Comments received on poems by orchidee
Serenely Serving
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi I don\'t think that readers realize how difficult it is to set meter and rhyme with song. You need more recognition my friend. Well done
June 10th, 2026 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi I don\'t think that readers realize how difficult it is to set meter and rhyme with song. You need more recognition my friend. Well done
June 10th, 2026 11:26
Contrasting Considerations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, what a lovely adaptation. The themes of refuge, trust, justice, and humility weave together naturally, creating a hymn that feels both timeless and relevant. Also, I suspect Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solo has already claimed one pew, three hymnals, and half the church biscuits, which are now slathered in green, while singing along completely off-key. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, what a lovely adaptation. The themes of refuge, trust, justice, and humility weave together naturally, creating a hymn that feels both timeless and relevant. Also, I suspect Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solo has already claimed one pew, three hymnals, and half the church biscuits, which are now slathered in green, while singing along completely off-key. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:56
Heavenly Help
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is one heck of a hymn adaptation. The assurance woven throughout gives it real strength, and the journey from distress to confidence unfolds naturally. Also, I suspect the glugs have formed a protective choir around the holy hill by now...whether anyone asked them to or not. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is one heck of a hymn adaptation. The assurance woven throughout gives it real strength, and the journey from distress to confidence unfolds naturally. Also, I suspect the glugs have formed a protective choir around the holy hill by now...whether anyone asked them to or not. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:55
Contrasting Considerations
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Orchi it flows well and seems that it would do well with the music. A great hymn my friend
June 9th, 2026 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Orchi it flows well and seems that it would do well with the music. A great hymn my friend
June 9th, 2026 10:57
Contrasting Considerations
Neville said:
I see what you mean .. I also learnt a new word .. so thanks for that too .. Neville 👍
June 9th, 2026 10:06
Neville said:
I see what you mean .. I also learnt a new word .. so thanks for that too .. Neville 👍
June 9th, 2026 10:06
Heavenly Help
sorenbarrett said:
A good hymn Orchi it seems that all people look to their god to protect them from enemies. Here it is reflected again well done my friend
June 8th, 2026 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
A good hymn Orchi it seems that all people look to their god to protect them from enemies. Here it is reflected again well done my friend
June 8th, 2026 14:11
Living in the Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this really moved me. The call to awaken, walk wisely, and make good use of the time we are given comes through beautifully. Though I must confess I now picture Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus awakening from a sacred nap beneath the Tree of Psalm One, discovering that the Unglugly have hidden the Spinach Spirulina Scrolls in darkness. It was between that or Cherry Garcia...but fear not! For the Light revealeth all things...and thus the Great Glug Retrieval commenceth. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this really moved me. The call to awaken, walk wisely, and make good use of the time we are given comes through beautifully. Though I must confess I now picture Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus awakening from a sacred nap beneath the Tree of Psalm One, discovering that the Unglugly have hidden the Spinach Spirulina Scrolls in darkness. It was between that or Cherry Garcia...but fear not! For the Light revealeth all things...and thus the Great Glug Retrieval commenceth. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:53
Living in the Light
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely hymn or poem Orchi. As always nicely composed and so good to hear you back again
June 7th, 2026 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely hymn or poem Orchi. As always nicely composed and so good to hear you back again
June 7th, 2026 11:04
Two Ways Of Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this really moved me. Psalm 1 has always been one of those passages that feels both simple and profound, and you\'ve captured that beautifully in hymn form. The image of the tree remains as powerful as ever...though I must confess I am now imagining Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus planted beside those rivers, meditating day and night upon the Sacred Glug Scrolls while steadfastly refusing the counsel of the Unglugly. If he prospers, I suspect it will be in cherries and cream. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this really moved me. Psalm 1 has always been one of those passages that feels both simple and profound, and you\'ve captured that beautifully in hymn form. The image of the tree remains as powerful as ever...though I must confess I am now imagining Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus planted beside those rivers, meditating day and night upon the Sacred Glug Scrolls while steadfastly refusing the counsel of the Unglugly. If he prospers, I suspect it will be in cherries and cream. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 07:29
Two Ways Of Life
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi what happened to you this is the shortest hymn that you have ever done and the shortest that I have ever seen
June 6th, 2026 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi what happened to you this is the shortest hymn that you have ever done and the shortest that I have ever seen
June 6th, 2026 11:05
Grace Upon Grace
NafisaSB said:
they say that our destiny is chalked out when we are born, and yet prayers can change it....
June 2nd, 2026 02:13
NafisaSB said:
they say that our destiny is chalked out when we are born, and yet prayers can change it....
June 2nd, 2026 02:13
Trinity Trouble?
Goldfinch60 said:
Completely understand waht you are saying Orchi but if the chucg have a choir they would have learned the music,
Andy
June 2nd, 2026 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Completely understand waht you are saying Orchi but if the chucg have a choir they would have learned the music,
Andy
June 2nd, 2026 01:45
Trinity Trouble?
arqios said:
Ah, the woes of church music and worshipful adoration 🙏🏻🕊️
June 1st, 2026 19:50
arqios said:
Ah, the woes of church music and worshipful adoration 🙏🏻🕊️
June 1st, 2026 19:50
Trinity Trouble?
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem touches on the simple yet profound nature of the Trinity and contrasts it with the more mundane difficulties of church life, particularly the awkwardness of singing unknown tunes.
June 1st, 2026 18:15
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem touches on the simple yet profound nature of the Trinity and contrasts it with the more mundane difficulties of church life, particularly the awkwardness of singing unknown tunes.
June 1st, 2026 18:15
Trinity Trouble?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, Orchi, this is great. The unknown Psalm tune is a universal church experience. Everyone starts bravely, nobody knows where the melody is headed, and somehow we all emerge on the other side together. Meanwhile Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus, now performing under his stage name Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solo, is standing in the choir loft confidently singing an entirely different tune while Scooby assures everyone it is going \"Roh-Kay\". Sadly, Tom can\'t knit because Obi Wan thought his needle was safer to conduct with. \"You can\'t knit with just one, Oi be, You just can\'t!\" He keeps screaming over the glugs, but not one soul hears him. Thank you Popeye. Loved this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, Orchi, this is great. The unknown Psalm tune is a universal church experience. Everyone starts bravely, nobody knows where the melody is headed, and somehow we all emerge on the other side together. Meanwhile Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus, now performing under his stage name Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solo, is standing in the choir loft confidently singing an entirely different tune while Scooby assures everyone it is going \"Roh-Kay\". Sadly, Tom can\'t knit because Obi Wan thought his needle was safer to conduct with. \"You can\'t knit with just one, Oi be, You just can\'t!\" He keeps screaming over the glugs, but not one soul hears him. Thank you Popeye. Loved this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:49
Trinity Trouble?
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Orchi forgiveness is always easier to get than permission so don\'t tell em what you\'re going to do just sing it.
June 1st, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Orchi forgiveness is always easier to get than permission so don\'t tell em what you\'re going to do just sing it.
June 1st, 2026 04:21
Grace Upon Grace
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “grace upon grace in this” really stood out to me. It feels like the heartbeat of the hymn…God’s purpose unfolding not through merit, but through grace continually given. Beautiful work, Orchi. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
And, of course, Tom read “predestined” and immediately asked whether it was located near the Paraclete Swimwear Outlet. 👟😂 Meanwhile Popeye was quietly glugging from the Judge’s spinach port again, apparently having learned absolutely nothing. 🥣🖤
May 29th, 2026 23:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “grace upon grace in this” really stood out to me. It feels like the heartbeat of the hymn…God’s purpose unfolding not through merit, but through grace continually given. Beautiful work, Orchi. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
And, of course, Tom read “predestined” and immediately asked whether it was located near the Paraclete Swimwear Outlet. 👟😂 Meanwhile Popeye was quietly glugging from the Judge’s spinach port again, apparently having learned absolutely nothing. 🥣🖤
May 29th, 2026 23:30
Grace Upon Grace
Paul Bell said:
Forgiven sinners, pardoned free, I\'m in.
Okay, what is this form I need to sign.
May 29th, 2026 06:39
Paul Bell said:
Forgiven sinners, pardoned free, I\'m in.
Okay, what is this form I need to sign.
May 29th, 2026 06:39
Grace Upon Grace
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely freeing message Orchi although I am not religious I still hold the thought that all things happen for the best because true or not it leaves me happier. A very nice write my friend
May 29th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely freeing message Orchi although I am not religious I still hold the thought that all things happen for the best because true or not it leaves me happier. A very nice write my friend
May 29th, 2026 04:39
Grace Upon Grace
David Wakeling said:
A well constructed piece, discussing the power of God and Christ.Well done
May 29th, 2026 02:40
David Wakeling said:
A well constructed piece, discussing the power of God and Christ.Well done
May 29th, 2026 02:40
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