Comments received on poems by orchidee
Walking On In The Way
Michael Edwards said:
super write - yet again the construction is to be so envied.
July 10th, 2017 14:12
Michael Edwards said:
super write - yet again the construction is to be so envied.
July 10th, 2017 14:12
Lamb Life
Nicholas Browning said:
Spirituality is not for everyone. That being said, it would take a fool not to recognize talent when one sees it. The style is of a modernized old English format, which is nice to see. The conjunctions might be hard to make out for the untrained eye, but I see them clearly. Well done, 9/10.
P.S.
These poems and praises remind me of my uncle. That man has got an itch that can only be soothed by the Lord.
July 10th, 2017 12:11
Nicholas Browning said:
Spirituality is not for everyone. That being said, it would take a fool not to recognize talent when one sees it. The style is of a modernized old English format, which is nice to see. The conjunctions might be hard to make out for the untrained eye, but I see them clearly. Well done, 9/10.
P.S.
These poems and praises remind me of my uncle. That man has got an itch that can only be soothed by the Lord.
July 10th, 2017 12:11
Walking On In The Way
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS STEVE ~ Love the tune and your poem and Psalm 25 ~ all Winners !
\"Unto You Lord I lift my soul
Come to me and make me whole
You are my GOD I trust in You
Refresh me - me renew
A great prayer for a Monday ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
July 10th, 2017 09:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS STEVE ~ Love the tune and your poem and Psalm 25 ~ all Winners !
\"Unto You Lord I lift my soul
Come to me and make me whole
You are my GOD I trust in You
Refresh me - me renew
A great prayer for a Monday ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
July 10th, 2017 09:14
Kingdom Kindlings 2
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Orchi. I have still not heard anything about \'that other site\'.
July 10th, 2017 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Orchi. I have still not heard anything about \'that other site\'.
July 10th, 2017 00:40
Kingdom Kindlings 2
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ I was born on the Coast ~ Liverpool and this is in my 10 top favorite hymns ~ Great when sung by a Male Voice Choir ! Love the POEM too. We all nee to catch a Vision of the Holy Fire ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 10:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ I was born on the Coast ~ Liverpool and this is in my 10 top favorite hymns ~ Great when sung by a Male Voice Choir ! Love the POEM too. We all nee to catch a Vision of the Holy Fire ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 10:29
Lamb Life
orchidee said:
AWW, I was not actually at that service, Candlewitch. I heard about that ram\'s horn, and stifled a laugh until I got outside the church!
We may laugh, but the guy was grouchy. Well, it can happen if leaders think that THEY own the church! doh! The guy got somewhat better - \'he\'s \'better now\', well he\'s \'gone now\' anyway. But we could have said \'Hello Revd Smug\'.
July 9th, 2017 01:21
orchidee said:
AWW, I was not actually at that service, Candlewitch. I heard about that ram\'s horn, and stifled a laugh until I got outside the church!
We may laugh, but the guy was grouchy. Well, it can happen if leaders think that THEY own the church! doh! The guy got somewhat better - \'he\'s \'better now\', well he\'s \'gone now\' anyway. But we could have said \'Hello Revd Smug\'.
July 9th, 2017 01:21
Lamb Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE for sharing a great hymn and an equally great poem from your quill or are you now using a PC ?
The Communion Service is very important because each time we participate we affirm our Faith in the Atoning Death of Christ as our only means of Salvation & Eternal Life ~ OK The BIBLE does not teach TRANSUBSTANTIATION it simply teaches that the BREAD represents the BODY of CHRIST and that the WINE represents the BLOOD of CHRIST ! We look back to CALVARY ~ We look around to the Fellowship Communicants have in CHRIST and we look forward to the Second Coming of CHRIST ~ AMEN Thanks for caring and Sharing ~ BRIAN
July 8th, 2017 16:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE for sharing a great hymn and an equally great poem from your quill or are you now using a PC ?
The Communion Service is very important because each time we participate we affirm our Faith in the Atoning Death of Christ as our only means of Salvation & Eternal Life ~ OK The BIBLE does not teach TRANSUBSTANTIATION it simply teaches that the BREAD represents the BODY of CHRIST and that the WINE represents the BLOOD of CHRIST ! We look back to CALVARY ~ We look around to the Fellowship Communicants have in CHRIST and we look forward to the Second Coming of CHRIST ~ AMEN Thanks for caring and Sharing ~ BRIAN
July 8th, 2017 16:53
Lamb Life
Heather T said:
Your work is always so beautiful. I love that you honor our Lord with your gifts!
July 8th, 2017 13:28
Heather T said:
Your work is always so beautiful. I love that you honor our Lord with your gifts!
July 8th, 2017 13:28
Lamb Life
orchidee said:
In the original I know, it\'s \'Lone and dreary, faint and weary / Through the desert Thou didst go\'.
In this clip it\'s \'Tempted, taunted, yet undaunted / ....\'
July 8th, 2017 11:18
orchidee said:
In the original I know, it\'s \'Lone and dreary, faint and weary / Through the desert Thou didst go\'.
In this clip it\'s \'Tempted, taunted, yet undaunted / ....\'
July 8th, 2017 11:18
Respectful Reverence
Augustus said:
I love your work. I feel a sense of pease from this one
July 7th, 2017 18:06
Augustus said:
I love your work. I feel a sense of pease from this one
July 7th, 2017 18:06
Respectful Reverence
kevin browne said:
In God we trust and here\'s the story that tells it. great write for us all.
July 7th, 2017 12:14
kevin browne said:
In God we trust and here\'s the story that tells it. great write for us all.
July 7th, 2017 12:14
Bounteous Blessings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS STEVE ~ I believe in the Bible\'s description of me ~ that I have a touch of the DIVINE ~ MADE IN GOD\'S LIKENESS ! Thanks for anther excellent Spiritual Poem ~ replete with Grace & Truth ~ AMEN BRIAN
July 6th, 2017 11:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS STEVE ~ I believe in the Bible\'s description of me ~ that I have a touch of the DIVINE ~ MADE IN GOD\'S LIKENESS ! Thanks for anther excellent Spiritual Poem ~ replete with Grace & Truth ~ AMEN BRIAN
July 6th, 2017 11:30
Bounteous Blessings
orchidee said:
I\'ve not some \'false humility\' wish, with \'we are dust\' cropping up again! It\'s getting dusty round here! It\'s just that humanity can be referred to in some Scriptures as dust, or worms, or even maggots.
You a maggot there?!
July 6th, 2017 10:23
orchidee said:
I\'ve not some \'false humility\' wish, with \'we are dust\' cropping up again! It\'s getting dusty round here! It\'s just that humanity can be referred to in some Scriptures as dust, or worms, or even maggots.
You a maggot there?!
July 6th, 2017 10:23
Life And Light
Michael Edwards said:
Well I read yours strictly in poem form and they always read so well to me but you know that as I am only repeating myself.
July 5th, 2017 14:01
Michael Edwards said:
Well I read yours strictly in poem form and they always read so well to me but you know that as I am only repeating myself.
July 5th, 2017 14:01
Life And Light
orchidee said:
Critiques, yes. As long as not like someone elsewhere, not on this site, who slagged off everyone with \'I don\'t care for this poem\', or \'Not a lot in this poem\'. But it was a sort of nasty troll person doing that.
July 5th, 2017 13:02
orchidee said:
Critiques, yes. As long as not like someone elsewhere, not on this site, who slagged off everyone with \'I don\'t care for this poem\', or \'Not a lot in this poem\'. But it was a sort of nasty troll person doing that.
July 5th, 2017 13:02
Life And Light
orchidee said:
Thanks S. Well, I can\'t write music! A tune may come to me, and then I fit words to it. I also write some \'spoken\' poems, that are not songs.
Maybe you can read it them as \'spoken\' poems. Depends if you know the tune or not, I suppose.
Also, reading them from a poetic angle alone, if you\'re not particularly \'religious\' or \'spiritual\' - or maybe you are?!
July 5th, 2017 12:59
orchidee said:
Thanks S. Well, I can\'t write music! A tune may come to me, and then I fit words to it. I also write some \'spoken\' poems, that are not songs.
Maybe you can read it them as \'spoken\' poems. Depends if you know the tune or not, I suppose.
Also, reading them from a poetic angle alone, if you\'re not particularly \'religious\' or \'spiritual\' - or maybe you are?!
July 5th, 2017 12:59
Life And Light
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
A beautiful song. I hope you continue to write. I would usually write a critique and tell you your strengths and your weaknesses, but in this case I am not qualified. I am quite bad at reviewing songs, and writing songs. However, If I were to grade this song I would give it a 9/10. It fits the tune really well and I like it. I invite you to come and look at my poem(s), and tell me what you think of them. I always invite critiques.
July 5th, 2017 12:27
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
A beautiful song. I hope you continue to write. I would usually write a critique and tell you your strengths and your weaknesses, but in this case I am not qualified. I am quite bad at reviewing songs, and writing songs. However, If I were to grade this song I would give it a 9/10. It fits the tune really well and I like it. I invite you to come and look at my poem(s), and tell me what you think of them. I always invite critiques.
July 5th, 2017 12:27
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