Comments received on poems by ANGELA & BRIAN



AMENITIES FOR LIVING ~ FOUR BALANCED (x a x a etc) QUATRAINS !
Unsub said:

Why say “ Corner Shops are No. 5 on the list and many are Family Run by Pakistanis & Indians“ when actually...

across the UK 46% of convenience stores are Asian/Asian british owned, and 51% are white British owned, with a third of retailers being first generation immigrants.

Seems an odd & incorrect observation to me that has no benefit to your poem when actually more white owned corner shops exist!

Unsub.

October 6th, 2020 03:43

AMENITIES FOR LIVING ~ FOUR BALANCED (x a x a etc) QUATRAINS !
orchidee said:

A fine write B&A.

October 6th, 2020 01:54

COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A FREE VERSE ACROSTIC
L. B. Mek said:

a timely write of hope, wrapped in the life affirming positivity that graces everything you two pen!
stay safe

October 5th, 2020 03:56

COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A FREE VERSE ACROSTIC
Dove said:

Be Safe, and hope work is not too much, I know what structure can do to poetic form, many times I get stuck for a appropriate word to capture the theme! I’m learning new forms, just to widen my knowledge! Once I adapt, I’ll move along! You guys are PROs ! Hats off to you and a bow!

Best to the Trio

October 4th, 2020 19:24

COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A FREE VERSE ACROSTIC
Unsub said:

Angela, to use the word nobodies to describe a human is insulting & offensive.

Would have thought you would have been better than to be so judgemental of an individual & consider some as nobodies.

We are all unique people & should never be labelled in that despicable way.

Regards

Nobody!

October 4th, 2020 04:46

COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A FREE VERSE ACROSTIC
Lorna said:

A nice message! I always do.......

October 4th, 2020 02:51

COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A FREE VERSE ACROSTIC
orchidee said:

A fine write B&A.
They wish my singing would \'pass\', but it never does. Have to make do with Fido howling, and drowning me out! lol.

October 4th, 2020 02:13

COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A FREE VERSE ACROSTIC
Goldfinch60 said:

I count my blessings every day and am in a very happy place despite the sadness that has occurred to me.

Andy

October 4th, 2020 01:05

THE POLITICIANS ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET
L. B. Mek said:

poignant, witty and well informed points,
good write!

October 2nd, 2020 03:54

THE POLITICIANS ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET
Michael Edwards said:

You\'ve said it all - I think you have to a certain type to be a politician.

October 1st, 2020 16:08

THE POLITICIANS ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET
Dove said:

Spot on the acrostic politics! I missed the first debate here! Heard it was awful! No point in watching I know whom Im voting for! It doesn’t rhyme with rump lol

October 1st, 2020 12:40

THE POLITICIANS ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET
orchidee said:

Get the cat to post some poems! We understand. I\'m surprised you have as much time as you to, to comment in detail.
I sort of knew Goldie was going to say that, before I got to the Comments! Doh!
It\'s a strange thing really. One party says something. Then the other side(s) criticises it. The first party changes/adjusts it. or whatever; and so on. Or even arguing within own parties.
Being open to public view, do they (whatever party) deserve the \'clown\' and buffoon images sometimes?

October 1st, 2020 10:58

THE POLITICIANS ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET
Goldfinch60 said:

“How do you know when a politician is lying?”

“There lips move!”

October 1st, 2020 04:31

SHADES OF GREEN ~ ANGELA ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET
L. B. Mek said:

a love song for all things green!
but wait I think a family member was left out in your final line, I think I hear a pouting meoowww lol

October 1st, 2020 04:21

SHADES OF GREEN ~ ANGELA ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - green - - my favourite colour too - a lovely card showing all the different tints and hues - a most interesting read.

September 30th, 2020 13:30

SHADES OF GREEN ~ ANGELA ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET
orchidee said:

Yes, lovely - green the colour symbolic of grace too. Maybe because there\'s a lot of it about - grass, trees, etc.
Oh no - woof! It\'s OK Fido, the clip is NOT Fifty shades of grey! lol. Go to Specsavers Fido. It\'s Forty shades of green.

September 30th, 2020 01:59

ODE TO~SPIDER~WEB ~ AN ACROSTIC 3 2 6 3 SONNET
Dove said:

Oh beautiful said! I love Spider webs! Indoor spiders here are “Daddy long legs “ the only ones we kill are black widows! Those are usually in garages and wood piles ! Always hidden! Use to feed flies to them garden Spiders!

Best to the Trio

September 29th, 2020 10:02

ODE TO~SPIDER~WEB ~ AN ACROSTIC 3 2 6 3 SONNET
Fay Slimm. said:

A much needed ode to the beauty of spider-webs and so thankful to hear you respect their painstaking construction dear duo - - an uplifting read.

September 29th, 2020 08:47

ODE TO~SPIDER~WEB ~ AN ACROSTIC 3 2 6 3 SONNET
orchidee said:

Good write and clip B&A.
Yes, I saved a big green grasshopper thingy. Too big for an aphid.

September 29th, 2020 05:47

ODE TO~SPIDER~WEB ~ AN ACROSTIC 3 2 6 3 SONNET
Goldfinch60 said:

So beautiful are spider webs with mist or frost on them.
I never kill spiders.

Andy

September 29th, 2020 04:38

GINGERBREAD~MAN~BLUES A TRIOLET
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful dedication,
gingerbread on a damp rainy morning reminds me that October is around the corner and countdown to all the year-end festivities can finally begin, roll-on 2021!

September 29th, 2020 02:26

GINGERBREAD~MAN~BLUES A TRIOLET
Goldfinch60 said:

You are right about the video, very good number.
Glas you have found your GB Man.

Andy

September 29th, 2020 00:13

GINGERBREAD~MAN~BLUES A TRIOLET
Fay Slimm. said:

Glad your own gingerbread man meets all requirements my lovely - - we females have to nibble and taste which offer is best when we have eligible admirers but am sure you knew directly who suited your palate....... yes your Brian..... a fun read.

September 28th, 2020 13:19

GINGERBREAD~MAN~BLUES A TRIOLET
orchidee said:

But aww! They got called \'Ginger Nuts\' in me school days. \'Nut\' meaning \'head\' of course. Woof! Fifo says that\'s the only meaning of \'nuts\' I need I to know! Oohh.

September 28th, 2020 05:27

GINGERBREAD~MAN~BLUES A TRIOLET
orchidee said:

This is all too much for Fido and I - swoon! heehee.

September 28th, 2020 05:24

ON THE WINGS OF A DOVE ~ A PANTOUM SONNET
Dove said:

It’s a beautiful poem of faith and love! Of course I love all Dove poems, I’ve written many throughout the years, I wrote one “Underneath my Wings”. If I find it I will post it!

Thanks again, best to the Trio,

September 27th, 2020 07:18

ON THE WINGS OF A DOVE ~ A PANTOUM SONNET
orchidee said:

A fine write B&A.

September 27th, 2020 01:53

ON THE WINGS OF A DOVE ~ A PANTOUM SONNET
Goldfinch60 said:

Where was your god\'s love for Joyce!!

September 27th, 2020 00:59

LITTER LOUTS ~A SALUTARY PANTOUM !
Michael Edwards said:

Such a serious subject so why are some totally oblivious to the harm they are causing?

September 26th, 2020 01:02

LITTER LOUTS ~A SALUTARY PANTOUM !
Fay Slimm. said:

Agree wholeheartedly with every stanza - litter is really a measure of how people view this planet.....

September 25th, 2020 16:16



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