Comments received on poems by orchidee
Innocents Intonation
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I know this tune well - it\'s commonly sung when the gospel reading is the account in Mark of when Jesus, right after John Baptist baptizes him in the Jordan, goes into the wilderness to be tempted by the devil. The tune is variously called HEINLEIN or AUS TIEFER NOT. It\'s difficult to separate that text from the tune.
You might consider, as an aid to the singer, accenting syllables with unexpected stresses: thus \"When Heród in wrath did deign\"
December 28th, 2020 19:58
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I know this tune well - it\'s commonly sung when the gospel reading is the account in Mark of when Jesus, right after John Baptist baptizes him in the Jordan, goes into the wilderness to be tempted by the devil. The tune is variously called HEINLEIN or AUS TIEFER NOT. It\'s difficult to separate that text from the tune.
You might consider, as an aid to the singer, accenting syllables with unexpected stresses: thus \"When Heród in wrath did deign\"
December 28th, 2020 19:58
Innocents Intonation
Jerry Reynolds said:
Orchi - I enjoyed it. Happy New Year
December 28th, 2020 18:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Orchi - I enjoyed it. Happy New Year
December 28th, 2020 18:20
Innocents Intonation
FineB said:
Hi Orchidee,
A great write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 28th, 2020 11:53
FineB said:
Hi Orchidee,
A great write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 28th, 2020 11:53
Light And Love
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
\"Be\" in the 2nd and 3rd verses, where one would expect \"is\" and \"are\" respectively. African-American Vernacular English would permit \"bes\" (pronounced beez) here.
December 27th, 2020 15:59
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
\"Be\" in the 2nd and 3rd verses, where one would expect \"is\" and \"are\" respectively. African-American Vernacular English would permit \"bes\" (pronounced beez) here.
December 27th, 2020 15:59
Light And Love
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I don\'t know the tune ALBANO, a C.M. tune that I see is in Hymns Ancient & Modern Revised, not in the 1982 Episcopal hymnal (though it was in the 1940 version).
Why do you usually not give the verb \'to be\' its inflection?
You have a typo in your third verse.
December 27th, 2020 14:11
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I don\'t know the tune ALBANO, a C.M. tune that I see is in Hymns Ancient & Modern Revised, not in the 1982 Episcopal hymnal (though it was in the 1940 version).
Why do you usually not give the verb \'to be\' its inflection?
You have a typo in your third verse.
December 27th, 2020 14:11
Light And Love
Samer Amin said:
1 John 4:12
No one has ever seen God; but if we love one another, God lives in us and his love is made complete in us.
December 27th, 2020 10:18
Samer Amin said:
1 John 4:12
No one has ever seen God; but if we love one another, God lives in us and his love is made complete in us.
December 27th, 2020 10:18
Light And Love
FineB said:
Hi Orchidee,
A good write.
Beautiful.
We need to pray for those who walk in darkness.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 27th, 2020 07:04
FineB said:
Hi Orchidee,
A good write.
Beautiful.
We need to pray for those who walk in darkness.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 27th, 2020 07:04
Light And Love
dusk arising said:
A very good message in your piece today Orchidee.
Hate is such a negative emotion.
December 27th, 2020 06:28
dusk arising said:
A very good message in your piece today Orchidee.
Hate is such a negative emotion.
December 27th, 2020 06:28
Light And Love
Neville said:
Hate is such a horrid word ... one of the worst four letter words known to me ....................................... I do like love tho\'.......................... Neville
December 27th, 2020 05:35
Neville said:
Hate is such a horrid word ... one of the worst four letter words known to me ....................................... I do like love tho\'.......................... Neville
December 27th, 2020 05:35
Light And Love
Michael Edwards said:
Keep writing Orchi - Miss Berles approves.
December 27th, 2020 04:45
Michael Edwards said:
Keep writing Orchi - Miss Berles approves.
December 27th, 2020 04:45
Light And Love
Poetic Dan said:
Actually enjoyed that read, from my own beliefs ;)
persistence is the key!
December 27th, 2020 03:58
Poetic Dan said:
Actually enjoyed that read, from my own beliefs ;)
persistence is the key!
December 27th, 2020 03:58
Martyr Missive
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I suppose this text is to fit the Christmas carol \"Good King Wenceslas\", set by Anglican hymnographer John Mason Neale to the tune TEMPUS ADEST FLORIDUM.
Deathlessly parodied by Welt Kelly\'s Pogo as
Good King Sourkraut looked out
on his feets uneven
December 26th, 2020 19:59
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I suppose this text is to fit the Christmas carol \"Good King Wenceslas\", set by Anglican hymnographer John Mason Neale to the tune TEMPUS ADEST FLORIDUM.
Deathlessly parodied by Welt Kelly\'s Pogo as
Good King Sourkraut looked out
on his feets uneven
December 26th, 2020 19:59
Martyr Missive
Neville said:
a deceptively deep hymn poem and true.................................................. N
December 26th, 2020 13:40
Neville said:
a deceptively deep hymn poem and true.................................................. N
December 26th, 2020 13:40
Martyr Missive
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine piece of work Orchi. Happy New Year
December 26th, 2020 11:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine piece of work Orchi. Happy New Year
December 26th, 2020 11:03
Christmas Continues
FineB said:
Hello Orchidee,
Merry Xmas.
A great write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 26th, 2020 06:21
FineB said:
Hello Orchidee,
Merry Xmas.
A great write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 26th, 2020 06:21
Christmas Continues
Jerry Reynolds said:
Orchidee you are a wonder. Merry Christmas.
December 25th, 2020 09:16
Jerry Reynolds said:
Orchidee you are a wonder. Merry Christmas.
December 25th, 2020 09:16
Benedictus Blessing
FineB said:
Merry Xmas Orchidee.
A beautiful Xmas write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 24th, 2020 19:58
FineB said:
Merry Xmas Orchidee.
A beautiful Xmas write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 24th, 2020 19:58
Benedictus Blessing
Jerry Reynolds said:
Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:57
Jerry Reynolds said:
Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:57
Benedictus Blessing
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I\'ve always found this tune with its irregular rhythm very difficult to sing, but I can sing your words to it.
\"Es ist ein Ross\" means \"There is a horse\". The name of the tune is ES IST EIN ROS, often written Es ist ein\' Ros\' entsprungen, literally \'there is a rose arisen\'. The two apostrophes indicate that a final -e has been omitted (eine Rose), for metrical reasons.
December 24th, 2020 13:46
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I\'ve always found this tune with its irregular rhythm very difficult to sing, but I can sing your words to it.
\"Es ist ein Ross\" means \"There is a horse\". The name of the tune is ES IST EIN ROS, often written Es ist ein\' Ros\' entsprungen, literally \'there is a rose arisen\'. The two apostrophes indicate that a final -e has been omitted (eine Rose), for metrical reasons.
December 24th, 2020 13:46
Faith Through Fears
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one O - have you got your stresses right?
December 23rd, 2020 17:19
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one O - have you got your stresses right?
December 23rd, 2020 17:19
Rejoice, He Reigns!
RDS said:
A thumping hymn orchidee I almost did want to sing it!
J
December 23rd, 2020 17:01
RDS said:
A thumping hymn orchidee I almost did want to sing it!
J
December 23rd, 2020 17:01
Faith Through Fears
Fay Slimm. said:
Faith despite fear is described so well here Orchi.
December 23rd, 2020 17:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Faith despite fear is described so well here Orchi.
December 23rd, 2020 17:01
« Return to the profile of orchidee
