Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Playing with Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
I shan\'t tire if u play more sinatra. I have high regard for his singing...
July 27th, 2018 10:26 - Luminous Light (Orchidee)
Strain my ears though i tried, i don\'t think i heard your dulcit tones...
July 27th, 2018 10:21 - A COUPLET (2) (Michael Edwards)
All too true, and i hope your eloquent self will provide a fitting
July 27th, 2018 10:18 - The Buck Moon (July) (Lorna)
I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your...
July 26th, 2018 08:03 - The Buck Moon (July) (Lorna)
I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your...
July 26th, 2018 06:57 - The Buck Moon (July) (Lorna)
I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your...
July 26th, 2018 06:50 - Isolation (Poetic Dan)
Love the world and it loves right back at you doesn\'t it.
July 26th, 2018 04:26 - Failing Faith. (Goldfinch60)
Certainly a test of faith. Or what alternative?
July 26th, 2018 04:22 - A COUPLET (1) (Michael Edwards)
Deep
July 26th, 2018 04:16 - Fragile Walls (Reyas)
There\'s a core within us all which is or was the timid young boy/girl of...
July 25th, 2018 17:08 - Broken (Gabriella)
Been there, done that, musta liked it some cos found myself there a few...
July 25th, 2018 16:54 - धुँआ (SuEyesWrites)
Thank you for sharing that with us. So easy to relate to!
July 25th, 2018 16:30 - MAKE-OVER. (Fay Slimm.)
Well i do hope you feel great, because you write flippin marvelous. What a...
July 25th, 2018 04:07 - The power in me (Poetic Dan)
Accepting that we make mistakes is a milestone along our path of self...
July 25th, 2018 04:00 - Who Could Ask For More. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely soothing music. You lucky man, your devices obviously love you. I...
July 25th, 2018 03:43 - Love Me Like There\'s No Tomorrow. (Kevin browne)
What a convoluted tale of love and romance.
\"Live by the death of your...
July 25th, 2018 02:36 - Love Me Like There\'s No Tomorrow. (Kevin browne)
What a convoluted tale of love and romance.
\"Live by the death of your...
July 25th, 2018 00:45 - NOAH\'S LAMENT (Michael Edwards)
Lets face it, rabbits are well ahead of us in weighing up the situation....
July 25th, 2018 00:34 - Life’s Limbo (JackSkelton)
A fine opening piece sir! Great \'open heart therapy\' this poem writing...
July 25th, 2018 00:15 - Life’s Limbo (JackSkelton)
A fine opening piece sir! Great \'open heart therapy\' this poem writing...
July 24th, 2018 23:24 - \"Once Happy, Now Fallen\" (Ryuji)
Before commenting i read your rely above. I\'m pleased that i did because...
July 24th, 2018 23:10 - Behind These Walls (MrNobody40)
Nice one! These days just run away with themselves now we are no longer...
July 24th, 2018 23:05 - Comfort in Solitude (Asrealastheycome)
They wreck you because they don\'t have your depth. But deep people cant...
July 24th, 2018 22:56 - Intoxicated Driver (Cindy Christmas)
Having read part 2, i decided to come and look up part 1.
I like this,...
July 24th, 2018 22:51 - Intoxicated Driver (Part 2) (Cindy Christmas)
I am with you 100% in the message you convey, which you have done so...
July 24th, 2018 22:47 - Dashwood (JasmineUK)
Yay forsooth thou hast hailed mine devil within. Twas with lustful glare...
July 24th, 2018 22:38 - Dark Abyss (Reyas)
Hey, what about life after death. I hope you took a packed lunch.
July 24th, 2018 14:58 - move along (Dusk arising)
Thanks Cat. Yes i know only too well the pain etc but you\'re so right,...
July 24th, 2018 11:26 - move along (Dusk arising)
A moment ago i was leaving a comment on your piece today and wondering how...
July 24th, 2018 10:38 - AWESOME. (Fay Slimm.)
Struck once again by your poetic pyrotechnics here.
Thunder storms are...
July 24th, 2018 10:14 - A lullaby (Poetic Dan)
This will be great for your young kids Dan. Writing for young ones is such...
July 24th, 2018 09:59 - Time After Time. (Goldfinch60)
Great write again and stirring up my thoughts.
We\'re such rational...
July 24th, 2018 09:53 - NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (10) (Michael Edwards)
Doh ,
July 24th, 2018 09:43 - WE WERE BOTH SO YOUNG (Lasergraph)
Nice one sir. I tried to write something similar and your writing brought...
July 23rd, 2018 11:32 - Broken (Reyas)
Break out of the broken outlook. Many things may be broken but repairable....
July 23rd, 2018 11:25 - INTENTIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
Love, that wonderful mystery prize for you know not where it will take you...
July 23rd, 2018 10:54 - It went like this (Poetic Dan)
Here we are like a brotherhood of understanding and nurture. Its good that...
July 23rd, 2018 01:51 - Changing Days. (Goldfinch60)
Hold onto your sanity fine sir! Your writing is a window of your soul and...
July 23rd, 2018 01:46 - NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (9) (Michael Edwards)
Victoria....are you down there?
July 23rd, 2018 01:41 - Have you ever had a poem written about you? (JamesMichealDaniel)
Hmmm sounds like its time you grew a pair and told your friend how you...
July 22nd, 2018 16:17 - Sixteen (Skyebellasario)
LOL at your last line. Never say never. I like this, enjoyed reading it....
July 22nd, 2018 14:58 - Sixteen (Skyebellasario)
LOL at your last line. Never say never. I like this, enjoyed reading it....
July 22nd, 2018 14:08 - When we sway (Poetic Dan)
Sway in the breeze of life my friend as it wafts you through revelation...
July 22nd, 2018 03:47 - If you still saw me (Nobody special)
Interesting introspective read. Move on, she obviously has but females...
July 22nd, 2018 02:41 - NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (8) (Michael Edwards)
Mmmm loss of amnesia as Tony Hancock called it glancing at an armful of...
July 22nd, 2018 02:33 - Barge Life. (Goldfinch60)
idyllic. I\'m envious of my ex who\'s managed to live on a narrowboat for...
July 22nd, 2018 02:30 - To whom this atheist preys (Edthepoet)
Being brought up in a christian society will have influenced your outlook...
July 21st, 2018 19:48 - Auto Pilot (Reyas)
I rekkon this is what it must be like on some of those drugs that alter...
July 21st, 2018 13:44 - I\'m Loving It (JasmineUK)
And there i was thinking youre a chocaholic.
July 21st, 2018 13:27 - I am assisting are you listening (Poetic Dan)
Great write again sir. None of us have it all nor all that we are going to...
July 21st, 2018 09:12 - The Car of My Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
How could you be so unfaithful???? That lovely Anglia 105E sat in your...
July 21st, 2018 08:50 - 00:17 (Edthepoet)
All too true and masterfully written as per.
Now i\'m gonna try to preach...
July 21st, 2018 08:44 - Acquire A New Skill (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Excellent positivity.
July 20th, 2018 15:12 - Yes, Madam (JasmineUK)
Aha your vocation! Poet of course.
(or should i say of coarse).
No...
July 20th, 2018 13:31 - Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get (Poetic Dan)
I guess theres similar intensity within a lot of us who put feelings to...
July 20th, 2018 11:46 - The Sad Reality (Reyas)
Sad self mutilation and ultimate sacrifice. Disturbing reading. Well...
July 20th, 2018 11:39 - Beechworth Streets #01: still (standing) (Frank Prem)
A mere one hundred years pah! I\'m writing from England, Europe you know,...
July 20th, 2018 06:15 - She Touched His Art with Her Magical Wand (Jim Yates)
In my sixties i feel like you wrote this piece from peeping over my...
July 20th, 2018 06:10 - TROD TRACKS. (Fay Slimm.)
I have trod some of those tracks over a number of years visiting your...
July 20th, 2018 05:17 - NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (7) (Michael Edwards)
Cute! I wonder if they\'\'ll ever create an artificial intelligence...
July 20th, 2018 05:09 - Threshold of Your Mind. (Goldfinch60)
We are all teachers and students too. I\'m sure you\'ll agree we never...
July 20th, 2018 04:33 - bbc off cliff (Hilllow)
Nice clever writing. Justice to this poor man too. Not that he is poor in...
July 20th, 2018 04:15 - Imaginary Friend (CarefulWhereYouStand)
Mesmerising. You tease us with fun. Though theres a hint of sadness and...
July 20th, 2018 03:41 - Where (CarefulWhereYouStand)
Oh i love this style of writing. You are gonna go far! Such a pleasure to...
July 20th, 2018 03:37 - The Mute (Goodman)
On your home/profile page it shows how many poems by other people you...
July 20th, 2018 03:28 - The Muse (Jim Yates)
Beautiful. have found it necessary to write of my past muse(s) when the...
July 20th, 2018 03:19 - A LOVER\'S HEAT (Lasergraph)
Oh nicely done and a rare but tasteful place to end your piece today. Your...
July 20th, 2018 01:11 - Crash Landing (Reyas)
I like this. It left my chuckling because the ending was quite a surprise....
July 20th, 2018 01:00 - Dear You~Dream (MP Martinez)
I love the lyrical flow of your work here. It has a dream like feel just...
July 20th, 2018 00:57 - Insomniac mind (SilverXball)
Aaaaah but does insomnia inspire the poetic mind??? You could be...
July 20th, 2018 00:53 - My inner child say be fearless and brave (Poetic Dan)
Reticence wont help you or any of us --- let it out!
From your recent...
July 20th, 2018 00:47 - ABANDON. (Fay Slimm.)
Oooooh that young soul hasn\'t left your limbs I\'m thinking. Did your...
July 20th, 2018 00:42 - I Found A Place (Ternic73)
What a lovely read. Light hearted, free flowing and joyous.
A wonderful...
July 20th, 2018 00:32 - HIGH SUMMER (Michael Edwards)
Your writing today brought to mind how the scents of our countryside in...
July 18th, 2018 18:31 - 1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see (Poetic Dan)
A proud son will read this. Whether he perceives the deep soulful man his...
July 18th, 2018 18:26 - NOW SLEEPING. (Fay Slimm.)
\'Stop all the clocks\'. Terrible drama from your eloquence today.
A...
July 18th, 2018 18:18 - Perfection Failed. (Goldfinch60)
Firstly, a big BIG thank you for introducing me to the Classical Jazz...
July 18th, 2018 05:53 - Maybe (Naeners)
This piece is very well written. I like concise works, such as yours, for...
July 18th, 2018 05:37 - CONTAGION (Michael Edwards)
Frightening yet quite natural. Reminiscent of my ex mother-in-law from...
July 17th, 2018 03:37 - Unbroken Love. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful emotion. You lucky man.
July 17th, 2018 03:29 - IF ONLY. (Fay Slimm.)
Ahhhh once again you waken to the sound of the birds yawning in...
July 17th, 2018 03:28 - Since little Timmy started packing a glock (Edthepoet)
He he he, that was a rant my friend. Mind you, i do so agree with the...
July 16th, 2018 18:18 - Escape. (Goldfinch60)
I love it! Lateral thinking.
Actually, when you read some of the...
July 16th, 2018 01:50 - SWEATY FEET (Michael Edwards)
ODOUR EATERS a possible cure?
Obnoxious pongs from
Dubious...
July 16th, 2018 01:45 - A Mouthful of Silence (Zipped Past You)
Too much to read! One at a time like everyone else please.
July 15th, 2018 16:24 - SELF DOUBT (Michael Edwards)
Though it might be thought mandatory,
That post alcoholic oratory
Such...
July 15th, 2018 16:13 - Preying in the Choir. (Goldfinch60)
I wonder if the congregation notice? Maybe a suggestions box could bring...
July 15th, 2018 16:08 - Magnetic poetic fun (Poetic Dan)
Oh blimey you\'ve got me thinking now. Shall i start sticking words on the...
July 15th, 2018 15:59 - Retro sweaters in warm weather (Edthepoet)
Ha ha ha who knows how the world perceives us. I gave up trying to be...
July 15th, 2018 15:56 - no faith (Chana)
Yep, sinners who praise but never repent. i.e. going thru the motions of...
July 14th, 2018 15:44 - Punchbag. (E-Poems)
I thought my childhood experiences of similar treatment were totally a...
July 14th, 2018 15:35 - I want to be the second to last man on earth (Edthepoet)
Read this and thought, this should be accompanied by \'fanfare for the...
July 14th, 2018 12:09 - The Inner WAR (Jenn2009)
In my 60\'s and it doesn\'t change.
July 14th, 2018 11:46 - Hell-Bent (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Nice one... you must be spoiled for choice on which piece to publish each...
July 14th, 2018 11:41 - Will (JasmineUK)
Its good to read that when a farmer goes a-harvesting the crop appreciates...
July 14th, 2018 11:38 - Memories (Asrealastheycome)
Yep you\'re hooked ok. Love to read what she writes about you. LOL
July 14th, 2018 11:34 - When a biologist falls in love (Brianna jean zeiger)
Hmmm I\'m looking forward to the autopsy.
July 14th, 2018 11:04 - I can do better” (Chana)
Amazing from the heart outpouring from a strong standpoint (not the usual...
July 14th, 2018 09:15 - When Alice Was 12. (Kevin browne)
Joyous piece of poetoonery here.
July 14th, 2018 09:06 - Symbols for Words. (Goldfinch60)
Another of your great observational pieces. It amuses me how couples are...
July 14th, 2018 09:02
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