Comments on community poems by burning-embers
- Not a lonely bird (Malubotelho)
Oh this is gorgeous! You seduce me with your first four lines. So much so...
July 5th, 2017 20:56 - When I\'m low (Just a girl.)
Passion, deceit, anticipation, guilt, exhilaration, all there crafted into...
July 5th, 2017 20:43 - Found Love Again (Lanejamesc)
Reads like you were thinking out loud and came to a right conclusion. When...
July 5th, 2017 19:09 - The curency of dreams (Roudan)
Two magnificent pieces of work come to mind 1) Cliff Richard singing ...
July 5th, 2017 17:59 - Did you ever really care? (Lost-but-not-broken17)
One day i had a phone call from my brother, my big brother. We had grown...
July 5th, 2017 15:37 - Girls\' night out - AKA mob rule!! (Sue.evans)
I loved the way i felt u getting drunk in this. You had me with you and...
July 5th, 2017 15:25 - NO WAY (Laurell)
Great write. Reads like you are cleansing yourself of this betrayer....
July 5th, 2017 15:19 - The Truth (Kendra_dawnn)
Kendra, anyone tries to give you rules about writing poetry, then i...
July 5th, 2017 14:00 - Suicide Thoughts (Lostgirl24)
I like this, it really benefits from your choice of layout too. Have you...
July 5th, 2017 10:57 - Guide You Home (Abpoet18)
You\'re right, there HAS TO BE more to us. Sadly, though you and i would...
July 5th, 2017 09:47 - THE AGONY AND THE ECSTACY (Louis Gibbs)
True these two extremes bring forth tears. The price of being human u ask....
July 5th, 2017 09:11 - Decay (P.X. Vexxus)
Such great sadness. The pen is mightier than the sword is a noble line....
July 5th, 2017 06:49 - The Sorrows of Summer (AcaciaRose)
I don\'t know how long ago your 8th grade was but if you were to write...
July 5th, 2017 06:45 - We (Krystal Brewington)
You\'ve written about us lot in there my friend. Yes, us your...
July 5th, 2017 06:39 - Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
That superman is a sod - still wearing Y fronts.
July 5th, 2017 06:22
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