Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Elusive Time.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Yep, how did you know I\'m having horrendous times, with it going real slow, now I\'m married to KP?! heehee.
March 11th, 2018 03:01
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Yep, how did you know I\'m having horrendous times, with it going real slow, now I\'m married to KP?! heehee.
March 11th, 2018 03:01
Tapped Conversation.
Frank Prem said:
Perhaps they were writing to each other, GF?
March 11th, 2018 01:59
Frank Prem said:
Perhaps they were writing to each other, GF?
March 11th, 2018 01:59
Tapped Conversation.
Laura🌻 said:
Gold,
A veritable tech explosion in progress! I have to say that I do need my iPhone. My one and only communication device! Of course, for my children it’s a different story! However, there are some rules they have to abide by when we’re together! Never when we’re eating or walking in the street!
~Laura~
March 10th, 2018 20:02
Laura🌻 said:
Gold,
A veritable tech explosion in progress! I have to say that I do need my iPhone. My one and only communication device! Of course, for my children it’s a different story! However, there are some rules they have to abide by when we’re together! Never when we’re eating or walking in the street!
~Laura~
March 10th, 2018 20:02
Tapped Conversation.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The fobile moan
Of the mobile fone !
I have taken a solemn oath NEVER
to own one of those contraptions !
Your BRIAN
March 10th, 2018 18:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The fobile moan
Of the mobile fone !
I have taken a solemn oath NEVER
to own one of those contraptions !
Your BRIAN
March 10th, 2018 18:59
Tapped Conversation.
Poetic25 said:
Goldfinch
this is all too common these days-sadly. there is so much to talk about with people, but our world is evolving elsewhere.
Great piece of writing, reflecting today\'s society
Michael :)
March 10th, 2018 16:24
Poetic25 said:
Goldfinch
this is all too common these days-sadly. there is so much to talk about with people, but our world is evolving elsewhere.
Great piece of writing, reflecting today\'s society
Michael :)
March 10th, 2018 16:24
Tapped Conversation.
Lorna said:
To me they look like aliens walking around with the phones stuck in their faces - maybe Darwinism will grow a special ledge on faces to hold the phones....... sounds more like isolation and loneliness than communication doesn\'t it.......
March 10th, 2018 10:17
Lorna said:
To me they look like aliens walking around with the phones stuck in their faces - maybe Darwinism will grow a special ledge on faces to hold the phones....... sounds more like isolation and loneliness than communication doesn\'t it.......
March 10th, 2018 10:17
Tapped Conversation.
Accidental Poet said:
Just goes to show technology does have a downside. Great write Andy.
March 10th, 2018 07:42
Accidental Poet said:
Just goes to show technology does have a downside. Great write Andy.
March 10th, 2018 07:42
Tapped Conversation.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Michael. They reckon that 45% of youngsters only converse via there \'phones.
We have a neighbour with a 15 year old daughter, I was talking to her mother a few days ago and she was saying that her daughter never sees her friends outside of school but only communicates via her \'phone. She has tried taking her \'phone from her daughter but life then apparently is horrendous between the two of them.
March 10th, 2018 04:39
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Michael. They reckon that 45% of youngsters only converse via there \'phones.
We have a neighbour with a 15 year old daughter, I was talking to her mother a few days ago and she was saying that her daughter never sees her friends outside of school but only communicates via her \'phone. She has tried taking her \'phone from her daughter but life then apparently is horrendous between the two of them.
March 10th, 2018 04:39
Tapped Conversation.
Michael Edwards said:
Conversation has gone downhill and our youngsters are losing the art - and when they like do use it they like use it badly like. But they are not alone - lost count of the number of times I heard \'I was sat\', \'he was stood\' etc on the TV last night. Grrrrr.
As for the use of phones the world doesn\'t see itself any more, heads are downward bent with no appreciation of surroundings. So you can guess I love your write Andy.
March 10th, 2018 02:51
Michael Edwards said:
Conversation has gone downhill and our youngsters are losing the art - and when they like do use it they like use it badly like. But they are not alone - lost count of the number of times I heard \'I was sat\', \'he was stood\' etc on the TV last night. Grrrrr.
As for the use of phones the world doesn\'t see itself any more, heads are downward bent with no appreciation of surroundings. So you can guess I love your write Andy.
March 10th, 2018 02:51
Sun and Moon.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The SCRIPTURES tell us that P;anet Earth is blessed with two Perfect Lights for free. The SUN by day which is also a Solar heater ~ at no extra cost ! God knew there would be some nocturnal Activity ~ but also that the majority would be sleeping ! So he created the Moon which would reflect the Sun\'s light by night ~ MOONLIGHT ! It is much less intense than SUNLIGHT but sufficient for early man (20,000 BC ?) to do the Night Shift ! Because we have so much artificial light we tend to overlook how important MOONLIGHT would have been in 20,000 BC ! Yours BRIAN.
March 9th, 2018 15:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The SCRIPTURES tell us that P;anet Earth is blessed with two Perfect Lights for free. The SUN by day which is also a Solar heater ~ at no extra cost ! God knew there would be some nocturnal Activity ~ but also that the majority would be sleeping ! So he created the Moon which would reflect the Sun\'s light by night ~ MOONLIGHT ! It is much less intense than SUNLIGHT but sufficient for early man (20,000 BC ?) to do the Night Shift ! Because we have so much artificial light we tend to overlook how important MOONLIGHT would have been in 20,000 BC ! Yours BRIAN.
March 9th, 2018 15:59
Sun and Moon.
Resa71 said:
Beautifully discrptive!
I often spend time just gazing at the moon.
It seems to calm my mind, when things are really going crazy in my life.
Well done!
Resa
March 9th, 2018 12:53
Resa71 said:
Beautifully discrptive!
I often spend time just gazing at the moon.
It seems to calm my mind, when things are really going crazy in my life.
Well done!
Resa
March 9th, 2018 12:53
Sun and Moon.
brianna jean zeiger said:
beautiful job! i love the imagery this poem provides!
March 9th, 2018 07:53
brianna jean zeiger said:
beautiful job! i love the imagery this poem provides!
March 9th, 2018 07:53
Sun and Moon.
Lorna said:
This is a beauty Goldfinch! I love the starts showing the holes in Heavens floor....... so peaceful......
March 9th, 2018 07:18
Lorna said:
This is a beauty Goldfinch! I love the starts showing the holes in Heavens floor....... so peaceful......
March 9th, 2018 07:18
Sun and Moon.
Laura🌻 said:
A beautiful write, Gold!
May we always be attracted to the light in any shape or form! May it be the Sun, the Moon, and/or the Stars! A brilliant write for an illuminating read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 9th, 2018 07:14
Laura🌻 said:
A beautiful write, Gold!
May we always be attracted to the light in any shape or form! May it be the Sun, the Moon, and/or the Stars! A brilliant write for an illuminating read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 9th, 2018 07:14
Sun and Moon.
Ivory said:
Lovely piece. Sometimes we take for granted the beauty of the world around us.
March 9th, 2018 06:42
Ivory said:
Lovely piece. Sometimes we take for granted the beauty of the world around us.
March 9th, 2018 06:42
Sun and Moon.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m looking out at frosted lawns and a clear cobalt blue sky - good to be alive - great write Andy
March 9th, 2018 03:09
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m looking out at frosted lawns and a clear cobalt blue sky - good to be alive - great write Andy
March 9th, 2018 03:09
Two Cats Fighting - For Orchi
orchidee said:
\'Ohhh, to not be in England, Now that Orchi\'s singing there!\' lol.
March 8th, 2018 11:04
orchidee said:
\'Ohhh, to not be in England, Now that Orchi\'s singing there!\' lol.
March 8th, 2018 11:04
Two Cats Fighting - For Orchi
orchidee said:
Heehee thanks Gold. One of them in the clip is me in me younger days. Is it?! So that\'s the reason for some dwindling congregations these days?! Know we why.
Time for me to torture KP with another song now.
March 8th, 2018 02:54
orchidee said:
Heehee thanks Gold. One of them in the clip is me in me younger days. Is it?! So that\'s the reason for some dwindling congregations these days?! Know we why.
Time for me to torture KP with another song now.
March 8th, 2018 02:54
Two Cats Fighting - For Orchi
Laura🌻 said:
That is a great write, Gold!
An enjoyable read! You
fulfilled the challenge.
Yes, indeed!
One thing though... you
won’t be rid of him! You’re
stuck together by poetry!
Hooray for the great mind
and the mighty pen.
Hooray for FRIENDSHIPS!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 02:42
Laura🌻 said:
That is a great write, Gold!
An enjoyable read! You
fulfilled the challenge.
Yes, indeed!
One thing though... you
won’t be rid of him! You’re
stuck together by poetry!
Hooray for the great mind
and the mighty pen.
Hooray for FRIENDSHIPS!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 02:42
House of Canvas
rrodriguez said:
Wonderful write. Amazing how we can get inspired by another\'s creation. You certainly wrote an amazing piece here.
March 7th, 2018 12:33
rrodriguez said:
Wonderful write. Amazing how we can get inspired by another\'s creation. You certainly wrote an amazing piece here.
March 7th, 2018 12:33
House of Canvas
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ The acoustic Guitar is my favourite instrument and the only one I ever really mastered. Sometimes life surprises us ! I was staying a Spooky house in Savannah while the Residents (Missionaries) were in Haiti ! The had left a number for us to ring as they had promised lunch to any Residents ! When we arrive at the house ~ about 20 minutes by car it was very impressive (one whole dividing wall was a Fish Tank ! After a lavish evening meal our host ~ who looked just like Henry VIII ~ announced he would sing to us with his LUTE ! Apparently he was a well known musician in Savannah commanding a fee of $500 + for Weddings & parties etc. He had a very Elizabethan Sound (I have heard Julian Bream @ Snape Maltings !) One of the Songs he sang was Greensleeves ~ Awesome. Thanks for the Memory ~ Yours BRIAN
March 7th, 2018 11:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ The acoustic Guitar is my favourite instrument and the only one I ever really mastered. Sometimes life surprises us ! I was staying a Spooky house in Savannah while the Residents (Missionaries) were in Haiti ! The had left a number for us to ring as they had promised lunch to any Residents ! When we arrive at the house ~ about 20 minutes by car it was very impressive (one whole dividing wall was a Fish Tank ! After a lavish evening meal our host ~ who looked just like Henry VIII ~ announced he would sing to us with his LUTE ! Apparently he was a well known musician in Savannah commanding a fee of $500 + for Weddings & parties etc. He had a very Elizabethan Sound (I have heard Julian Bream @ Snape Maltings !) One of the Songs he sang was Greensleeves ~ Awesome. Thanks for the Memory ~ Yours BRIAN
March 7th, 2018 11:09
House of Canvas
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch,
What an awesome poem!
Good stuff!
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 07:35
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch,
What an awesome poem!
Good stuff!
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 07:35
House of Canvas
Lorna said:
I had to \"run\" and look at the painting right away and it is truly something as Goldfinch said! You two are wonderful soulmates!
March 7th, 2018 06:26
Lorna said:
I had to \"run\" and look at the painting right away and it is truly something as Goldfinch said! You two are wonderful soulmates!
March 7th, 2018 06:26
House of Canvas
Laura🌻 said:
A great poem, Andy!
Now that I’ve seen
Michael’s painting that
inspired your poem, I
totally understand your
write and your choice
of music to enhance
the whole experience!
You’re both very
gifted and talented!
Bravissimi! 👏🏻👏🏻
~Laura~
March 7th, 2018 03:18
Laura🌻 said:
A great poem, Andy!
Now that I’ve seen
Michael’s painting that
inspired your poem, I
totally understand your
write and your choice
of music to enhance
the whole experience!
You’re both very
gifted and talented!
Bravissimi! 👏🏻👏🏻
~Laura~
March 7th, 2018 03:18
House of Canvas
orchidee said:
Anyone writing a poem about my singing? it\'ll be a very dark, horrific, terrifying poem, probably called \'Two Cats Fighting\', lol
March 7th, 2018 02:53
orchidee said:
Anyone writing a poem about my singing? it\'ll be a very dark, horrific, terrifying poem, probably called \'Two Cats Fighting\', lol
March 7th, 2018 02:53
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