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swingline said:
Let not our faith waver as Mose\'s did when he struck the rock twice with the staff and water gushed from the rock . God punished Moses for his doubts for he did not do as God commanded and speak to the rock . The rock provided water and salvation for the Isrealites . Just as Jesus is our rock of salvation we should not doubt his ablity to save us or we might not be allowed to enter the promise land .
May 31st, 2017 16:16
swingline said:
Let not our faith waver as Mose\'s did when he struck the rock twice with the staff and water gushed from the rock . God punished Moses for his doubts for he did not do as God commanded and speak to the rock . The rock provided water and salvation for the Isrealites . Just as Jesus is our rock of salvation we should not doubt his ablity to save us or we might not be allowed to enter the promise land .
May 31st, 2017 16:16
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Augustus said:
I just became aware of a guitar app, (ultimate guitar) that helps with chord arrangements and key changes. 👍
May 31st, 2017 12:38
Augustus said:
I just became aware of a guitar app, (ultimate guitar) that helps with chord arrangements and key changes. 👍
May 31st, 2017 12:38
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P.H.Rose said:
I like it
I\'m not religious
But I love your
Writing
May 31st, 2017 11:24
P.H.Rose said:
I like it
I\'m not religious
But I love your
Writing
May 31st, 2017 11:24
Deity Declarations
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN for a real feast ~ one of my fave Hymns sung by a Mixed Choir ! I often sang this with Choir when younger ! Love the video of The USA ~ that too revived memories ! I love you poem to quite a difficult meter ~ thanks ~ An Awesome Contribution ! On a lighter note as a Teen i was always amused by the line (taken out of context} \"My SIN O the BLISS of this glorious thought !\" Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
May 30th, 2017 17:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN for a real feast ~ one of my fave Hymns sung by a Mixed Choir ! I often sang this with Choir when younger ! Love the video of The USA ~ that too revived memories ! I love you poem to quite a difficult meter ~ thanks ~ An Awesome Contribution ! On a lighter note as a Teen i was always amused by the line (taken out of context} \"My SIN O the BLISS of this glorious thought !\" Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
May 30th, 2017 17:42
Deity Declarations
orchidee said:
Enjoy the views of the Rocky mountains in the clip too!
May 30th, 2017 08:49
orchidee said:
Enjoy the views of the Rocky mountains in the clip too!
May 30th, 2017 08:49
Delightful Dwellings
orchidee said:
Did you find all that info on Wikipedia though, Soul? I recall reading it there, though I didn\'t type it all up, as you have done. Useful to know though.
May 30th, 2017 01:24
orchidee said:
Did you find all that info on Wikipedia though, Soul? I recall reading it there, though I didn\'t type it all up, as you have done. Useful to know though.
May 30th, 2017 01:24
Delightful Dwellings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks once again STEVEN ~ for an excellent TUNE and a classic poem in the same meter. Love all your poems and will use them in Services stc. A lot of POEMS on MPS don\'t scan ! However because you base all yours on standard Hymn Meter ~ they both scan & rhyme. I am a Performance Poet and your Poems are both relatively easy to recite and consequently easy to listen to and understand ! It is the meter (iambic pentameter) that makes Shakespeare beautiful listen to and for the Actors to perform. The same is true of Hymn Singing ~ Ancient & Modern and it is what makes Carol Singing so Universal & Enjoyable Worldwide ! Thanks BRIAN..
May 29th, 2017 15:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks once again STEVEN ~ for an excellent TUNE and a classic poem in the same meter. Love all your poems and will use them in Services stc. A lot of POEMS on MPS don\'t scan ! However because you base all yours on standard Hymn Meter ~ they both scan & rhyme. I am a Performance Poet and your Poems are both relatively easy to recite and consequently easy to listen to and understand ! It is the meter (iambic pentameter) that makes Shakespeare beautiful listen to and for the Actors to perform. The same is true of Hymn Singing ~ Ancient & Modern and it is what makes Carol Singing so Universal & Enjoyable Worldwide ! Thanks BRIAN..
May 29th, 2017 15:23
Delightful Dwellings
Michael Edwards said:
Construction, metre etc etc all perfect as always O
May 29th, 2017 10:33
Michael Edwards said:
Construction, metre etc etc all perfect as always O
May 29th, 2017 10:33
Delightful Dwellings
orchidee said:
Even Wikipedia seems unsure about the origin of \'Baca\'. It suggests one instance of it being Mecca, though says this is inappropriate for Christianity. It means \'sorrow or weeping\' In some sense. A sort of mournful \'down in the dumps\' we might say.
But the tears of weeping in the Psalm (verse 5 of the poem) is turned into a well, in this imagery.
May 29th, 2017 09:17
orchidee said:
Even Wikipedia seems unsure about the origin of \'Baca\'. It suggests one instance of it being Mecca, though says this is inappropriate for Christianity. It means \'sorrow or weeping\' In some sense. A sort of mournful \'down in the dumps\' we might say.
But the tears of weeping in the Psalm (verse 5 of the poem) is turned into a well, in this imagery.
May 29th, 2017 09:17
Prayer, Prosperity, Protection
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN for another great recording ~ \"The day thou gavest ........!\" Thanks for caring. The poems (based on Psalms) to the same meter ar alo excellent and opened a door to the Psalms riches ! Yours BRIAN
May 28th, 2017 15:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN for another great recording ~ \"The day thou gavest ........!\" Thanks for caring. The poems (based on Psalms) to the same meter ar alo excellent and opened a door to the Psalms riches ! Yours BRIAN
May 28th, 2017 15:28
Prayer, Prosperity, Protection
swingline said:
Comforting words , full of God promise to protect his people .
May 28th, 2017 10:24
swingline said:
Comforting words , full of God promise to protect his people .
May 28th, 2017 10:24
Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 3
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN for a lovely piece of Organ Music ~ very uplifting ~ for me ! The PRAYER POEM is also excellent. V 1. We ask for God\'s Presence & Guidance V 2. We ask for God\'s Protection ~ and in V 3. We pray for the outcome to be Wholeness and Freedom ~ AMEN. There is a nice little sermon in this elegant poem ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
May 26th, 2017 16:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN for a lovely piece of Organ Music ~ very uplifting ~ for me ! The PRAYER POEM is also excellent. V 1. We ask for God\'s Presence & Guidance V 2. We ask for God\'s Protection ~ and in V 3. We pray for the outcome to be Wholeness and Freedom ~ AMEN. There is a nice little sermon in this elegant poem ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
May 26th, 2017 16:38
Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 3
swingline said:
Nice inspirational words and prayer .
May 26th, 2017 10:57
swingline said:
Nice inspirational words and prayer .
May 26th, 2017 10:57
Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 3
orchidee said:
A \'lickle one\' (little one) for today. I do go on a bit sometimes, with 6 or more verses sometimes!. The original hymn has more verses than mine!
May 26th, 2017 10:27
orchidee said:
A \'lickle one\' (little one) for today. I do go on a bit sometimes, with 6 or more verses sometimes!. The original hymn has more verses than mine!
May 26th, 2017 10:27
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