Comments received on poems by orchidee
Light And Dark
Paul Bell said:
This is the bright we need for January.
Why can\'t we cope with snow anymore.
January 7th, 2026 11:31
Paul Bell said:
This is the bright we need for January.
Why can\'t we cope with snow anymore.
January 7th, 2026 11:31
Light And Dark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this feels reverent and steady. The cadence carries Scripture with care, letting the light unfold without force. It reads as devotion meant to be sung as much as read...it\'s a hymn-poem at all. Fantastic write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Speaking of steadiness...did you just hear that...?
Glug!
January 7th, 2026 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this feels reverent and steady. The cadence carries Scripture with care, letting the light unfold without force. It reads as devotion meant to be sung as much as read...it\'s a hymn-poem at all. Fantastic write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Speaking of steadiness...did you just hear that...?
Glug!
January 7th, 2026 09:24
Light And Dark
Friendship said:
Well written.Your poem revolves around the transformation from darkness to light that occurs through faith in the Lord. It emphasizes living a life that reflects the values of goodness, righteousness, and truth as children of light. The poet urges believers to reject the unfruitful works of darkness and to embrace a life filled with the Spirit of God, calling for awareness, wisdom, and active engagement with faith.
January 7th, 2026 07:12
Friendship said:
Well written.Your poem revolves around the transformation from darkness to light that occurs through faith in the Lord. It emphasizes living a life that reflects the values of goodness, righteousness, and truth as children of light. The poet urges believers to reject the unfruitful works of darkness and to embrace a life filled with the Spirit of God, calling for awareness, wisdom, and active engagement with faith.
January 7th, 2026 07:12
Light And Dark
sorenbarrett said:
This is another great hymn poem Orchi where light just as it is used in other verses is a metaphor for knowledge, truth and through them vision. This seems to align with Gnostic beliefs that knowledge alone could save one. That sect being excluded from the main stream and the acceptance that grace was the main saving power. Now I\'m going to have to look for that church in the caves where the dead sea scrolls were found. Good one Orchi
January 7th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
This is another great hymn poem Orchi where light just as it is used in other verses is a metaphor for knowledge, truth and through them vision. This seems to align with Gnostic beliefs that knowledge alone could save one. That sect being excluded from the main stream and the acceptance that grace was the main saving power. Now I\'m going to have to look for that church in the caves where the dead sea scrolls were found. Good one Orchi
January 7th, 2026 03:46
Prayer Plea
Dominic Windram said:
A profoundly religious & spiritual poem...I really enjoyed reading it.
January 7th, 2026 03:16
Dominic Windram said:
A profoundly religious & spiritual poem...I really enjoyed reading it.
January 7th, 2026 03:16
Epiphany Enlightening
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn-poem, Orchi! On the 12th day of Glugmas, no less! 😂
January 6th, 2026 13:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn-poem, Orchi! On the 12th day of Glugmas, no less! 😂
January 6th, 2026 13:17
Epiphany Enlightening
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes Orchi the famous story that sets the foundation for the New Testament and also the thematic conflict that gives great tension and interest to the story that old rascal Herod. I like your economy of words in this hymn making it so much easier to sing.
January 6th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes Orchi the famous story that sets the foundation for the New Testament and also the thematic conflict that gives great tension and interest to the story that old rascal Herod. I like your economy of words in this hymn making it so much easier to sing.
January 6th, 2026 04:09
Epiphany Enlightening
Dominic Windram said:
Nice write....really like the rhyme scheme & the vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2026 03:34
Dominic Windram said:
Nice write....really like the rhyme scheme & the vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2026 03:34
Pentecost Proclamation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Glug job, Orchi! Good job! Wait...P\'s proclamation is what now? Actually, don\'t answer that! 😜 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 16:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Glug job, Orchi! Good job! Wait...P\'s proclamation is what now? Actually, don\'t answer that! 😜 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 16:06
Pentecost Proclamation
Paul Bell said:
Happy new year to you.
Is it Pentecostal festival time or does that come later.
I\'m going to make an effort to churchify myself this year. l
January 5th, 2026 09:44
Paul Bell said:
Happy new year to you.
Is it Pentecostal festival time or does that come later.
I\'m going to make an effort to churchify myself this year. l
January 5th, 2026 09:44
Pentecost Proclamation
Friendship said:
Your poem reflects the prophetic vision of the future, emphasizing the outpouring of the Spirit of God upon all people, leading to divine revelations, signs, and the promise of salvation for those who call upon the Lord.
January 5th, 2026 07:37
Friendship said:
Your poem reflects the prophetic vision of the future, emphasizing the outpouring of the Spirit of God upon all people, leading to divine revelations, signs, and the promise of salvation for those who call upon the Lord.
January 5th, 2026 07:37
Pentecost Proclamation
arqios said:
In one accord! Mighty and rushing and windy🕊️🙏🏻
January 5th, 2026 06:52
arqios said:
In one accord! Mighty and rushing and windy🕊️🙏🏻
January 5th, 2026 06:52
Pentecost Proclamation
sorenbarrett said:
A rather well known excerpt there my friend that moon to blood thing I mean. I guess it was a rather graphic image that stuck in the mind of many. A good hymn that has to end on that last positive of being safe or everyone would go home and board up their windows. Nicely done Orchi
January 5th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A rather well known excerpt there my friend that moon to blood thing I mean. I guess it was a rather graphic image that stuck in the mind of many. A good hymn that has to end on that last positive of being safe or everyone would go home and board up their windows. Nicely done Orchi
January 5th, 2026 04:06
For New Year...
Neville said:
You should go wash your nib out in hot soapy water sir 😎
January 4th, 2026 14:06
Neville said:
You should go wash your nib out in hot soapy water sir 😎
January 4th, 2026 14:06
Returning Reconciliation
Thomas W Case said:
The natural imagery—dew, roots, branches—works well with the scripture. It gives the hymn a gentle flow.
January 4th, 2026 09:41
Thomas W Case said:
The natural imagery—dew, roots, branches—works well with the scripture. It gives the hymn a gentle flow.
January 4th, 2026 09:41
Returning Reconciliation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, Orchi. I really do love your hymn-poemns.
Glug.
Uh-oh. He\'s got something to say...you knowing who he be...
\"After last night\'s...glug...I be returning regurgitation! Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug! 🤮 🤣
January 4th, 2026 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, Orchi. I really do love your hymn-poemns.
Glug.
Uh-oh. He\'s got something to say...you knowing who he be...
\"After last night\'s...glug...I be returning regurgitation! Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug! 🤮 🤣
January 4th, 2026 09:26
Returning Reconciliation
Neville said:
This is very topical & whilst I know it won\'t go down all round and with everyone .. I fear it will take a very long time before Israel will be forgiven for taking vengeance far too far
January 4th, 2026 06:07
Neville said:
This is very topical & whilst I know it won\'t go down all round and with everyone .. I fear it will take a very long time before Israel will be forgiven for taking vengeance far too far
January 4th, 2026 06:07
Returning Reconciliation
sorenbarrett said:
God\'s promise to his people according to Biblical account. Very nicely worked into hymn form as a poem Orchi.
January 4th, 2026 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
God\'s promise to his people according to Biblical account. Very nicely worked into hymn form as a poem Orchi.
January 4th, 2026 03:42
Restoration Rejoicing
arqios said:
Joy in restoration! Still can’t believe it’s a national anthem. (Aside) 🕊️🙏🏻
January 3rd, 2026 18:00
arqios said:
Joy in restoration! Still can’t believe it’s a national anthem. (Aside) 🕊️🙏🏻
January 3rd, 2026 18:00
Restoration Rejoicing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is praise rooted in memory and hope together. You honor the text while letting it sing forward, reminding the listener that renewal follows scarcity. A beautiful, faithful rendering. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Now, do tell I pray thee, was P and co restored too?
Glug.
I guess not! 🤣
January 3rd, 2026 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is praise rooted in memory and hope together. You honor the text while letting it sing forward, reminding the listener that renewal follows scarcity. A beautiful, faithful rendering. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Now, do tell I pray thee, was P and co restored too?
Glug.
I guess not! 🤣
January 3rd, 2026 12:39
Restoration Rejoicing
Friendship said:
Your poem addresses themes of agricultural abundance, divine favor, and the joy of the community in response to God\'s restoration. It invokes agricultural imagery to symbolize spiritual and material prosperity, portraying a vision of renewal and celebration.
January 3rd, 2026 09:28
Friendship said:
Your poem addresses themes of agricultural abundance, divine favor, and the joy of the community in response to God\'s restoration. It invokes agricultural imagery to symbolize spiritual and material prosperity, portraying a vision of renewal and celebration.
January 3rd, 2026 09:28
Restoration Rejoicing
sorenbarrett said:
Wow Orchi I don\'t know about the locust thing I have tasted grasshopper but locust goes too far the legs have to be removed like stems from a cherry and the head is a bit mushy while the wings stick in one\'s throat. All kidding aside nicely done my friend well imaged and written
January 3rd, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Wow Orchi I don\'t know about the locust thing I have tasted grasshopper but locust goes too far the legs have to be removed like stems from a cherry and the head is a bit mushy while the wings stick in one\'s throat. All kidding aside nicely done my friend well imaged and written
January 3rd, 2026 03:54
Prayer Plea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn-poem, Orchi! But good thing I didn\'t just look at the title...or I might of thought it was you desperately and publicly pleading for the glugging to stop! I wouldn\'t blame the desperation...they really don\'t know how to quit! 🤣
January 2nd, 2026 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn-poem, Orchi! But good thing I didn\'t just look at the title...or I might of thought it was you desperately and publicly pleading for the glugging to stop! I wouldn\'t blame the desperation...they really don\'t know how to quit! 🤣
January 2nd, 2026 08:56
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