Comments received on poems by orchidee



Redeemed By The Son
dusk arising said:

In your hymn composition life did you ever have a punk period?

(and are there any photos)

February 22nd, 2021 04:49

Afflictions Assistings
Neville said:



I liked these words ... so I did ....

February 22nd, 2021 03:04

Afflictions Assistings
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

February 22nd, 2021 01:06

Afflictions Assistings
FredPeyer said:

Laws and more laws. I am probably breaking a bunch of them every day, not knowing they exist.

February 21st, 2021 19:28

Afflictions Assistings
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Orchi.

February 21st, 2021 15:22

Policies In Giving - Giving Series (4)
AwHec8 said:

The Gift of giving written in this Poem strikes my heart well. Blessings all around indeed. Great Write orchidee. Don
Side note: Now that you lit the Fire of giving in me, \"Where do I send my donation?\"

February 21st, 2021 11:38

Past And Present
AwHec8 said:

Love this Poem orchidee. The musical choir is bonus. Don

February 21st, 2021 11:25

Policies In Giving - Giving Series (4)
FredPeyer said:

I guess they didn\'t have the Salvation Army around then.

February 20th, 2021 11:30

Policies In Giving - Giving Series (4)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well done Orchi.

February 20th, 2021 09:14

Policies In Giving - Giving Series (4)
Goldfinch60 said:

Love shown is always gratefully received.

Andy

February 20th, 2021 04:41

Policies In Giving - Giving Series (4)
dusk arising said:

This all went \'whoooosh!\' over my head you know orchi.

February 20th, 2021 04:09

Past And Present
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

February 19th, 2021 13:42

Past And Present
FredPeyer said:

Well done orchie, but tell me what were we in times past if we were \'not people\'? That line intrigues me.

February 19th, 2021 11:23

21 Again? That Old Chestnut
Goldfinch60 said:

I though I had told you not to tell anybody about that message we scrawled on the moon, people will go up there an look for it now and bring it back to earth to see how much money they can get for it, we won\'t see a penny!
So 21 again eh? I remember when you were 21 in 1214 and went to Runnymeade to see the Magna Carta signed, you knocked that ink over and ruined the document so that it had to be re- written, that\'s why it was signed in 1215!

King Goldie.

February 19th, 2021 01:23

21 Again? That Old Chestnut
FredPeyer said:

A good one orchie, maybe you should deviate from the hymn-poems more often! Not that they are bad, just that this one is more fun.

February 18th, 2021 20:42

21 Again? That Old Chestnut
Doggerel Dave said:

Should you not consider upping the medication just a teensy weensy bit?
But all things considered a splendid run through. Almost lost my own sense of reality by the end.

February 18th, 2021 06:05

21 Again? That Old Chestnut
SureshG said:

That\'s the problem with time travelers, they are all over the place.
I don\'t think any amount of lessons is going to improve this looney toon, - speaking of myself, of course!!!!!!

February 18th, 2021 04:48

21 Again? That Old Chestnut
heatherbee said:

Great read.

February 18th, 2021 04:43

Trusting Through Troubles
Gregstarandgoff said:

Very nice! Especially the second part.

Reminded me of hymes from mass at school.

February 17th, 2021 12:43

Stones To Bread
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read Orchi.

February 17th, 2021 10:04

Stones To Bread
SureshG said:

Temptation, in the hour of desperation, easy contemplation, but not for the Son of God.

Very pleasing read.

February 17th, 2021 10:00

Stones To Bread
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

February 17th, 2021 03:40

Stones To Bread
dusk arising said:

When you compose these ditties do you barricade the windows as in that fine voice of yours you sing along to your delightful keyboard accompanyment.

I\'m starting a collection for Fido earmuffs.

February 17th, 2021 03:35

Stones To Bread
orchidee said:

Please excuse hymn that was one from my wedding to KP. It would be! heehee.

February 17th, 2021 03:14

Hope Of Help
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

February 16th, 2021 15:42

Hope Of Help
Neville said:


easy to follow and easy on the eye .. all in all a fine hymn poem methinks ..

February 16th, 2021 10:46

Hope Of Help
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write Orchi.

February 16th, 2021 09:52

Purpose Of Giving - Giving Series (3)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

February 16th, 2021 01:15

Purpose Of Giving - Giving Series (3)
FredPeyer said:

orchie, I solved the problem of giving this way: When I go to church, I throw all the money into the air and say \"God, keep whatever you want. Whatever comes back down is mine.\"

February 15th, 2021 21:46

Purpose Of Giving - Giving Series (3)
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A great superb poem which to me advises to give charity and to not be excessive in any way. The poem is sublime. Kudos.

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

February 15th, 2021 11:56



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