09:00
Untamed
Saxon Crow said:
Cornish alchemy indeed. Your words are as ancient as the land Fay
September 7th, 2021 07:15
Saxon Crow said:
Cornish alchemy indeed. Your words are as ancient as the land Fay
September 7th, 2021 07:15
Untamed
L. B. Mek said:
\'Remote enough to cause
near claustrophobia to those prone,
clifftop allure whispers\'..
our nature Poet, supreme
does it again,
thank you, dear Fay
did you take the picture, by any chance?
the timing is wonderful, the foamy wave remnants on the outgoing tide is so \'alive\', and yet not blurry
I can hear the overwhelming sway of the sea, just by closing my eyes
what a delightful read!
September 7th, 2021 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'Remote enough to cause
near claustrophobia to those prone,
clifftop allure whispers\'..
our nature Poet, supreme
does it again,
thank you, dear Fay
did you take the picture, by any chance?
the timing is wonderful, the foamy wave remnants on the outgoing tide is so \'alive\', and yet not blurry
I can hear the overwhelming sway of the sea, just by closing my eyes
what a delightful read!
September 7th, 2021 05:56
Untamed
Doggerel Dave said:
No - just envious, Fay. And a write which doesn\'t allow me to forget in a hurry.....
September 7th, 2021 05:03
Doggerel Dave said:
No - just envious, Fay. And a write which doesn\'t allow me to forget in a hurry.....
September 7th, 2021 05:03
Untamed
Accidental Poet said:
Magnificent imagery and expertly penned Fay. 👍
September 7th, 2021 04:46
Accidental Poet said:
Magnificent imagery and expertly penned Fay. 👍
September 7th, 2021 04:46
Changes.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay of dreams being written by the sea.
Andy
September 7th, 2021 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay of dreams being written by the sea.
Andy
September 7th, 2021 00:16
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