Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The Day After the Night Before.
Nicholas Browning said:
\"Then the odd word passed between us\". Yeah, it\'s pretty crazy to see just how small a chance can be for you to take it. Don\'t know until you leap, and hey, you leapt. I like the tone of the poem. At first it\'s a little melancholy, but then it shifts. Quite good.
December 13th, 2018 15:14
Nicholas Browning said:
\"Then the odd word passed between us\". Yeah, it\'s pretty crazy to see just how small a chance can be for you to take it. Don\'t know until you leap, and hey, you leapt. I like the tone of the poem. At first it\'s a little melancholy, but then it shifts. Quite good.
December 13th, 2018 15:14
The Day After the Night Before.
Netashi said:
Ah yes life does through us into a loop and shows us beautiful things. Sounds like you had a swell night I\'m glad to here. Written very well keep up the good work.
-Theta
PS: The day after the night before my brain hurt now since you threw me for a loop....wait that means today or \"tomorrow\"
December 13th, 2018 13:09
Netashi said:
Ah yes life does through us into a loop and shows us beautiful things. Sounds like you had a swell night I\'m glad to here. Written very well keep up the good work.
-Theta
PS: The day after the night before my brain hurt now since you threw me for a loop....wait that means today or \"tomorrow\"
December 13th, 2018 13:09
The Day After the Night Before.
Michael Edwards said:
One of those poems which you just have to read again - and it gets even better - it really carried me along - super write Andy.
December 13th, 2018 11:47
Michael Edwards said:
One of those poems which you just have to read again - and it gets even better - it really carried me along - super write Andy.
December 13th, 2018 11:47
The Day After the Night Before.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I though ya was gonna get tangled up with that elusive \'tomorrow\' that never comes. When it gets here, it\'s \'today\'. doh!
December 13th, 2018 02:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I though ya was gonna get tangled up with that elusive \'tomorrow\' that never comes. When it gets here, it\'s \'today\'. doh!
December 13th, 2018 02:48
Love Hate.
Netashi said:
When people start loving power and start using the power of love then there will be true peace. But for now \"peace\" is just us waiting for something bad to happen. Overall the poem is beautifully written, god job keep up the good work.
-Theta
December 12th, 2018 16:46
Netashi said:
When people start loving power and start using the power of love then there will be true peace. But for now \"peace\" is just us waiting for something bad to happen. Overall the poem is beautifully written, god job keep up the good work.
-Theta
December 12th, 2018 16:46
Love Hate.
dusk arising said:
Love conquers all... but (there\'s always that flipping \'but\' isn\'t there) only for those who are able to feel love.
Love and hate are two close sentiments and i fear many are polarised with hate.
It is difficult to hate anything/anyone once you have learned through love. I fear that it is more difficult to love anything/anyone once one is polarised with hate.
December 12th, 2018 11:37
dusk arising said:
Love conquers all... but (there\'s always that flipping \'but\' isn\'t there) only for those who are able to feel love.
Love and hate are two close sentiments and i fear many are polarised with hate.
It is difficult to hate anything/anyone once you have learned through love. I fear that it is more difficult to love anything/anyone once one is polarised with hate.
December 12th, 2018 11:37
Love Hate.
Neville said:
nicely penned, but sadly, the Beatles as good as they are did not get it all right...
December 12th, 2018 07:00
Neville said:
nicely penned, but sadly, the Beatles as good as they are did not get it all right...
December 12th, 2018 07:00
Love Hate.
Michael Edwards said:
Love is the glue of life (sounds like an idea for another poem) - fine writs Andy.
December 12th, 2018 04:30
Michael Edwards said:
Love is the glue of life (sounds like an idea for another poem) - fine writs Andy.
December 12th, 2018 04:30
Love Hate.
orchidee said:
A fine and true write Gold. A bit like natural days? Almost 16 hours of darkness per day now, and 8 hours of light. Then changing to vice versa, as the year goes on. Super clip too!
December 12th, 2018 03:17
orchidee said:
A fine and true write Gold. A bit like natural days? Almost 16 hours of darkness per day now, and 8 hours of light. Then changing to vice versa, as the year goes on. Super clip too!
December 12th, 2018 03:17
Their Lips Move.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for post UNCLE ANDY !
Patsy Cline ~ Perfect Country Singer
Dead @ 33 in a Plane crash ~ TRAGEDY
CRAZY is a CLASSIC ~ AMEN
Please dont underestimate SAINT THERESA !
Astute politician ~ Oxford Graduate (GEOGRAPHY)
Calm negotiator ~ carried the BREXIT CAN for David
Shrewd PM ~ Why suffer defeat at hands of FOOLS ?
She has gone back to the EU to broker a better deal
And she will ! She is a Daughter of the Vicarage and
She will OVERCOME ~ SOME DAY ~ AMEN
Blessings & Love to you BOTH ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check \"I LOVE YOU BECAUSE ......... \"
And also our FUSION ~ Thanks B & A !
December 11th, 2018 10:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for post UNCLE ANDY !
Patsy Cline ~ Perfect Country Singer
Dead @ 33 in a Plane crash ~ TRAGEDY
CRAZY is a CLASSIC ~ AMEN
Please dont underestimate SAINT THERESA !
Astute politician ~ Oxford Graduate (GEOGRAPHY)
Calm negotiator ~ carried the BREXIT CAN for David
Shrewd PM ~ Why suffer defeat at hands of FOOLS ?
She has gone back to the EU to broker a better deal
And she will ! She is a Daughter of the Vicarage and
She will OVERCOME ~ SOME DAY ~ AMEN
Blessings & Love to you BOTH ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check \"I LOVE YOU BECAUSE ......... \"
And also our FUSION ~ Thanks B & A !
December 11th, 2018 10:34
Their Lips Move.
Lorna said:
That Brexit is certainly a mess isn\'t it Andy. I don\'t understand why it is so complicated to unravel (or if it is the best thing) - but I think our hideous excuse for a president still tops Brexit for A number one end of the world disasters......... I feel I have to be constantly apologizing for this country. It\'s so embarrassing.
December 11th, 2018 07:31
Lorna said:
That Brexit is certainly a mess isn\'t it Andy. I don\'t understand why it is so complicated to unravel (or if it is the best thing) - but I think our hideous excuse for a president still tops Brexit for A number one end of the world disasters......... I feel I have to be constantly apologizing for this country. It\'s so embarrassing.
December 11th, 2018 07:31
Their Lips Move.
Neville said:
The concluding line is a universal truth and a universal shame.. N
December 11th, 2018 07:23
Neville said:
The concluding line is a universal truth and a universal shame.. N
December 11th, 2018 07:23
Their Lips Move.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Spot on with your write!
I don’t mean to speak ill of the dead, but ...
“Watch my lips...”
We did...and our taxes were raised!
No matter what country I am in, the same outcry! It seems we’re at their mercy!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2018 04:37
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Spot on with your write!
I don’t mean to speak ill of the dead, but ...
“Watch my lips...”
We did...and our taxes were raised!
No matter what country I am in, the same outcry! It seems we’re at their mercy!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2018 04:37
Their Lips Move.
Michael Edwards said:
Another betrayal - I\'ll write something from the leavers perspective - after all they aren\'t represented in Parliament except for a couple of clowns - Johnson and Rees Mog . Will post tomorrow.
December 11th, 2018 03:52
Michael Edwards said:
Another betrayal - I\'ll write something from the leavers perspective - after all they aren\'t represented in Parliament except for a couple of clowns - Johnson and Rees Mog . Will post tomorrow.
December 11th, 2018 03:52
Their Lips Move.
orchidee said:
Ahh, I must meet her and her hubby at coffee-time at church. They often go to one about 2 miles from my home - the current PM and her hubby. We could hob-nob!
December 11th, 2018 03:23
orchidee said:
Ahh, I must meet her and her hubby at coffee-time at church. They often go to one about 2 miles from my home - the current PM and her hubby. We could hob-nob!
December 11th, 2018 03:23
Together in Paradise.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE ANDY : ANGELA HERE ! I love Jazz & Chet but also \"The Sound of Silence\"
Please pray for AUCKLAND the whole CITY is reeling from the shock of the Murder of such a lovely Girl as GRACE in Paradise. Wicked MEN in a Wicked WORLD ! THANKS FOR CARING & SHARING. Loved the POEM : Love & Blessings to you BOTH :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡 Please check our New Fusion : \"WHAT DO YOU WANT FOR CHRISTMAS ?\" Thanks A & B !
December 10th, 2018 14:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE ANDY : ANGELA HERE ! I love Jazz & Chet but also \"The Sound of Silence\"
Please pray for AUCKLAND the whole CITY is reeling from the shock of the Murder of such a lovely Girl as GRACE in Paradise. Wicked MEN in a Wicked WORLD ! THANKS FOR CARING & SHARING. Loved the POEM : Love & Blessings to you BOTH :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡 Please check our New Fusion : \"WHAT DO YOU WANT FOR CHRISTMAS ?\" Thanks A & B !
December 10th, 2018 14:47
Together in Paradise.
dusk arising said:
There they were together in paradise, the only discernable sounds were their digestive systems.
Suddenly a greasy baking tray slipped off the draining board and crashed to the floor.
The moment was lost.
December 10th, 2018 09:29
dusk arising said:
There they were together in paradise, the only discernable sounds were their digestive systems.
Suddenly a greasy baking tray slipped off the draining board and crashed to the floor.
The moment was lost.
December 10th, 2018 09:29
Integrity in Life.
Lorna said:
My mother always was and always will be watching...... couldn\'t ever get away with anything and now she is firmly ensconced in heaven and every day winds the conscience clocks she gave her children........
December 10th, 2018 06:27
Lorna said:
My mother always was and always will be watching...... couldn\'t ever get away with anything and now she is firmly ensconced in heaven and every day winds the conscience clocks she gave her children........
December 10th, 2018 06:27
Autumn Acrostic.
Lorna said:
The absolute best time of year Andy! Beautiful colors and the weeds stop growing! As for the pianist it\'s absolutely terrifying to think of the accuracy needed to do this..... I typed for years and couldn\'t get through a day without at least one error! Such confidence - if he had to think how he does this he couldn\'t!
December 10th, 2018 06:15
Lorna said:
The absolute best time of year Andy! Beautiful colors and the weeds stop growing! As for the pianist it\'s absolutely terrifying to think of the accuracy needed to do this..... I typed for years and couldn\'t get through a day without at least one error! Such confidence - if he had to think how he does this he couldn\'t!
December 10th, 2018 06:15
Together in Paradise.
Lorna said:
Ahhhhhhh heaven Andy............ such peace.
December 10th, 2018 05:57
Lorna said:
Ahhhhhhh heaven Andy............ such peace.
December 10th, 2018 05:57
Together in Paradise.
Michael Edwards said:
Those private personal moments together are the best.
December 10th, 2018 04:37
Michael Edwards said:
Those private personal moments together are the best.
December 10th, 2018 04:37
Together in Paradise.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. I reckon I see glimpses of heaven at times. I saw a dog rolling over in the park. Maybe it had an itch, or waiting for a tummy-tickle. I won\'t roll over in the park cos I will swoon! lol.
December 10th, 2018 02:47
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. I reckon I see glimpses of heaven at times. I saw a dog rolling over in the park. Maybe it had an itch, or waiting for a tummy-tickle. I won\'t roll over in the park cos I will swoon! lol.
December 10th, 2018 02:47
Autumn Acrostic.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I played a clip. It was silent. It was that 4 mins 33 seconds jobby. Best piece of music ever? lol.
December 9th, 2018 08:11
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I played a clip. It was silent. It was that 4 mins 33 seconds jobby. Best piece of music ever? lol.
December 9th, 2018 08:11
Autumn Acrostic.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ In sheltered spots the TREES still retain their Autumnal Hue ~ The ESSEX Weather is still more A than W ! However many of the Christmas Cards I\'m putting up for my Mum & Dad show the Deep Midwinter ~ even in Bethlehem (which it wasn\'t !) The theme this year seems to be LET IT SNOW ~ LET IT SNOW ~ LET IT SNOW ~ Rossetti & Holtz have a lot to answer for ! Loved the video ~ very enjoyable & instructive. Please check our POEM TODAY ~ CHRIST - MASS TIME ! Every Blessing BRIAN & ANGELA ~ Love to You & Joyce 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 9th, 2018 08:08
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ In sheltered spots the TREES still retain their Autumnal Hue ~ The ESSEX Weather is still more A than W ! However many of the Christmas Cards I\'m putting up for my Mum & Dad show the Deep Midwinter ~ even in Bethlehem (which it wasn\'t !) The theme this year seems to be LET IT SNOW ~ LET IT SNOW ~ LET IT SNOW ~ Rossetti & Holtz have a lot to answer for ! Loved the video ~ very enjoyable & instructive. Please check our POEM TODAY ~ CHRIST - MASS TIME ! Every Blessing BRIAN & ANGELA ~ Love to You & Joyce 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 9th, 2018 08:08
Autumn Acrostic.
Michael Edwards said:
A spot on write Andy - tis indeed a great season.
December 9th, 2018 04:06
Michael Edwards said:
A spot on write Andy - tis indeed a great season.
December 9th, 2018 04:06
Autumn Acrostic.
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely first read of my day - thank you or such an honest tribute to the wonderful season of autumn.
December 9th, 2018 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely first read of my day - thank you or such an honest tribute to the wonderful season of autumn.
December 9th, 2018 04:02
Artwork or Photography
Neville said:
an interesting series of observations that will no doubt give rise to many subsequent questions and opinions.. I have one but am gonna keep it to myself.. nice poem tho
December 9th, 2018 03:13
Neville said:
an interesting series of observations that will no doubt give rise to many subsequent questions and opinions.. I have one but am gonna keep it to myself.. nice poem tho
December 9th, 2018 03:13
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