Comments received on poems by orchidee
A Son Brings Salvation - OT/NT Series 1
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. It\'s the run up to Christmas that I don\'t like. Yes, oops, what is \'Fer\'? lol. I think you looked about 8 mins after I posted the poem. I returned earlier to correct it to \'bring\'.
Also I hate Christmas morning cos some fat beardy bloke has come down me chimney and I have to spend all morning clearing up the soot in the lounge. Christmas dinner\'s not until Boxing Day! lol.
November 28th, 2025 07:51
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. It\'s the run up to Christmas that I don\'t like. Yes, oops, what is \'Fer\'? lol. I think you looked about 8 mins after I posted the poem. I returned earlier to correct it to \'bring\'.
Also I hate Christmas morning cos some fat beardy bloke has come down me chimney and I have to spend all morning clearing up the soot in the lounge. Christmas dinner\'s not until Boxing Day! lol.
November 28th, 2025 07:51
A Son Brings Salvation - OT/NT Series 1
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you know I hate Christmas but this is a wonderful hymn for the season that softens the blow of its advent. This is really one of my favorite of yours very well done and a fave. I am not sure but I think there are a couple of typos fourth line Fear for fer, third stanza first line bring for brign
November 28th, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you know I hate Christmas but this is a wonderful hymn for the season that softens the blow of its advent. This is really one of my favorite of yours very well done and a fave. I am not sure but I think there are a couple of typos fourth line Fear for fer, third stanza first line bring for brign
November 28th, 2025 03:40
I\'m \'orrible!
Goldfinch60 said:
She gave me the key to your ball and chain so you wouldn\'t put water in my whisky!
Andy
November 28th, 2025 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
She gave me the key to your ball and chain so you wouldn\'t put water in my whisky!
Andy
November 28th, 2025 01:56
I\'m \'orrible!
Friendship said:
The poem explores the humorous and somewhat absurd dynamics of a relationship, particularly focusing on the sense of entrapment and the playful banter between the speaker and KP (presumably a partner). The speaker expresses a tongue-in-cheek lamentation about being \"changed\" by marriage, suggesting both a loss of freedom and a playful acceptance of their situation.
November 27th, 2025 08:45
Friendship said:
The poem explores the humorous and somewhat absurd dynamics of a relationship, particularly focusing on the sense of entrapment and the playful banter between the speaker and KP (presumably a partner). The speaker expresses a tongue-in-cheek lamentation about being \"changed\" by marriage, suggesting both a loss of freedom and a playful acceptance of their situation.
November 27th, 2025 08:45
I\'m \'orrible!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In the wee hours of the mornin\'
Where the cock crows so loudly,
A poet, Orchidee, on the sunrise bornin\'
An escape from KP avowedly.
In nomine Patris, et Filis, et glug glug glug Sancti! Amen!
Damn it P! Couldn\'t you wait seven extra beats? 🤷♂️
He\'s incorrigible I tell you! 🤣
November 27th, 2025 07:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In the wee hours of the mornin\'
Where the cock crows so loudly,
A poet, Orchidee, on the sunrise bornin\'
An escape from KP avowedly.
In nomine Patris, et Filis, et glug glug glug Sancti! Amen!
Damn it P! Couldn\'t you wait seven extra beats? 🤷♂️
He\'s incorrigible I tell you! 🤣
November 27th, 2025 07:33
I\'m \'orrible!
Doggerel Dave said:
Your domestic dynamics do appear somewhat........................................................
November 27th, 2025 05:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Your domestic dynamics do appear somewhat........................................................
November 27th, 2025 05:45
I\'m \'orrible!
sorenbarrett said:
Always knew you were kind Orchi but double portions exceeds even your measures of kindness. Another fun read.
November 27th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Always knew you were kind Orchi but double portions exceeds even your measures of kindness. Another fun read.
November 27th, 2025 04:04
The Living And The Lifeless
Doggerel Dave said:
When I were young, I worked with an old bloke who summed up nicely far too many of the people around with the dismissal \"They\'re dead but they won\'t lie down\".
November 26th, 2025 18:52
Doggerel Dave said:
When I were young, I worked with an old bloke who summed up nicely far too many of the people around with the dismissal \"They\'re dead but they won\'t lie down\".
November 26th, 2025 18:52
The Living And The Lifeless
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job Orchi! By the title, I thought you were differentiating between gluggers and knitters if you catch my...never mind! 🤣
November 26th, 2025 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job Orchi! By the title, I thought you were differentiating between gluggers and knitters if you catch my...never mind! 🤣
November 26th, 2025 11:24
The Living And The Lifeless
Paul Bell said:
The best part of church is definitely the hymns.
The sinning part where they shout, and you always think it\'s you they\'re pointing too, is a bit off-putting.
Glad I\'ve got god on my side.
November 26th, 2025 10:04
Paul Bell said:
The best part of church is definitely the hymns.
The sinning part where they shout, and you always think it\'s you they\'re pointing too, is a bit off-putting.
Glad I\'ve got god on my side.
November 26th, 2025 10:04
The Living And The Lifeless
Katie B. said:
Well written, powerful. I enjoyed reading it.
November 26th, 2025 06:13
Katie B. said:
Well written, powerful. I enjoyed reading it.
November 26th, 2025 06:13
The Living And The Lifeless
sorenbarrett said:
This one a hymn and poem of proclamation it rings out in rhyme. Very nicely done Orchi loved it
November 26th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
This one a hymn and poem of proclamation it rings out in rhyme. Very nicely done Orchi loved it
November 26th, 2025 04:28
The Temporary And The Eternal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn poem too. Whew...snuck that in before ....do you hear that clicking sound. Tom?
November 25th, 2025 23:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great hymn poem too. Whew...snuck that in before ....do you hear that clicking sound. Tom?
November 25th, 2025 23:15
The Temporary And The Eternal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Plenty is temporary...Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug....
Sadly, that is not one of them! 🤣 You\'ve now met:
THE ETERNAL GLUGGER
November 25th, 2025 23:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Plenty is temporary...Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug....
Sadly, that is not one of them! 🤣 You\'ve now met:
THE ETERNAL GLUGGER
November 25th, 2025 23:07
The Temporary And The Eternal
Doggerel Dave said:
Temporary is always a waste of time and effort - go for the eternal.....
November 25th, 2025 16:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Temporary is always a waste of time and effort - go for the eternal.....
November 25th, 2025 16:49
The Temporary And The Eternal
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one Orchi it has a ring to it declaring freedom for a people. Nicely done
November 25th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one Orchi it has a ring to it declaring freedom for a people. Nicely done
November 25th, 2025 04:05
Seek And Find
arqios said:
Knock, knock, knockin\' on Heaven\'s door, here!
November 24th, 2025 23:33
arqios said:
Knock, knock, knockin\' on Heaven\'s door, here!
November 24th, 2025 23:33
Seek And Find
arqios said:
A peaceful quality and a sanctuary to the soul here. Thanks O 🕊️🙏
November 24th, 2025 23:19
arqios said:
A peaceful quality and a sanctuary to the soul here. Thanks O 🕊️🙏
November 24th, 2025 23:19
Seek And Find
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There was a sailor named P,
He ate spinach till he was green.
Cause he sought, found a place to pee
Olive says he\'s gross and mean. #TrueStory
Great write, Orchi! Love your Hymn-Poems, my friend. Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug! Damn it...I told him to watch that when I was being serious!
November 24th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There was a sailor named P,
He ate spinach till he was green.
Cause he sought, found a place to pee
Olive says he\'s gross and mean. #TrueStory
Great write, Orchi! Love your Hymn-Poems, my friend. Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug! Damn it...I told him to watch that when I was being serious!
November 24th, 2025 08:51
Victory Vindicated
Paul Bell said:
The thing that always confused me. Are the Israelites\' god\'s people and who are the others.
People always say they fight in the name of god, or maybe use the name of god for fighting.
Enlighten me.
November 24th, 2025 05:23
Paul Bell said:
The thing that always confused me. Are the Israelites\' god\'s people and who are the others.
People always say they fight in the name of god, or maybe use the name of god for fighting.
Enlighten me.
November 24th, 2025 05:23
Seek And Find
sorenbarrett said:
Another great hymn Orchi this one in timely fashion speaks of Thanks giving at that time of the year in the north western hemisphere where pilgrims, harvest and thanks for indigenous sharing is celebrated. I think that in England it would be in July marking the day they got rid of those pesky colonials
November 24th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Another great hymn Orchi this one in timely fashion speaks of Thanks giving at that time of the year in the north western hemisphere where pilgrims, harvest and thanks for indigenous sharing is celebrated. I think that in England it would be in July marking the day they got rid of those pesky colonials
November 24th, 2025 04:01
Victory Vindicated
2781 said:
☆That was that a case of,
Be still, and know that I am God.
November 22nd, 2025 09:04
2781 said:
☆That was that a case of,
Be still, and know that I am God.
November 22nd, 2025 09:04
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