Comments received on poems by orchidee
Troubled Times
sorenbarrett said:
That is a good story well told in poetic form Orchi nicely set for the season another good hymn my friend
March 31st, 2026 10:47
sorenbarrett said:
That is a good story well told in poetic form Orchi nicely set for the season another good hymn my friend
March 31st, 2026 10:47
Gethsemane Gazing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this carries real reverence…you let the moment breathe without forcing it. It walks like a true hymn…steady, grounded, and honest to the weight of it. And then I can’t help but see it…Jesus pouring Himself out while Popeye’s over there trying to keep one eye open while glugging in his sleep (gleeping?)…muttering something about staying strong…Obi Wan gripping his cloak like he’s ready for action…until he’s not…gone…off with the lightsaber instincts again…while Ol Tomás…well…he’s already halfway down the stream wondering where his robe went. That\'s what happens when you run away naked. 🤷♂️🤣 Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 31st, 2026 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this carries real reverence…you let the moment breathe without forcing it. It walks like a true hymn…steady, grounded, and honest to the weight of it. And then I can’t help but see it…Jesus pouring Himself out while Popeye’s over there trying to keep one eye open while glugging in his sleep (gleeping?)…muttering something about staying strong…Obi Wan gripping his cloak like he’s ready for action…until he’s not…gone…off with the lightsaber instincts again…while Ol Tomás…well…he’s already halfway down the stream wondering where his robe went. That\'s what happens when you run away naked. 🤷♂️🤣 Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 31st, 2026 09:26
Gethsemane Gazing
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward account there, orchi - Even I could follow it (the account) tough times.
March 31st, 2026 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward account there, orchi - Even I could follow it (the account) tough times.
March 31st, 2026 05:27
Gethsemane Gazing
sorenbarrett said:
You can never rely on even close friends. A wonderful hymn Orchi it carries spiritual and non spiritual messages. Nicely done
March 30th, 2026 15:15
sorenbarrett said:
You can never rely on even close friends. A wonderful hymn Orchi it carries spiritual and non spiritual messages. Nicely done
March 30th, 2026 15:15
Gethsemane Gazing
Neville said:
I feel my religious education has been enhanced as of just now .. Ta .. Neville
March 30th, 2026 13:43
Neville said:
I feel my religious education has been enhanced as of just now .. Ta .. Neville
March 30th, 2026 13:43
Simon\'s Sifting
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, there’s a real steadiness to this…you carry the weight of the passage without losing its humanity, especially in Peter’s moment.
And haha…somewhere in all this, Popeye isn’t being sifted…he’s shifting under a five-ton can of spinach glug juice, trying to hold it together. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, there’s a real steadiness to this…you carry the weight of the passage without losing its humanity, especially in Peter’s moment.
And haha…somewhere in all this, Popeye isn’t being sifted…he’s shifting under a five-ton can of spinach glug juice, trying to hold it together. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:11
Simon\'s Sifting
Doggerel Dave said:
Gotta be an inside story here - woz the evidence rigged? A fit up?
March 29th, 2026 18:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Gotta be an inside story here - woz the evidence rigged? A fit up?
March 29th, 2026 18:59
Simon\'s Sifting
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem centers on a biblical narrative in which Jesus foretells Peter\'s denial during the events leading up to the crucifixion. The central idea revolves around the themes of faith, temptation, and the struggle against doubt. It explores the dynamic between Jesus and Peter, highlighting the tension between Peter\'s confidence and Jesus\'s forewarning of his impending denial.
March 29th, 2026 16:39
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem centers on a biblical narrative in which Jesus foretells Peter\'s denial during the events leading up to the crucifixion. The central idea revolves around the themes of faith, temptation, and the struggle against doubt. It explores the dynamic between Jesus and Peter, highlighting the tension between Peter\'s confidence and Jesus\'s forewarning of his impending denial.
March 29th, 2026 16:39
Simon\'s Sifting
sorenbarrett said:
A tough message to swallow. A great hymn with good rhyme my friend
March 29th, 2026 12:00
sorenbarrett said:
A tough message to swallow. A great hymn with good rhyme my friend
March 29th, 2026 12:00
Palms of Peace
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, Orchi! Happy gluggy Week.
😤
Now...Popeye...this is not the time to glug. You are supposed to be fasting!
Sorry about that mate. He\'s really incorrigble! That aside, and in all seriousness, well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, Orchi! Happy gluggy Week.
😤
Now...Popeye...this is not the time to glug. You are supposed to be fasting!
Sorry about that mate. He\'s really incorrigble! That aside, and in all seriousness, well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:27
Palms of Peace
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories of childhood - apart from my Sunday School attendance book filled with coloured stamps, this time of year gave me a small cross made, almost origami like out of a palm frond.
March 28th, 2026 18:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories of childhood - apart from my Sunday School attendance book filled with coloured stamps, this time of year gave me a small cross made, almost origami like out of a palm frond.
March 28th, 2026 18:22
Palms of Peace
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful poem for this time of year Orchi. I still wonder who that donkey belonged to. Did he get it from Aesop?
March 28th, 2026 12:23
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful poem for this time of year Orchi. I still wonder who that donkey belonged to. Did he get it from Aesop?
March 28th, 2026 12:23
Trusting Truly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this holds both reverence and rhythm… it walks like a hymn but breathes like a prayer. And then somewhere in the cadence I can almost hear ol’ Tomás humming along in the back pew… Popeyeus Glug Maxiumus Solus nodding with full solemn authority… until the glug kicks in and the whole choir forgets the tune and meter and just goes with it anyway. Faith… but make it wonderfully human. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi, this holds both reverence and rhythm… it walks like a hymn but breathes like a prayer. And then somewhere in the cadence I can almost hear ol’ Tomás humming along in the back pew… Popeyeus Glug Maxiumus Solus nodding with full solemn authority… until the glug kicks in and the whole choir forgets the tune and meter and just goes with it anyway. Faith… but make it wonderfully human. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:33
Trusting Truly
sorenbarrett said:
Another good hymn Orchi one of trust and reliance which there is little of these days. Nicely done my friend
March 27th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Another good hymn Orchi one of trust and reliance which there is little of these days. Nicely done my friend
March 27th, 2026 04:32
Peace Possible?
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s the time frame on this, orchi? Completion date?
March 26th, 2026 01:29
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s the time frame on this, orchi? Completion date?
March 26th, 2026 01:29
Peace Possible?
Neville said:
Now this is what I call a hymn poem .. and its write up my alley & that aint rude or nothing .. okay 😎👍
March 25th, 2026 12:02
Neville said:
Now this is what I call a hymn poem .. and its write up my alley & that aint rude or nothing .. okay 😎👍
March 25th, 2026 12:02
Peace Possible?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this holds together with purpose…structured, faithful, and clear in its vision of peace carried through action. It doesn’t wander, it doesn’t dilute…it just walks the line and lets the promise speak. And it lands true.
…now then…steady hymn voice, all proper and upright…and just when we’re all nodding along…glug…glug…GLUG...🥬🤮 What on earth are they up this time? WCAT! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this holds together with purpose…structured, faithful, and clear in its vision of peace carried through action. It doesn’t wander, it doesn’t dilute…it just walks the line and lets the promise speak. And it lands true.
…now then…steady hymn voice, all proper and upright…and just when we’re all nodding along…glug…glug…GLUG...🥬🤮 What on earth are they up this time? WCAT! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:45
Peace Possible?
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful dream still unfulfilled Orchi. Nicely written my friend this would be so nice if it were ever to happen. Nicely written my friend
March 25th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful dream still unfulfilled Orchi. Nicely written my friend this would be so nice if it were ever to happen. Nicely written my friend
March 25th, 2026 04:13
Intermittent
Neville said:
I may be late here, but I hope things are much better there .. Neville
March 24th, 2026 06:46
Neville said:
I may be late here, but I hope things are much better there .. Neville
March 24th, 2026 06:46
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NafisaSB said:
getting to know you and yours through your poems ...
March 24th, 2026 00:43
NafisaSB said:
getting to know you and yours through your poems ...
March 24th, 2026 00:43
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