Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



The New Day - Senryu.
dusk arising said:

And croquet beckons.... winter has passed and the summer lies ahead with summer clothes, laughter, cool drinks and ice cream...... what\'s not to smile about?

June 8th, 2020 12:43

The New Day - Senryu.
Samreen Chowdhury said:

3 lines but so passive and beautiful. it shows the beauty of each day and appreciation of how we get to live every single day. thanks for sharing.

June 8th, 2020 07:49

Extended Life.
peto said:

A very welcome extension

June 8th, 2020 05:17

The New Day - Senryu.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Morning UNCLE ANDY ~ Thanks for another Eternal Oldie from Your Song Satchel *Mary Hopkins & Those were the Days* and Tom Jones looks Younger than ME ! With a name like Brian Owen Williams (BOW !) I cant hide my Celtic Roots but (unlike our Friend ORCHIDEE) I can sing in TUNE. *Perfect Pitch* they call it in the Valleys and they*re not talking Cricket. Angela can sing because Shes Spanish so musically (as in most things !) we do HARMONISE !
Each New Day has its own distinctive MELODY ~ In order to CARPE DIEM ~ all we have to do is HARMONISE ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey Cat !

June 8th, 2020 04:05

The New Day - Senryu.
orchidee said:

A fine write. But then I come along and spoil folk\'s days by singing - do I (spoil them?). lol.

June 8th, 2020 01:40

Extended Life.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Brian introduced me to OCHES 8 - Acapello Perfection ! Love the TUNE & LYRICS ! I thought with TRUMP & BORIS that they had already sent in the CLOWNS - When will we ever LEARN !
BRIAN & I both have responsible Jobs - He caring for His Students Minds and I for My Clients Bodies ~ Body & Soul Work I guess ! When we retire in 2053 it will be a release and a chance to *Grow Old Gracefully !* Love Your Poem and we are pleased that You feel the Presence of Your Beloved JOYCE with you 24/7 !

Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey !

June 7th, 2020 18:18

Extended Life.
Michael Edwards said:

Nice one Andy.

June 7th, 2020 08:54

Extended Life.
dusk arising said:

Keep on keeping on.

June 7th, 2020 03:45

Extended Life.
orchidee said:

Maybe you only look old - no haircuts yet, etc?
I must go annoy more folk then....!

June 7th, 2020 02:00

Extended Life.
Neville said:


This is absolutely smile inducing .. I sincerely hope I can achieve the same confidence attitude and feeling myself in a few years time...

smashing and true dear sir...

Neville

June 7th, 2020 01:40

Each New Day.
Ternic73 said:

I agree with John prophet well done

June 6th, 2020 11:45

Each New Day.
John Prophet said:

Very well said. These day’s especially we need positive ways to start each day.

June 6th, 2020 06:44

Listening to Ella.
dusk arising said:

Never been a fan of the much acclaimed lady myself. Sarah vaughan, now theres a voice and technique. But hey, each to their own and it\'s always great to reappraise a talent.

June 6th, 2020 03:02

Listening to Ella.
Neville said:

I am a fan myself and you make your point both clear and well.....

Neville

June 6th, 2020 02:25

Listening to Ella.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I never saw Jamie Cullum as a man of wise words more his grandfather-in-law
I have renewed respect for him
very true his words and yours thanks Andy

June 6th, 2020 02:08

Listening to Ella.
Michael Edwards said:

I agree - it was a good programme as was last noights programme on John Williams.

June 6th, 2020 02:08

Listening to Ella.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
I thought it would be worth us being on this planet, if I duetted with Ella. But I ruined it all, of course.
They said \'Not this planet, but Pluto can be my planet\'.

June 6th, 2020 02:03

Each New Day.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I thinks this is why showers were invented
It\'s like a fresh start
A new pair of socks
Clean sheets on the bed
Opening the window on a cool morning
Excellent piece Andy
Thank you

June 5th, 2020 15:40

Each New Day.
Michael Edwards said:

Every day is a bonus.

June 5th, 2020 14:18

Each New Day.
dusk arising said:

It is so very good that you take your good and positive feelings into the world each day. In our currently very troubled times, one wishes that such feeling existed in so many many more of our fellow human beings. The ugliness of racism and the apathy of the masses of apparently christian people witnessing it is truly saddening.

June 5th, 2020 11:23

Each New Day.
Saxon Crow said:

Hope you use soap! Good optimistic poem GF

June 5th, 2020 09:52

Each New Day.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GUT MORGAN ONKEL ANDY ~ Great Song & Great Version. Angela & I have volunteered for Colonisation of Mars ! We tick all the BOXES and OUR BABY could be the first ET !

He should have been a CARDNAL
An ADMIRAL ~ A KING
HE DID HIS very best fir US
Now hear the People Sing !
We*ll honour & exalt HIM
And strew HIS Path with FLOWERS
Hats off to ARCHEMEDES
The MAN who invented SHOWERS !

Much TRUTH in Your Poem
Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat !

June 5th, 2020 05:55

Each New Day.
Fay Slimm. said:

A beautifully positive start to your day and a fine example to follow dear Andy.

June 5th, 2020 04:38

Each New Day.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
Aww, whey thy fly me to the moon and leave me there? They not want to hear my melodious tones.
But we were already there in 1969, welcoming the first men on the moon. But we were the first there! Did we ever meet E.T.?

June 5th, 2020 01:39

Wandering in the Wood.
Neville said:


Another great observational poem that many of your readers will be able to relate to .. I\'m sure, coz I\'m one of em ….. Neville

June 5th, 2020 01:10

Wandering in the Wood.
Fay Slimm. said:

Trees are such a gift in so many ways - good to read your lovely tribute dear Andy.

June 4th, 2020 06:08

Wandering in the Wood.
Laura🌻 said:

Andy,

A beautiful read and a great video to complement your poem!
So many memories to be had whilst walking amongst the regal...🌲🌲🌲🌲🌲

Laura

June 4th, 2020 05:50

Wandering in the Wood.
dusk arising said:

There is something about trees, especially in woodland, they have a majestic presence.
It is easy to enter contemplative mood among them. A t such a time, wrap your arms around the trunk of a tree and relax.
Something will enter your mind.

June 4th, 2020 03:52

Wandering in the Wood.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. Yes, I wandered into the woods to get into the shade from the heat. Hope we can do so again this year, several times!
Some trees can be as markers through the woods.

June 4th, 2020 01:46

The Two Ladies.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Uncle Andy ~ Busy Day lots of people popping round to se Smokey and enjoy an ice cold San Miguel ~ still warm in Essex. Thanks for showcasing Joe Pass impeccable Jazz Guitar I have 45 more years to learn to play like Him. He has a touch of the classicals ~ great right hand ! Love the Poem ~ Joyce & Calliope ~ Two very elegant & beautiful Ladies to inspire your heart and head to share eclectic Music and Poetry with us every day ~ Amen !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian - Angela & Smokey !

June 3rd, 2020 17:24



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