Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



The Last Station of The Cross.
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a vivid reminder here of the deep and lasting sacrifice at that special time - - thank you dear friend for this posting.

April 14th, 2017 05:28

The Last Station of The Cross.
Michael Edwards said:

A stunning piece of writing - worthy of the occasion.

April 14th, 2017 02:56

The Last Station of The Cross.
orchidee said:

One more comment! This does look almost cross-shaped, this poem!

April 14th, 2017 02:31

The Last Station of The Cross.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing BROTHER ! The message of EASTER is the ONLY hope for the Human Race ! In AD 33 The Lord Jesus Christ died on a Cross ~ The Just for the Unjust to restore our relationship with GOD ~ AMEN. The Stations of the Cross is a very beautiful and precious reenactment of the last days of JESUS ! Thank GOD ~ Up from the grave he AROSE ~on Easter SUNDAY ~ AMEN. Please check my Good Friday Poem ~ BRIAN

April 14th, 2017 02:30

The Last Station of The Cross.
orchidee said:

It\'s a shame if some places have nothing at all for some events. Then people may not even have a choice. They have to go elsewhere.

April 14th, 2017 02:12

The Last Station of The Cross.
orchidee said:

Sensitive write. Atmospheric too - darkness at noonday. I feel we should recall the events in some way, even if not going to church, at least in our private memories. Some places don\'t observe the \'church year\' much. But it corresponds to the Old Testament Passover Festival, that they remembered then.

April 14th, 2017 02:06

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
P.H.Rose said:

I have no idea what you
Are saying in the comments
Box but I love the poem..
I\'m afraid I\'m illiterate and
Have trouble with longer
Words, my vocabulary is
A bit basic but I get along.
Spell check and predictive
Text are my savour...

April 13th, 2017 17:56

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thanks Ephraim, much appreciated.

April 13th, 2017 08:38

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Brian. FIBS are great fun to do but the supyllsble count can be frustrating sometimes.

April 13th, 2017 08:05

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks BROTHER ~ great strucure and great content ~ linking the celestial bodies (Sun & Moon) with love ! As I sometimes croon to ANGELA \"Night & Day you are the only one\" I\'ve tried a CARBONARA must also try a FIBONACCI ~ Thanks BRIAN

April 13th, 2017 07:53

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Tony, much appreciated.

April 13th, 2017 07:47

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 13th, 2017 07:29

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you WBL romance is never far away in our lives.

April 13th, 2017 07:04

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
WriteBeLight said:

Very romantic write Goldfinch :)

April 13th, 2017 06:30

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Michael Edwards said:

Great piece - you have encouraged me - I\'ve made a note of the form and will try it out sometime.

April 13th, 2017 02:09

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Garry said:

Very neatly done. Cleverly constructed and flows well. Great ideas.
But, i mean really... A poem structured on the Fibonacci sequence. Jeez I thought I was wierd .

April 13th, 2017 01:52

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
orchidee said:

Good write, and those syllables thought out. Erm.... and then it rained?! No, Porchi, rain is not in this poem! heehee.

April 13th, 2017 01:45

Neighbour Watching
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha... Absolutly
Spot on GF60

April 12th, 2017 15:53

Neighbour Watching
Goldfinch60 said:

Thanks Phil, coffee of course is also important. Many is the time when I have sat on the top of a hill watching natures glory around me drinking coffee.

April 12th, 2017 12:44

Neighbour Watching
MendedFences27 said:

Our tongues are going to melt away as we adapt to the external mode of communication. I\'ve seen my Millennials all four of them sitting on the sofas texting one another, not a sound of verbal utterance. My wife and I sat out today and watched the hawks hunting, so much more interesting than life with the Kardashians. Cell phones and all the other et ceteras of electronics, are murdering the language and the culture. I must admit, though, the wife and I did have our coffees. Nice one, this. Loved it.- Phil A.

April 12th, 2017 11:41

Neighbour Watching
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FOR SHARING ANDY ~ I refuse to have one they are very antisocial and intrusive ! There is nothing worse than the Foible Moan of the Mobile Phone ! That\'s a Spoonerism for you ! Yours BRIAN

April 12th, 2017 08:47

Neighbour Watching
willyweed said:

smart phones make for stupid people
Goobers on parade!

April 12th, 2017 07:54

Neighbour Watching
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write.

April 12th, 2017 07:26

Neighbour Watching
WriteBeLight said:

They are missing out! I have seen that so much, in particular, with the youngsters. They are just plain missing out on the wonders of being outside in the great weather. Great write.

April 12th, 2017 06:11

Neighbour Watching
Garry said:

Sadly true. Well done

April 12th, 2017 03:32

Neighbour Watching
Frank Prem said:

Pretty annoying. The malaise if the modern.

April 12th, 2017 03:18

Neighbour Watching
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Fay, it is seen everywhere nowadays even when I am walking with nature there are people plugged into their mobiles. They miss the sound of nature completely!

April 12th, 2017 03:01

Neighbour Watching
Fay Slimm. said:

There is a time and a place for these electronic devices - natural beauty has to take central stage to bequeath its wonderful benefits . Thanks for this good reminder my friend.

April 12th, 2017 02:53

Neighbour Watching
Michael Edwards said:

So few actually enjoy the environment and the beauty of nature and their lives are so much poorer for it - if only they realised.

April 12th, 2017 02:04

Neighbour Watching
orchidee said:

Good write. Maybe it\'s necessary in this technological age - but not all the time! It may be a sort of companion for them.

April 12th, 2017 01:58



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