Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Is there no hope? (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful observational writing backed up by your real life explanation....
August 28th, 2017 04:02 - Untamed-Collection of Senryu (Christina8)
There is FIRE in your words. The fire of passion. Love these short...
August 28th, 2017 03:51 - Winter (Michael Edwards)
Hmmm \'a blankets cold caress\' sounds like my marriage.... I\'m free.......
August 28th, 2017 03:44 - Yellow card (soccer game) (Myself and me)
This brings out the nippon in your grammar. Loved it!
August 28th, 2017 03:40 - Unknown lover (ShannonXx)
That terrible feeling is betrayal indeed. Why don\'t people wak away...
August 27th, 2017 15:15 - Heart of Mercy (WL Schuett)
Beautiful sentiment. Very moving and inspiring. Pleasure to read. Goes...
August 27th, 2017 15:01 - Love Haiku (FredPeyer)
Whoever wants to solve such a mystery? No no no, its a mystery...
August 27th, 2017 11:22 - Said and Unsaid. (Goldfinch60)
Aaaaah wise words indeed. But you sir say so much in your works about the...
August 27th, 2017 08:19 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wonderful feeling to offer that bridge for another soul and ask nothing....
August 27th, 2017 08:15 - Forbidden (Malubotelho)
Malu, you know we shall all see these places again in time and when we do,...
August 27th, 2017 08:10 - SUMMER (Michael Edwards)
Laughing at your comment about seasons might be a bit out of sync to Fred....
August 27th, 2017 08:01 - Farewell -cinquain (Myself and me)
OMG i just had deja vu with this. Nice bit of writing.
August 27th, 2017 07:53 - Longing (Myself and me)
Such romantic visions youve created here. What a wonderful idea.
August 26th, 2017 13:25 - SOME MORE ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
There are some real beauties there sir! Each deserving of its own write...
August 26th, 2017 13:07 - The Lone Tree. (Goldfinch60)
I really do like your poem. As a believer in reincarnation i wonder...
August 26th, 2017 13:02 - S A N T I T A ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such a lovely focusing point though Brian. Nicely done.
August 26th, 2017 12:55 - Another Beautiful Day in Paradise (FredPeyer)
Tits and bums and legs and Fred. Its all here on my poetic side folks! Try...
August 26th, 2017 12:50 - One part of the fractal (Poetic Dan)
Super sentiment expressed here with clarity and soul. If only every man...
August 26th, 2017 12:45 - Celebrate š (Sue.evans)
Raise a glass indeed (hic!) one for every poet (hic!). Nice words. But...
August 26th, 2017 12:41 - Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.)
Made me giggle with the fun i hadst converting your olde worlde stylism...
August 26th, 2017 12:31 - Never Dreamed Iād be a Poet (Accidental Poet)
So now you\'re a poet
and we all know it
didn\'t see it coming
twas a...
August 26th, 2017 12:19 - Out of gas (Running on empty) (Aa Harvey)
Excellent! You portray a way of life i have known all too well.
August 26th, 2017 12:13 - I NEVER FELT LIKE THIS (Yourselfobject)
Like a flower opening to the rays of sunlight. nice writing.
August 26th, 2017 11:50 - Life (Malubotelho)
Wonderful words. I came online today and straight to your poem. What...
August 26th, 2017 11:28 - Blurry (Baylee)
How come you dont comment on other peoples poems?
August 25th, 2017 19:09 - Enamored (Malubotelho)
\"Beauty, drawn by gods hand to fulfill my time\"....... beautiful line...
August 25th, 2017 18:51 - ........ (Angel Smileyface)
I agree with Santita\'s comments wholeheartedly. I\'m one of the old...
August 25th, 2017 12:59 - THOUGHTS ON MADNESS (Louis Gibbs)
I just better be careful or i\'ll end up in one of those places. I\'m not...
August 25th, 2017 09:19 - True Love! (Sue.evans)
Quite quite delicious. Superbly, lovingly written.
August 25th, 2017 09:15 - The Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.)
I can feel the coolness of your woodland. You brought it to life in my...
August 25th, 2017 04:35 - Lovers On The Run (Hidden)
Merry and fun, this has got to be a song. Really nicely written. Plse...
August 25th, 2017 04:33 - ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I will be working till aged 70 at least thanks to tat credit crunch and...
August 25th, 2017 04:30 - Open (Caden)
Got to love yourself yep. These days we seem to try to love before we even...
August 25th, 2017 03:36 - Kisses (Christina8)
Envious of your partnership. Great piece of writing.
August 25th, 2017 03:34 - The Poetic Tree (Accidental Poet)
Such fruit this tree bears, ripe and romantically rounded or depressingly...
August 25th, 2017 03:31 - Art is Feeling. (Goldfinch60)
I like the company of artistic and creative people. They are by and large...
August 25th, 2017 03:18 - My wife, my lover, my friend (FredPeyer)
Fred i love this. So honest and open. You are a lucky man to have such a...
August 25th, 2017 03:13 - \\\\\\\" FOR HER \\\\\\\" (Vincent jodi)
Vincent jodi you are an excellent poet.
August 25th, 2017 03:10 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Picture (Aa Harvey)
Good succinct writing.
August 25th, 2017 00:42 - Love is just a name away (Poetic Dan)
In its purest love is just as you suggest. Nicely put.
August 24th, 2017 22:47 - Be as sad as I am (Stumped)
Time to let somebody hold your hand i think.
August 24th, 2017 22:27 - A Moment In Time (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Too true wordman have a look at my \'forever\' published today where i...
August 24th, 2017 22:24 - I Want The Old Him (CaraMia)
I love your writing but it has left me a little confused and sad for you.
August 24th, 2017 21:47 - Impermanence (Seeker123)
Ah well yes...i may have the answer for you.... see my published poem...
August 24th, 2017 21:36 - Sleep (Tealblueturtle)
Aaaah our dreams where will they take us.... and will we recall them as...
August 24th, 2017 21:32 - Trapped in the Day (Faye99)
Amazing the things we were when we look back. Great writing.
August 24th, 2017 21:30 - Abstract (Lizzie Lara)
Were u a canvas or a moving target?
August 24th, 2017 20:26 - The Road not Taken (C.L.)
Super work C.L.
August 24th, 2017 20:16 - Cleaning my room today (Egyptianqt79)
OK so at least you\'re thinking about it. Have you put the rubbish out -...
August 24th, 2017 20:12 - You can\'t take it with you. (Docstorm)
Gotta say that FredPeyer just said it all. Nice work.
August 24th, 2017 19:44 - Just Thinking (Thoff1)
Chill out and enjoy whatever your life brings to you.
August 24th, 2017 19:40 - To be a rose (Femlord)
Be honest, this poem is about me and my ageing spirit isn\'t it LOL. Great...
August 24th, 2017 19:37 - Help for Heroes (Bibbeck)
I think that if you spoke to the returning heros my friend you would hear...
August 24th, 2017 19:33 - All in the mix! (Sue.evans)
Last time i read a piece about a cake i was at a wedding and it ended in...
August 24th, 2017 19:28 - Back Pat (WriteBeLight)
Great stuff. You can\'t win them all and sometimes you do something that...
August 24th, 2017 18:14 - AGE : (Perspective) (Lasergraph)
I hate the shop window reflection but my eyes look out young. Nice
August 24th, 2017 17:53 - Time Move Slowly (Edthepoet)
Sad. As time goes by you come to terms with, get used to situations. But...
August 24th, 2017 17:51 - First Cut The Deepest (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Brilliant! Tell it like it is. Strong!
August 24th, 2017 16:52 - The candy girl (Malubotelho)
As an old guy i have to add i certainly appreciate beauty and the beauity...
August 24th, 2017 16:37 - A Beautiful Butterfly (Mandi)
Quite lovely. Very enjoyable reading.
August 24th, 2017 16:30 - Regret (Noah)
Ah dreams. Ahhhh the lottery, my wealthy offspring, the cars the house the...
August 24th, 2017 16:25 - Questions. (Fay Slimm.)
Those last three lines kill me inside. I meet widows with my romantic...
August 24th, 2017 16:20 - Time to Fight. (Liam Lawless)
Difficult! Thought provoking. Angry? Very powerful writing.
August 24th, 2017 16:09 - Love Is (Jennylynn0324)
Love is all of that. Love isn\'t complicated so long as it is a shared...
August 24th, 2017 16:05 - Jealousy, Nausea, ad Nauseam! (Nameless)
For nausea like this youve been eating the wrong kind of man. Bold but...
August 24th, 2017 15:16 - Poem 43 (Disrespectfully nice)
Some people aint going to like your explicit words but you know you tell...
August 24th, 2017 15:11 - The Prism of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful subject and great words. For me it is the coloured spectrum...
August 24th, 2017 11:53 - Alone / not alone (Aa Harvey)
I\'m in two minds about this. Both are thinking hard. A very enjoyable...
August 24th, 2017 11:47 - Panic (Christina8)
I only ever had one panic attack - horrible. Good writing.
August 24th, 2017 11:45 - Jaded (Baylee)
Such a shame those eyes are jaded sweet poet. Your work has such flowing...
August 24th, 2017 11:38 - Let me uncomplicate us / Inner demons (Sara Storkson)
Two good pieces here worth posting separately i thought, however. First...
August 24th, 2017 11:32 - A Date with my Muse (FredPeyer)
If only my little white muse would stay in its cage and run around on its...
August 24th, 2017 11:14 - THE LETTER (Michael Edwards)
This feels like mindfulness. My imagination savoured each new item as you...
August 24th, 2017 11:07 - Ring for Santita (Myself and me)
Ahhh the poetry of romance. A keyring with a jewel and a vacancy for an...
August 23rd, 2017 18:40 - Books (Tony36)
Your poetry for me is an escape too Tony. Takes my mind to where you put...
August 23rd, 2017 18:36 - The Natives Were Butchered For This Sh*t? (Edthepoet)
And the meek shall inherit the earth DOH! mmmmm donuts. Yes i get the...
August 23rd, 2017 18:34 - The silliest (Malubotelho)
I was tossed around like an old newspaper caught in the wind of your poem....
August 23rd, 2017 16:55 - Reflective (Accidental Poet)
It\'s a wonderful life we have to be able to live upon our lovely planet...
August 23rd, 2017 03:45 - HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a figure! Nice one....Oh and good writing too
August 23rd, 2017 03:40 - Simple (Disrespectfully nice)
Gutsy and real.
August 23rd, 2017 02:49 - Weekend Insane Asylum (SebaastionB)
You just won first prize for telling it like it is inside this ugly...
August 23rd, 2017 02:44 - I See..Said The Blind Man (Edthepoet)
So many damaged encounters or encounters with the damaged. Stunning...
August 23rd, 2017 02:40 - Progress Way (Classicmister)
Or will it be something far more messy? Provokative writing well executed.
August 23rd, 2017 02:36 - Stumbling Service. (Goldfinch60)
Evesham, just down the stumbling road from me, give or take a wrong turn...
August 23rd, 2017 02:30 - bitter sweet (Clark)
Ha ha ha this is great. Wonderful piece of writing.
August 23rd, 2017 02:18 - A darkskin. (Femlord)
ooooh i\'d be seething too. What patronising gits some people are. I\'d...
August 23rd, 2017 02:17 - Miss You Too! (WriteBeLight)
Awww cute doggie, youve captured my heart already. Hey lucky you that its...
August 23rd, 2017 02:13 - Relativity - a moral tale! (Sue.evans)
Nicely written and so easily read. You could teach your wisdom to...
August 23rd, 2017 02:05 - you are gone. (Lillian_Jean)
This is so true. Sad when people dont realise it or are insecure and...
August 23rd, 2017 02:01 - Sharks (Kruits)
Oh your last line made me laugh. But yes expose yourself as you really are...
August 23rd, 2017 01:59 - Unfinished (Sara Storkson)
Most resoundingly YES! Many more cracks shall appear and there are many...
August 23rd, 2017 01:56 - Dark Thought (Kurt Philip Behm)
Cast me out of the dungeon and into light. For i have seen hell in my...
August 23rd, 2017 01:54 - LOOKING BACK (Lasergraph)
Class! Just seems to ooze wisdom. I know i look back often, but i still...
August 23rd, 2017 01:51 - The hole and I (Emmarunway)
Well very pleased you got to feel much better for your writing is severe...
August 23rd, 2017 01:39 - Insignificance. (Goldfinch60)
Makes you wonder surrounded by such beauty. I\'m sure none of us are...
August 23rd, 2017 00:53 - Unbelievable (Disrespectfully nice)
Go for it! No holding back here. Couldn\'t write like this when i was a...
August 23rd, 2017 00:51 - LIES (Julianogollo)
Powerful words here. I dont like lies, lies rely upon more lies being...
August 23rd, 2017 00:48 - Happiness is fleeting (Sara Storkson)
Wow compact but with excitement lust and power.... really exciting i...
August 23rd, 2017 00:45 - Rise (Lost-but-not-broken17)
Who could fail to adore this positive writing and your smiling face. ...
August 23rd, 2017 00:38 - FRESHLY COOKED (Michael Edwards)
Clever yet delicious! This is really good stuff.
August 23rd, 2017 00:35
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