Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Perception.
malubotelho said:

This is great writing Goldie. It made me think even more about that question. Am I being myself? The beginning is to find our true self, what is not easy either.

October 10th, 2017 08:10

Perception.
WL Schuett said:

A fine perceptive poem , lots of truth here . Well done

October 10th, 2017 07:46

Perception.
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant!

October 10th, 2017 02:35

Perception.
FredPeyer said:

Goldfinch, you may have been inspired by Mugsdaddy, but you wrote something all your own. Something beautiful and true, your own self. Sometimes we worry too much about how other people see us and end up slipping into a role, playing the person we think they want to see. And that person may not be us.

October 10th, 2017 02:11

Perception.
orchidee said:

I\'m perceiving that this is a good write Gold!

October 10th, 2017 01:53

God\'s Sense of Humour.
dusk arising said:

Yep, his sense of humour is wicked! Once you learn to accept what he/she/it is showing you. Wish i\'d seen it a long time ago. I hope your piece encourages some to think about it and hopefully see.

October 9th, 2017 20:12

God\'s Sense of Humour.
poetboy123 said:

Haha, nice lighthearted piece!

October 9th, 2017 17:31

God\'s Sense of Humour.
FredPeyer said:

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Goldfinch, you took a great weight off my shoulders. I can now breathe easy because I figured if He accepts you, he for sure will accept me!

October 9th, 2017 12:23

God\'s Sense of Humour.
Louis Gibbs said:

Oh, Snap! He got you with that zinger, Goldie. Love the poem, a beauty.

October 9th, 2017 09:24

God\'s Sense of Humour.
WL Schuett said:

Good fun in an intelligent poem , good writing !

October 9th, 2017 07:37

God\'s Sense of Humour.
Fay Slimm. said:

A good reminder here Goldi - fun is the gift which we often forget.

October 9th, 2017 05:24

God\'s Sense of Humour.
Accidental Poet said:

In Plymouth, Massachusetts there is astatue about 140 feet tall called \"Our Forefather\'s Monument\" of a lady holding a book in one arm, and the other hand pointing a finger up towards the sky. Whenever I see it I wonder if God has a sense of humor and envision a statement to God, \"Hey God, pull my finger\"

October 9th, 2017 05:24

God\'s Sense of Humour.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold! lol. There\'s the saying \'If God has accepted me, he will accept anyone\'!
Yet there is simplicity and profundity in human beings being accepted by God by coming to Him through Christ.


October 9th, 2017 01:59

But Still We Laugh.
w c said:

Thanks Goldfinch! It\'s an uplifting poem.

October 8th, 2017 21:31

But Still We Laugh.
malubotelho said:

Oh Goldie! This is very sweet. In my family we don\'t have dementia yet but my ex husband mother she has it has a long, long time. We laughed sometimes with her too because she got to be like a child. She laughs all the time and then sometimes she also cries for no apparent reason. She is going to be a hundred this year.

October 8th, 2017 19:19

But Still We Laugh.
ella said:

Omg, this is so beautiful

October 8th, 2017 13:00

But Still We Laugh.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sad,but you are together,and you still enjoy each other

October 8th, 2017 12:24

But Still We Laugh.
poetboy123 said:

This is a beautiful write, you have taught all of us with these experiences you write of. An inspirational piece, definitely a must read my friend.

October 8th, 2017 12:11

But Still We Laugh.
MendedFences27 said:

Gold - It\'s a tough situation you are in, but to be able to find humor anywhere in ones life is reason enough to go on living. When we laugh at ourselves we laugh loudest. To write about your situation, perhaps will help relieve some of the anxiety. Keep on laughing, keep on smiling, and keep on writing. - Phil A.

October 8th, 2017 10:25

But Still We Laugh.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. Do folk laugh at 1066 jokes too?! heehee.

October 8th, 2017 08:16

But Still We Laugh.
Accidental Poet said:

Goldie, this had me almost in tears. My adoptive mother had Alzheimer\'s Disease and anything she forgot of didn\'t bother in the least. I\'m sorry your wife has Dementia, but as you both laugh so much, isn\'t that still what life is all about? Long may both of you laugh Goldie. ; )

October 8th, 2017 06:00

But Still We Laugh.
FredPeyer said:

Goldfinch, this is such a beautiful, tender, happy/sad, but full of love poem. It made me remember the time I called my mom (I think she was 91 then) in Switzerland. She had had a massive stroke, was bed-ridden, and suffered of dementia as well. On the phone she told me that she had married again. Who did you marry, I asked. She was quiet for a moment, then broke out into laughter and giggled
\'I have no idea\'! We had a big laugh.
Your poem means a lot to me! Thank you!

October 8th, 2017 04:08

But Still We Laugh.
Michael Edwards said:

This is so uplifting in such a sad way - a joy to read Andy. On the matter of laughter my wife and I are the same but (naughtily) we find what sets us off is being able to see the double entendre in perfectly innocent comments and phrases. The other night a chef referred to hot gingers and we were convulsed - we are total gigglers even at our ages.

October 8th, 2017 02:34

Is Opera For Me?
Louis Gibbs said:

As a vocalist, I do appreciate the fine voices that present opera, but must say it is not my favorite format for hearing a good voice. Well done poem, Goldie!

October 7th, 2017 11:59

Is Opera For Me?
Accidental Poet said:

A great piece of writing here Goldie, but my heart still longs for good \'ole Rock & Roll. Is that orchi I hear in the background? ; )

October 7th, 2017 09:36

Is Opera For Me?
Fay Slimm. said:

I have to agree with Michael here - opera has ever been fighting to get nearer to my heart via plots - yet the music has its own power to delight. A great piece of work.

October 7th, 2017 08:41

Is Opera For Me?
WL Schuett said:

Enjoyed your poem but just don\'t enjoy opera, not saying some of the music isn\'t beautiful because it is ... it just doesn\'t click for me .

October 7th, 2017 08:00

Is Opera For Me?
FredPeyer said:

Goldfinch, after reading your incredible poem I want to run out and listen to an opera!
And here is the other reason:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0diDwHtATw

October 7th, 2017 04:35

Is Opera For Me?
Michael Edwards said:

I have a love hate affair with opera. Being a realist I find the find the ludicrous plots a bit of an insult to the intelligence but then I hear the wonderful music and the scales begin to weigh in favour - my favourite memory: seeing Aida in Varona in the amphitheatre, just magical - this is a super piece of poetry Andy.

October 7th, 2017 01:49

Is Opera For Me?
orchidee said:

A fine write again Gold. Is my singing for you?! heehee.

October 7th, 2017 01:48



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