Comments received on poems by orchidee
Acquitting Advocate
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a wonderfully faithful adaptation. The progression from justification by faith to peace with God, then to grace, hope, and Christ as Advocate, gives the hymn a strong sense of movement and purpose. I especially liked the inclusion of the Paraclete note, which adds depth without interrupting the flow. Warm, encouraging, and thoughtfully crafted work, Orchi. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
One more thing… I appreciate the footnote for Paraclete…because otherwise Thomas would still be wondering why Romans 5 suddenly started talking about a pair of cleats. 👟😂
As for Popeye…well…after getting caught glugging the Judge’s spinach port reserves, the acquittal seems to have been withdrawn. The glugging has officially become gulping. 🥣😳😂🖤
May 28th, 2026 20:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a wonderfully faithful adaptation. The progression from justification by faith to peace with God, then to grace, hope, and Christ as Advocate, gives the hymn a strong sense of movement and purpose. I especially liked the inclusion of the Paraclete note, which adds depth without interrupting the flow. Warm, encouraging, and thoughtfully crafted work, Orchi. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
One more thing… I appreciate the footnote for Paraclete…because otherwise Thomas would still be wondering why Romans 5 suddenly started talking about a pair of cleats. 👟😂
As for Popeye…well…after getting caught glugging the Judge’s spinach port reserves, the acquittal seems to have been withdrawn. The glugging has officially become gulping. 🥣😳😂🖤
May 28th, 2026 20:34
Acquitting Advocate
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi the wording of this poem is most reminiscent of traditional church hymns and I would expect to hear it in most any Christian church. Well done my friend
May 28th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi the wording of this poem is most reminiscent of traditional church hymns and I would expect to hear it in most any Christian church. Well done my friend
May 28th, 2026 03:52
Hope of Help
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, there’s something deeply comforting and sorrowful intertwined through this. The old hymn structure gives the lament a steady heartbeat...like faith trying to stay upright while grief and exhaustion pull at it from every side. Really beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
And now, as foretold in the Third Book of Glugonicles...Saint Snoutius of the Sacred Mire took wing upon the Dove of Perpetual Soup and delivered unto Orchi the First Chalice of Eternal Glug. The clouds parted. The hymn modulated unexpectedly into kazoo.Zoohoozooo.....And lo, the heavenly choir sang in 4/4 time while Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus nodded solemnly from atop the Misty Spinach Steppes. 🥣🕊️⚰️📡🖤
May 27th, 2026 21:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, there’s something deeply comforting and sorrowful intertwined through this. The old hymn structure gives the lament a steady heartbeat...like faith trying to stay upright while grief and exhaustion pull at it from every side. Really beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
And now, as foretold in the Third Book of Glugonicles...Saint Snoutius of the Sacred Mire took wing upon the Dove of Perpetual Soup and delivered unto Orchi the First Chalice of Eternal Glug. The clouds parted. The hymn modulated unexpectedly into kazoo.Zoohoozooo.....And lo, the heavenly choir sang in 4/4 time while Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus nodded solemnly from atop the Misty Spinach Steppes. 🥣🕊️⚰️📡🖤
May 27th, 2026 21:48
Hope of Help
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic reassurance and admonition in this hymn for a people used to travail. Well done Orchi
May 27th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic reassurance and admonition in this hymn for a people used to travail. Well done Orchi
May 27th, 2026 04:26
Pentecost Promise
Paul Bell said:
Okay, had to google pentecost.
Now I realise I did\'nt get the holiday.
Heads will roll.
May 27th, 2026 02:58
Paul Bell said:
Okay, had to google pentecost.
Now I realise I did\'nt get the holiday.
Heads will roll.
May 27th, 2026 02:58
Pentecost Promise
Neville said:
another fine hymn poem from what I imagine must be the worlds largest hymn poem portfolio in the entire uni-verse .. Neville
May 26th, 2026 12:55
Neville said:
another fine hymn poem from what I imagine must be the worlds largest hymn poem portfolio in the entire uni-verse .. Neville
May 26th, 2026 12:55
Pentecost Promise
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminded me of those hymns that somehow feel both ancient and alive at the same time…the kind sung softly but carrying enormous weight underneath them. There’s a gentleness here that fits Pentecost beautifully. Also…”encove” sounds delightfully Orchi-esque and now my brain imagines Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus attempting to sing liturgy while trapped inside a nautical grammar vortex. A certain dog is facepalming, \"Ruh-roh\". 🤣 Strong and heartfelt writing, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminded me of those hymns that somehow feel both ancient and alive at the same time…the kind sung softly but carrying enormous weight underneath them. There’s a gentleness here that fits Pentecost beautifully. Also…”encove” sounds delightfully Orchi-esque and now my brain imagines Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus attempting to sing liturgy while trapped inside a nautical grammar vortex. A certain dog is facepalming, \"Ruh-roh\". 🤣 Strong and heartfelt writing, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:01
Pentecost Promise
sorenbarrett said:
Good hymn Orchi and most appropriate. Well done my friend
May 23rd, 2026 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
Good hymn Orchi and most appropriate. Well done my friend
May 23rd, 2026 12:45
A mega poem!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, hahaha...and there goes Fido again trying to staple reality back together while Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus and Ol’ Tomás argue over whether the Sacred Carp Scrolls prophesied this exact catastrophe. Meanwhile Scooby has eaten half the evidence, SpongeBob opened the Glug Portal by mistake, and Grape Ape (where the heck did he come from?) is somehow stuck in the fisherman’s annual. Now all that can be heard is, \"I yam what I yam, but I don\'t eat yams, I ams certain,\" followed by intergalactic arguing over socks, \"Ruh-roh,\" and incessant glugs between belch-like cries of \"Grape Ape!\" Absolute chaos, my friend. 🤣🌹🖤🙏
May 23rd, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, hahaha...and there goes Fido again trying to staple reality back together while Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus and Ol’ Tomás argue over whether the Sacred Carp Scrolls prophesied this exact catastrophe. Meanwhile Scooby has eaten half the evidence, SpongeBob opened the Glug Portal by mistake, and Grape Ape (where the heck did he come from?) is somehow stuck in the fisherman’s annual. Now all that can be heard is, \"I yam what I yam, but I don\'t eat yams, I ams certain,\" followed by intergalactic arguing over socks, \"Ruh-roh,\" and incessant glugs between belch-like cries of \"Grape Ape!\" Absolute chaos, my friend. 🤣🌹🖤🙏
May 23rd, 2026 10:24
A mega poem!
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure some Philosophy Critic would read this and see it as a Statement on \'Man\'s Relationship to Man\' . And Spout all sorts of things about the \'Subconscious\'. Or \'Duel Realty\'. Or maybe it\'s just all Nonsense.
Enjoyed.
May 22nd, 2026 18:36
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure some Philosophy Critic would read this and see it as a Statement on \'Man\'s Relationship to Man\' . And Spout all sorts of things about the \'Subconscious\'. Or \'Duel Realty\'. Or maybe it\'s just all Nonsense.
Enjoyed.
May 22nd, 2026 18:36
A mega poem!
Doggerel Dave said:
If I told ya your \"poem\" was a lengthy piece of drivel, and then retracted the word \'lengthy\', would ya be terribly offended?
It wasn\'t long enough to send me to sleep though....
May 22nd, 2026 16:59
Doggerel Dave said:
If I told ya your \"poem\" was a lengthy piece of drivel, and then retracted the word \'lengthy\', would ya be terribly offended?
It wasn\'t long enough to send me to sleep though....
May 22nd, 2026 16:59
Harvest Harmony
Neville said:
So its not true then .. You can tach an old rodent new tricks .. Bravo ..
May 20th, 2026 12:00
Neville said:
So its not true then .. You can tach an old rodent new tricks .. Bravo ..
May 20th, 2026 12:00
Harvest Harmony
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Also…I suspect somewhere deep in the archives of Glugminster Abbey there is now a choir of mildly confused monks trying to perform this while Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus waves a soup ladle like a conductor’s baton. And honestly? I’d attend that service. Lovely work as always, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 19:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Also…I suspect somewhere deep in the archives of Glugminster Abbey there is now a choir of mildly confused monks trying to perform this while Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus waves a soup ladle like a conductor’s baton. And honestly? I’d attend that service. Lovely work as always, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 19:50
Harvest Harmony
David Wakeling said:
Very clever construction here.A great tribute to the blessing of gOD
May 19th, 2026 02:39
David Wakeling said:
Very clever construction here.A great tribute to the blessing of gOD
May 19th, 2026 02:39
Harvest Harmony
Doggerel Dave said:
Not only the title, but also some content, gives me the feeling it could be a Harvest Festival hymn .. Wrong season for you?
May 18th, 2026 16:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Not only the title, but also some content, gives me the feeling it could be a Harvest Festival hymn .. Wrong season for you?
May 18th, 2026 16:34
Harvest Harmony
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme in this hymn Orchi. I especially loved the last verse. Well done my friend
May 18th, 2026 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme in this hymn Orchi. I especially loved the last verse. Well done my friend
May 18th, 2026 14:44
Harvest Harmony
Alex Arnot said:
Always love to experiment with structure! I think the refrain was very well done!
May 18th, 2026 13:53
Alex Arnot said:
Always love to experiment with structure! I think the refrain was very well done!
May 18th, 2026 13:53
Who writes this rubbish?!
NafisaSB said:
lol - your humour does bring a chuckle quite often...
May 17th, 2026 00:00
NafisaSB said:
lol - your humour does bring a chuckle quite often...
May 17th, 2026 00:00
Daily Bread
Neville said:
Another fine hymn poem & its good to note God is sympathetic to those who are not able to do such and such .. Neville
May 16th, 2026 11:43
Neville said:
Another fine hymn poem & its good to note God is sympathetic to those who are not able to do such and such .. Neville
May 16th, 2026 11:43
Matthias\' Mention
Neville said:
A fine & very detailed hymn poem .. I just hope they don\'t get bitten twice .. Neville
May 15th, 2026 12:34
Neville said:
A fine & very detailed hymn poem .. I just hope they don\'t get bitten twice .. Neville
May 15th, 2026 12:34
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