Comments received on poems by orchidee
To Praise Or Not?
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you are the Victor Borge of the site, he a master pianist you poetic hymn writer but comedian of the first rate at the same time. Love your style my friend.
March 6th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you are the Victor Borge of the site, he a master pianist you poetic hymn writer but comedian of the first rate at the same time. Love your style my friend.
March 6th, 2026 03:58
Garbage!
Friendship said:
Great job. Your poem humorously explores the seemingly pointless endeavor of writing poetry, highlighting the absurdity and self-deprecation of the poet\'s process. It illustrates a playful interaction between the poet and a talking dog, Fido, who questions the purpose and value of the poems being written.
March 2nd, 2026 19:04
Friendship said:
Great job. Your poem humorously explores the seemingly pointless endeavor of writing poetry, highlighting the absurdity and self-deprecation of the poet\'s process. It illustrates a playful interaction between the poet and a talking dog, Fido, who questions the purpose and value of the poems being written.
March 2nd, 2026 19:04
Garbage!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is deliberate chaos dressed as incompetence. The talking dog interrogation, the timed nonsense, the gleeful admission of wasting lives in 23-second increments…all of it builds toward that last absurd command. So fine. The tavern doors burst open. Enter Popeyeus Maxiums Solus, robes soaked in green brine, declaring the sacred rite of Literary Gluggery. Tankards rise. Foam spills. The talking dog howls. And somewhere in the rafters, 73836594 is already being drafted. Glug. Glug. GLUGGGGG. 🍺⚓🐶
Or...in other words...great, daft write, my friend. 🤣
March 2nd, 2026 10:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this is deliberate chaos dressed as incompetence. The talking dog interrogation, the timed nonsense, the gleeful admission of wasting lives in 23-second increments…all of it builds toward that last absurd command. So fine. The tavern doors burst open. Enter Popeyeus Maxiums Solus, robes soaked in green brine, declaring the sacred rite of Literary Gluggery. Tankards rise. Foam spills. The talking dog howls. And somewhere in the rafters, 73836594 is already being drafted. Glug. Glug. GLUGGGGG. 🍺⚓🐶
Or...in other words...great, daft write, my friend. 🤣
March 2nd, 2026 10:59
Garbage!
Doggerel Dave said:
As I scanned the running sheet of todays poems, I happened upon \'3:36 - Garbage!, by orchidee\' . Now I had a decision to make: was it a hymn? I don\'t mind your hymns, orchi, but too many upset me: here\'s orchi toddling off to Heaven when his time comes, and here\'s me, an unbeliever, could go anywhere or nowhere... thought perhaps I aught to leave it alone, just in case.....Do hope you understand.....
March 2nd, 2026 06:38
Doggerel Dave said:
As I scanned the running sheet of todays poems, I happened upon \'3:36 - Garbage!, by orchidee\' . Now I had a decision to make: was it a hymn? I don\'t mind your hymns, orchi, but too many upset me: here\'s orchi toddling off to Heaven when his time comes, and here\'s me, an unbeliever, could go anywhere or nowhere... thought perhaps I aught to leave it alone, just in case.....Do hope you understand.....
March 2nd, 2026 06:38
Garbage!
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Orchi Let Fido know that it is all the rage now days to recycle and what was one man\'s trash is now another\'s treasure. Different strokes for different folks or is that blokes
March 2nd, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Orchi Let Fido know that it is all the rage now days to recycle and what was one man\'s trash is now another\'s treasure. Different strokes for different folks or is that blokes
March 2nd, 2026 04:06
Cooooeee!!!
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s nice to see the madhouse is still going strong!!!, enjoy that roast, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:36
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s nice to see the madhouse is still going strong!!!, enjoy that roast, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:36
Cooooeee!!!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Not sure if that is a yellow lab or an English Cream Golden, but my daughter has the latter and that doggie\'s face looks very similar. Just thought I would glug...um...share. LOL! Orchi, this made me laugh… properly laugh. The playful mischief in it is unmistakable. It’s cheeky without being cruel, and that tone carries it. A fun detour my friend. Glug on, says you know who. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 28th, 2026 12:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Not sure if that is a yellow lab or an English Cream Golden, but my daughter has the latter and that doggie\'s face looks very similar. Just thought I would glug...um...share. LOL! Orchi, this made me laugh… properly laugh. The playful mischief in it is unmistakable. It’s cheeky without being cruel, and that tone carries it. A fun detour my friend. Glug on, says you know who. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 28th, 2026 12:27
Cooooeee!!!
2781 said:
I can tell your getting on...
It\'s been illegal to keep your wife in a kennel, since 1966.
The same doesn\'t apply to husbands, I believe.
February 28th, 2026 09:51
2781 said:
I can tell your getting on...
It\'s been illegal to keep your wife in a kennel, since 1966.
The same doesn\'t apply to husbands, I believe.
February 28th, 2026 09:51
Cooooeee!!!
Friendship said:
Well done, your poem presents a humorous tone. a dog named Fido, and another character referred to as KP. It reflects on themes of jealousy, competition for attention, and the playful banter that exists within the context of their interactions.
February 28th, 2026 08:56
Friendship said:
Well done, your poem presents a humorous tone. a dog named Fido, and another character referred to as KP. It reflects on themes of jealousy, competition for attention, and the playful banter that exists within the context of their interactions.
February 28th, 2026 08:56
Cooooeee!!!
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Orchi preaching hymns and throwing bones not much different than the common Sunday in church. Another good read my friend there must be quite a bone pile out back.
February 28th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Orchi preaching hymns and throwing bones not much different than the common Sunday in church. Another good read my friend there must be quite a bone pile out back.
February 28th, 2026 04:10
Intermittent
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Don\'t think you can escape the glugs. They follow...just an FYI! 🤣 Keeping you in my prayers, Orchi! Gonna miss you!
February 27th, 2026 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Don\'t think you can escape the glugs. They follow...just an FYI! 🤣 Keeping you in my prayers, Orchi! Gonna miss you!
February 27th, 2026 10:51
Intermittent
sorenbarrett said:
Will miss you when you are not here my friend wishing you the best and hope to hear from you soon.
February 27th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Will miss you when you are not here my friend wishing you the best and hope to hear from you soon.
February 27th, 2026 04:22
Wholesome Worship
Neville said:
I\'m so glad .. or should that read relieved .. you\'ve got your mojo back Stephen .................. 😎👍
February 26th, 2026 04:03
Neville said:
I\'m so glad .. or should that read relieved .. you\'ve got your mojo back Stephen .................. 😎👍
February 26th, 2026 04:03
22 Again!
NafisaSB said:
thanks for bringing a smile to my face as i enjoyed the read...
February 24th, 2026 00:38
NafisaSB said:
thanks for bringing a smile to my face as i enjoyed the read...
February 24th, 2026 00:38
Wholesome Worship
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem is a call to worship and praise God, celebrating His greatness, sovereignty, and the relationship between the divine and humanity. It emphasizes the importance of coming together to acknowledge God\'s power and providence.
February 23rd, 2026 18:46
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem is a call to worship and praise God, celebrating His greatness, sovereignty, and the relationship between the divine and humanity. It emphasizes the importance of coming together to acknowledge God\'s power and providence.
February 23rd, 2026 18:46
Wholesome Worship
Doggerel Dave said:
You aren\'t singing there are you orchi? God\'s probably terrified...!😂😊
February 23rd, 2026 17:36
Doggerel Dave said:
You aren\'t singing there are you orchi? God\'s probably terrified...!😂😊
February 23rd, 2026 17:36
Wholesome Worship
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, there’s something about Psalm settings that always brings me back to communal worship. This reads like it belongs in voices together, not alone. “We the people / Of His pasture” feels pastoral and reassuring. It carries comfort...in much the same way that P and Co carry glugs across a...don\'t answer that! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 10:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, there’s something about Psalm settings that always brings me back to communal worship. This reads like it belongs in voices together, not alone. “We the people / Of His pasture” feels pastoral and reassuring. It carries comfort...in much the same way that P and Co carry glugs across a...don\'t answer that! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 10:12
Wholesome Worship
sorenbarrett said:
In this hymn the security provided by a strong and powerful leader. Acknowledgement given to him. Nicely done Orchi
February 23rd, 2026 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
In this hymn the security provided by a strong and powerful leader. Acknowledgement given to him. Nicely done Orchi
February 23rd, 2026 07:00
Praise for Providings
Thomas W Case said:
Steady as an old hymn sung on a wooden porch—your faith walks without swagger, just certainty.
There’s comfort in this cadence, like a hand on the shoulder that doesn’t let go.
February 22nd, 2026 08:57
Thomas W Case said:
Steady as an old hymn sung on a wooden porch—your faith walks without swagger, just certainty.
There’s comfort in this cadence, like a hand on the shoulder that doesn’t let go.
February 22nd, 2026 08:57
Praise for Providings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn-poem, my friend. Trust in God is vital. Trust in the cessation of glugging...tomfoolery. Which do we choose...which do we choose! LOL! 😂
February 21st, 2026 10:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn-poem, my friend. Trust in God is vital. Trust in the cessation of glugging...tomfoolery. Which do we choose...which do we choose! LOL! 😂
February 21st, 2026 10:59
Praise for Providings
sorenbarrett said:
This Orchi is a hymn of support gained from above a hymn of trust and acknowledgement of God as a protector. Well written my friend
February 21st, 2026 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
This Orchi is a hymn of support gained from above a hymn of trust and acknowledgement of God as a protector. Well written my friend
February 21st, 2026 10:45
Hopeful Homes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this moves with such calm assurance that it lulls you…then suddenly you’re sentimental about Zion and family tables like it’s the emotional climax of Baters Season 1,000,001. The rhythm carries it. The imagery seals it. I am fully misted. Someone turn off the glugs! 🤣 Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this moves with such calm assurance that it lulls you…then suddenly you’re sentimental about Zion and family tables like it’s the emotional climax of Baters Season 1,000,001. The rhythm carries it. The imagery seals it. I am fully misted. Someone turn off the glugs! 🤣 Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:13
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