Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



As You Like It.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you WW, one day maybe.

March 15th, 2017 09:04

As You Like It.
willyweed said:

yes it could be just that easy. but for greed in its many colors? nice thoughts goldfinch!

March 15th, 2017 08:52

As You Like It.
orchidee said:

Good write. I don\'t agree with all of Shakespeare\'s quotes, sayings, etc.

March 15th, 2017 03:11

As You Like It.
Michael Edwards said:

Sorry couldn\'t resist that! This reflects the hopes we all bear and a great write into the bargain.

March 15th, 2017 03:07

As You Like It.
Fay Slimm. said:

You paint a picture of global paradise to which I add a loud Amen dear poet friend. May that wish for safety and peace one day come true. A n inspiring read.

March 15th, 2017 02:57

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Christina8 said:

Absolutely beautiful. I wish all end of life stories ended like this, not in hospitals and such. Wonderful read.

March 14th, 2017 12:45

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orchidee said:

I dunno about this Karma chappie - or chap-ess. Is ignorance bliss in this case? I only know about porkies and sherries - oh and 1066! heehee.

March 14th, 2017 11:10

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING GF ~ A very poingnant scenario ~ beatifully expressed in a graphic poem ! I felt I was actually there ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN

March 14th, 2017 06:56

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Pintu Mahakul said:

It is so sad that death is calling her and she knows this. Sadness is well expressed in this magnificent poem. Wonderful sharing!

March 14th, 2017 06:39

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WriteBeLight said:

Beautiful expression Goldfinch!

March 14th, 2017 06:18

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willyweed said:

one phase ends another shall begin paradise is waiting love will have no end. nice work good as gold!

March 14th, 2017 05:46

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Very well written! So very beautiful! The completion to a full and beautiful life!

March 14th, 2017 05:13

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orchidee said:

Sensitive write. I dunno about this Karma chappy myself though. I wish I would shut up sometimes! lol.

March 14th, 2017 03:48

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Fay Slimm. said:

Sad but so beautiful - everyone needs a time of happy departure. A read to remember.

March 14th, 2017 03:28

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Goldfinch60 said:

Karma indeed. Thank you Michael.

March 14th, 2017 03:01

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Michael Edwards said:

I really do like this. You did so well to pick up on the inspiration. Karma?

March 14th, 2017 02:55

Protecting Moon.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you so much tepo, you are very kind.

March 13th, 2017 15:41

Protecting Moon.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you WBL, much appreciated.

March 13th, 2017 11:59

Protecting Moon.
WriteBeLight said:

Very nice Goldfinch.

March 13th, 2017 11:48

Protecting Moon.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you WW. Rhyming is not normally my thing so when I do rhyme it surprises people.

March 13th, 2017 09:43

Protecting Moon.
willyweed said:

I like the way your poem provoked these writers I hope it provokes me as well, and soon but right now nothing rhymes with moon? good one Goldy! ww

March 13th, 2017 09:26

Protecting Moon.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

March 13th, 2017 08:02

Protecting Moon.
kevin browne said:

your lovely poem reminded me of this. \'I see the moon
and the moon sees me.
God bless the moon
and God bless me\'. I love your words protecting our sun. thank you..!

March 13th, 2017 07:08

Protecting Moon.
orchidee said:

Good write. You know that man in the moon?! This reminds me similarly of the sun in:
\'The sun that bids us rest is waking
Our brethren \'neath the western sky (From \'The day thou gavest Lord is ended\').

March 13th, 2017 03:47

Protecting Moon.
Michael Edwards said:

I do admire you for being able to come up with such a great theme and being able to write such great lines in such a quick time - each of mine takes several days and several bits of tweaking before I reach okayness.

March 13th, 2017 03:32

Protecting Moon.
Goldfinch60 said:

Glad I could have been of service. Thank you as well.

March 13th, 2017 03:29

Protecting Moon.
Philip said:

I missed that lovely moon, but the sun has now greeted me. I hope the moon is doing it\'s job somewhere in the world. You have given me a great start to Monday. Phil.G

March 13th, 2017 03:21

Words on This Page.
Augustus said:

Yes, it would have to be magical in some way. I feel your pain. Hugs.

March 12th, 2017 19:59

Acromegaly.
Samreen Chowdhury said:

This is amazing

March 12th, 2017 15:12

Words on This Page.
Samreen Chowdhury said:

Wow beautifully written

March 12th, 2017 15:12



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