Comments received on poems by orchidee
Sheep and Shepherd
NafisaSB said:
Did bring me some comfort reading it. Thanks ππΌπ
July 29th, 2026 03:58
NafisaSB said:
Did bring me some comfort reading it. Thanks ππΌπ
July 29th, 2026 03:58
I who know nothing.....
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now look here, Orchi...if you know nothing, Fido knows everything, and Goldfinch knows the hippo word, who is supervising Popeye and Mr Hunt\'s tomato paste factory, now producing Glug Paste? This entire organization is one oversized vocabulary word away from complete collapse. WCAT indeed! π€£πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 28th, 2026 21:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now look here, Orchi...if you know nothing, Fido knows everything, and Goldfinch knows the hippo word, who is supervising Popeye and Mr Hunt\'s tomato paste factory, now producing Glug Paste? This entire organization is one oversized vocabulary word away from complete collapse. WCAT indeed! π€£πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 28th, 2026 21:03
I who know nothing.....
arqios said:
They choose us, we are their people. ποΈππ»
July 28th, 2026 15:51
arqios said:
They choose us, we are their people. ποΈππ»
July 28th, 2026 15:51
I who know nothing.....
sorenbarrett said:
I used to argue with my dog but I always lost. Good one Orchi
July 28th, 2026 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
I used to argue with my dog but I always lost. Good one Orchi
July 28th, 2026 11:00
Will this stop?!
David Wakeling said:
A great bit of fun here.Very enjoyable read
July 27th, 2026 22:01
David Wakeling said:
A great bit of fun here.Very enjoyable read
July 27th, 2026 22:01
Will this stop?!
Doggerel Dave said:
Too explicit. It seems, after five something years of observation here at MPS that one major leitmotif would be the chucking of some words together and then insist the reader makes their own interpretation of this monumental work..
July 27th, 2026 18:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Too explicit. It seems, after five something years of observation here at MPS that one major leitmotif would be the chucking of some words together and then insist the reader makes their own interpretation of this monumental work..
July 27th, 2026 18:09
Will this stop?!
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing more irritating that the one you wish to defame is famous and they say bad new is still new and all news is good. Good one Orchi
July 27th, 2026 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing more irritating that the one you wish to defame is famous and they say bad new is still new and all news is good. Good one Orchi
July 27th, 2026 10:13
Will this stop?!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, I nearly believed you had discovered kindness...then Popeye wandered in, opened another can of spinach, and volunteered the entire gang for twelve more months of tormenting KP with a Baters marathon. The poor woman needs witness protection! π€£ Great fun, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 27th, 2026 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, I nearly believed you had discovered kindness...then Popeye wandered in, opened another can of spinach, and volunteered the entire gang for twelve more months of tormenting KP with a Baters marathon. The poor woman needs witness protection! π€£ Great fun, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 27th, 2026 09:14
Sheep and Shepherd
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, Orchi! Unfortunately, P. Silly (erm Solus) has declared himself Assistant Shepherd of Recreational Affairs and converted the green pasture into an all-inclusive resort. The sheep are ordering mocktails, the spinach has vanished, and nobody has accomplished a damn thing since Tuesday. Apparently, your message reached him! ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 23rd, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, Orchi! Unfortunately, P. Silly (erm Solus) has declared himself Assistant Shepherd of Recreational Affairs and converted the green pasture into an all-inclusive resort. The sheep are ordering mocktails, the spinach has vanished, and nobody has accomplished a damn thing since Tuesday. Apparently, your message reached him! ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 23rd, 2026 08:16
Sheep and Shepherd
Doggerel Dave said:
I am perplexed at your interaction with Soren above: Which of you is NS? However your penultimate stanza leaves me in no doubt that you have incorporated the values of a \'60\'s hippie and are preparing to drop out...
July 22nd, 2026 23:56
Doggerel Dave said:
I am perplexed at your interaction with Soren above: Which of you is NS? However your penultimate stanza leaves me in no doubt that you have incorporated the values of a \'60\'s hippie and are preparing to drop out...
July 22nd, 2026 23:56
Sheep and Shepherd
sorenbarrett said:
Very sneaky my friend posting a coming attractions post then going in behind the scenes and editing a new poem to leave people feeling stupid for not having read it. I try to read all but if you had not been kind enough to give me warning I might have overlooked it. And a fine read indeed. I don\'t understand why you were trying to hide it. I told you it would be a fave
July 22nd, 2026 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
Very sneaky my friend posting a coming attractions post then going in behind the scenes and editing a new poem to leave people feeling stupid for not having read it. I try to read all but if you had not been kind enough to give me warning I might have overlooked it. And a fine read indeed. I don\'t understand why you were trying to hide it. I told you it would be a fave
July 22nd, 2026 12:54
Sheep and Shepherd
sorenbarrett said:
I thought this would be a short hymn to go with a short church service
July 22nd, 2026 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
I thought this would be a short hymn to go with a short church service
July 22nd, 2026 12:41
Thirsting Times
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent work, Orchi! The service was progressing beautifully until Popeye answered the call for holy hydration, burst through the stained-glass window, and flooded the sanctuary with spinach-infused Spirit water. He was screaming βGlugging Times!β Noah is gathering the animals now. ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 21st, 2026 20:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent work, Orchi! The service was progressing beautifully until Popeye answered the call for holy hydration, burst through the stained-glass window, and flooded the sanctuary with spinach-infused Spirit water. He was screaming βGlugging Times!β Noah is gathering the animals now. ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 21st, 2026 20:31
Thirsting Times
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful hymn Orchi it falls back on faith and belief in one that can comfort and hold one up. Nicely done my friend
July 21st, 2026 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful hymn Orchi it falls back on faith and belief in one that can comfort and hold one up. Nicely done my friend
July 21st, 2026 12:31
Hope of Help
Thomas W Case said:
Old faith in plain wordsβsteady as stone, no need to shout to be heard.
Feels like a man leaning on something thatβs held longer than he has.
July 21st, 2026 08:09
Thomas W Case said:
Old faith in plain wordsβsteady as stone, no need to shout to be heard.
Feels like a man leaning on something thatβs held longer than he has.
July 21st, 2026 08:09
Hope of Help
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a hymn, Orchi! P. Solus was greatly relieved to learn that help is coming. He has therefore stopped doing absolutely everything for himself and is presently lying beside the road glugging. I told him hope still requires participation. He glugged twice! lol. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
July 21st, 2026 00:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a hymn, Orchi! P. Solus was greatly relieved to learn that help is coming. He has therefore stopped doing absolutely everything for himself and is presently lying beside the road glugging. I told him hope still requires participation. He glugged twice! lol. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
July 21st, 2026 00:20
The Immortal and the Mortal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, I was singing along quite happily until you started calculating our expiration dates! P. Solus has now hidden the calendar and ordered enough spinach to survive until 10,101,010. He\'s destined to make his lifespan metrical. I told him that\'s not how it works. He glugged anyway. π€·ββοΈπ€£ Powerful hymn, my friend...if slightly alarming! lol. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 20th, 2026 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, I was singing along quite happily until you started calculating our expiration dates! P. Solus has now hidden the calendar and ordered enough spinach to survive until 10,101,010. He\'s destined to make his lifespan metrical. I told him that\'s not how it works. He glugged anyway. π€·ββοΈπ€£ Powerful hymn, my friend...if slightly alarming! lol. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 20th, 2026 08:21
The Immortal and the Mortal
Neville said:
I kind of liked this hymn poem Orchidee, it wasn\'t too heavy .. just wondering tho\' is there something or somewhere in between immortal & mortal, something like a bridge, window, door or a portal .. maybe ππ
July 20th, 2026 07:44
Neville said:
I kind of liked this hymn poem Orchidee, it wasn\'t too heavy .. just wondering tho\' is there something or somewhere in between immortal & mortal, something like a bridge, window, door or a portal .. maybe ππ
July 20th, 2026 07:44
The Immortal and the Mortal
Doggerel Dave said:
The immoral you say? Probably live to 140.... (\"Only the good....\")
July 19th, 2026 15:25
Doggerel Dave said:
The immoral you say? Probably live to 140.... (\"Only the good....\")
July 19th, 2026 15:25
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