Comments received on poems by orchidee
Grant Us Graces
Doggerel Dave said:
So how many Graces do you want, orchi? You sound a bit greedy to me......
March 10th, 2026 04:17
Doggerel Dave said:
So how many Graces do you want, orchi? You sound a bit greedy to me......
March 10th, 2026 04:17
Grant Us Graces
sorenbarrett said:
Another great hymn of praise Orchi. Does KP like when you sing these to her or does she sing them to you? Well done my friend
March 10th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Another great hymn of praise Orchi. Does KP like when you sing these to her or does she sing them to you? Well done my friend
March 10th, 2026 04:10
From Sorrow To Joy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, there’s a beautiful reverence in this…you can feel the hymn structure carrying the Psalm with real care. The movement from sorrow into dancing lands exactly where the heart of Psalm 30 lives. It reads like something meant to be sung aloud…steady, faithful, and full of gratitude.
And knowing you, my friend, somewhere in the background Tom is probably already knitting a ceremonial tube sock trophy for the Baters\' TV award ceremony while Popeye sits nearby creating those unmistakable spinach glugs from the can…which, frankly, is enough to make even the most determined baiters pack up and leave the dock. Incorrigible crew, the lot of you. 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, there’s a beautiful reverence in this…you can feel the hymn structure carrying the Psalm with real care. The movement from sorrow into dancing lands exactly where the heart of Psalm 30 lives. It reads like something meant to be sung aloud…steady, faithful, and full of gratitude.
And knowing you, my friend, somewhere in the background Tom is probably already knitting a ceremonial tube sock trophy for the Baters\' TV award ceremony while Popeye sits nearby creating those unmistakable spinach glugs from the can…which, frankly, is enough to make even the most determined baiters pack up and leave the dock. Incorrigible crew, the lot of you. 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 08:07
From Sorrow To Joy
sorenbarrett said:
A great hymn of praise Orchi. Nicely done
March 8th, 2026 13:26
sorenbarrett said:
A great hymn of praise Orchi. Nicely done
March 8th, 2026 13:26
From Sorrow To Joy
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem revolves around themes of worship, the nature of God’s mercy, personal transformation from mourning to joy, and the importance of gratitude in the believer\'s life.
March 8th, 2026 12:00
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem revolves around themes of worship, the nature of God’s mercy, personal transformation from mourning to joy, and the importance of gratitude in the believer\'s life.
March 8th, 2026 12:00
To Praise Or Not?
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know Orchi I believe that organised religion is a farce and a lie but your god and my god are with us all the time.
Andy
March 7th, 2026 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know Orchi I believe that organised religion is a farce and a lie but your god and my god are with us all the time.
Andy
March 7th, 2026 02:50
To Praise Or Not?
Neville said:
....................................................... write on 😎👍
March 7th, 2026 02:31
Neville said:
....................................................... write on 😎👍
March 7th, 2026 02:31
To Praise Or Not?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this made me glugging smile…there’s a gentle honesty here about praise not always coming easily, yet still choosing it anyway. That tension feels very real. Fido at the end made me feel safe until...oh now...even he\'s hearing the glugs now, too. 🤣 A thoughtful and human reflection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this made me glugging smile…there’s a gentle honesty here about praise not always coming easily, yet still choosing it anyway. That tension feels very real. Fido at the end made me feel safe until...oh now...even he\'s hearing the glugs now, too. 🤣 A thoughtful and human reflection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:28
To Praise Or Not?
Doggerel Dave said:
Orchi - do you think he needs all that praise? Is he really so very insecure?
March 6th, 2026 08:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Orchi - do you think he needs all that praise? Is he really so very insecure?
March 6th, 2026 08:30
To Praise Or Not?
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you are the Victor Borge of the site, he a master pianist you poetic hymn writer but comedian of the first rate at the same time. Love your style my friend.
March 6th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you are the Victor Borge of the site, he a master pianist you poetic hymn writer but comedian of the first rate at the same time. Love your style my friend.
March 6th, 2026 03:58
Garbage!
Friendship said:
Great job. Your poem humorously explores the seemingly pointless endeavor of writing poetry, highlighting the absurdity and self-deprecation of the poet\'s process. It illustrates a playful interaction between the poet and a talking dog, Fido, who questions the purpose and value of the poems being written.
March 2nd, 2026 19:04
Friendship said:
Great job. Your poem humorously explores the seemingly pointless endeavor of writing poetry, highlighting the absurdity and self-deprecation of the poet\'s process. It illustrates a playful interaction between the poet and a talking dog, Fido, who questions the purpose and value of the poems being written.
March 2nd, 2026 19:04
Garbage!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is deliberate chaos dressed as incompetence. The talking dog interrogation, the timed nonsense, the gleeful admission of wasting lives in 23-second increments…all of it builds toward that last absurd command. So fine. The tavern doors burst open. Enter Popeyeus Maxiums Solus, robes soaked in green brine, declaring the sacred rite of Literary Gluggery. Tankards rise. Foam spills. The talking dog howls. And somewhere in the rafters, 73836594 is already being drafted. Glug. Glug. GLUGGGGG. 🍺⚓🐶
Or...in other words...great, daft write, my friend. 🤣
March 2nd, 2026 10:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is deliberate chaos dressed as incompetence. The talking dog interrogation, the timed nonsense, the gleeful admission of wasting lives in 23-second increments…all of it builds toward that last absurd command. So fine. The tavern doors burst open. Enter Popeyeus Maxiums Solus, robes soaked in green brine, declaring the sacred rite of Literary Gluggery. Tankards rise. Foam spills. The talking dog howls. And somewhere in the rafters, 73836594 is already being drafted. Glug. Glug. GLUGGGGG. 🍺⚓🐶
Or...in other words...great, daft write, my friend. 🤣
March 2nd, 2026 10:59
Garbage!
Doggerel Dave said:
As I scanned the running sheet of todays poems, I happened upon \'3:36 - Garbage!, by orchidee\' . Now I had a decision to make: was it a hymn? I don\'t mind your hymns, orchi, but too many upset me: here\'s orchi toddling off to Heaven when his time comes, and here\'s me, an unbeliever, could go anywhere or nowhere... thought perhaps I aught to leave it alone, just in case.....Do hope you understand.....
March 2nd, 2026 06:38
Doggerel Dave said:
As I scanned the running sheet of todays poems, I happened upon \'3:36 - Garbage!, by orchidee\' . Now I had a decision to make: was it a hymn? I don\'t mind your hymns, orchi, but too many upset me: here\'s orchi toddling off to Heaven when his time comes, and here\'s me, an unbeliever, could go anywhere or nowhere... thought perhaps I aught to leave it alone, just in case.....Do hope you understand.....
March 2nd, 2026 06:38
Garbage!
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Orchi Let Fido know that it is all the rage now days to recycle and what was one man\'s trash is now another\'s treasure. Different strokes for different folks or is that blokes
March 2nd, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Orchi Let Fido know that it is all the rage now days to recycle and what was one man\'s trash is now another\'s treasure. Different strokes for different folks or is that blokes
March 2nd, 2026 04:06
Cooooeee!!!
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s nice to see the madhouse is still going strong!!!, enjoy that roast, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:36
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s nice to see the madhouse is still going strong!!!, enjoy that roast, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:36
Cooooeee!!!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Not sure if that is a yellow lab or an English Cream Golden, but my daughter has the latter and that doggie\'s face looks very similar. Just thought I would glug...um...share. LOL! Orchi, this made me laugh… properly laugh. The playful mischief in it is unmistakable. It’s cheeky without being cruel, and that tone carries it. A fun detour my friend. Glug on, says you know who. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 28th, 2026 12:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Not sure if that is a yellow lab or an English Cream Golden, but my daughter has the latter and that doggie\'s face looks very similar. Just thought I would glug...um...share. LOL! Orchi, this made me laugh… properly laugh. The playful mischief in it is unmistakable. It’s cheeky without being cruel, and that tone carries it. A fun detour my friend. Glug on, says you know who. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 28th, 2026 12:27
Cooooeee!!!
2781 said:
I can tell your getting on...
It\'s been illegal to keep your wife in a kennel, since 1966.
The same doesn\'t apply to husbands, I believe.
February 28th, 2026 09:51
2781 said:
I can tell your getting on...
It\'s been illegal to keep your wife in a kennel, since 1966.
The same doesn\'t apply to husbands, I believe.
February 28th, 2026 09:51
Cooooeee!!!
Friendship said:
Well done, your poem presents a humorous tone. a dog named Fido, and another character referred to as KP. It reflects on themes of jealousy, competition for attention, and the playful banter that exists within the context of their interactions.
February 28th, 2026 08:56
Friendship said:
Well done, your poem presents a humorous tone. a dog named Fido, and another character referred to as KP. It reflects on themes of jealousy, competition for attention, and the playful banter that exists within the context of their interactions.
February 28th, 2026 08:56
Cooooeee!!!
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Orchi preaching hymns and throwing bones not much different than the common Sunday in church. Another good read my friend there must be quite a bone pile out back.
February 28th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Orchi preaching hymns and throwing bones not much different than the common Sunday in church. Another good read my friend there must be quite a bone pile out back.
February 28th, 2026 04:10
Intermittent
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Don\'t think you can escape the glugs. They follow...just an FYI! 🤣 Keeping you in my prayers, Orchi! Gonna miss you!
February 27th, 2026 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Don\'t think you can escape the glugs. They follow...just an FYI! 🤣 Keeping you in my prayers, Orchi! Gonna miss you!
February 27th, 2026 10:51
Intermittent
sorenbarrett said:
Will miss you when you are not here my friend wishing you the best and hope to hear from you soon.
February 27th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Will miss you when you are not here my friend wishing you the best and hope to hear from you soon.
February 27th, 2026 04:22
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