Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
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Pintu Mahakul said:
It is so sad that death is calling her and she knows this. Sadness is well expressed in this magnificent poem. Wonderful sharing!
March 14th, 2017 06:39
Pintu Mahakul said:
It is so sad that death is calling her and she knows this. Sadness is well expressed in this magnificent poem. Wonderful sharing!
March 14th, 2017 06:39
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willyweed said:
one phase ends another shall begin paradise is waiting love will have no end. nice work good as gold!
March 14th, 2017 05:46
willyweed said:
one phase ends another shall begin paradise is waiting love will have no end. nice work good as gold!
March 14th, 2017 05:46
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very well written! So very beautiful! The completion to a full and beautiful life!
March 14th, 2017 05:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very well written! So very beautiful! The completion to a full and beautiful life!
March 14th, 2017 05:13
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orchidee said:
Sensitive write. I dunno about this Karma chappy myself though. I wish I would shut up sometimes! lol.
March 14th, 2017 03:48
orchidee said:
Sensitive write. I dunno about this Karma chappy myself though. I wish I would shut up sometimes! lol.
March 14th, 2017 03:48
She.
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but so beautiful - everyone needs a time of happy departure. A read to remember.
March 14th, 2017 03:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but so beautiful - everyone needs a time of happy departure. A read to remember.
March 14th, 2017 03:28
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Michael Edwards said:
I really do like this. You did so well to pick up on the inspiration. Karma?
March 14th, 2017 02:55
Michael Edwards said:
I really do like this. You did so well to pick up on the inspiration. Karma?
March 14th, 2017 02:55
Protecting Moon.
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you WW. Rhyming is not normally my thing so when I do rhyme it surprises people.
March 13th, 2017 09:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you WW. Rhyming is not normally my thing so when I do rhyme it surprises people.
March 13th, 2017 09:43
Protecting Moon.
willyweed said:
I like the way your poem provoked these writers I hope it provokes me as well, and soon but right now nothing rhymes with moon? good one Goldy! ww
March 13th, 2017 09:26
willyweed said:
I like the way your poem provoked these writers I hope it provokes me as well, and soon but right now nothing rhymes with moon? good one Goldy! ww
March 13th, 2017 09:26
Protecting Moon.
kevin browne said:
your lovely poem reminded me of this. \'I see the moon
and the moon sees me.
God bless the moon
and God bless me\'. I love your words protecting our sun. thank you..!
March 13th, 2017 07:08
kevin browne said:
your lovely poem reminded me of this. \'I see the moon
and the moon sees me.
God bless the moon
and God bless me\'. I love your words protecting our sun. thank you..!
March 13th, 2017 07:08
Protecting Moon.
orchidee said:
Good write. You know that man in the moon?! This reminds me similarly of the sun in:
\'The sun that bids us rest is waking
Our brethren \'neath the western sky (From \'The day thou gavest Lord is ended\').
March 13th, 2017 03:47
orchidee said:
Good write. You know that man in the moon?! This reminds me similarly of the sun in:
\'The sun that bids us rest is waking
Our brethren \'neath the western sky (From \'The day thou gavest Lord is ended\').
March 13th, 2017 03:47
Protecting Moon.
Michael Edwards said:
I do admire you for being able to come up with such a great theme and being able to write such great lines in such a quick time - each of mine takes several days and several bits of tweaking before I reach okayness.
March 13th, 2017 03:32
Michael Edwards said:
I do admire you for being able to come up with such a great theme and being able to write such great lines in such a quick time - each of mine takes several days and several bits of tweaking before I reach okayness.
March 13th, 2017 03:32
Protecting Moon.
Goldfinch60 said:
Glad I could have been of service. Thank you as well.
March 13th, 2017 03:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Glad I could have been of service. Thank you as well.
March 13th, 2017 03:29
Protecting Moon.
Philip said:
I missed that lovely moon, but the sun has now greeted me. I hope the moon is doing it\'s job somewhere in the world. You have given me a great start to Monday. Phil.G
March 13th, 2017 03:21
Philip said:
I missed that lovely moon, but the sun has now greeted me. I hope the moon is doing it\'s job somewhere in the world. You have given me a great start to Monday. Phil.G
March 13th, 2017 03:21
Words on This Page.
Augustus said:
Yes, it would have to be magical in some way. I feel your pain. Hugs.
March 12th, 2017 19:59
Augustus said:
Yes, it would have to be magical in some way. I feel your pain. Hugs.
March 12th, 2017 19:59
Words on This Page.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GF ~ I agree. We need to be inspired to write fine words (as you have done) and to be complimentary and supportive in our comments. \"When e\'er I find just the right word ~ the PEN is always mightier than the sword !\" Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
March 12th, 2017 10:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GF ~ I agree. We need to be inspired to write fine words (as you have done) and to be complimentary and supportive in our comments. \"When e\'er I find just the right word ~ the PEN is always mightier than the sword !\" Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
March 12th, 2017 10:29
Words on This Page.
rrodriguez said:
Indeed, the power of words can really transform & destroy. Your thought capture what each of us think about as we come to this page to open up and impact the live of all who read our words. Great write and impactful.
March 12th, 2017 10:28
rrodriguez said:
Indeed, the power of words can really transform & destroy. Your thought capture what each of us think about as we come to this page to open up and impact the live of all who read our words. Great write and impactful.
March 12th, 2017 10:28
Words on This Page.
MendedFences27 said:
\" It\'s only words and words are all I have, \" from a song lost in my memory, but your words here are what we all wish could be, a world at peace with love and harmony. Poets of the world unite!! Loved this one. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 10:02
MendedFences27 said:
\" It\'s only words and words are all I have, \" from a song lost in my memory, but your words here are what we all wish could be, a world at peace with love and harmony. Poets of the world unite!! Loved this one. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 10:02
Words on This Page.
orchidee said:
Words, I need no words,.... from Neighbours, Corrie, and all that rubbish! lol. \'\'Soap\' opera gets in your eyes!
March 12th, 2017 09:01
orchidee said:
Words, I need no words,.... from Neighbours, Corrie, and all that rubbish! lol. \'\'Soap\' opera gets in your eyes!
March 12th, 2017 09:01
Words on This Page.
Michael Edwards said:
Oh words - and so well expressed - I love stretching and manipulating words but get so annoyed when they are misused - no such problems here.
March 12th, 2017 04:12
Michael Edwards said:
Oh words - and so well expressed - I love stretching and manipulating words but get so annoyed when they are misused - no such problems here.
March 12th, 2017 04:12
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