Comments received on poems by orchidee
Daily Bread
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What really stayed with me here, Orchi, is “But not forsake nor scorn.” That turn gives the whole piece its heart for me. Correction paired with compassion instead of condemnation. Lovely and deeply needed sentiment, my friend.
Now naturally…Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus heard “daily bread” and immediately arrived demanding six loaves and a ceremonial barrel of glug green wine for “liturgical purposes only.” Why is it green? You find that out at WCAT.huh? 🍞🍷 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What really stayed with me here, Orchi, is “But not forsake nor scorn.” That turn gives the whole piece its heart for me. Correction paired with compassion instead of condemnation. Lovely and deeply needed sentiment, my friend.
Now naturally…Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus heard “daily bread” and immediately arrived demanding six loaves and a ceremonial barrel of glug green wine for “liturgical purposes only.” Why is it green? You find that out at WCAT.huh? 🍞🍷 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:42
The Spirit Sent
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What really stayed with me here, Orchi, is “For He shall not speak of Himself.” There’s such humility and theological depth packed into that section. The whole piece feels prayerful without losing its poetic rhythm. Beautifully done, my friend.
Now pass the communion glug chalice before Popeyeus Maximus Solus drinks the entire green liturgy again. 🍷
May 11th, 2026 19:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What really stayed with me here, Orchi, is “For He shall not speak of Himself.” There’s such humility and theological depth packed into that section. The whole piece feels prayerful without losing its poetic rhythm. Beautifully done, my friend.
Now pass the communion glug chalice before Popeyeus Maximus Solus drinks the entire green liturgy again. 🍷
May 11th, 2026 19:11
Daily Bread
David Wakeling said:
A great tribute to the need to earn your keep.God will provide if you work at it
May 11th, 2026 17:32
David Wakeling said:
A great tribute to the need to earn your keep.God will provide if you work at it
May 11th, 2026 17:32
Daily Bread
arqios said:
Wow now that’s a full steak dinner… well it’s at Corinth and one couldn’t expect any less 🥩🙏🏻🕊️
May 11th, 2026 17:09
arqios said:
Wow now that’s a full steak dinner… well it’s at Corinth and one couldn’t expect any less 🥩🙏🏻🕊️
May 11th, 2026 17:09
Daily Bread
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the importance of hard work and community responsibility within the framework of faith.
May 11th, 2026 12:14
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the importance of hard work and community responsibility within the framework of faith.
May 11th, 2026 12:14
Who writes this rubbish?!
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
lol 😂 I think 🤔 all your work gets more faves than you realize
May 11th, 2026 07:30
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
lol 😂 I think 🤔 all your work gets more faves than you realize
May 11th, 2026 07:30
The Spirit Sent
Doggerel Dave said:
* to ask = from \' rogare\', for Rogation Sunday.
Relax O Wise One - your task is complete. You have completely confused a recalcitrant heathen who has not the slightest notion of that about which you sing.
How does a simple unambiguous word like \'ask\' get to rogate, is wot I wanter know....
May 10th, 2026 16:39
Doggerel Dave said:
* to ask = from \' rogare\', for Rogation Sunday.
Relax O Wise One - your task is complete. You have completely confused a recalcitrant heathen who has not the slightest notion of that about which you sing.
How does a simple unambiguous word like \'ask\' get to rogate, is wot I wanter know....
May 10th, 2026 16:39
The Spirit Sent
arqios said:
Ah, tharr she blows! Pentecost is coming and the gear up is rogating 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 16:13
arqios said:
Ah, tharr she blows! Pentecost is coming and the gear up is rogating 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 16:13
Who writes this rubbish?!
Doggerel Dave said:
You are a real conformist ain\'t yer? With the rest of the world so daft and dotty, why not you too?
May 9th, 2026 20:23
Doggerel Dave said:
You are a real conformist ain\'t yer? With the rest of the world so daft and dotty, why not you too?
May 9th, 2026 20:23
Who writes this rubbish?!
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous Orchi you bring smiles to sullen faces and a bit of joy to an old curmudgeon like me.
May 9th, 2026 18:44
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous Orchi you bring smiles to sullen faces and a bit of joy to an old curmudgeon like me.
May 9th, 2026 18:44
Who writes this rubbish?!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi 😂 I imagine the farm now stretches somewhere between the WCAT multiverse and the outer glug territories…where every time you write a “sensible” poem, the tractor stalls out in protest and Fido demands more bark bark content immediately. Priorities, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi 😂 I imagine the farm now stretches somewhere between the WCAT multiverse and the outer glug territories…where every time you write a “sensible” poem, the tractor stalls out in protest and Fido demands more bark bark content immediately. Priorities, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:07
A Poem by Fido
Doggerel Dave said:
Orchi, I\'m sure we have had this out before: Fido should only bark when a \'poet\' gives their piece of graffiti an18+ and the subject matter is buttercups and roses.
May 8th, 2026 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Orchi, I\'m sure we have had this out before: Fido should only bark when a \'poet\' gives their piece of graffiti an18+ and the subject matter is buttercups and roses.
May 8th, 2026 18:37
A Poem by Fido
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am rolling over here Orchi! By the title, I almost thought this was for Doggrel Dave...but okay, nah...just kidding there. Never crossed my mind, I promise Dave.
😂🤣🙃
The whole thing spirals beautifully from playful nonsense into fully self-aware chaos...Fido lecturing humanity, Popeye glugging philosophically in the background, and Scooby absolutely panicking:
“Rikes! Rhat dog can ralk! Rhehehehehehe!”
Meanwhile Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus just mutters:
“I yam what I yam...an’ the checkbox be checked.” 🤣
This is delightfully unhinged, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 16:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am rolling over here Orchi! By the title, I almost thought this was for Doggrel Dave...but okay, nah...just kidding there. Never crossed my mind, I promise Dave.
😂🤣🙃
The whole thing spirals beautifully from playful nonsense into fully self-aware chaos...Fido lecturing humanity, Popeye glugging philosophically in the background, and Scooby absolutely panicking:
“Rikes! Rhat dog can ralk! Rhehehehehehe!”
Meanwhile Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus just mutters:
“I yam what I yam...an’ the checkbox be checked.” 🤣
This is delightfully unhinged, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 16:19
A Poem by Fido
sorenbarrett said:
Good thing he barks worse than his bite. I have had enough critics bite. Good write Orchi
May 8th, 2026 15:46
sorenbarrett said:
Good thing he barks worse than his bite. I have had enough critics bite. Good write Orchi
May 8th, 2026 15:46
Oh no - a repeat!
Neville said:
Sometimes I prefer repeats to the new stuff .. just saying on behalf of a ferret ..
May 5th, 2026 04:37
Neville said:
Sometimes I prefer repeats to the new stuff .. just saying on behalf of a ferret ..
May 5th, 2026 04:37
Oh no - a repeat!
Goldfinch60 said:
Fun words Orchi but here is a serious video for you https://youtu.be/yoAbXwr3qkg?si=_48HYgelBhGrlnjv
May 5th, 2026 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Fun words Orchi but here is a serious video for you https://youtu.be/yoAbXwr3qkg?si=_48HYgelBhGrlnjv
May 5th, 2026 01:51
Now lookie here...
NafisaSB said:
some soap operas are so bad they put you off the small screen forever - your rant is well timed...
May 4th, 2026 23:39
NafisaSB said:
some soap operas are so bad they put you off the small screen forever - your rant is well timed...
May 4th, 2026 23:39
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