Comments received on poems by orchidee



Suffering Sustenance
orchidee said:

Couple of tweaks made, to give more of the sense of the words.

March 25th, 2017 07:24

Suffering Sustenance
orchidee said:

Thanks Soul. I tend to observe days, etc, but not scrupulously. I don\'t worry if I miss a Saint\'s Day, for example.
We\'re seen as spoil-sports if we say Santa does not exist. Yet I know we keep Christmas on the day it is - Dec 25.
Here\'s another thing - today is the Annunciation. It would be - 9 months before date of Christmas!

March 25th, 2017 06:30

Suffering Sustenance
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS \"O\" ~ for caring and sharing ~ A great Old Hymn and a great New one from your Spirit guided pen ~ AMEN. Blessings BRIAN. Please check my poems ~ Thanks B

March 25th, 2017 03:56

Suffering Sustenance
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

March 25th, 2017 01:27

Prospering People
orchidee said:

Thanks all. Soul - I mean that Shropshire is part of England. Don\'t know why they chose it to go with the line about \'dark Satanic mills\'! - whatever they are?!

March 24th, 2017 03:53

Prospering People
Goldfinch60 said:

Another for the hymn book Orchi.

March 24th, 2017 01:47

Prospering People
WriteBeLight said:

Very good work here.

March 23rd, 2017 11:47

Palms Processings
ron parrish aka wordman said:

never heard this one before,really enjoyed

March 22nd, 2017 16:59

Palms Processings
Goldfinch60 said:

Process? Process! We Methodist do not process we come into our Church and sin our hearts out as we would to this fine hymn. Thank you.

March 22nd, 2017 11:44

Palms Processings
orchidee said:

This\'ll give ya all enough time to process in to church, or wherever ya are processing! Nearly 30 stanzas, including the chorus each time!

March 22nd, 2017 09:57

Creation Celebration
Goldfinch60 said:

Superb write my friend.

March 22nd, 2017 02:38

Creation Celebration
orchidee said:

In the original hymn, particularly near the end, a couple of words seem to be sung quickly to fit them in with the number of syllables per line. There are some hymns where the metre is given as \'Irregular\' and the tunes jump about! Think I shall leave those ones out for my hymn-poems!

March 21st, 2017 11:44

Deliverance From Destruction
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

March 20th, 2017 13:39

Authority Awesomeness
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good one Orchi

March 20th, 2017 01:47

Exalting Encouragements
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

March 19th, 2017 01:18

Exalting Encouragements
Fay Slimm. said:

A soul-stirring read my friend and put to music would enhance even the tune to Remembrance.

March 18th, 2017 13:25

Salvation Security
orchidee said:

Thanks all. I suppose they are hymn-poems / psalms / prayers - all or some of these could apply. Feel free to call them what you will.

March 18th, 2017 11:48

Salvation Security
WriteBeLight said:

Great job orchidee. It is great poetry.

March 18th, 2017 07:40

Processional Parade
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

March 17th, 2017 01:37

Thankful Tributes
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good \'un Orchi.

March 15th, 2017 13:40

Thankful Tributes
Fay Slimm. said:

Thanks for this spiritual feast dear poet - - we all need to cleanse our way every day.

March 15th, 2017 13:07

Justice Judgements 1
Goldfinch60 said:

Anoither good hymn, you must have quite a large hymnbook by now.

March 15th, 2017 02:10

Justice Judgements 1
Christina8 said:

Very uplifting and well done poem too!

March 14th, 2017 13:04

Forgiveness Freedom
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good one Orchi.

March 13th, 2017 15:44

Covenant Certainties
Augustus said:

Could that we all be captivated in the spirit. Enjoyed. Nice solo.

March 12th, 2017 19:05

Covenant Certainties
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

\"Make me a captive LORD and then I shall be FREE ~ AMEN\" Thanks \"O\" for sharing both the hymn (one of my faves) and your elegant poem. We have a High Priest in Heaven ~ JESUS ~ Who intercedes for us before the Fathers Throne day & night ! Thanks for caring ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

March 12th, 2017 17:02

Covenant Certainties
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good \'un Orchi.

March 12th, 2017 13:18

Passionate Penitence
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

March 12th, 2017 02:37

Passionate Penitence
Augustus said:

Such a beautiful prayer.

March 11th, 2017 19:17

Passionate Penitence
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

March 11th, 2017 15:00



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