Comments received on poems by orchidee
Character Considered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent hymn-poem my friend! Jeesh, they really were glugging original with the surnames, no? I can see how Smith came to be a popular one...and how Hymnographer...well...did not! LOL! Stick with poet or Sir Songwriter! Ah-gah--gah-gah-glug-glug.
Honestly, I tried to stop Mr. Glugging P up there...but he just won\'t. ๐คฃ
January 10th, 2026 10:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent hymn-poem my friend! Jeesh, they really were glugging original with the surnames, no? I can see how Smith came to be a popular one...and how Hymnographer...well...did not! LOL! Stick with poet or Sir Songwriter! Ah-gah--gah-gah-glug-glug.
Honestly, I tried to stop Mr. Glugging P up there...but he just won\'t. ๐คฃ
January 10th, 2026 10:45
Character Considered
sorenbarrett said:
A hymn post biblical one can tell in its style and wording but spiritual none the less. Well done Orchi
January 10th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A hymn post biblical one can tell in its style and wording but spiritual none the less. Well done Orchi
January 10th, 2026 04:03
Judgment of Joy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this starts solemn and lands joyfulโฆthen my brain does a funny thing. Somewhere between verses I hear Popeye muttering โI yam what I yamโ as strength returns, and Obi Wan quietly nodding, saying the glug was with him all along. Then more glugsโฆholy water, spinach juice...or (don\'t add that!) whateverโs on tap. Serious praise, honest hope, and a wink that says joy is allowed too. Love the poem, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 9th, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this starts solemn and lands joyfulโฆthen my brain does a funny thing. Somewhere between verses I hear Popeye muttering โI yam what I yamโ as strength returns, and Obi Wan quietly nodding, saying the glug was with him all along. Then more glugsโฆholy water, spinach juice...or (don\'t add that!) whateverโs on tap. Serious praise, honest hope, and a wink that says joy is allowed too. Love the poem, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 9th, 2026 10:38
Judgment of Joy
sorenbarrett said:
At first I thought that this applied to present day Washington but apparently they had similar problems in the old days as well. A good read Orchi
January 9th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
At first I thought that this applied to present day Washington but apparently they had similar problems in the old days as well. A good read Orchi
January 9th, 2026 03:52
Problems of a Prophet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent hymn-poem, Orchi. We know the prophet\'s problems, but do certain gluggers have problems? Or are they the prophet\'s problems too! LOL! Actually, don\'t answer that!
January 8th, 2026 09:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent hymn-poem, Orchi. We know the prophet\'s problems, but do certain gluggers have problems? Or are they the prophet\'s problems too! LOL! Actually, don\'t answer that!
January 8th, 2026 09:44
Problems of a Prophet
arqios said:
A moving write and hopefully on tablets that we may run with itโs message!
January 8th, 2026 05:10
arqios said:
A moving write and hopefully on tablets that we may run with itโs message!
January 8th, 2026 05:10
Problems of a Prophet
sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t it funny Orchi how prophesies seem to apply to different times. Maybe nothing ever changes. Well I guess the nature of people never changes always greedy, lustful, lascivious, lazy, violent and those are the good qualities. Good write Orchi
January 8th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t it funny Orchi how prophesies seem to apply to different times. Maybe nothing ever changes. Well I guess the nature of people never changes always greedy, lustful, lascivious, lazy, violent and those are the good qualities. Good write Orchi
January 8th, 2026 04:16
Light And Dark
Paul Bell said:
This is the bright we need for January.
Why can\'t we cope with snow anymore.
January 7th, 2026 11:31
Paul Bell said:
This is the bright we need for January.
Why can\'t we cope with snow anymore.
January 7th, 2026 11:31
Light And Dark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this feels reverent and steady. The cadence carries Scripture with care, letting the light unfold without force. It reads as devotion meant to be sung as much as read...it\'s a hymn-poem at all. Fantastic write! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
Speaking of steadiness...did you just hear that...?
Glug!
January 7th, 2026 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this feels reverent and steady. The cadence carries Scripture with care, letting the light unfold without force. It reads as devotion meant to be sung as much as read...it\'s a hymn-poem at all. Fantastic write! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
Speaking of steadiness...did you just hear that...?
Glug!
January 7th, 2026 09:24
Light And Dark
Friendship said:
Well written.Your poem revolves around the transformation from darkness to light that occurs through faith in the Lord. It emphasizes living a life that reflects the values of goodness, righteousness, and truth as children of light. The poet urges believers to reject the unfruitful works of darkness and to embrace a life filled with the Spirit of God, calling for awareness, wisdom, and active engagement with faith.
January 7th, 2026 07:12
Friendship said:
Well written.Your poem revolves around the transformation from darkness to light that occurs through faith in the Lord. It emphasizes living a life that reflects the values of goodness, righteousness, and truth as children of light. The poet urges believers to reject the unfruitful works of darkness and to embrace a life filled with the Spirit of God, calling for awareness, wisdom, and active engagement with faith.
January 7th, 2026 07:12
Light And Dark
sorenbarrett said:
This is another great hymn poem Orchi where light just as it is used in other verses is a metaphor for knowledge, truth and through them vision. This seems to align with Gnostic beliefs that knowledge alone could save one. That sect being excluded from the main stream and the acceptance that grace was the main saving power. Now I\'m going to have to look for that church in the caves where the dead sea scrolls were found. Good one Orchi
January 7th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
This is another great hymn poem Orchi where light just as it is used in other verses is a metaphor for knowledge, truth and through them vision. This seems to align with Gnostic beliefs that knowledge alone could save one. That sect being excluded from the main stream and the acceptance that grace was the main saving power. Now I\'m going to have to look for that church in the caves where the dead sea scrolls were found. Good one Orchi
January 7th, 2026 03:46
Prayer Plea
Dominic Windram said:
A profoundly religious & spiritual poem...I really enjoyed reading it.
January 7th, 2026 03:16
Dominic Windram said:
A profoundly religious & spiritual poem...I really enjoyed reading it.
January 7th, 2026 03:16
Epiphany Enlightening
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn-poem, Orchi! On the 12th day of Glugmas, no less! ๐
January 6th, 2026 13:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn-poem, Orchi! On the 12th day of Glugmas, no less! ๐
January 6th, 2026 13:17
Epiphany Enlightening
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes Orchi the famous story that sets the foundation for the New Testament and also the thematic conflict that gives great tension and interest to the story that old rascal Herod. I like your economy of words in this hymn making it so much easier to sing.
January 6th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes Orchi the famous story that sets the foundation for the New Testament and also the thematic conflict that gives great tension and interest to the story that old rascal Herod. I like your economy of words in this hymn making it so much easier to sing.
January 6th, 2026 04:09
Epiphany Enlightening
Dominic Windram said:
Nice write....really like the rhyme scheme & the vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2026 03:34
Dominic Windram said:
Nice write....really like the rhyme scheme & the vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2026 03:34
Pentecost Proclamation
Neville said:
78.488 ainโt bad going for any rodent ๐
January 5th, 2026 23:15
Neville said:
78.488 ainโt bad going for any rodent ๐
January 5th, 2026 23:15
Pentecost Proclamation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Glug job, Orchi! Good job! Wait...P\'s proclamation is what now? Actually, don\'t answer that! ๐ ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 5th, 2026 16:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Glug job, Orchi! Good job! Wait...P\'s proclamation is what now? Actually, don\'t answer that! ๐ ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 5th, 2026 16:06
Pentecost Proclamation
Paul Bell said:
Happy new year to you.
Is it Pentecostal festival time or does that come later.
I\'m going to make an effort to churchify myself this year. l
January 5th, 2026 09:44
Paul Bell said:
Happy new year to you.
Is it Pentecostal festival time or does that come later.
I\'m going to make an effort to churchify myself this year. l
January 5th, 2026 09:44
Pentecost Proclamation
Friendship said:
Your poem reflects the prophetic vision of the future, emphasizing the outpouring of the Spirit of God upon all people, leading to divine revelations, signs, and the promise of salvation for those who call upon the Lord.
January 5th, 2026 07:37
Friendship said:
Your poem reflects the prophetic vision of the future, emphasizing the outpouring of the Spirit of God upon all people, leading to divine revelations, signs, and the promise of salvation for those who call upon the Lord.
January 5th, 2026 07:37
Pentecost Proclamation
arqios said:
In one accord! Mighty and rushing and windy๐๏ธ๐๐ป
January 5th, 2026 06:52
arqios said:
In one accord! Mighty and rushing and windy๐๏ธ๐๐ป
January 5th, 2026 06:52
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