Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Red Dress.
orchidee said:

A lovely write Gold.

June 25th, 2021 01:55

One Step At A Time.
SureshG said:

Step by step, I heed your words

June 24th, 2021 12:05

One Step At A Time.
dusk arising said:

Even though I stumble, I wholeheartedly agree with your fine words.

June 24th, 2021 09:08

One Step At A Time.
L. B. Mek said:

I found your first two lines
such an enticing start, wonderfully worded Andy
and yep: I do agree
baby steps
from first shuffled breath, till our last laboured step
is our only way, to experience the \'Now\'
in that blink of Time, between
our wistful yesterdays and wishful tomorrow\'s...

June 24th, 2021 05:38

One Step At A Time.
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes - I can relate to that, Andy. It is the way my life transpired, without knowing where ultimately any of the steps would lead. The final result so far? OK by me.

June 24th, 2021 03:50

One Step At A Time.
Neville said:


How extraordinarily & universally true ... Tanka tanka ... one step at a time.. :)

June 24th, 2021 02:41

One Step At A Time.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
I took several steps backward in 1066 - cos I turned up!

June 24th, 2021 02:02

One Step At A Time.
Saxon Crow said:

Very true GF. Buggered if you\'ve only got one leg

June 24th, 2021 01:22

Picture of Love.
SureshG said:

AHHHHHH!!!!!! Moments - that can still bring joy to our heart, in spite of heavenly separation

June 23rd, 2021 12:59

Picture of Love.
Saxon Crow said:

Lovely poem GF and a lovely surprise

June 23rd, 2021 09:59

Picture of Love.
Neville said:


... you paint the perfect picture in words of what must surely be the perfect picture ...

June 23rd, 2021 02:25

Picture of Love.
dusk arising said:

What a lovely surprise.

June 23rd, 2021 02:16

Picture of Love.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
I have no trouble finding pics of KP. I just look in the papers every day, and there she is - it\'s all about ME, ME ME!! she says.

June 23rd, 2021 01:55

Another Year Gone;
Dove said:

Awe, birthdays are memorable! It’s good that you can remember the good and sad!

June 22nd, 2021 13:39

Another Year Gone;
Andy Hunter said:

Love this poem of the ups and downs of life with renewed hope for the future. AS always, nice writing Andy.

June 22nd, 2021 13:05

Another Year Gone;
dusk arising said:

Happy birthday Golie\'s friend.
I shall think of this on my 70th too.

June 22nd, 2021 07:30

I Arise.
John Prophet said:

Now that’s a good philosophy, great write!

June 22nd, 2021 06:11

Another Year Gone;
Kevin Michael Bloor said:

Lovely, reflective composition. I hear it\'s someone\'s birthday; Happy Birthday Dude!

June 22nd, 2021 03:37

Another Year Gone;
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
I thought it was about me - \'still plenty more to come\'. We\'ve had birthdays since at least least before 1066!

June 22nd, 2021 02:07

Another Year Gone;
SureshG said:

May you still be wishing her when she’s 100 or more

June 22nd, 2021 01:43

Another Year Gone;
Saxon Crow said:

Ahhhh. Nice one GF

June 22nd, 2021 01:18

I Arise.
Jayasree said:

Beautifully written, so positive.

June 21st, 2021 06:40

I Arise.
L. B. Mek said:

what an empowering message Andy
rousingly: rejuvenating!
right from its emphatic title
\'I arise\': indeed!


June 21st, 2021 06:07

I Arise.
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m on me feet mate, an going to stay there for as long as possible - Where I live, lay down too long they will wheel me out with no \'excuse me\'!
Lovely write and good advice as a bonus....

June 21st, 2021 04:50

I Arise.
Neville said:


I arise with my poor little blue eyes .. a neat little bundle of positivity ...

neatly & sweetly poemed my friend ....

June 21st, 2021 02:33

I Arise.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

June 21st, 2021 01:47

I Arise.
dusk arising said:

Nil illigitimus carborundum. Don\'t let the b\'tards wear you down. Yep, I give myself permission to have \'down days\' but rarely inflict them upon others unless through a posting on here LOL.

June 21st, 2021 01:22

I Arise.
Saxon Crow said:

Life goes on regardless of our choices so rightly so lets choose to say yes. Good poem GF

June 21st, 2021 01:16

The New Day Ahead.
Neville said:


I think you nailed it with these words sir ... well writ indeed :)

June 21st, 2021 00:49

The New Day Ahead.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

a new day,a moment in time to keep in our memory bank,,happy fathers day andy

June 20th, 2021 13:53



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