Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Birds Now Fed - FIBS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY for lovely Birdsong on a sunny Spring Morning in ESSEX ! Love the Fibonacci Sequence ~ it give a poem great shape ~ love the message of the poem too ~ RSPB ! My MUM has a French Window and outside is a pond ~ birdbaths ~ bird-table with food and peanuts in cages ! I keep telling he \"God feeds the Birds\" and she say \"I\'m just giving GOD a bit of help !\" We have over 20 species including Green Woodpeckers ~ Doves and of course Seagulls being less than 10 miles for the Coast. There is a communal garden in my Block of Flats ~ with bird table and a small pond si I do see lots of birds ! Same at College we have a big pond and a wild live ecology area and allotment which is the responsibility of the Environmental Studies Section in the Science Department ! Thanks ~ BRIAN Please check my DIABLO ~ LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ B !
May 9th, 2018 03:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY for lovely Birdsong on a sunny Spring Morning in ESSEX ! Love the Fibonacci Sequence ~ it give a poem great shape ~ love the message of the poem too ~ RSPB ! My MUM has a French Window and outside is a pond ~ birdbaths ~ bird-table with food and peanuts in cages ! I keep telling he \"God feeds the Birds\" and she say \"I\'m just giving GOD a bit of help !\" We have over 20 species including Green Woodpeckers ~ Doves and of course Seagulls being less than 10 miles for the Coast. There is a communal garden in my Block of Flats ~ with bird table and a small pond si I do see lots of birds ! Same at College we have a big pond and a wild live ecology area and allotment which is the responsibility of the Environmental Studies Section in the Science Department ! Thanks ~ BRIAN Please check my DIABLO ~ LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ B !
May 9th, 2018 03:53
Birds Now Fed - FIBS
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s so satisfying feeding them - a great FIBS Andy.
May 9th, 2018 02:34
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s so satisfying feeding them - a great FIBS Andy.
May 9th, 2018 02:34
Birds Now Fed - FIBS
orchidee said:
It would mount up hugely after 13 syllables - 13, 21, 34, 55, 89, etc!
May 9th, 2018 02:14
orchidee said:
It would mount up hugely after 13 syllables - 13, 21, 34, 55, 89, etc!
May 9th, 2018 02:14
Birds Now Fed - FIBS
orchidee said:
A lovely write and clip Gold. We have pigeons (maybe a family), magpies, and big kestrels. The other birds fly off when they swoop down.
May 9th, 2018 02:12
orchidee said:
A lovely write and clip Gold. We have pigeons (maybe a family), magpies, and big kestrels. The other birds fly off when they swoop down.
May 9th, 2018 02:12
Love to Eternity.
Arianna Smith said:
Like the others said lovely and beautiful poem!
May 8th, 2018 16:00
Arianna Smith said:
Like the others said lovely and beautiful poem!
May 8th, 2018 16:00
Love to Eternity.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANDY ~ Even though I must work later (first lecture at 11am) and Yesterday was a Paradise on the Essex Coast ~ You & Steve (PSALM 5) have lifted Tuesday to new heights ~ my students will wonder what I\'m on !
Pavarotti is one of the Wolds finest Tenors and ameliorated in DUET ! A fine piece to accompany your heart warming Love Poem ~ \"Not for the years of time alone ~ but for ETERNITY\" Angela and I are more in LOVE every day ~ but her Year in NZ will be a test for both of us !
Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN ~ Please check BRAVE NEW WORLD ~ Thanks B !
May 8th, 2018 04:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANDY ~ Even though I must work later (first lecture at 11am) and Yesterday was a Paradise on the Essex Coast ~ You & Steve (PSALM 5) have lifted Tuesday to new heights ~ my students will wonder what I\'m on !
Pavarotti is one of the Wolds finest Tenors and ameliorated in DUET ! A fine piece to accompany your heart warming Love Poem ~ \"Not for the years of time alone ~ but for ETERNITY\" Angela and I are more in LOVE every day ~ but her Year in NZ will be a test for both of us !
Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN ~ Please check BRAVE NEW WORLD ~ Thanks B !
May 8th, 2018 04:10
Love to Eternity.
Lorna said:
Forever and ever and ever and ever....... she is so lucky to have you.
May 8th, 2018 04:07
Lorna said:
Forever and ever and ever and ever....... she is so lucky to have you.
May 8th, 2018 04:07
Love to Eternity.
Michael Edwards said:
Just so lovely - may your love continue for ever.
May 8th, 2018 02:12
Michael Edwards said:
Just so lovely - may your love continue for ever.
May 8th, 2018 02:12
Love to Eternity.
orchidee said:
A lovely write - with Cally\'s help?! have I met her?
May 8th, 2018 01:56
orchidee said:
A lovely write - with Cally\'s help?! have I met her?
May 8th, 2018 01:56
Garden Love.
dusk arising said:
You have the rare gift of showing us the richness of so many facets of love when you bare your soul in the written word.
I hope you collate your work so that your grandchildren are able to look back to the fineness from whence they came.
A truly moving write today.
May 7th, 2018 06:46
dusk arising said:
You have the rare gift of showing us the richness of so many facets of love when you bare your soul in the written word.
I hope you collate your work so that your grandchildren are able to look back to the fineness from whence they came.
A truly moving write today.
May 7th, 2018 06:46
Garden Love.
FineB said:
Thank you Goldfinch.
A wonderful look at love.
A lovely write
Keep writing
FineB
May 7th, 2018 06:40
FineB said:
Thank you Goldfinch.
A wonderful look at love.
A lovely write
Keep writing
FineB
May 7th, 2018 06:40
Garden Love.
Lorna said:
Lovely peaceful music for a beautiful peaceful evening......... lovely Andy.....
May 7th, 2018 05:22
Lorna said:
Lovely peaceful music for a beautiful peaceful evening......... lovely Andy.....
May 7th, 2018 05:22
Garden Love.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. Some healing, in a measure maybe, through it. But not boiling - I only lasted 10 minutes in the garden one scorching day! That\'ll be one day back in 1066 - you remember it?!
May 7th, 2018 02:51
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. Some healing, in a measure maybe, through it. But not boiling - I only lasted 10 minutes in the garden one scorching day! That\'ll be one day back in 1066 - you remember it?!
May 7th, 2018 02:51
Garden Love.
Michael Edwards said:
What a lovely sentimental write and I love the music - I can recall listening to it during a slow drive with my own dear wife through the White mountains in Southern Spain - memories.
May 7th, 2018 02:26
Michael Edwards said:
What a lovely sentimental write and I love the music - I can recall listening to it during a slow drive with my own dear wife through the White mountains in Southern Spain - memories.
May 7th, 2018 02:26
The Old Man by the River.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your poem conjures up the meaning of our existence: we were created for Love. In the Christian tradition this is most eminently shared through the “flowing waters” of the Holy Spirit, born of the Father, through Christ our Lord. Great piece - I appreciate the reflection your poem invited me to...
May 6th, 2018 21:37
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your poem conjures up the meaning of our existence: we were created for Love. In the Christian tradition this is most eminently shared through the “flowing waters” of the Holy Spirit, born of the Father, through Christ our Lord. Great piece - I appreciate the reflection your poem invited me to...
May 6th, 2018 21:37
The Old Man by the River.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
A super write! As I was reading your poem, I could sense that it was about you...the ending confirmed it! I enjoyed the video. She has a terrific voice!
I researched her and listened to the video of her performance on the day her husband died where she announced his passing to the audience after she had finished performing!
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 19:39
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
A super write! As I was reading your poem, I could sense that it was about you...the ending confirmed it! I enjoyed the video. She has a terrific voice!
I researched her and listened to the video of her performance on the day her husband died where she announced his passing to the audience after she had finished performing!
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 19:39
The Old Man by the River.
dusk arising said:
Your river, my river, all rivers. Rivers of souls perpetually inspiring, flowing timelessly but soaking up our time in this existence. Time of peace and reflection as can be read in your meaningful piece today. Why are we so drawn to bodies of water to contemplate our existence.
May 6th, 2018 10:46
dusk arising said:
Your river, my river, all rivers. Rivers of souls perpetually inspiring, flowing timelessly but soaking up our time in this existence. Time of peace and reflection as can be read in your meaningful piece today. Why are we so drawn to bodies of water to contemplate our existence.
May 6th, 2018 10:46
The Old Man by the River.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. We have river named \'old River\' not too far from us. Children were enjoying playing in the Ford - closed to traffic as it\'s too large to cross.
How old are ya exactly then? Millions of years old, like me? Since 1066 anyway. heehee.
May 6th, 2018 07:46
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. We have river named \'old River\' not too far from us. Children were enjoying playing in the Ford - closed to traffic as it\'s too large to cross.
How old are ya exactly then? Millions of years old, like me? Since 1066 anyway. heehee.
May 6th, 2018 07:46
The Old Man by the River.
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely touching piece and I too love Cleo.
May 6th, 2018 03:57
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely touching piece and I too love Cleo.
May 6th, 2018 03:57
The Old Man by the River.
onepauly said:
you certainly know whats good in poetry.
marvelous!
May 6th, 2018 02:55
onepauly said:
you certainly know whats good in poetry.
marvelous!
May 6th, 2018 02:55
Impossible Tamed.
dusk arising said:
I can see you like playing with words as much as i do.
Strange how removing a gapbetween two words alters the meaning completely - for unless the gap after the third letter was removed - would you allow a loved one to enter a door with \'Therapist\' written on it?
Bit of an eyeopener.
May 5th, 2018 18:16
dusk arising said:
I can see you like playing with words as much as i do.
Strange how removing a gapbetween two words alters the meaning completely - for unless the gap after the third letter was removed - would you allow a loved one to enter a door with \'Therapist\' written on it?
Bit of an eyeopener.
May 5th, 2018 18:16
Impossible Tamed.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ I have learned over the last few years ~ that WITH GOD ALL THINGS ARE POSSIBLE ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
May 5th, 2018 16:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ I have learned over the last few years ~ that WITH GOD ALL THINGS ARE POSSIBLE ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
May 5th, 2018 16:59
Impossible Tamed.
Lorna said:
A clever one Andy! I have often sat in the dark when a problem came up and said \"I can\'t do this, I can\'t do this, I can\'t do this\" and when the light came said \"I can do this\"......... not so impossible........
May 5th, 2018 07:27
Lorna said:
A clever one Andy! I have often sat in the dark when a problem came up and said \"I can\'t do this, I can\'t do this, I can\'t do this\" and when the light came said \"I can do this\"......... not so impossible........
May 5th, 2018 07:27
Impossible Tamed.
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun write Andy. But don\'t let Orchi sing.
May 5th, 2018 02:13
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun write Andy. But don\'t let Orchi sing.
May 5th, 2018 02:13
Impossible Tamed.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. in that case, I\'m possible to sing after all! heehee.
May 5th, 2018 01:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. in that case, I\'m possible to sing after all! heehee.
May 5th, 2018 01:42
Quartet for the End of Time.
dusk arising said:
amazing pieces, the first seems painful and gradually entrances with virtuoso playing, parhaps a mockery of the audience. the second short passage panders to the belligerence of nazi power and domination i feel. thirdy emerges a piece of beauty which i would love to hear produced with todays electronic marvelry.... then emerges a most moving piece which must bring the frailty of human existence and emotion to even the hardest of hearts encompassing love, sadness and joy in its virtuosity. writing as i listen, there is an amazing sombre section,did this reach nazi hearts one wonders?
This uncomfortable listening cannot have been composed to be passe and conveys much emotion which surely tells of an empathy between performer and their audience - strange to relate but i dont think this music could have existed without such a thing. gone are any thoughts of trivial musical entertainment here.
Now a chiming piano discordantly tells how times will change unharmoniously, i wonder at the message conveyed here and the sombre truth acknowledged by nazis. As you can see this music says much to me and not knowing how much longer it lasts i will stop writing here. Needless to say very moving and thought provoking. Amazing - thank you.
May 4th, 2018 19:57
dusk arising said:
amazing pieces, the first seems painful and gradually entrances with virtuoso playing, parhaps a mockery of the audience. the second short passage panders to the belligerence of nazi power and domination i feel. thirdy emerges a piece of beauty which i would love to hear produced with todays electronic marvelry.... then emerges a most moving piece which must bring the frailty of human existence and emotion to even the hardest of hearts encompassing love, sadness and joy in its virtuosity. writing as i listen, there is an amazing sombre section,did this reach nazi hearts one wonders?
This uncomfortable listening cannot have been composed to be passe and conveys much emotion which surely tells of an empathy between performer and their audience - strange to relate but i dont think this music could have existed without such a thing. gone are any thoughts of trivial musical entertainment here.
Now a chiming piano discordantly tells how times will change unharmoniously, i wonder at the message conveyed here and the sombre truth acknowledged by nazis. As you can see this music says much to me and not knowing how much longer it lasts i will stop writing here. Needless to say very moving and thought provoking. Amazing - thank you.
May 4th, 2018 19:57
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