Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Finding
L. B. Mek said:
Inspiration, in every gust
(a lovely depiction
succinct and light in tone, but deep in its layered meaning)
a wonderful read, dear Fay
September 9th, 2021 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
Inspiration, in every gust
(a lovely depiction
succinct and light in tone, but deep in its layered meaning)
a wonderful read, dear Fay
September 9th, 2021 05:30
Finding
dusk arising said:
That fairly describes how inspiration falls and mists clear as one\'s poetic creativity leads a trail.
September 9th, 2021 04:46
dusk arising said:
That fairly describes how inspiration falls and mists clear as one\'s poetic creativity leads a trail.
September 9th, 2021 04:46
Fused
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I might swoon and blow a fuse - or vice versa?! lol.
September 8th, 2021 10:57
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I might swoon and blow a fuse - or vice versa?! lol.
September 8th, 2021 10:57
Fused
dusk arising said:
OMG put that cover back on the fusebox... the sparks flying in your poetry today have me... mmm was going to say worried but.... smiling is better.
\"ello... is that Penzance plumbing and electrics.... can you send a man round please.......\"
September 8th, 2021 06:00
dusk arising said:
OMG put that cover back on the fusebox... the sparks flying in your poetry today have me... mmm was going to say worried but.... smiling is better.
\"ello... is that Penzance plumbing and electrics.... can you send a man round please.......\"
September 8th, 2021 06:00
Fused
Neville said:
this is absolutely lovely Fay .. hot wired so ya are ............ while there\'s me, well earthed and yet not entirely grounded ..................................... x
September 8th, 2021 03:42
Neville said:
this is absolutely lovely Fay .. hot wired so ya are ............ while there\'s me, well earthed and yet not entirely grounded ..................................... x
September 8th, 2021 03:42
Fused
Goldfinch60 said:
May we all be of one mind on this earth and all will be well Fay.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 03:30
Goldfinch60 said:
May we all be of one mind on this earth and all will be well Fay.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 03:30
Untamed
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful description of a place you are obviously totally enthralled with Fay.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful description of a place you are obviously totally enthralled with Fay.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 00:10
Untamed
Neville said:
tis ragged and real is our Kernow .. a most marvelous place indeed and beautifully captured here in nothing but words gurt lush words o course .. :) x
September 7th, 2021 09:00
Neville said:
tis ragged and real is our Kernow .. a most marvelous place indeed and beautifully captured here in nothing but words gurt lush words o course .. :) x
September 7th, 2021 09:00
Untamed
Saxon Crow said:
Cornish alchemy indeed. Your words are as ancient as the land Fay
September 7th, 2021 07:15
Saxon Crow said:
Cornish alchemy indeed. Your words are as ancient as the land Fay
September 7th, 2021 07:15
Untamed
L. B. Mek said:
\'Remote enough to cause
near claustrophobia to those prone,
clifftop allure whispers\'..
our nature Poet, supreme
does it again,
thank you, dear Fay
did you take the picture, by any chance?
the timing is wonderful, the foamy wave remnants on the outgoing tide is so \'alive\', and yet not blurry
I can hear the overwhelming sway of the sea, just by closing my eyes
what a delightful read!
September 7th, 2021 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'Remote enough to cause
near claustrophobia to those prone,
clifftop allure whispers\'..
our nature Poet, supreme
does it again,
thank you, dear Fay
did you take the picture, by any chance?
the timing is wonderful, the foamy wave remnants on the outgoing tide is so \'alive\', and yet not blurry
I can hear the overwhelming sway of the sea, just by closing my eyes
what a delightful read!
September 7th, 2021 05:56
Untamed
Doggerel Dave said:
No - just envious, Fay. And a write which doesn\'t allow me to forget in a hurry.....
September 7th, 2021 05:03
Doggerel Dave said:
No - just envious, Fay. And a write which doesn\'t allow me to forget in a hurry.....
September 7th, 2021 05:03
Changes.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay of dreams being written by the sea.
Andy
September 7th, 2021 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay of dreams being written by the sea.
Andy
September 7th, 2021 00:16
Changes.
orchidee said:
And I\'m writing - well typing - with this hand - or two - a fine write Fay!
September 6th, 2021 09:17
orchidee said:
And I\'m writing - well typing - with this hand - or two - a fine write Fay!
September 6th, 2021 09:17
Changes.
Neville said:
this shore is another one of your masterpieces my lady ..
need I say more ... no of course not .. he bows and waves leaving a x in his wake .......................................
September 6th, 2021 08:06
Neville said:
this shore is another one of your masterpieces my lady ..
need I say more ... no of course not .. he bows and waves leaving a x in his wake .......................................
September 6th, 2021 08:06
Changes.
L. B. Mek said:
\'inert\': indeed..
beautiful, dear Fay!
may that eagerness remain, evergreen
in our hopeful heart\'s
September 6th, 2021 07:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'inert\': indeed..
beautiful, dear Fay!
may that eagerness remain, evergreen
in our hopeful heart\'s
September 6th, 2021 07:37
Changes.
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s a cop out, Fay! – You’ve passed all that poetry power and passion to an unknown hand, ballpoint and pad, oh and a lowering sun….shame on you!
September 6th, 2021 07:31
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s a cop out, Fay! – You’ve passed all that poetry power and passion to an unknown hand, ballpoint and pad, oh and a lowering sun….shame on you!
September 6th, 2021 07:31
Familiar.
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking those familiar places can bring back such wonderful memories Fay.
Andy
September 6th, 2021 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking those familiar places can bring back such wonderful memories Fay.
Andy
September 6th, 2021 00:17
Familiar.
Neville said:
I am taken back to the age of steam .. to an age when and where I felt most comfortable ... so could not turn the page without first saying a big thank you .. x
September 5th, 2021 11:49
Neville said:
I am taken back to the age of steam .. to an age when and where I felt most comfortable ... so could not turn the page without first saying a big thank you .. x
September 5th, 2021 11:49
Familiar.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Tricky if we take unfamiliar paths sometimes. Some go on for miles. We don\'t know where we may end up!
September 5th, 2021 09:50
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Tricky if we take unfamiliar paths sometimes. Some go on for miles. We don\'t know where we may end up!
September 5th, 2021 09:50
Familiar.
dusk arising said:
All those old familiar places.
AS a kid I was shunted all over the country along with my siblings as we grew up. I used to be able to count having attended more than ten different schools. Thoughtless parents, messed up education etc.
Familiar places have become important to me in later years, they become as friends. It\'s heartwarming to see the seasons on familiar landscapes, alive in the hedgerows and pasture.
Reflecting upon your words brings to mind the thrill springtime will bring to familiar places.
Very atmospheric writing from you Fay.
September 5th, 2021 02:47
dusk arising said:
All those old familiar places.
AS a kid I was shunted all over the country along with my siblings as we grew up. I used to be able to count having attended more than ten different schools. Thoughtless parents, messed up education etc.
Familiar places have become important to me in later years, they become as friends. It\'s heartwarming to see the seasons on familiar landscapes, alive in the hedgerows and pasture.
Reflecting upon your words brings to mind the thrill springtime will bring to familiar places.
Very atmospheric writing from you Fay.
September 5th, 2021 02:47
Elsewhere
dusk arising said:
A candlelit dinner for two has such romance. Captured here undoubtedly.
The making of an evening with an air that lasts long into the sweetness of enchanting love.
September 4th, 2021 14:26
dusk arising said:
A candlelit dinner for two has such romance. Captured here undoubtedly.
The making of an evening with an air that lasts long into the sweetness of enchanting love.
September 4th, 2021 14:26
Elsewhere
ron parrish aka wordman said:
timeless, all love should feel this way
September 4th, 2021 11:34
ron parrish aka wordman said:
timeless, all love should feel this way
September 4th, 2021 11:34
Elsewhere
Neville said:
a series of fleeting moments maybe .. but oh\' my word, captured here so very well ... x
September 4th, 2021 06:53
Neville said:
a series of fleeting moments maybe .. but oh\' my word, captured here so very well ... x
September 4th, 2021 06:53
STONES KNOW
dusk arising said:
Ye tickled my roots with this fine ditty my deario. The family name is from St Buryans right down on the peninsular and we even have a tin mine bearing the family name.
So I can romance with your verses in my west mids ignorance but a very enjoyable romance it has been.
September 3rd, 2021 10:46
dusk arising said:
Ye tickled my roots with this fine ditty my deario. The family name is from St Buryans right down on the peninsular and we even have a tin mine bearing the family name.
So I can romance with your verses in my west mids ignorance but a very enjoyable romance it has been.
September 3rd, 2021 10:46
STONES KNOW
Saxon Crow said:
You\'re just a bit bloidy fantastic really Fay. Love your inspiration
September 3rd, 2021 09:27
Saxon Crow said:
You\'re just a bit bloidy fantastic really Fay. Love your inspiration
September 3rd, 2021 09:27
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