Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Changing Days. (Goldfinch60)
Hold onto your sanity fine sir! Your writing is a window of your soul and...
July 23rd, 2018 01:46 - NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (9) (Michael Edwards)
Victoria....are you down there?
July 23rd, 2018 01:41 - Have you ever had a poem written about you? (JamesMichealDaniel)
Hmmm sounds like its time you grew a pair and told your friend how you...
July 22nd, 2018 16:17 - Sixteen (Skyebellasario)
LOL at your last line. Never say never. I like this, enjoyed reading it....
July 22nd, 2018 14:58 - Sixteen (Skyebellasario)
LOL at your last line. Never say never. I like this, enjoyed reading it....
July 22nd, 2018 14:08 - When we sway (Poetic Dan)
Sway in the breeze of life my friend as it wafts you through revelation...
July 22nd, 2018 03:47 - If you still saw me (Nobody special)
Interesting introspective read. Move on, she obviously has but females...
July 22nd, 2018 02:41 - NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (8) (Michael Edwards)
Mmmm loss of amnesia as Tony Hancock called it glancing at an armful of...
July 22nd, 2018 02:33 - Barge Life. (Goldfinch60)
idyllic. I\'m envious of my ex who\'s managed to live on a narrowboat for...
July 22nd, 2018 02:30 - To whom this atheist preys (Edthepoet)
Being brought up in a christian society will have influenced your outlook...
July 21st, 2018 19:48 - Auto Pilot (Reyas)
I rekkon this is what it must be like on some of those drugs that alter...
July 21st, 2018 13:44 - I\'m Loving It (JasmineUK)
And there i was thinking youre a chocaholic.
July 21st, 2018 13:27 - I am assisting are you listening (Poetic Dan)
Great write again sir. None of us have it all nor all that we are going to...
July 21st, 2018 09:12 - The Car of My Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
How could you be so unfaithful???? That lovely Anglia 105E sat in your...
July 21st, 2018 08:50 - 00:17 (Edthepoet)
All too true and masterfully written as per.
Now i\'m gonna try to preach...
July 21st, 2018 08:44 - Acquire A New Skill (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Excellent positivity.
July 20th, 2018 15:12 - Yes, Madam (JasmineUK)
Aha your vocation! Poet of course.
(or should i say of coarse).
No...
July 20th, 2018 13:31 - Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get (Poetic Dan)
I guess theres similar intensity within a lot of us who put feelings to...
July 20th, 2018 11:46 - The Sad Reality (Reyas)
Sad self mutilation and ultimate sacrifice. Disturbing reading. Well...
July 20th, 2018 11:39 - Beechworth Streets #01: still (standing) (Frank Prem)
A mere one hundred years pah! I\'m writing from England, Europe you know,...
July 20th, 2018 06:15 - She Touched His Art with Her Magical Wand (Jim Yates)
In my sixties i feel like you wrote this piece from peeping over my...
July 20th, 2018 06:10 - TROD TRACKS. (Fay Slimm.)
I have trod some of those tracks over a number of years visiting your...
July 20th, 2018 05:17 - NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (7) (Michael Edwards)
Cute! I wonder if they\'\'ll ever create an artificial intelligence...
July 20th, 2018 05:09 - Threshold of Your Mind. (Goldfinch60)
We are all teachers and students too. I\'m sure you\'ll agree we never...
July 20th, 2018 04:33 - bbc off cliff (Hilllow)
Nice clever writing. Justice to this poor man too. Not that he is poor in...
July 20th, 2018 04:15 - Imaginary Friend (CarefulWhereYouStand)
Mesmerising. You tease us with fun. Though theres a hint of sadness and...
July 20th, 2018 03:41 - Where (CarefulWhereYouStand)
Oh i love this style of writing. You are gonna go far! Such a pleasure to...
July 20th, 2018 03:37 - The Mute (Goodman)
On your home/profile page it shows how many poems by other people you...
July 20th, 2018 03:28 - The Muse (Jim Yates)
Beautiful. have found it necessary to write of my past muse(s) when the...
July 20th, 2018 03:19 - A LOVER\'S HEAT (Lasergraph)
Oh nicely done and a rare but tasteful place to end your piece today. Your...
July 20th, 2018 01:11 - Crash Landing (Reyas)
I like this. It left my chuckling because the ending was quite a surprise....
July 20th, 2018 01:00 - Dear You~Dream (MP Martinez)
I love the lyrical flow of your work here. It has a dream like feel just...
July 20th, 2018 00:57 - Insomniac mind (SilverXball)
Aaaaah but does insomnia inspire the poetic mind??? You could be...
July 20th, 2018 00:53 - My inner child say be fearless and brave (Poetic Dan)
Reticence wont help you or any of us --- let it out!
From your recent...
July 20th, 2018 00:47 - ABANDON. (Fay Slimm.)
Oooooh that young soul hasn\'t left your limbs I\'m thinking. Did your...
July 20th, 2018 00:42 - I Found A Place (Ternic73)
What a lovely read. Light hearted, free flowing and joyous.
A wonderful...
July 20th, 2018 00:32 - HIGH SUMMER (Michael Edwards)
Your writing today brought to mind how the scents of our countryside in...
July 18th, 2018 18:31 - 1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see (Poetic Dan)
A proud son will read this. Whether he perceives the deep soulful man his...
July 18th, 2018 18:26 - NOW SLEEPING. (Fay Slimm.)
\'Stop all the clocks\'. Terrible drama from your eloquence today.
A...
July 18th, 2018 18:18 - Perfection Failed. (Goldfinch60)
Firstly, a big BIG thank you for introducing me to the Classical Jazz...
July 18th, 2018 05:53 - Maybe (Naeners)
This piece is very well written. I like concise works, such as yours, for...
July 18th, 2018 05:37 - CONTAGION (Michael Edwards)
Frightening yet quite natural. Reminiscent of my ex mother-in-law from...
July 17th, 2018 03:37 - Unbroken Love. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful emotion. You lucky man.
July 17th, 2018 03:29 - IF ONLY. (Fay Slimm.)
Ahhhh once again you waken to the sound of the birds yawning in...
July 17th, 2018 03:28 - Since little Timmy started packing a glock (Edthepoet)
He he he, that was a rant my friend. Mind you, i do so agree with the...
July 16th, 2018 18:18 - Escape. (Goldfinch60)
I love it! Lateral thinking.
Actually, when you read some of the...
July 16th, 2018 01:50 - SWEATY FEET (Michael Edwards)
ODOUR EATERS a possible cure?
Obnoxious pongs from
Dubious...
July 16th, 2018 01:45 - A Mouthful of Silence (Zipped Past You)
Too much to read! One at a time like everyone else please.
July 15th, 2018 16:24 - SELF DOUBT (Michael Edwards)
Though it might be thought mandatory,
That post alcoholic oratory
Such...
July 15th, 2018 16:13 - Preying in the Choir. (Goldfinch60)
I wonder if the congregation notice? Maybe a suggestions box could bring...
July 15th, 2018 16:08 - Magnetic poetic fun (Poetic Dan)
Oh blimey you\'ve got me thinking now. Shall i start sticking words on the...
July 15th, 2018 15:59 - Retro sweaters in warm weather (Edthepoet)
Ha ha ha who knows how the world perceives us. I gave up trying to be...
July 15th, 2018 15:56 - no faith (Chana)
Yep, sinners who praise but never repent. i.e. going thru the motions of...
July 14th, 2018 15:44 - Punchbag. (E-Poems)
I thought my childhood experiences of similar treatment were totally a...
July 14th, 2018 15:35 - I want to be the second to last man on earth (Edthepoet)
Read this and thought, this should be accompanied by \'fanfare for the...
July 14th, 2018 12:09 - The Inner WAR (Jenn2009)
In my 60\'s and it doesn\'t change.
July 14th, 2018 11:46 - Hell-Bent (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Nice one... you must be spoiled for choice on which piece to publish each...
July 14th, 2018 11:41 - Will (JasmineUK)
Its good to read that when a farmer goes a-harvesting the crop appreciates...
July 14th, 2018 11:38 - Memories (Asrealastheycome)
Yep you\'re hooked ok. Love to read what she writes about you. LOL
July 14th, 2018 11:34 - When a biologist falls in love (Brianna jean zeiger)
Hmmm I\'m looking forward to the autopsy.
July 14th, 2018 11:04 - I can do better” (Chana)
Amazing from the heart outpouring from a strong standpoint (not the usual...
July 14th, 2018 09:15 - When Alice Was 12. (Kevin browne)
Joyous piece of poetoonery here.
July 14th, 2018 09:06 - Symbols for Words. (Goldfinch60)
Another of your great observational pieces. It amuses me how couples are...
July 14th, 2018 09:02 - 4am Questions (Poetic Dan)
I\'d offer a rather simple explanation to all of your queries. You pose...
July 14th, 2018 08:52 - OR SO WE BOTH VOWED (Michael Edwards)
For an experience, try out a \'concert\'/gig where caribbean or reggae...
July 14th, 2018 08:41 - I Felt Like Jesus (Syd)
I think you may upset a few poets here who seem to be \'devout\'...
July 13th, 2018 18:58 - BY GRACE, THROUGH FAITH (Melissa Daly)
I really like this. No mention of any deity, god or religion... not...
July 13th, 2018 18:53 - Poison Pen Poems (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A fine write upon the blessings of having been well and truly bitten by...
July 13th, 2018 18:43 - CHANGES (Michael Edwards)
I were only talking to me mate the poet here yesterday, we was lookin at...
July 13th, 2018 15:59 - A Young Poet’s Beginning (Reyas)
Cute storytelling and quite readable. Too flippin long though... only my...
July 13th, 2018 15:55 - I guess this makes me a hypocrite (Edthepoet)
Complexity of life, our emotions fitting in and self denial, background...
July 13th, 2018 15:51 - O\' human heart (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our...
July 12th, 2018 15:27 - O\' human heart (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our...
July 12th, 2018 15:21 - Loneliness does funny things inside a man (Edthepoet)
So true Ed, love the way you snip pieces of your everyday to reveal inner...
July 12th, 2018 14:52 - A DELICATE THING. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah this just gets better and better as one reads on. I am always struck by...
July 12th, 2018 03:18 - That Will Be Me. (Goldfinch60)
Was he that awful, the old man? Comfortably accepting the advancing years...
July 12th, 2018 03:07 - BE TOUGH (Michael Edwards)
Life its self tends to throw a lifebuoy at certain times - when we are...
July 12th, 2018 03:04 - leon (Queer-with-a-pen)
Fun writing. I believe everyone should write like this about their lovers....
July 11th, 2018 21:39 - They Say (PoeticPsycho)
Great in your face street writing. But i think youre writing away from the...
July 11th, 2018 21:35 - Losing you (Jaayx3)
But i bet you\'ll be all the better for letting go. Its so painful but...
July 11th, 2018 21:29 - Losing you (Jaayx3)
But i bet you\'ll be all the better for letting go. Its so painful but...
July 11th, 2018 20:48 - ME AND MY WIFE (NORMANLKIP)
What a wonderful joyous read. You lucky lucky man. Its so refreshing to...
July 11th, 2018 19:03 - ME AND MY WIFE (NORMANLKIP)
What a wonderful joyous read. You lucky lucky man. Its so refreshing to...
July 11th, 2018 19:03 - ME AND MY WIFE (NORMANLKIP)
What a wonderful joyous read. You lucky lucky man. Its so refreshing to...
July 11th, 2018 19:03 - ME AND MY WIFE (NORMANLKIP)
What a wonderful joyous read. You lucky lucky man. Its so refreshing to...
July 11th, 2018 18:55 - Embrace The Challenge (Brooklyn6timesplus)
What doesnt kill you strengthens you eh? Good advice from you.
Please...
July 11th, 2018 18:31 - THE DARK (Gabriella)
Have you read the piece Candle witch published on here today? I think shes...
July 11th, 2018 15:52 - Puzzled (Reyas)
Great thing about us poets is that we can take another persons words,...
July 11th, 2018 15:50 - The Gift Of Wings (W c)
Great tribute to these the supreme birds of our skies. Marvelous to watch...
July 11th, 2018 15:39 - Credit due (Nicco)
Get it outta ya system biatch! LOL
Love to see street talk used. Very...
July 11th, 2018 15:34 - Music could save a thousand lives. (E-Poems)
When i was a performing musician/singer a piece of music i learned with a...
July 11th, 2018 15:31 - 5am confirmation (Poetic Dan)
So that was you blasting out the moon in the khazie this morning was...
July 11th, 2018 15:18 - INVADED! (Jenn2009)
I
This reads like you want to be the victim of a disinterested and...
July 11th, 2018 15:14 - Seed (JasmineUK)
LOL naughty fun writing, i love it.
\'Unquenchable haven\'...
July 11th, 2018 14:55 - good enough (Georgelinster22)
Yeah, makes a lot of sense. You\'ve learned some self worth.
July 11th, 2018 14:50 - Hate Will Never Win (Slimy___)
Surely there\'s a lesson to be learned. Simply this. Choose your friends...
July 11th, 2018 14:47 - Severing the beast\'s head (Sylviasearcher)
There comes a time...... .... a time well described by you.
There...
July 11th, 2018 14:45 - Caving Together. (Goldfinch60)
Yes we can. The pulling together to save young lives is truly soul...
July 11th, 2018 14:41 - THE STARLINGS (Michael Edwards)
A sight i would love to see \'in the flesh\'. Sure to be more staggering...
July 11th, 2018 14:37 - Here\'s to looking at you, magnificent (Edthepoet)
Entertaining story of the one that got away...... or was she a dream, a...
July 11th, 2018 07:32
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