Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Melancholy.
orchidee said:
I was only trying to help! They may have been too inebriated to win the battle, if I had not added water to it. Have you seen the tree where we carved \'We Woz Ere\'?!
August 9th, 2017 09:10
orchidee said:
I was only trying to help! They may have been too inebriated to win the battle, if I had not added water to it. Have you seen the tree where we carved \'We Woz Ere\'?!
August 9th, 2017 09:10
Melancholy.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Sadness that has taken on lightness.\" What a splendid definition of melancholy! Well done, Goldie.
August 9th, 2017 05:00
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Sadness that has taken on lightness.\" What a splendid definition of melancholy! Well done, Goldie.
August 9th, 2017 05:00
Melancholy.
Accidental Poet said:
Bad thoughts are with most people unintentional. But sometimes they do try to sneak in on us, which is when I\'ll always try to put them where all bad thoughts should be kept, in the trash. Great write.
August 9th, 2017 04:00
Accidental Poet said:
Bad thoughts are with most people unintentional. But sometimes they do try to sneak in on us, which is when I\'ll always try to put them where all bad thoughts should be kept, in the trash. Great write.
August 9th, 2017 04:00
Melancholy.
Brycycle said:
Quite liked this. Flashbacks do occur often (happy and sad).
Love the last line :)
August 9th, 2017 03:35
Brycycle said:
Quite liked this. Flashbacks do occur often (happy and sad).
Love the last line :)
August 9th, 2017 03:35
Melancholy.
orchidee said:
Good write G/F. Are whisky-watering days a melancholic memory from the past, or deep sadness of the present for you? The phantom strikes (me!). lol.
August 9th, 2017 02:11
orchidee said:
Good write G/F. Are whisky-watering days a melancholic memory from the past, or deep sadness of the present for you? The phantom strikes (me!). lol.
August 9th, 2017 02:11
Man in Orange.
Christina8 said:
Very nicely written. What a bright wake up call!
August 8th, 2017 18:56
Christina8 said:
Very nicely written. What a bright wake up call!
August 8th, 2017 18:56
Man in Orange.
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
I find the little jingle intriguing. Nicely done. I had to \"Google\" the song and Lo and Behold..
August 8th, 2017 12:08
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
I find the little jingle intriguing. Nicely done. I had to \"Google\" the song and Lo and Behold..
August 8th, 2017 12:08
Man in Orange.
malubotelho said:
Maybe he was dressed to check the road to find any damages before trafic begin. Let him know he is poetry now.
August 8th, 2017 09:52
malubotelho said:
Maybe he was dressed to check the road to find any damages before trafic begin. Let him know he is poetry now.
August 8th, 2017 09:52
Man in Orange.
Louis Gibbs said:
Not something one sees every day. However, if I were walking down the middle of a road, I would choose to wearing orange too. Enjoyed this cute poem, Goldie!
August 8th, 2017 08:29
Louis Gibbs said:
Not something one sees every day. However, if I were walking down the middle of a road, I would choose to wearing orange too. Enjoyed this cute poem, Goldie!
August 8th, 2017 08:29
Man in Orange.
Goldfinch60 said:
I didn\'t know that eating oranges turned sight orange. Lol.
August 8th, 2017 08:24
Goldfinch60 said:
I didn\'t know that eating oranges turned sight orange. Lol.
August 8th, 2017 08:24
Man in Orange.
WriteBeLight said:
Maybe he should cut out all of that orange juice! Very citrusy write Goldfinch!
August 8th, 2017 08:20
WriteBeLight said:
Maybe he should cut out all of that orange juice! Very citrusy write Goldfinch!
August 8th, 2017 08:20
Man in Orange.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
DON\'T YOU REALISE ANDY ~ THAT YOU HAVE BEEN TANGOED ! The future is ORANGE so get used to it ! It is the BRITISH capacity to ACT STUPID that is our greatest asset (We need Clown Boris) and that in the end wins us the most medals. Spike ~ Harry ~ Peter three Genii and everything the GOONS did proves the maxim ~ The whole is always greater than the sum of the parts ! Long after MO ZART (and His Rhythm Boys) are forgotten the YING TONG SONG will still play on ! Thanks for caring & sharing ANDY ~ Yours BRIAN
August 8th, 2017 04:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
DON\'T YOU REALISE ANDY ~ THAT YOU HAVE BEEN TANGOED ! The future is ORANGE so get used to it ! It is the BRITISH capacity to ACT STUPID that is our greatest asset (We need Clown Boris) and that in the end wins us the most medals. Spike ~ Harry ~ Peter three Genii and everything the GOONS did proves the maxim ~ The whole is always greater than the sum of the parts ! Long after MO ZART (and His Rhythm Boys) are forgotten the YING TONG SONG will still play on ! Thanks for caring & sharing ANDY ~ Yours BRIAN
August 8th, 2017 04:39
Man in Orange.
Michael Edwards said:
Intriguing write and great to hear the Ying Tong Song again - what do our American friends make of it I wonder.
August 8th, 2017 02:07
Michael Edwards said:
Intriguing write and great to hear the Ying Tong Song again - what do our American friends make of it I wonder.
August 8th, 2017 02:07
Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
WL Schuett said:
Good melding of the arts Very creative
August 7th, 2017 21:10
WL Schuett said:
Good melding of the arts Very creative
August 7th, 2017 21:10
Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
Heather T said:
Lovely piece about the agreement that happens between fertile minds and their chosen mediums. I think it is born from the same places, just birthed through varying filters. Enjoyed both your words and Michael\'s artistry.
August 7th, 2017 18:33
Heather T said:
Lovely piece about the agreement that happens between fertile minds and their chosen mediums. I think it is born from the same places, just birthed through varying filters. Enjoyed both your words and Michael\'s artistry.
August 7th, 2017 18:33
Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
malubotelho said:
Bright writing. Love the purple on the painting. Something about raw jewel stone.
August 7th, 2017 14:09
malubotelho said:
Bright writing. Love the purple on the painting. Something about raw jewel stone.
August 7th, 2017 14:09
Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
Goldfinch60 said:
Thanks Brian. I likrpe Kadinsky\'s work.
August 7th, 2017 11:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Thanks Brian. I likrpe Kadinsky\'s work.
August 7th, 2017 11:33
Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ In ART ~ there is a symbiosis between Literature ~ Visual Art & Music \' KADINSKY showed it between Visual art & Music and in Maori Art there is always a lot of Y WORDS Incorporated into the Painting to supplement the imagery. All cartoons & comics are a blend of words & visual art. Loved the picture ! My title to MICHAEL was a sack of Cement or Mortar or Flour etc in Liverpool \"Falling off the back of the proverbial Lorry\" Love the poem ~ Yours BRIAN
August 7th, 2017 09:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ In ART ~ there is a symbiosis between Literature ~ Visual Art & Music \' KADINSKY showed it between Visual art & Music and in Maori Art there is always a lot of Y WORDS Incorporated into the Painting to supplement the imagery. All cartoons & comics are a blend of words & visual art. Loved the picture ! My title to MICHAEL was a sack of Cement or Mortar or Flour etc in Liverpool \"Falling off the back of the proverbial Lorry\" Love the poem ~ Yours BRIAN
August 7th, 2017 09:56
Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
WriteBeLight said:
Love the beginning, in particular.
August 7th, 2017 09:26
WriteBeLight said:
Love the beginning, in particular.
August 7th, 2017 09:26
Sitting at Heavens Door.
malubotelho said:
I always say that one can live in heaven or hell. You just have to tune to one or other station. Nice writing. Awesome
August 7th, 2017 06:40
malubotelho said:
I always say that one can live in heaven or hell. You just have to tune to one or other station. Nice writing. Awesome
August 7th, 2017 06:40
Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks for putting this on the site - feel flattered that you should use my painting - and it\'s a darn good poem to go with it.
August 7th, 2017 02:09
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks for putting this on the site - feel flattered that you should use my painting - and it\'s a darn good poem to go with it.
August 7th, 2017 02:09
Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
orchidee said:
A fine write Goldie. But I can\'t say Scion-wotsit after a few sherries. Also *gets out dictionary to look it up*.
August 7th, 2017 01:36
orchidee said:
A fine write Goldie. But I can\'t say Scion-wotsit after a few sherries. Also *gets out dictionary to look it up*.
August 7th, 2017 01:36
Sitting at Heavens Door.
myself and me said:
It is the kind of heaven for me. Shall create my own. Like your poem.
August 6th, 2017 15:03
myself and me said:
It is the kind of heaven for me. Shall create my own. Like your poem.
August 6th, 2017 15:03
Sitting at Heavens Door.
FredPeyer said:
You said it so well, Goldfinch. What else could be there to make us happy? Maybe female companionship!
August 6th, 2017 14:47
FredPeyer said:
You said it so well, Goldfinch. What else could be there to make us happy? Maybe female companionship!
August 6th, 2017 14:47
Sitting at Heavens Door.
orchidee said:
A fine write G. Glimpses, moments (lasting several moments) of heaven! Erm, \'Elvis\' is at our church - has all his records. He don\'t look like him though, but he is known in town as \'Elvis\'.
August 6th, 2017 09:43
orchidee said:
A fine write G. Glimpses, moments (lasting several moments) of heaven! Erm, \'Elvis\' is at our church - has all his records. He don\'t look like him though, but he is known in town as \'Elvis\'.
August 6th, 2017 09:43
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