Comments received on poems by orchidee



Woof - cats!
Saxon Crow said:

Booooo! Dogs rule cats drool. What do we want? Dogs! When do we want them? Always.

August 8th, 2022 02:44

Transfiguration Time
Bella Shepard said:

Beautiful, crystal clear sight. To see the truth in all its splendor. Good write my friend!

August 7th, 2022 13:08

Transfiguration Time
Goldfinch60 said:

good one Orchi.

August 7th, 2022 02:17

Times Of Trials
Goldfinch60 said:

No I am not fading out, just not believing organised religion as it deserted me when Joyce went into dementia and all praying and worship did nothing to help her.
Good one Orchi.

Andy

August 7th, 2022 00:20

Times Of Trials
Bella Shepard said:

What a fitting verse for the times in which we live. Good for you dear friend.

August 6th, 2022 12:31

Times Of Trials
Saxon Crow said:

Nicely penned Orchi

August 6th, 2022 02:03

Times Of Trials
orchidee said:

You fading out, Gold (Andy) - verse 5?! Aww!

August 6th, 2022 01:49

Protection Place
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 6th, 2022 00:19

Protection Place
orchidee said:

Sometimes a 4 verse (maximum) hymn-poem of 4 lines each can help to concentrate thoughts. Though sometimes it may be less or more verses, or 6 line or 8 line verses.
Not forgetting the metres - or in my poems, more accurately, formats. Strictly speaking, metres put accents on certain syllables.

August 5th, 2022 01:59

Led By The Light
Bella Shepard said:

The beauty of light is that is exposes all, so that we may be enlightened. A good write my friend.

August 4th, 2022 14:13

Led By The Light
Neville said:



I kinda like what Fay said :)

August 4th, 2022 08:56

Led By The Light
jazzwa30 said:

love it good read

August 4th, 2022 08:40

Led By The Light
Fay Slimm. said:

Nothing like light to expose dark deeds my friend - -- being children of light is the best way to live..

August 4th, 2022 02:12

Seeds Scene
Bella Shepard said:

Seeds and soil, such a beautiful analogy of that reciprocal relationship. Can\'t have one without the other.

August 3rd, 2022 12:15

Seeds Scene
Goldfinch60 said:

May those seeds always bring love and wonder to our lives Orchi.

Andy

August 3rd, 2022 01:51

Seeds Scene
orchidee said:

We are not the seeds. The seed is the word of God. We are the soil types.

August 3rd, 2022 01:42

Excellent Exhortings
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 3rd, 2022 01:02

Excellent Exhortings
Raven333 said:

Really loved reading this write, well written with great flow

August 2nd, 2022 14:59

Excellent Exhortings
Neville said:



Lost for words ................... I am :)

August 2nd, 2022 09:05

Excellent Exhortings
arqios said:

Love that word, \"weal.\" Brings to mind so many other words and meanings.

August 2nd, 2022 07:07

Time And Trust
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 1st, 2022 02:32

Sheep Security
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 1st, 2022 01:03

Sheep Security
Bella Shepard said:

I love the image as Jesus as Good Shepherd. A lovely write my friend.

July 31st, 2022 11:07

Sheep Security
Neville said:


sheep dogs and electric fences both worked in my day :)

July 31st, 2022 01:52

Storm Stilled
Bella Shepard said:

I love this story of Jesus, it begs the question \"What do we really have to fear?\" Great write my friend.

July 30th, 2022 13:32

Storm Stilled
Neville said:


I started to feel sea-sick part way through .. so shall reserve my judgement until I feel able to return :)

July 30th, 2022 08:24

Salvation Sure
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

July 30th, 2022 00:54

Salvation Sure
Neville said:



I feel certain that this is a hymn poem in 6.6.8.6 format .. unless of course, we are both mistaken .. Neville :)


July 29th, 2022 13:23

Salvation Sure
Jerry Reynolds said:

Fine one, Orchi.
A turn toward hope is good.

July 29th, 2022 09:03

Salvation Sure
arqios said:

With Him our host no one is lost.

July 29th, 2022 06:22



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