Comments received on poems by orchidee
The Immortal and the Mortal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, I was singing along quite happily until you started calculating our expiration dates! P. Solus has now hidden the calendar and ordered enough spinach to survive until 10,101,010. He\'s destined to make his lifespan metrical. I told him that\'s not how it works. He glugged anyway. 🤷♂️🤣 Powerful hymn, my friend...if slightly alarming! lol. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, I was singing along quite happily until you started calculating our expiration dates! P. Solus has now hidden the calendar and ordered enough spinach to survive until 10,101,010. He\'s destined to make his lifespan metrical. I told him that\'s not how it works. He glugged anyway. 🤷♂️🤣 Powerful hymn, my friend...if slightly alarming! lol. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:21
The Immortal and the Mortal
Neville said:
I kind of liked this hymn poem Orchidee, it wasn\'t too heavy .. just wondering tho\' is there something or somewhere in between immortal & mortal, something like a bridge, window, door or a portal .. maybe 😎👍
July 20th, 2026 07:44
Neville said:
I kind of liked this hymn poem Orchidee, it wasn\'t too heavy .. just wondering tho\' is there something or somewhere in between immortal & mortal, something like a bridge, window, door or a portal .. maybe 😎👍
July 20th, 2026 07:44
The Immortal and the Mortal
Doggerel Dave said:
The immoral you say? Probably live to 140.... (\"Only the good....\")
July 19th, 2026 15:25
Doggerel Dave said:
The immoral you say? Probably live to 140.... (\"Only the good....\")
July 19th, 2026 15:25
The Immortal and the Mortal
sorenbarrett said:
Another fine hymn Orchi I particularly like this one asking what seems reasonable and right. Well done
July 19th, 2026 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
Another fine hymn Orchi I particularly like this one asking what seems reasonable and right. Well done
July 19th, 2026 11:14
Secure Stone
James Michael said:
Biblical correct and uplifting. Very well written. No way is it A.I. generated.
Sorry about that last bit. I need to stop being a curmudgeon!
July 18th, 2026 17:40
James Michael said:
Biblical correct and uplifting. Very well written. No way is it A.I. generated.
Sorry about that last bit. I need to stop being a curmudgeon!
July 18th, 2026 17:40
Secure Stone
sorenbarrett said:
Here is another of your wonderful hymns. You may ask why a nonreligious guy like me enjoys hymns, it is because they are poetry and music both of which I worship. Good one Orchi
July 18th, 2026 09:44
sorenbarrett said:
Here is another of your wonderful hymns. You may ask why a nonreligious guy like me enjoys hymns, it is because they are poetry and music both of which I worship. Good one Orchi
July 18th, 2026 09:44
Secure Stone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a faith-filled hymn, Orchi! The rejected one becomes the strength holding everything together, and salvation opens what exclusion tried to close. Even Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus could not build a foundation that strong with reinforced spinach! Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a faith-filled hymn, Orchi! The rejected one becomes the strength holding everything together, and salvation opens what exclusion tried to close. Even Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus could not build a foundation that strong with reinforced spinach! Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:41
Refreshment Request
Doggerel Dave said:
I certainly developed a thirst, orchi. Not diversifying into the soft drinks business are ya?
July 17th, 2026 19:02
Doggerel Dave said:
I certainly developed a thirst, orchi. Not diversifying into the soft drinks business are ya?
July 17th, 2026 19:02
Refreshment Request
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful hymn Orchi. These bring back memories of my childhood and Sunday church. Well done my friend
July 17th, 2026 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful hymn Orchi. These bring back memories of my childhood and Sunday church. Well done my friend
July 17th, 2026 11:04
Refreshment Request
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a refreshing hymn, Orchi! The movement from spiritual exhaustion to renewal and outward witness is beautifully carried throughout. Even Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus might trade his spinach for a little living water after this one! Nah...prob not. Still, wonderful work, my friend. 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a refreshing hymn, Orchi! The movement from spiritual exhaustion to renewal and outward witness is beautifully carried throughout. Even Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus might trade his spinach for a little living water after this one! Nah...prob not. Still, wonderful work, my friend. 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 10:09
Maths Muddle
Doggerel Dave said:
Ms. Phasis marched through your poem beating a drum. Emily Phasis, or Em for short..... or long....or any which way you want to pitch it...
July 14th, 2026 20:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Ms. Phasis marched through your poem beating a drum. Emily Phasis, or Em for short..... or long....or any which way you want to pitch it...
July 14th, 2026 20:08
Maths Muddle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, you\'ve done it now. Poor Mr. Ray D. Us has been arrested by Inspector Geo Nometry for aiding and abetting Al Gebra...while Scooby has wisely invoked his right to be held by...Ol\' Tomas. Shaggy two-timed him yesterday. 😂 I suspect Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus funded the whole curriculum anyway...provided everyone passed Spinach 101 with honors. Glorious silliness, my friend. 🌯🚪☯️🙏
July 14th, 2026 19:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, you\'ve done it now. Poor Mr. Ray D. Us has been arrested by Inspector Geo Nometry for aiding and abetting Al Gebra...while Scooby has wisely invoked his right to be held by...Ol\' Tomas. Shaggy two-timed him yesterday. 😂 I suspect Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus funded the whole curriculum anyway...provided everyone passed Spinach 101 with honors. Glorious silliness, my friend. 🌯🚪☯️🙏
July 14th, 2026 19:29
Maths Muddle
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun, dear Sir. Thank you so very much for sharing your most excellent wittiness.
July 14th, 2026 18:50
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun, dear Sir. Thank you so very much for sharing your most excellent wittiness.
July 14th, 2026 18:50
Maths Muddle
Kevin Hulme said:
Makes me laugh when someone is called. \'A stupid Idiot\'. Why add the word Stupid. They\'re an Idiot, so we assume Stupid. There. I\'ll go and have a lie down after that. Quite worn me out.
July 14th, 2026 16:10
Kevin Hulme said:
Makes me laugh when someone is called. \'A stupid Idiot\'. Why add the word Stupid. They\'re an Idiot, so we assume Stupid. There. I\'ll go and have a lie down after that. Quite worn me out.
July 14th, 2026 16:10
Maths Muddle
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a fun and creative write my friend they must be a friend of Cal Q Lus of Prob A. Bility a couple of hard heads. A fave my friend
July 14th, 2026 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a fun and creative write my friend they must be a friend of Cal Q Lus of Prob A. Bility a couple of hard heads. A fave my friend
July 14th, 2026 13:11
\'orrible!
Goldfinch60 said:
Beware she may get her revenge, a friend of mine lives next door to her mother and you would not want to argue with her!!
Andy
July 13th, 2026 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Beware she may get her revenge, a friend of mine lives next door to her mother and you would not want to argue with her!!
Andy
July 13th, 2026 01:13
\'orrible!
Thomas W Case said:
Savage humor with a crooked grin—you swing insults like a rusted blade and make it sing.
There’s rot under the laughter, and you let it stink just enough to feel true.
July 12th, 2026 09:41
Thomas W Case said:
Savage humor with a crooked grin—you swing insults like a rusted blade and make it sing.
There’s rot under the laughter, and you let it stink just enough to feel true.
July 12th, 2026 09:41
\'orrible!
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you sound so Rodney Dangerfield in this as he said \"You must have been something before electricity madam\"
July 12th, 2026 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
Orchi you sound so Rodney Dangerfield in this as he said \"You must have been something before electricity madam\"
July 12th, 2026 08:10
\'orrible!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, you had me laughing from the first stanza. 😂 Poor KP...though I suspect Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus has already declared your household a sovereign province of Glugana, where roast dinners are reserved for those deemed sufficiently gluggified. Wonderful write, my friend. Have you seen the latest Baters\' episode? If not, let me tell you...it\'s explosive. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, you had me laughing from the first stanza. 😂 Poor KP...though I suspect Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus has already declared your household a sovereign province of Glugana, where roast dinners are reserved for those deemed sufficiently gluggified. Wonderful write, my friend. Have you seen the latest Baters\' episode? If not, let me tell you...it\'s explosive. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:37
Discovering
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
lol 😂 are you human ? One thinks 🤔 you may or may not be. lol 😂
July 10th, 2026 14:13
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
lol 😂 are you human ? One thinks 🤔 you may or may not be. lol 😂
July 10th, 2026 14:13
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