Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Nothing To Prove.
Accidental Poet said:

Resisting the urge to unleash the beast is a master in control. Something Jeckal and Hide could never come to terms with. Well penned Andy. ; )

May 18th, 2021 05:22

Nothing To Prove.
dusk arising said:

Other than on a race track those supercars have never attracted me. Yes the original Lamborghini Miura in 69 had beautiful lines which were soon lost as it was \'bettered\' by later models.
I\'m happy with my old Mercedes estate which will go fast if i want it to but these days i\'m more interested in getting high MPG than speeding.
They do look add and out of place among normal cars and I do agree that I expect them to be driven with pace and a show of accelleration. Why I wonder?

May 18th, 2021 03:25

Nothing To Prove.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. It becomes tiresome if a fast car or motorbike roars past us just to show off, on the road, or while we\'re walking along the path.

May 18th, 2021 01:44

Experience Counts.
myself and me said:

Yes, indeed, and those experience riches our life.

May 17th, 2021 19:31

Experience Counts.
Andy Hunter said:

You\'re words are so true. I was once tasked with training graduates and some wanted to take time and learn while others simply believed a qualification meant they could jump on the promotion ladder without trying. Needless to say they soon realised their mistakes.

May 17th, 2021 13:13

Experience Counts.
Accidental Poet said:

Experience is the greatest of teachers. Even bad experiences have something good to teach us. Excellent write Andy. ; )

May 17th, 2021 05:41

Experience Counts.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

May 17th, 2021 01:32

Experience Counts.
dusk arising said:

Just how true this is came home to me the other day when I was working alongside an 18 yr old. Youth and vigour but no experience.
Oh how sweet would it be to be 18 again but with all my years of experience.

May 17th, 2021 01:04

Golden Girl.
Trenz Pruca said:

A golden poem for a golden girl. Thank you.


May 16th, 2021 20:11

Golden Girl.
Neville said:


just a little bit special this GF60 .. just like the woman who evidently inspired it ................................ Neville

May 16th, 2021 11:41

Golden Girl.
Accidental Poet said:

Very provocative Andy. ; )

May 16th, 2021 10:49

Golden Girl.
Andy Hunter said:

A haunting poem. A ghostly vision. Great writing Andy.

May 16th, 2021 05:58

Golden Girl.
Fay Slimm. said:

A description not to be forgotten this lady - your words live on in tribute to the lovely song and that beautiful woman dear Andy.

May 16th, 2021 04:48

Golden Girl.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

May 16th, 2021 02:07

Golden Girl.
Caring dove said:

Beautiful words , goldfinch πŸ™‚ really liked reading this

May 16th, 2021 01:25

Golden Girl.
dusk arising said:

A mist of mystery surrounds your fascinating piece today Goldfinch. Such poise and grace present when a beautiful woman single mindedly makes her way.

May 16th, 2021 01:18

She Found Herself.
myself and me said:

She is definitely a lucky one and a strong one too. How many got lost and never came back. Nice writing.

May 15th, 2021 22:15

She Found Herself.
Accidental Poet said:

A great write and read from an even greater man. ; )

May 15th, 2021 07:20

She Found Herself.
dusk arising said:

It\'s sad how people can be dominated by a relationship and lose what they are. I have seen it and been it in the past. It happens all too readily. At my stage in life I have decided not to risk it again and to carry on to my final years being the unfettered \'me\'.

There\'s a good message in your words today and i hope very few readers find themselves in a restrictive relationship such as you describe.

May 15th, 2021 05:30

She Found Herself.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
meanwhile - did I find \'Me\', \'Myself\', or \'I\'? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).

May 15th, 2021 01:58

She Found Herself.
Caring dove said:

Listening is so important ! πŸ™‚great that she got her strength and power back

May 15th, 2021 01:39

Unjustified Violence.
Andy Hunter said:

Had me puzzled until I got to the end. Very good πŸ™‚

May 14th, 2021 17:16

Unjustified Violence.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good story Andy. Love the suggestions the images make.

May 14th, 2021 14:06

Unjustified Violence.
dusk arising said:

If you had to choose, which colour croquet ball would you be?

May 14th, 2021 10:52

Unjustified Violence.
L. B. Mek said:

a fun read to help inject that Friday feeling Andy,
thanks!
although, I suggest
there\'s much worse Manmade things to be, than a ball
in a sport,
like a fish hook, maybe or a bullet
accessories both, to that other type
of hunting sport
where those who get knocked down
never get to see the Sun, again...
(please note: commentary is on
hunting for Pleasure not need)

May 14th, 2021 06:16

Unjustified Violence.
Accidental Poet said:

Sounded to me like the life of Orchi. ; ) Great write Andy.

May 14th, 2021 05:05

Unjustified Violence.
orchidee said:

Oh lol. good write Gold.

May 14th, 2021 01:32

Love Day
myself and me said:

A love beyond life long. So touching and wonderful.

May 13th, 2021 21:12

Love Day
dusk arising said:

A song and a poem, both about perfection.

May 13th, 2021 02:26

Love Day
Neville said:


... Hey you beautiful little golden bird, I reckon you just poemed my most very favourwritest GF60 posts of all time ...
and it aint hard to see where you are coming from neither ...
... such cool memories of the one you love and are no doubt still loved by ...
... great music n sounds and living life at four miles an hour ...
... what more could an old fella ask for ...
... cor blimey, you even got sheep thrown in ...
a brilliantly composed, most meaningful and heart-felt bit o poetry ...

All Good Things Andy,

Neville


May 13th, 2021 01:58



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