Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Feathers.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ A quintisensial quatrain and a perfect picture ~ thanks. If you voice be silences ~ then let you quill quiver with indignation ! BRIAN
April 18th, 2017 04:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ A quintisensial quatrain and a perfect picture ~ thanks. If you voice be silences ~ then let you quill quiver with indignation ! BRIAN
April 18th, 2017 04:03
Feathers.
Garry said:
Well done. A fine example of the classic 4-liner. A much underated form. Certainly not enough of them on MPS.
Short, vivid and creates an image in very few words.
April 18th, 2017 02:32
Garry said:
Well done. A fine example of the classic 4-liner. A much underated form. Certainly not enough of them on MPS.
Short, vivid and creates an image in very few words.
April 18th, 2017 02:32
Feathers.
orchidee said:
Oh yes, we both had them at school, didn\'t we, millions of years ago? Well, around 1066 anyway. Did you get a quill from that pterodactyl?! Good write.
April 18th, 2017 01:42
orchidee said:
Oh yes, we both had them at school, didn\'t we, millions of years ago? Well, around 1066 anyway. Did you get a quill from that pterodactyl?! Good write.
April 18th, 2017 01:42
Gnossienne.
willyweed said:
sounds like beautiful music to me, nice write goldfinch.
April 17th, 2017 08:56
willyweed said:
sounds like beautiful music to me, nice write goldfinch.
April 17th, 2017 08:56
Gnossienne.
Michael Edwards said:
He certainly wrote some really superb piano pieces sadly much of his work overlooked by his famous Gymnopedie - well complemented by your verse.
April 17th, 2017 02:51
Michael Edwards said:
He certainly wrote some really superb piano pieces sadly much of his work overlooked by his famous Gymnopedie - well complemented by your verse.
April 17th, 2017 02:51
Finding Words.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very true BROTHER in the end the PEN (or PC) is much mightier than the SWORD ! What is poetry ? Just WORDS ~ but WORDS coined an arranged by the mind of the POET. What is the BIBLE ? Just words but words arranged by the mind of GOD ~ AMEN ~ Your Friend BRIAN
April 16th, 2017 07:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very true BROTHER in the end the PEN (or PC) is much mightier than the SWORD ! What is poetry ? Just WORDS ~ but WORDS coined an arranged by the mind of the POET. What is the BIBLE ? Just words but words arranged by the mind of GOD ~ AMEN ~ Your Friend BRIAN
April 16th, 2017 07:08
Finding Words.
WriteBeLight said:
Words are wonderful, especially verbs! Great poetry Goldfinch!
April 16th, 2017 05:55
WriteBeLight said:
Words are wonderful, especially verbs! Great poetry Goldfinch!
April 16th, 2017 05:55
Finding Words.
SadInterior said:
Man, wish I could be as good as a poet as you. great job
April 16th, 2017 02:29
SadInterior said:
Man, wish I could be as good as a poet as you. great job
April 16th, 2017 02:29
Finding Words.
SadInterior said:
Man, Wish I could be as good as a poet as you
April 16th, 2017 02:29
SadInterior said:
Man, Wish I could be as good as a poet as you
April 16th, 2017 02:29
Finding Words.
orchidee said:
I dunno what words I may say after me sherries! oohhh heehee.
April 16th, 2017 01:40
orchidee said:
I dunno what words I may say after me sherries! oohhh heehee.
April 16th, 2017 01:40
Finding Words.
orchidee said:
Good write. Not to deny the value of words, though I suppose there\'s times too when we may have no words, and \'just being there\' can be enough.
April 16th, 2017 01:39
orchidee said:
Good write. Not to deny the value of words, though I suppose there\'s times too when we may have no words, and \'just being there\' can be enough.
April 16th, 2017 01:39
The Roar of Silence.
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Brian, silence can be so special, in our Good Friday service people were remarking on how moving the periods of silence were during the service.
April 15th, 2017 13:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Brian, silence can be so special, in our Good Friday service people were remarking on how moving the periods of silence were during the service.
April 15th, 2017 13:18
The Roar of Silence.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
And in the naked light I saw
Ten~thousand people maybe more
People talking without speaking
People hearing without listening
People writing songs
That voices never heard
And no one dared
Disturb THE SOUND OF SILENCE !
THANKS BROTHER I have seen (and heard) John Cages 4\' 33\' performed on stage ~ very moving. It always reminds me of Simon & Garfunkel\'s \"Sound of Silence\". Different people experience different emotions during a performance of 4\' 33\" but (in my experience) nobody is unmoved by it ! That is the power of structured SILENCE. the Scriptures say \"There will be SILENCE in Heaven for 30 minutes\". In these days of wall to wall MUSAK ~ I\'m looking forward to that. I have attended Quaker Meetings and the periods of SILENCE are very precious. Thanks BRIAN
April 15th, 2017 13:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
And in the naked light I saw
Ten~thousand people maybe more
People talking without speaking
People hearing without listening
People writing songs
That voices never heard
And no one dared
Disturb THE SOUND OF SILENCE !
THANKS BROTHER I have seen (and heard) John Cages 4\' 33\' performed on stage ~ very moving. It always reminds me of Simon & Garfunkel\'s \"Sound of Silence\". Different people experience different emotions during a performance of 4\' 33\" but (in my experience) nobody is unmoved by it ! That is the power of structured SILENCE. the Scriptures say \"There will be SILENCE in Heaven for 30 minutes\". In these days of wall to wall MUSAK ~ I\'m looking forward to that. I have attended Quaker Meetings and the periods of SILENCE are very precious. Thanks BRIAN
April 15th, 2017 13:07
The Roar of Silence.
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Diamond. Yes I agree ease only comes when you are relaxed and confident in what you are doing.
April 15th, 2017 07:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Diamond. Yes I agree ease only comes when you are relaxed and confident in what you are doing.
April 15th, 2017 07:53
The Roar of Silence.
Michael Edwards said:
Just great - a real tribute to this unheard piece.
The silent wind and string
to which I listened
in mute admiration
and eagerly awaited
the next performance
heard in silence.
April 15th, 2017 03:30
Michael Edwards said:
Just great - a real tribute to this unheard piece.
The silent wind and string
to which I listened
in mute admiration
and eagerly awaited
the next performance
heard in silence.
April 15th, 2017 03:30
The Roar of Silence.
orchidee said:
Erm, could anyone play it? Or do you have to open and close the piano lid at certain times?
April 15th, 2017 01:53
orchidee said:
Erm, could anyone play it? Or do you have to open and close the piano lid at certain times?
April 15th, 2017 01:53
The Roar of Silence.
Garry said:
Very good.
Have you actually seen it performed.?
Great video.
A truly bizarre idea.
April 15th, 2017 01:51
Garry said:
Very good.
Have you actually seen it performed.?
Great video.
A truly bizarre idea.
April 15th, 2017 01:51
The Roar of Silence.
orchidee said:
Sings: Silence is golden....... Then I ruined it, with a very loud CCOOOOEEEE! lol.
April 15th, 2017 01:41
orchidee said:
Sings: Silence is golden....... Then I ruined it, with a very loud CCOOOOEEEE! lol.
April 15th, 2017 01:41
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