Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• To be a rose (Femlord) Be honest, this poem is about me and my ageing spirit isn\'t it LOL. Great...
  August 24th, 2017 19:37
• Help for Heroes (Bibbeck) I think that if you spoke to the returning heros my friend you would hear...
  August 24th, 2017 19:33
• All in the mix! (Sue.evans) Last time i read a piece about a cake i was at a wedding and it ended in...
  August 24th, 2017 19:28
• Back Pat (WriteBeLight) Great stuff. You can\'t win them all and sometimes you do something that...
  August 24th, 2017 18:14
• AGE : (Perspective) (Lasergraph) I hate the shop window reflection but my eyes look out young. Nice
  August 24th, 2017 17:53
• Time Move Slowly (Edthepoet) Sad. As time goes by you come to terms with, get used to situations. But...
  August 24th, 2017 17:51
• First Cut The Deepest (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Brilliant! Tell it like it is. Strong!
  August 24th, 2017 16:52
• The candy girl (Malubotelho) As an old guy i have to add i certainly appreciate beauty and the beauity...
  August 24th, 2017 16:37
• A Beautiful Butterfly (Mandi) Quite lovely. Very enjoyable reading.
  August 24th, 2017 16:30
• Regret (Noah) Ah dreams. Ahhhh the lottery, my wealthy offspring, the cars the house the...
  August 24th, 2017 16:25
• Questions. (Fay Slimm.) Those last three lines kill me inside. I meet widows with my romantic...
  August 24th, 2017 16:20
• Time to Fight. (Liam Lawless) Difficult! Thought provoking. Angry? Very powerful writing.
  August 24th, 2017 16:09
• Love Is (Jennylynn0324) Love is all of that. Love isn\'t complicated so long as it is a shared...
  August 24th, 2017 16:05
• Jealousy, Nausea, ad Nauseam! (Nameless) For nausea like this youve been eating the wrong kind of man. Bold but...
  August 24th, 2017 15:16
• Poem 43 (Disrespectfully nice) Some people aint going to like your explicit words but you know you tell...
  August 24th, 2017 15:11
• The Prism of Life. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful subject and great words. For me it is the coloured spectrum...
  August 24th, 2017 11:53
• Alone / not alone (Aa Harvey) I\'m in two minds about this. Both are thinking hard. A very enjoyable...
  August 24th, 2017 11:47
• Panic (Christina8) I only ever had one panic attack - horrible. Good writing.
  August 24th, 2017 11:45
• Jaded (Baylee) Such a shame those eyes are jaded sweet poet. Your work has such flowing...
  August 24th, 2017 11:38
• Let me uncomplicate us / Inner demons (Sara Storkson) Two good pieces here worth posting separately i thought, however. First...
  August 24th, 2017 11:32
• A Date with my Muse (FredPeyer) If only my little white muse would stay in its cage and run around on its...
  August 24th, 2017 11:14
• THE LETTER (Michael Edwards) This feels like mindfulness. My imagination savoured each new item as you...
  August 24th, 2017 11:07
• Ring for Santita (Myself and me) Ahhh the poetry of romance. A keyring with a jewel and a vacancy for an...
  August 23rd, 2017 18:40
• Books (Tony36) Your poetry for me is an escape too Tony. Takes my mind to where you put...
  August 23rd, 2017 18:36
• The Natives Were Butchered For This Sh*t? (Edthepoet) And the meek shall inherit the earth DOH! mmmmm donuts. Yes i get the...
  August 23rd, 2017 18:34
• The silliest (Malubotelho) I was tossed around like an old newspaper caught in the wind of your poem....
  August 23rd, 2017 16:55
• HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) What a figure! Nice one....Oh and good writing too
  August 23rd, 2017 03:40
• Simple (Disrespectfully nice) Gutsy and real.
  August 23rd, 2017 02:49
• Weekend Insane Asylum (SebaastionB) You just won first prize for telling it like it is inside this ugly...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:44
• I See..Said The Blind Man (Edthepoet) So many damaged encounters or encounters with the damaged. Stunning...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:40
• Progress Way (Classicmister) Or will it be something far more messy? Provokative writing well executed.
  August 23rd, 2017 02:36
• Stumbling Service. (Goldfinch60) Evesham, just down the stumbling road from me, give or take a wrong turn...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:30
• bitter sweet (Clark) Ha ha ha this is great. Wonderful piece of writing.
  August 23rd, 2017 02:18
• A darkskin. (Femlord) ooooh i\'d be seething too. What patronising gits some people are. I\'d...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:17
• Miss You Too! (WriteBeLight) Awww cute doggie, youve captured my heart already. Hey lucky you that its...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:13
• Relativity - a moral tale! (Sue.evans) Nicely written and so easily read. You could teach your wisdom to...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:05
• you are gone. (Lillian_Jean) This is so true. Sad when people dont realise it or are insecure and...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:01
• Sharks (Kruits) Oh your last line made me laugh. But yes expose yourself as you really are...
  August 23rd, 2017 01:59
• Unfinished (Sara Storkson) Most resoundingly YES! Many more cracks shall appear and there are many...
  August 23rd, 2017 01:56
• Dark Thought (Kurt Philip Behm) Cast me out of the dungeon and into light. For i have seen hell in my...
  August 23rd, 2017 01:54
• LOOKING BACK (Lasergraph) Class! Just seems to ooze wisdom. I know i look back often, but i still...
  August 23rd, 2017 01:51
• The hole and I (Emmarunway) Well very pleased you got to feel much better for your writing is severe...
  August 23rd, 2017 01:39
• Insignificance. (Goldfinch60) Makes you wonder surrounded by such beauty. I\'m sure none of us are...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:53
• Unbelievable (Disrespectfully nice) Go for it! No holding back here. Couldn\'t write like this when i was a...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:51
• LIES (Julianogollo) Powerful words here. I dont like lies, lies rely upon more lies being...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:48
• Happiness is fleeting (Sara Storkson) Wow compact but with excitement lust and power.... really exciting i...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:45
• Rise (Lost-but-not-broken17) Who could fail to adore this positive writing and your smiling face. ...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:38
• FRESHLY COOKED (Michael Edwards) Clever yet delicious! This is really good stuff.
  August 23rd, 2017 00:35
• Nonsense (Baylee) Yes goodbyes are too final. Even if it is to see someone in your dreams...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:29
• Trade Winds (FredPeyer) Up up and away i was taken, cool breeze in my hair. Lovely.
  August 23rd, 2017 00:28
• A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Song (Aa Harvey) I put on my sunday best to read this. Nice writing.
  August 23rd, 2017 00:26