Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Lost in Words.
Brycycle said:
Nice write, I kind of relate to you in the way that I sometimes start a poem then immediately get lost and don’t know what to write.
September 15th, 2018 02:53
Brycycle said:
Nice write, I kind of relate to you in the way that I sometimes start a poem then immediately get lost and don’t know what to write.
September 15th, 2018 02:53
Lost in Words.
orchidee said:
A fine write and clip Gold. Your first word here was \'The...\' That has endless possibilities as to what may come next.
What is tricky is people who get annoyed at sentences starting with \'And\'. And another thing.... lol.
September 15th, 2018 01:47
orchidee said:
A fine write and clip Gold. Your first word here was \'The...\' That has endless possibilities as to what may come next.
What is tricky is people who get annoyed at sentences starting with \'And\'. And another thing.... lol.
September 15th, 2018 01:47
Time Giver.
Michael Edwards said:
We all \'have\' but not everyone makes the best use of it or appreciates it.
September 14th, 2018 03:22
Michael Edwards said:
We all \'have\' but not everyone makes the best use of it or appreciates it.
September 14th, 2018 03:22
Time Giver.
onepauly said:
this poem itself is as precious
as the one who wrote it.
a fine piece of work.
September 14th, 2018 03:13
onepauly said:
this poem itself is as precious
as the one who wrote it.
a fine piece of work.
September 14th, 2018 03:13
Time Giver.
dusk arising said:
I like your work, you know i do but i\'m going to have a go at you on this one.
I disagree so much with the content. I began to write a detailed explanation but .....
Not everyone is a money grabbing, so and so desirous of having power etc. You claim to want for none of those things because plainly you already achieved them - by your own hard effort and intelligence nodoubt
The third verse though is pure Goldfinch... brilliant as per.
Rant over.
September 14th, 2018 02:18
dusk arising said:
I like your work, you know i do but i\'m going to have a go at you on this one.
I disagree so much with the content. I began to write a detailed explanation but .....
Not everyone is a money grabbing, so and so desirous of having power etc. You claim to want for none of those things because plainly you already achieved them - by your own hard effort and intelligence nodoubt
The third verse though is pure Goldfinch... brilliant as per.
Rant over.
September 14th, 2018 02:18
Time Giver.
orchidee said:
A lovely write and clip Gold. Aww, but why does no-one spend time hearing me sing?! heehee.
You got time to prep for that birthday, and for 1066?
September 14th, 2018 02:05
orchidee said:
A lovely write and clip Gold. Aww, but why does no-one spend time hearing me sing?! heehee.
You got time to prep for that birthday, and for 1066?
September 14th, 2018 02:05
Natures Power - Senryu.
dusk arising said:
unusualy short piece from you. wonderful zesty music and virtuoso playing
September 13th, 2018 20:29
dusk arising said:
unusualy short piece from you. wonderful zesty music and virtuoso playing
September 13th, 2018 20:29
Natures Power - Senryu.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE ANDY ~ Great violin ~ great group ~ a jazzed up violin is always EVOCATIVE ~ O to be SEVEN - TY ! Love the SENRYU ~ Space is so vast ~ we can travel for ever in CYBER SPACE. As far as REAL~SPACE is concerned ~ I\'m 35 & Angela is 30 And between us we have covered less than 1% as far as REAL~TIME is concerned it FUGIT ~ Blessings BRIAN 😎 Love to JOYCE ~ ANGELA 🧡
September 13th, 2018 10:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE ANDY ~ Great violin ~ great group ~ a jazzed up violin is always EVOCATIVE ~ O to be SEVEN - TY ! Love the SENRYU ~ Space is so vast ~ we can travel for ever in CYBER SPACE. As far as REAL~SPACE is concerned ~ I\'m 35 & Angela is 30 And between us we have covered less than 1% as far as REAL~TIME is concerned it FUGIT ~ Blessings BRIAN 😎 Love to JOYCE ~ ANGELA 🧡
September 13th, 2018 10:39
Natures Power - Senryu.
Fay Slimm. said:
Great music and the famous violinist is wonderful.
September 13th, 2018 04:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Great music and the famous violinist is wonderful.
September 13th, 2018 04:46
Natures Power - Senryu.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Aww, but why do I shatter the peace by coming along and singing?! heehee.
How\'s the 1066 prep going? Some of my relatives are actually going there that weekend. I said they can\'t get in the reunion unless they were there in1066. They gave a me a look, to say \'you\'re barmy!\'
September 13th, 2018 02:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Aww, but why do I shatter the peace by coming along and singing?! heehee.
How\'s the 1066 prep going? Some of my relatives are actually going there that weekend. I said they can\'t get in the reunion unless they were there in1066. They gave a me a look, to say \'you\'re barmy!\'
September 13th, 2018 02:00
Doctor Who.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ I love SF and DR WHO with its concept of SPACE / TIME travel and reincarnations of XY Doctors ~ now to be XX ~ give it an infinite existence ~ AMEN ! The tune is iconic and every time I hear it I look over my shoulder for DALEKS ~ creation of a genius and now they can climb stairs ~ I\'m no longer safe in BED in my Penthouse Flat ! It was 20 years old when I was born (1983) but I have seen every episode. I look forward to a Female DOCTOR ~ who will no doubt benefit from being able to think laterally and multitask ~ AMEN.
Good Time Lord a Lady ~
THE DOCTOR !
WITCH DOCTOR ?
No Silly ~ DOCTOR WHO !
Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN 😎
Love to JOYCE ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 12th, 2018 16:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ I love SF and DR WHO with its concept of SPACE / TIME travel and reincarnations of XY Doctors ~ now to be XX ~ give it an infinite existence ~ AMEN ! The tune is iconic and every time I hear it I look over my shoulder for DALEKS ~ creation of a genius and now they can climb stairs ~ I\'m no longer safe in BED in my Penthouse Flat ! It was 20 years old when I was born (1983) but I have seen every episode. I look forward to a Female DOCTOR ~ who will no doubt benefit from being able to think laterally and multitask ~ AMEN.
Good Time Lord a Lady ~
THE DOCTOR !
WITCH DOCTOR ?
No Silly ~ DOCTOR WHO !
Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN 😎
Love to JOYCE ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 12th, 2018 16:38
Doctor Who.
Fay Slimm. said:
A woman Doctor Who - - that will be interesting - - - thanks for this clever introduction to the event Gold - really enjoyed the read.
September 12th, 2018 08:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A woman Doctor Who - - that will be interesting - - - thanks for this clever introduction to the event Gold - really enjoyed the read.
September 12th, 2018 08:47
Doctor Who.
Michael Edwards said:
I have just had a hernia diagnosed by a very young lady doctor - an intimate examination which took me back many years - I felt like a time lord.
September 12th, 2018 03:06
Michael Edwards said:
I have just had a hernia diagnosed by a very young lady doctor - an intimate examination which took me back many years - I felt like a time lord.
September 12th, 2018 03:06
Doctor Who.
orchidee said:
Similar joke to a \'Carry On\' film, with \'witch doctor\' and \'which doctor\'! lol.
September 12th, 2018 02:07
orchidee said:
Similar joke to a \'Carry On\' film, with \'witch doctor\' and \'which doctor\'! lol.
September 12th, 2018 02:07
Doctor Who.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Then will the next one be transgender or something? How can one person be labelled \'they\'?
It\'s confusing to me. In not-so-olden-days we were either one or the other - he or she.
September 12th, 2018 02:06
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Then will the next one be transgender or something? How can one person be labelled \'they\'?
It\'s confusing to me. In not-so-olden-days we were either one or the other - he or she.
September 12th, 2018 02:06
Doctor Who.
dusk arising said:
That\'s you that is! (a la Skinner and Baddeil). The time lord of MPS. The doctor. Sonic screwdriver in pocket you deliver timeless solutions to everyday experiences which bug us all.
September 12th, 2018 02:01
dusk arising said:
That\'s you that is! (a la Skinner and Baddeil). The time lord of MPS. The doctor. Sonic screwdriver in pocket you deliver timeless solutions to everyday experiences which bug us all.
September 12th, 2018 02:01
Our Love Shows.
MaggieF said:
What an example to set. Too many people today fixate on the negative. I\'m sure your life isn\'t perfect but you and your wife obviously share a great love... As Pa Larkin would say \'Perfect!!Maggie
September 11th, 2018 12:48
MaggieF said:
What an example to set. Too many people today fixate on the negative. I\'m sure your life isn\'t perfect but you and your wife obviously share a great love... As Pa Larkin would say \'Perfect!!Maggie
September 11th, 2018 12:48
Our Love Shows.
Nicholas Browning said:
Love is hard to find these days. Bottom of the barrel dragging mooks in the mud I tell you. It must make you feel nice when your love for someone can affect someone else in a positive way. I shall remember this. Good work sir, both in life and in your travels to the shop.
September 11th, 2018 06:13
Nicholas Browning said:
Love is hard to find these days. Bottom of the barrel dragging mooks in the mud I tell you. It must make you feel nice when your love for someone can affect someone else in a positive way. I shall remember this. Good work sir, both in life and in your travels to the shop.
September 11th, 2018 06:13
Our Love Shows.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ Nat King Cole ~ The smoothest of the Ballad Singers of the mid 20th Century and there are many contenders. NKC always sang from his HEART and always directly to YOU. When I give talks to Pensioners on the UNFORGETTABLE Nat & Natalie the Ladies are openly in tears and the Blokes trying hard to hold them back !
A Fire gives no heat unless it glows
Love is not Love unless it shows !
Thanks ANDY & JOYCE for sharing your love and the impact it has on those who come into your loving orbit ~ AMEN
Blessings & Love to Joyce from BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 😉😉
Please check my 9/11 Lament ~ Thanks B
September 11th, 2018 04:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ Nat King Cole ~ The smoothest of the Ballad Singers of the mid 20th Century and there are many contenders. NKC always sang from his HEART and always directly to YOU. When I give talks to Pensioners on the UNFORGETTABLE Nat & Natalie the Ladies are openly in tears and the Blokes trying hard to hold them back !
A Fire gives no heat unless it glows
Love is not Love unless it shows !
Thanks ANDY & JOYCE for sharing your love and the impact it has on those who come into your loving orbit ~ AMEN
Blessings & Love to Joyce from BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 😉😉
Please check my 9/11 Lament ~ Thanks B
September 11th, 2018 04:24
Our Love Shows.
dusk arising said:
Obviously a better class of serving wench round your way Mr G. Hereabouts your lucky (or maybe not) if they make eye contact.
September 11th, 2018 03:50
dusk arising said:
Obviously a better class of serving wench round your way Mr G. Hereabouts your lucky (or maybe not) if they make eye contact.
September 11th, 2018 03:50
Our Love Shows.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
That young lady in the coffee bar is lucky enough to actually see the love you and your wife have for each other! I can “see” it throughout any of your writings that I read where you reference Joyce! God Bless you both!
All my love to Joyce and you!
~Laura~
P.S. - You chose the perfect song to complement your write!
September 11th, 2018 01:55
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
That young lady in the coffee bar is lucky enough to actually see the love you and your wife have for each other! I can “see” it throughout any of your writings that I read where you reference Joyce! God Bless you both!
All my love to Joyce and you!
~Laura~
P.S. - You chose the perfect song to complement your write!
September 11th, 2018 01:55
Our Love Shows.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. But- huh! Some places you\'re lucky to get a grunt, let alone a please or thank-you when paying for goods!
September 11th, 2018 01:40
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. But- huh! Some places you\'re lucky to get a grunt, let alone a please or thank-you when paying for goods!
September 11th, 2018 01:40
The Idiot Walks.
fuche_bu said:
I do want to see you wearing socks with the sandals. Otherwise, nice poem.
September 10th, 2018 19:48
fuche_bu said:
I do want to see you wearing socks with the sandals. Otherwise, nice poem.
September 10th, 2018 19:48
The Idiot Walks.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ Love SCARAMOUCHE and he Saxophone ~ brilliant combo ~ AMEN To dress or not to dress ~ that is the Season. I am a bit like you ~ Im not (like some Ladies) Season coded clotheswise. I like cool clothing (not too heavy) so it does rather depend on the \"Temps du Jour\" rather than the Season.
ANGELA is a bit confused by the NZ Weather ! The first three Months June July August have been WINTER ~ but most days it has reached 15F (60C) and the clothes she took are much too work ~ Its now coming into SPRING September October November and it will get even warmer ! It is the sub~tropics ! For retired people there is NO DRESS CODE. I work indoors (except for Field Courses) so it is Centrally Heated in Winter so my work gear is cool casual ~ except for Meetings & Interviews etc when it is FORMAL. Because it is a 16+ College there is no dress code for Students ! Yours BRIAN
September 10th, 2018 16:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ Love SCARAMOUCHE and he Saxophone ~ brilliant combo ~ AMEN To dress or not to dress ~ that is the Season. I am a bit like you ~ Im not (like some Ladies) Season coded clotheswise. I like cool clothing (not too heavy) so it does rather depend on the \"Temps du Jour\" rather than the Season.
ANGELA is a bit confused by the NZ Weather ! The first three Months June July August have been WINTER ~ but most days it has reached 15F (60C) and the clothes she took are much too work ~ Its now coming into SPRING September October November and it will get even warmer ! It is the sub~tropics ! For retired people there is NO DRESS CODE. I work indoors (except for Field Courses) so it is Centrally Heated in Winter so my work gear is cool casual ~ except for Meetings & Interviews etc when it is FORMAL. Because it is a 16+ College there is no dress code for Students ! Yours BRIAN
September 10th, 2018 16:03
The Idiot Walks.
ZIGGY said:
hi there nice to read your words again so you don\'t feel the cold lol you should try an Irish winter,,,,zigs
September 10th, 2018 14:06
ZIGGY said:
hi there nice to read your words again so you don\'t feel the cold lol you should try an Irish winter,,,,zigs
September 10th, 2018 14:06
The Idiot Walks.
dusk arising said:
I\'m so pleased you are not a naturist. Those people, I wonder if they\'re aware of people staring at them. I couldn\'t do that. Innocently i took my young family onto Studland beach once... quite an eye opener!
I\'m with you, dress for today\'s weather. I always have a lightweight pack-away cagoule in the car in case of threatening skies.
September 10th, 2018 13:39
dusk arising said:
I\'m so pleased you are not a naturist. Those people, I wonder if they\'re aware of people staring at them. I couldn\'t do that. Innocently i took my young family onto Studland beach once... quite an eye opener!
I\'m with you, dress for today\'s weather. I always have a lightweight pack-away cagoule in the car in case of threatening skies.
September 10th, 2018 13:39
The Idiot Walks.
MaggieF said:
Different strokes for different folks. Great that you are comfortable in your own skin, especially without socks! Enjoyed. Maggie
September 10th, 2018 02:22
MaggieF said:
Different strokes for different folks. Great that you are comfortable in your own skin, especially without socks! Enjoyed. Maggie
September 10th, 2018 02:22
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