Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Miserable Man.
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,
That man should listen to some John Miller music as I just did...thanks to you!
Maybe that will make him smile like John Payne and Sonja Henie in the clip! He might even get the urge to dance!
Oh well, to each his own I guess!

Have a wonderful day.
Love to Joyce and you.

~Laura~

August 27th, 2018 02:26

Machined Lives.
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,

The last two lines make a whole lot of sense. Sometimes I do think that these darn machines are doing their best to rule us. And whoā€™s responsible for that? Not the machines...
Humans are!
I enjoyed the clip!
Thank you for sharing.

Love to Joyce and you!

~Laura~

August 27th, 2018 02:13

Machined Lives.
orchidee said:

A fine and true write Gold. We\'re dashing to the moon and beyond, literally. We\'ve already reached the moon. We\'ll meet ourselves coming back before long.
Some don\'t stop at accidents even. Some may not know what to do (First Aid), but some carry on as if nothing happened, and someone is laying in the road, for example.


August 27th, 2018 01:35

Miserable Man.
onepauly said:

also, I liked the music video, it made me feel safe.

August 26th, 2018 22:08

Miserable Man.
onepauly said:

some days that\'s all it is.

August 26th, 2018 22:04

Miserable Man.
poetboy123 said:

I love this song! World War 2 was a topic for a competition I participated in and one of the fields studied was music, since then I\'ve always listened to more jazz from the 40s like this!

August 26th, 2018 16:20

Miserable Man.
dusk arising said:

Great observational piece. Begs the question - where are these people mentally? Most of us have a \'social front\' we present to the world and we rarely let it down unless we are upset or in a period of depression. So it is difficult to relate to such people.
A similar thing which raises a smile within me is the collection of oblivious strollers we meet who wear an obscure grimace as they pound along the pavements. I\'m chuckling now, i\'m sure some of the are quite frightening to little old ladies.

August 26th, 2018 11:15

Miserable Man.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS UNCLE ANDY: As a physiotherapist I have learned that : the expression on a persons Face is a reflection of the mood of their Mind & Spirit. At least I am allowed to tickle them and make them smile! We see a lot more smiles in NZ than the UK and we know why. The MAORI are always smiling! Brian & I both love GLEN and In the MOOD is a classic. Brian gives a lovely talk and CD presentation on the Life & Music of GLEN MILLER! Have a great DAY : Smiling is infectious : love to JOYCE : Love ANGELA XXXX

August 26th, 2018 04:02

Miserable Man.
Michael Edwards said:

Sounds familiar - but who knows what is going on in their lives - thankfully there are many who smile and look happy

August 26th, 2018 02:06

Miserable Man.
orchidee said:

A true write unfortunately. Some may have reasons to be gloomy, I suppose. But some just grunt, without so much as a \'please\' or \'thank you\'.


August 26th, 2018 01:21

Speak to One Another
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,

I enjoyed ā€œStranger On The Shoreā€.
Very soothing and peaceful.
Itā€™s a great piece to begin my day with.

I like the idea of ā€œCafe Churchā€. Speak to one another...thatā€™s the key!

Have a wonderful day.
Love to Joyce and you!

~Laura~


August 25th, 2018 09:13

Speak to One Another
fuche_bu said:

nice poem. It\'s good to remember that there is poetry in the bible.

August 25th, 2018 06:46

Words,,
Poetic Dan said:

A mastery of self expression
They carry pure illumination
Way more than an inspiration
A reflection of all creation
Showing just to be here now
It\'s our only real mission

Thanks for always sharing

August 25th, 2018 05:08

Speak to One Another
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS ANDY ~ Love this low register rendering from AKA ~ awesome. My DAD said it took the Hit Parade by storm ~ a JAZZ / CLASSIC. I have this CD in my car and when this track comes on I always cry because I think of My Sweet Angela waiting for me on Auckland\'s Shore (Please check my POEM today ~ I could have used this tune instead of Now is the Hour ~ which always makes me cry !). I am Young enough to appreciate (and even understand !) the different ways of DOING CHURCH in the 21st C ~ I am so glad you embrace it (Scientists have inventive minds) and that the Event even move your MUSE ~ AMEN. Love your Poem and have printed it to recite in Church. Giod new that the 21st C would see a flood of \"SPIRITUAL SONGS\" and you Poem embraces them just as important as PSALM & HYMNS (A & M). Your title reminded me that ~ How often I have stood at the graveside (we tend to bury not cremate) of one who has been \"called home to glory\" and wished in my Heart that I had spoken to them more often. Especially those who became housebound and longed for a conversation ! We have been lifted up twice already ~ by Steve & now by your Good-self ! Love to JOYCE ~ Blessings BRIAN & ANGELA ~ Still in BAY OF ISLANDS NZ !

August 25th, 2018 03:51

Speak to One Another
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Gold. I best polish up another hymn-poem then. Though, alas, they\'re unlikely to be used in more \'modern\' places. They don\'t know what hymn books ARE!
But then again, traditional places don\'t use \'jazzed up\' stuff.

August 25th, 2018 01:22

Running Late.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FOR SHARING ANDY ! Love the HORN and love WYNTON ~ fast & smooth ! When I\'ve a big project on my plate I often wish (and there are a few like that) who didn\'t have to sleep at all. So I go to bed late (after midnight) and I\'m always up before 7. being single helps ! The odd night i am with ANGELA is OK because she is asleep almost as soon as she\'s in BED and she likes to be up before 7am. I can\'t read or work in bed ~ Angela loves to read in bed but soon falls asleep ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing BRIAN.

August 24th, 2018 16:59

Running Late.
Netashi said:

Nice poem reminds me of the rabbit in Alice in wonderland. Keep it up
-Theta

August 24th, 2018 12:40

Running Late.
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,

I agree with dusk.
Why are we in a hurry?!
I really donā€™t miss those days when I had to ā€œclock inā€ at the same time five days a week! That was stressful!

Have a wonderful day!

Love to Joyce and you.

~Laura~


August 24th, 2018 06:48

Running Late.
dusk arising said:

Tomorrow is another day. Allow yourself a few extra hours snooze now and again.

August 24th, 2018 05:16

Running Late.
orchidee said:

You lost a moment in time - a few moments? Or shall we waste time with naff phrases, such as \'At this moment in time?!\' lol.

August 24th, 2018 03:40

Running Late.
Michael Edwards said:

By the way I\'m not the greatest fan of the trumpet but WM can do no wrong

August 24th, 2018 02:02

Running Late.
Michael Edwards said:

I feel the same - my most productive hours are from 5am onwards - but don\'t try to contact me after lunch - I\'m usually back in the Land of Nod.

August 24th, 2018 02:01

Running Late.
orchidee said:

You getting up late there?! A fine write Gold.

August 24th, 2018 01:51

Opportunity.
Fay Slimm. said:

Sound and wise advice here Goldi - - and that video blows me away too - thanks for sharing it.

August 23rd, 2018 16:09

Opportunity.
dusk arising said:

Sound advice indeed. Seeing/creating the door is major, stepping thru it quite another thing... and no looking back!

August 23rd, 2018 16:04

Opportunity.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

kick it down and move forward

August 23rd, 2018 14:51

Opportunity.
sylviasearcher said:

Or look for the gate hiding at the bottom of the secret garden?

August 23rd, 2018 08:13

Opportunity.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Good Morning Uncle ANDY: ANGELA here from Bay of Islands NZ. The first time I heard SWINGLE I was blown away too. Love the video an aural & visual delight : another musical dimension! AMEN for the common sensity in your Poem. I seized the opportunity to come to NZ and BRIAN (Bless his heart) built a DOOR in the WALL of DOUBT and UNCERTAINTY for me. I have repaid HIM by learning to dance the MAORI POI ! (see my Poem). Love & Blessings to Yourself & Joyce : ANGELA XXXX

August 23rd, 2018 05:53

Opportunity.
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,

A great poem! I do believe in the adage WHERE THEREā€™S A WILL, THEREā€™S A WAY! We just have to patient and find it.

That was a great video. Very entertaining!

Love to Joyce and you.

~Laura~

August 23rd, 2018 04:28

Opportunity.
Michael Edwards said:

Love the write and now will listen to the SS\'s.

August 23rd, 2018 04:08



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