Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Look at the Stars.
FredPeyer said:
Really like this poem, Goldie! We do need to \'look at the stars\', or see only the good!
January 27th, 2018 21:30
FredPeyer said:
Really like this poem, Goldie! We do need to \'look at the stars\', or see only the good!
January 27th, 2018 21:30
Look at the Stars.
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful thoughts and comforting words.
January 27th, 2018 15:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful thoughts and comforting words.
January 27th, 2018 15:52
Look at the Stars.
orchidee said:
And yes, as one Vicar said in a farewell sermon: Look up! He was rather military. Bit difficult for females to relate to him.
January 27th, 2018 02:51
orchidee said:
And yes, as one Vicar said in a farewell sermon: Look up! He was rather military. Bit difficult for females to relate to him.
January 27th, 2018 02:51
Look at the Stars.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Do you know the one? (I forgot some of it):
\"Two men in a dungeon - with a window in it!
One looked down, one looked up
One saw mud, the other saw stars\"
January 27th, 2018 02:50
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Do you know the one? (I forgot some of it):
\"Two men in a dungeon - with a window in it!
One looked down, one looked up
One saw mud, the other saw stars\"
January 27th, 2018 02:50
Watta Lotta Excrement.
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'d like some of what you\'ve been drinking, Goldie. Clever write!
January 26th, 2018 12:01
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'d like some of what you\'ve been drinking, Goldie. Clever write!
January 26th, 2018 12:01
Watta Lotta Excrement.
orchidee said:
If we didn\'t like this poem, or even liking it, I suppose we could say it\'s a s***ty write! But you is too refined for that word! Wash your mouth out, Orchi!
January 26th, 2018 05:09
orchidee said:
If we didn\'t like this poem, or even liking it, I suppose we could say it\'s a s***ty write! But you is too refined for that word! Wash your mouth out, Orchi!
January 26th, 2018 05:09
Watta Lotta Excrement.
FredPeyer said:
I guess you could have said \'shit\', but that wouldn\'t have changed much. While you certainly have artistic freedom, and while I do love your poem, I can see the point Charlotte made. Otherwise incredibly funny and great writing!
January 26th, 2018 04:40
FredPeyer said:
I guess you could have said \'shit\', but that wouldn\'t have changed much. While you certainly have artistic freedom, and while I do love your poem, I can see the point Charlotte made. Otherwise incredibly funny and great writing!
January 26th, 2018 04:40
Watta Lotta Excrement.
Michael Edwards said:
I like the term \'Bovine excretia\' but what the heck. Whatever, a great fun read for a Friday (or any day come to that) .
January 26th, 2018 03:38
Michael Edwards said:
I like the term \'Bovine excretia\' but what the heck. Whatever, a great fun read for a Friday (or any day come to that) .
January 26th, 2018 03:38
Watta Lotta Excrement.
Caring dove said:
i find the title a little off- putting and that word excrement , its a constructive criticsm .. by far overall this is a great piece of writing which i loved , but that word is unpleasant , and would be better without it
January 26th, 2018 03:33
Caring dove said:
i find the title a little off- putting and that word excrement , its a constructive criticsm .. by far overall this is a great piece of writing which i loved , but that word is unpleasant , and would be better without it
January 26th, 2018 03:33
Watta Lotta Excrement.
Caring dove said:
lol goldfinch ! love this ... such a light hearted and fun read ! ha ha . thanks for sharing . tho i would say maybe edit the ending lol not being rude or anything but my opinion is it would be better without the word excrement anyhow but great piece of writing
January 26th, 2018 03:30
Caring dove said:
lol goldfinch ! love this ... such a light hearted and fun read ! ha ha . thanks for sharing . tho i would say maybe edit the ending lol not being rude or anything but my opinion is it would be better without the word excrement anyhow but great piece of writing
January 26th, 2018 03:30
Watta Lotta Excrement.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write Gold. I shall have to nip round there and add some water to ya whisky, after all that! heehee.
January 26th, 2018 03:04
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write Gold. I shall have to nip round there and add some water to ya whisky, after all that! heehee.
January 26th, 2018 03:04
Alone Or With God.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great POEM ANDY and in my experience too GOD is just like that ! But I always blame me ~ I pray ~ God answers ~ but alas I\'m not always tuned in (or ready ?) for the answer ! Bring on the Clowns ~ oe of my faves and Dame Judy is a GODDESS ! Yours BRIAN
January 25th, 2018 19:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great POEM ANDY and in my experience too GOD is just like that ! But I always blame me ~ I pray ~ God answers ~ but alas I\'m not always tuned in (or ready ?) for the answer ! Bring on the Clowns ~ oe of my faves and Dame Judy is a GODDESS ! Yours BRIAN
January 25th, 2018 19:31
Alone Or With God.
FredPeyer said:
I truly enjoyed your conversation with God, Goldfinch! I don\'t think I have ever been lonely in my life. Alone, yes, but lonely, no. And isn\'t it funny how one thought (or answer) can change contentment to questions without end!
Very well written!
January 25th, 2018 14:54
FredPeyer said:
I truly enjoyed your conversation with God, Goldfinch! I don\'t think I have ever been lonely in my life. Alone, yes, but lonely, no. And isn\'t it funny how one thought (or answer) can change contentment to questions without end!
Very well written!
January 25th, 2018 14:54
Alone Or With God.
orchidee said:
Yes, now look (not just you) - but what\'s all this thinking going on \'ere? is it dangerous, as you say?! lol.
This thinking will have to stop - will it?! heehee.
January 25th, 2018 14:19
orchidee said:
Yes, now look (not just you) - but what\'s all this thinking going on \'ere? is it dangerous, as you say?! lol.
This thinking will have to stop - will it?! heehee.
January 25th, 2018 14:19
Alone Or With God.
Laura🌻 said:
Goldi,
Often times, I like being
alone! Lonely I am not!
I always appreciated my
“alone” time! When my
children were young, I’d
ask them to give me some
“mommy time”! They knew
not to disturb me...unless
it was an emergency! It
worked most of the times!
I enjoyed reading this very
relatable write! Thank you
for sharing!
~Laura~
January 25th, 2018 10:44
Laura🌻 said:
Goldi,
Often times, I like being
alone! Lonely I am not!
I always appreciated my
“alone” time! When my
children were young, I’d
ask them to give me some
“mommy time”! They knew
not to disturb me...unless
it was an emergency! It
worked most of the times!
I enjoyed reading this very
relatable write! Thank you
for sharing!
~Laura~
January 25th, 2018 10:44
Alone Or With God.
orchidee said:
A fine write and clip Gold. It might be hell if everyone had exactly everything they WANTed, which may or may be what they NEEDed.
The answer will be \'No\' to \'make me win the Lottery\'. Or will it be \'Yes\'?! ooh..
January 25th, 2018 02:52
orchidee said:
A fine write and clip Gold. It might be hell if everyone had exactly everything they WANTed, which may or may be what they NEEDed.
The answer will be \'No\' to \'make me win the Lottery\'. Or will it be \'Yes\'?! ooh..
January 25th, 2018 02:52
Whale Meat Again.
WL Schuett said:
Nice that you can come up with a poem to fit a title , very well done with good humor
January 24th, 2018 19:36
WL Schuett said:
Nice that you can come up with a poem to fit a title , very well done with good humor
January 24th, 2018 19:36
Whale Meat Again.
FredPeyer said:
Given the difficulty of the title, you came up with a good one, Goldie! But why \'Fred\'? It\'s bad enough that every dumb joke has a guy named \'Fred\' in it! :-) (Just kidding, you can use my name without my permission!!!)
January 24th, 2018 10:58
FredPeyer said:
Given the difficulty of the title, you came up with a good one, Goldie! But why \'Fred\'? It\'s bad enough that every dumb joke has a guy named \'Fred\' in it! :-) (Just kidding, you can use my name without my permission!!!)
January 24th, 2018 10:58
The Key of Life.
Caring dove said:
aaw.... so sad :-( i feel so sorry for anybody who suffers with dementia , truly sad, you expressed this well , it surely is awful to see someone you love like this
January 24th, 2018 03:10
Caring dove said:
aaw.... so sad :-( i feel so sorry for anybody who suffers with dementia , truly sad, you expressed this well , it surely is awful to see someone you love like this
January 24th, 2018 03:10
I Am Here.
Louis Gibbs said:
Here\'s to you still being here, Goldie! Have a sip for me. I appreciated your write today.
January 23rd, 2018 08:58
Louis Gibbs said:
Here\'s to you still being here, Goldie! Have a sip for me. I appreciated your write today.
January 23rd, 2018 08:58
I Am Here.
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise introspection after a glass of fine wine Andy - an engaging read.
January 23rd, 2018 06:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise introspection after a glass of fine wine Andy - an engaging read.
January 23rd, 2018 06:07
I Am Here.
dusk arising said:
I knew you were in there somewhere! Dare i begin to think your inspiration for your fine output on mps is drawn from a glass of your favourite tipple... no, i think not - but i\'ve the cheek to suggest it.
January 23rd, 2018 05:44
dusk arising said:
I knew you were in there somewhere! Dare i begin to think your inspiration for your fine output on mps is drawn from a glass of your favourite tipple... no, i think not - but i\'ve the cheek to suggest it.
January 23rd, 2018 05:44
I Am Here.
FredPeyer said:
Nice to see that \'you are there\', Goldie! And to see you with a bottle of wine and a glass in your hand endears you to me even more! Just came back from Costco with a carton full of bottles, including some old Zinfandel and a Cote du Rhone. The Zinfandel has 15% Alcohol which makes it rather heavy. But I like these kind of wines. And yes, my day is made if I wake up and I am still breathing!
Here is to you, my friend, may we be able to enjoy a glass once in a while for a long time to come!
Oh, btw, I did enjoy your poem!
January 23rd, 2018 03:52
FredPeyer said:
Nice to see that \'you are there\', Goldie! And to see you with a bottle of wine and a glass in your hand endears you to me even more! Just came back from Costco with a carton full of bottles, including some old Zinfandel and a Cote du Rhone. The Zinfandel has 15% Alcohol which makes it rather heavy. But I like these kind of wines. And yes, my day is made if I wake up and I am still breathing!
Here is to you, my friend, may we be able to enjoy a glass once in a while for a long time to come!
Oh, btw, I did enjoy your poem!
January 23rd, 2018 03:52
I Am Here.
orchidee said:
Cooeeee, yep, it\'s still you! It was still me the last time I looked in my mirror! You on that sherry there?!
Good write Gold.
January 23rd, 2018 03:18
orchidee said:
Cooeeee, yep, it\'s still you! It was still me the last time I looked in my mirror! You on that sherry there?!
Good write Gold.
January 23rd, 2018 03:18
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