Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Intrigue.
Christina8 said:
Love the painting and the write. I read it a few times and it just makes sense! Great write!
March 21st, 2018 14:45
Christina8 said:
Love the painting and the write. I read it a few times and it just makes sense! Great write!
March 21st, 2018 14:45
Intrigue.
orchidee said:
Oh woe, I know! Why did I have to say those now eternally-recorded words \'Look up, Sire\'?! Why did I not keep my gob shut at that precise moment? It\'s my all my fault, you know. heehee.
March 21st, 2018 07:09
orchidee said:
Oh woe, I know! Why did I have to say those now eternally-recorded words \'Look up, Sire\'?! Why did I not keep my gob shut at that precise moment? It\'s my all my fault, you know. heehee.
March 21st, 2018 07:09
Intrigue.
Lauraš» said:
Yes indeed, Gold...
It is very intriguing!
Abstracts are one of
my favorites! There is
so much we can invoke
from an abstract. It all
depends upon the beholder!
This beholder is beholden
to you, Gold, for an
awesome write and
visual! Thank you for
sharing your talents!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 06:12
Lauraš» said:
Yes indeed, Gold...
It is very intriguing!
Abstracts are one of
my favorites! There is
so much we can invoke
from an abstract. It all
depends upon the beholder!
This beholder is beholden
to you, Gold, for an
awesome write and
visual! Thank you for
sharing your talents!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 06:12
Intrigue.
Lorna said:
Loved the sentiments - so true - what would life be without the arts....... and the picture amazed me because it is so \"modern\" and I never would have thought it was painted as early as 1913.......I see so many things - a bird, a fox, and even a sneaker!
March 21st, 2018 03:46
Lorna said:
Loved the sentiments - so true - what would life be without the arts....... and the picture amazed me because it is so \"modern\" and I never would have thought it was painted as early as 1913.......I see so many things - a bird, a fox, and even a sneaker!
March 21st, 2018 03:46
Intrigue.
Michael Edwards said:
On another forum I have just posted a painting by Kevin Hirst which is the pole opposite to this one and yet invokes the same intrigue - life would be empty without art and fine poetry like this piece.
March 21st, 2018 03:09
Michael Edwards said:
On another forum I have just posted a painting by Kevin Hirst which is the pole opposite to this one and yet invokes the same intrigue - life would be empty without art and fine poetry like this piece.
March 21st, 2018 03:09
The Scrum.
Lauraš» said:
Gold,
Iāve attended many soccer matches (in my case). I can relate to your write! It can be very exasperating or exhilarating...depending on the match!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2018 17:15
Lauraš» said:
Gold,
Iāve attended many soccer matches (in my case). I can relate to your write! It can be very exasperating or exhilarating...depending on the match!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2018 17:15
The Scrum.
willyweed said:
I don\'t know any thing about scrumming good poem... go yankees ww
March 20th, 2018 09:27
willyweed said:
I don\'t know any thing about scrumming good poem... go yankees ww
March 20th, 2018 09:27
The Scrum.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SCRUM ~ Skirmish of Childish Rough and Unruly Men !
Thanks ANDY ~ That is why in my playing days (14 ~ 30) I always played Footy and always in GOAL because it is illegal to tackle a GOALIE ! Because our Schools Head\'s Son had nearly died on the Rugger Pitch we only played Footy and always won the Inter-Schools Trophy ! England really went off the boil in the Six Nations ~ and were even beaten by France and the Auld Foe ~ SCOTLAND ! Thanks for scrumming ~ BRIAN !
March 20th, 2018 07:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SCRUM ~ Skirmish of Childish Rough and Unruly Men !
Thanks ANDY ~ That is why in my playing days (14 ~ 30) I always played Footy and always in GOAL because it is illegal to tackle a GOALIE ! Because our Schools Head\'s Son had nearly died on the Rugger Pitch we only played Footy and always won the Inter-Schools Trophy ! England really went off the boil in the Six Nations ~ and were even beaten by France and the Auld Foe ~ SCOTLAND ! Thanks for scrumming ~ BRIAN !
March 20th, 2018 07:53
The Scrum.
orchidee said:
A fine write gold. He helped me in 1066, but I never listened, did I?! doh!
March 20th, 2018 06:20
orchidee said:
A fine write gold. He helped me in 1066, but I never listened, did I?! doh!
March 20th, 2018 06:20
The Scrum.
Lorna said:
From a woman\'s point of view - what a lovely tangle of men!!!!
March 20th, 2018 04:30
Lorna said:
From a woman\'s point of view - what a lovely tangle of men!!!!
March 20th, 2018 04:30
The Scrum.
Michael Edwards said:
Fabulous game which is often baffling to us who are familiar with the rules - I do wonder what our friends across the pond make of it - bit like American football in reverse (which completely baffles most of us here in the UK) . Enjoyed the write Andy.
March 20th, 2018 03:21
Michael Edwards said:
Fabulous game which is often baffling to us who are familiar with the rules - I do wonder what our friends across the pond make of it - bit like American football in reverse (which completely baffles most of us here in the UK) . Enjoyed the write Andy.
March 20th, 2018 03:21
Tripping Through Life.
Poetic25 said:
Goldfinch,
Really liked your piece, which is a great analogy of how you see a journey. So much truth here
* just to say is the last but third line meant to read importance?*
Great poem
M :)
March 19th, 2018 12:56
Poetic25 said:
Goldfinch,
Really liked your piece, which is a great analogy of how you see a journey. So much truth here
* just to say is the last but third line meant to read importance?*
Great poem
M :)
March 19th, 2018 12:56
Tripping Through Life.
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Andy - love the message.
March 19th, 2018 09:04
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Andy - love the message.
March 19th, 2018 09:04
Tripping Through Life.
Christina8 said:
Very wise advice first thing in the morning! Thanks for sharing!
March 19th, 2018 06:24
Christina8 said:
Very wise advice first thing in the morning! Thanks for sharing!
March 19th, 2018 06:24
Tripping Through Life.
orchidee said:
A fine and wise write Gold. How were the roads, or dirt-tracks (?) in 1066?!
March 19th, 2018 05:52
orchidee said:
A fine and wise write Gold. How were the roads, or dirt-tracks (?) in 1066?!
March 19th, 2018 05:52
Tripping Through Life.
Lauraš» said:
Gold,
This is an EXCELLENT write! It should be read by all...especially by those who are beginning their āadultā life! My two will definitely read your wise message! Also, I love the pic you chose for this poem! Thank you for the share!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 05:25
Lauraš» said:
Gold,
This is an EXCELLENT write! It should be read by all...especially by those who are beginning their āadultā life! My two will definitely read your wise message! Also, I love the pic you chose for this poem! Thank you for the share!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 05:25
Tripping Through Life.
Lorna said:
Isn\'t it great Goldfinch when we can finally \"see\" the molehills!
March 19th, 2018 03:19
Lorna said:
Isn\'t it great Goldfinch when we can finally \"see\" the molehills!
March 19th, 2018 03:19
Distractions.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ For a very beautiful distraction ! I have lots of meditation CD\'s which I play in the car and in the bedroom to send me to sleep ! Thanks for sharing ~ nice Poem too ! BRIAN
March 18th, 2018 18:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ For a very beautiful distraction ! I have lots of meditation CD\'s which I play in the car and in the bedroom to send me to sleep ! Thanks for sharing ~ nice Poem too ! BRIAN
March 18th, 2018 18:48
Distractions.
Lauraš» said:
Gold,
I certainly agree with the comments made!
By the time we realize how simple it could have been, we will be gone!
I enjoyed Richterās āSleepā! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the clip!
~Laura~
March 18th, 2018 10:03
Lauraš» said:
Gold,
I certainly agree with the comments made!
By the time we realize how simple it could have been, we will be gone!
I enjoyed Richterās āSleepā! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the clip!
~Laura~
March 18th, 2018 10:03
Distractions.
willyweed said:
we all need only one thing to be happy...Love given and returned. excellent write G you take it to the next level. ww
March 18th, 2018 08:04
willyweed said:
we all need only one thing to be happy...Love given and returned. excellent write G you take it to the next level. ww
March 18th, 2018 08:04
Distractions.
orchidee said:
I was not distracted reading this fine poem, Gold. I forget - were there many distractions in 1066? Well, one anyway, when I said \'Look up\' to Harold.
March 18th, 2018 05:45
orchidee said:
I was not distracted reading this fine poem, Gold. I forget - were there many distractions in 1066? Well, one anyway, when I said \'Look up\' to Harold.
March 18th, 2018 05:45
Distractions.
Lorna said:
It takes so long to learn this message and it\'s such a good one!
March 18th, 2018 04:20
Lorna said:
It takes so long to learn this message and it\'s such a good one!
March 18th, 2018 04:20
Distractions.
Michael Edwards said:
So well said - you don\'t material goods or money to be happy or laugh. Good write - now to listen to Richter
March 18th, 2018 03:52
Michael Edwards said:
So well said - you don\'t material goods or money to be happy or laugh. Good write - now to listen to Richter
March 18th, 2018 03:52
Gibberish?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ There\'s no answer to THAT ~ Yours BRIAN
March 17th, 2018 16:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ There\'s no answer to THAT ~ Yours BRIAN
March 17th, 2018 16:45
Gibberish?
orchidee said:
Now I\'m proof-reading this! lol. Line 8: Should it be \"Now YOU\'RE asking why! Why?\"
March 17th, 2018 14:21
orchidee said:
Now I\'m proof-reading this! lol. Line 8: Should it be \"Now YOU\'RE asking why! Why?\"
March 17th, 2018 14:21
Gibberish?
kevin browne said:
a good load of fun in this humorous write, GF. keep them coming, the world needs gibberish.
March 17th, 2018 14:14
kevin browne said:
a good load of fun in this humorous write, GF. keep them coming, the world needs gibberish.
March 17th, 2018 14:14
Gibberish?
Lorna said:
Great laugh! Oh the who\'s what\'s where\'s and wherefore\'s of life .... just answer the question!!!! ha ha.......
March 17th, 2018 06:20
Lorna said:
Great laugh! Oh the who\'s what\'s where\'s and wherefore\'s of life .... just answer the question!!!! ha ha.......
March 17th, 2018 06:20
Gibberish?
willyweed said:
you didn\'t answer the question very merry write indeed. ww
March 17th, 2018 05:48
willyweed said:
you didn\'t answer the question very merry write indeed. ww
March 17th, 2018 05:48
Gibberish?
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Gold. Oh, I worry about whether \'?\' or \'!\' should be included in inverted commas (or speech marks) or not. It keeps me awake at night ya know, these sort of things. Then I start thinking a lot - a slippery slope, to be sure!
I mean - we don\'t actually SAY a question mark, or exclamation mark, do we? heehee.
I miss out some punctuation on purpose in my poems. I add it where things may otherwise be unclear.
March 17th, 2018 03:06
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Gold. Oh, I worry about whether \'?\' or \'!\' should be included in inverted commas (or speech marks) or not. It keeps me awake at night ya know, these sort of things. Then I start thinking a lot - a slippery slope, to be sure!
I mean - we don\'t actually SAY a question mark, or exclamation mark, do we? heehee.
I miss out some punctuation on purpose in my poems. I add it where things may otherwise be unclear.
March 17th, 2018 03:06
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