Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Live in Peace - FIBS
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 3rd, 2017 08:10

Live in Peace - FIBS
WriteBeLight said:

I am filled with the feeling of fresh air Goldfinch!

March 3rd, 2017 06:23

Live in Peace - FIBS
Fay Slimm. said:

Fantastic form and well done for inspiring us with the subject too. - great read my friend.

March 3rd, 2017 05:05

Live in Peace - FIBS
orchidee said:

Great write. Are us two \'over the hill\'? Well, we was there in 1066 anyway. lol.

March 3rd, 2017 03:29

Live in Peace - FIBS
Goldfinch60 said:



March 3rd, 2017 02:58

Live in Peace - FIBS
Michael Edwards said:

Great construction and great poem as well. you\'ve inspired me to have a go when I get some time.

March 3rd, 2017 02:47

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
MendedFences27 said:

Two of my favorite characters. Read all, watched all, of the books and movies. Couldn\'t pass this one up. I guess it\'s always best to have a tent with a floor in it. I still didn\'t see it coming. Holmes is such a genius. Well, thoroughly enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.

March 2nd, 2017 13:45

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
WriteBeLight said:

That is a wonderful story Goldfinch! Great!

March 2nd, 2017 12:08

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
Augustus said:

From Louisiana, USA I interpreted \"nicked\" as a hole and it still made sense, but I love the true English slang bit. Enjoyable.

March 2nd, 2017 11:42

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha brilliant !!!

March 2nd, 2017 06:18

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
willyweed said:

this was funny when I only thought I knew what nicked meant then you confirmed and the laff riot began too freakin\' sweet Bravo! just Golden! ww

March 2nd, 2017 05:16

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks GF ~ nice one ! I am a \"Holmes aficionado\" so anything about the Daring Duo give me pleasure. I didn\'t know they were camp ! Great poem and an even greater deduction ~ Yours BRIAN

March 2nd, 2017 04:02

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
Michael Edwards said:

Nice one Goldfinch - great sense of humour - gave me quite a smile on a wet miserable morning - I keep thinking about writing a rhyme based on cockney rhyming slang (I am from London but not within Bow Bells) - now that will require quite a bit of translation for those not in the know!!!

March 2nd, 2017 02:54

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write!

March 2nd, 2017 02:46

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
Goldfinch60 said:

\"Nicked\" means stolen for those who do not understand English slang.

March 2nd, 2017 02:35

Chet.
Augustus said:

This is so original and so refreshing. I look forward to your poems every day.

March 1st, 2017 18:54

Chet.
Jooles said:

Really enjoyed this, get a real feeling of how much you admired this person but how sad life can turn out

March 1st, 2017 17:03

Chet.
WriteBeLight said:

Loving tribute! Very well done. Draws a person in, anticipating each next line. :)

March 1st, 2017 05:58

Chet.
willyweed said:

This is as good as it gets sometimes its best to go out on top? wonder works here! Bravo!! ww

March 1st, 2017 05:36

Chet.
orchidee said:

A fine write, and sad too. Some people becoming addicted, as a way to be able to \'get through life\' even though many have gifts, skills talents, that are cut short.

March 1st, 2017 03:57

Chet.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Michael, much appreciated.

March 1st, 2017 03:32

Chet.
Michael Edwards said:

Now this just so good - rhythm, storyline - I\'ll return and read it again later.

March 1st, 2017 03:31

The Old Man
Augustus said:

From one old man to another, nicely done. Have you ever been in one of those restaurants with mirrors on one wall? You look and see an old gray headed dude across the room, then realize it is you. Take care.

February 28th, 2017 17:27

The Old Man
MendedFences27 said:

Yes indeed, we all get there eventually, and we tend to reflect and ponder over our lives. Mostly we just wonder what the heck happened. Nice write. - Phil A.

February 28th, 2017 13:00

The Old Man
orchidee said:

Was we there in 1066? Did we exchange Cooeess? And why don\'t I go back to sleep?! heehee.

February 28th, 2017 11:35

The Old Man
Goldfinch60 said:

The smile of contentment lookin back on a good life is wonderful, I am god that you are smiling too.

February 28th, 2017 09:32

The Old Man
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 28th, 2017 09:08

The Old Man
willyweed said:

very nice view of it all Golden one.
Don\'t be surprised when you look into Gods eyes if he looks familiar! WW

February 28th, 2017 05:45

The Old Man
WriteBeLight said:

Oh, so sweet and poignant Goldfinch.

February 28th, 2017 04:52

The Old Man
orchidee said:

A fine write. Ooh yes, we
are both very old ourselves. Well, we was there in 1066 anyway! heehee.

February 28th, 2017 03:15



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