Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Time (Nobody)
I like poems about time. Its a strange thing isn\'t it- it rules us, we...
June 8th, 2018 18:04 - Baby Boy (W c)
Yep, recently met my 8 weeks old grandaughter and immediately fell in love...
June 8th, 2018 17:54 - The Meaning of Life (Avigail)
You\'ve made me smile. Really nice to read your well written piece....
June 8th, 2018 17:45 - Message (Lovely brown skin)
Constructive advice offered.... follow advice as given by...
June 8th, 2018 17:42 - Behold (SLR)
In your writing here i see no arrogance at all. Anyone who has shared...
June 8th, 2018 14:57 - As long as I miss you (Gemma)
Lovely truly romantic writing. Your heartfelt feelings really come across....
June 8th, 2018 14:19 - A chained heart (Leostars_poems)
My answer your question is \'yes\' and like your friend i cannot talk of...
June 8th, 2018 14:15 - Music (Whyme24)
You just made me realise that, having installed my music system in my...
June 8th, 2018 14:09 - truly horrible advice (Abora)
Hey you forgot \"get a job, buy a car, take a drive, see how the other...
June 8th, 2018 14:06 - I am me! (Prettylittlepoet)
A most uplifting piece. Good reading for those who are down.
So many...
June 8th, 2018 14:04 - EPITAPH. (Fay Slimm.)
Sadly i have been that driver and its a sickening event.
But too i...
June 8th, 2018 14:01 - EPITAPH. (Fay Slimm.)
Sadly i have been that driver and its a sickening event.
But too i...
June 8th, 2018 11:57 - Behold (SLR)
And long may your love flourish.
June 8th, 2018 11:50 - A Question of Life. (Goldfinch60)
I gave up on that lot last year and shaved my head. Ever since taking what...
June 8th, 2018 11:48 - Because of You (Sooni A. Clock)
Is this poetry or a rant?
June 7th, 2018 02:40 - THE BOATYARD (Michael Edwards)
A clinker built piece today - no wait is it carvel or double diagonal?
A...
June 7th, 2018 01:57 - Wondrous Enchantment. (Goldfinch60)
Exactly! All in the eye of the beholder.
Im more impressed by the...
June 7th, 2018 01:53 - The choice is yours (HangingbyaHalo)
Wow! This is one of the best, most thought out and direct pieces i have...
June 7th, 2018 00:05 - I want you (Prettylittlepoet)
Well it\'s nice of you to write about me this way. I had hoped we could...
June 6th, 2018 18:23 - Shrinking World (Goldfinch60)
I have never felt the desire to travel outside of UK.
Having written...
June 6th, 2018 06:52 - Shrinking World (Goldfinch60)
I have never felt the desire to travel outside of UK.
Having written...
June 6th, 2018 06:32 - A DREAM (Michael Edwards)
Daytimes beta brain wave patters cannot assimilate the information which...
June 6th, 2018 06:25 - stay (Maura)
You know what, there is just soooo much wisdom in your words here....
June 5th, 2018 19:15 - Homlesness (Lucyloo.lo)
So very true. I was homeless for a short time aged 15 but times were...
June 5th, 2018 18:53 - PERCEPTION (Michael Edwards)
Maybe Trump is the first prominent U.S. leader to actually acknowledge...
June 5th, 2018 18:13 - Love Unknown. (Goldfinch60)
I think life and love springs things upon us which we dont anticipate but...
June 5th, 2018 18:05 - Echos (HangingbyaHalo)
Your writing today has a theatrical mystery. Gripping, \'cantputdownable\'...
June 5th, 2018 17:53 - I miss you (Blank_voice)
And for your next piece may i dare to suggest that you write about what a...
June 5th, 2018 15:06 - Recipe For A Poem (Jane Frye)
A clever idea carried off with polish and panache. Are there poets...
June 5th, 2018 14:50 - INSIDE ME. (Fay Slimm.)
Another jewel from the pearl which you are.
Time - what is that? The...
June 4th, 2018 16:12 - INSIDE ME. (Fay Slimm.)
Another jewel from the pearl which you are.
Time - what is that? The...
June 4th, 2018 11:33 - Only fools fall (Sierra)
Great to read your watershed here. If only all were as wise as you and...
June 4th, 2018 03:20 - COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG IS SPOKE (Michael Edwards)
Well me old china (plate - mate), just along the frog (and toad -road)...
June 4th, 2018 03:11 - Pre-Technology. (Goldfinch60)
Well at least you dont have a public address system attached to the...
June 4th, 2018 03:03 - Blue Sky (Shahla Latifi)
Oh how life and living it taints us. What it would be to meet tomorrows...
June 3rd, 2018 16:31 - Self grounding (TheNMH)
All the bananas in Florida wouldn\'t say it any clearer.
Succinct!
June 3rd, 2018 16:28 - The Woods (Jane Frye)
Beautiful enchanting writing. I too looked at your previous work here and...
June 2nd, 2018 15:29 - feelings #006 (Tumnus)
I think Dan has said it all.
May 30th, 2018 10:42 - Regret. (Ng Um)
Hope this is a watershed, a turning point for you. It\'s never too late...
May 30th, 2018 10:41 - UGLY USE OF THE LANGUAGE (Michael Edwards)
Er, anyway, know wot i mean, innit.
May 30th, 2018 04:56 - The Moon of Peace. (Goldfinch60)
You bring to mind the acceptance of the wonders of existence which we will...
May 29th, 2018 10:35 - Of Love That Conquers... (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Really refreshing to read such a well penned piece. All to often the...
May 28th, 2018 18:41 - WHY? (Renzi)
Sincerity always came through in your writing and today its heart...
May 24th, 2018 18:19 - Life Stopped. (Goldfinch60)
Yep, theres a way out there is your open minded.
May 24th, 2018 05:23 - THE SILENCE BROKEN (Michael Edwards)
Im not a fan of arithmetic layouts for verse but today yours transcends...
May 24th, 2018 05:21 - Power Of Forgiveness (ForeverJesus7)
Yes i agree wholeheartedly with your message.
May 23rd, 2018 19:52 - There are Days (LiterateLesbian)
Enjoyed reading this with your positive message.
May 23rd, 2018 19:48 - \"Don\'t call him names\" (Ian Primmer)
Really important message in your writing. If only we could convey this...
May 23rd, 2018 18:37 - A message to the insecure (Mj_santos)
Profound writing. Certainly got thru to my insecurities and i know you are...
May 23rd, 2018 18:32 - Table Talk (Classicmister)
Beautifully captured lifes fickle nature here. Love the conversational way...
May 23rd, 2018 18:27 - The Blue Canvas. (Goldfinch60)
Natures canvas repainted exquisitely afresh every day. Long may your eyes...
May 23rd, 2018 07:49 - OBSERVATIONS MADE DURING THE CUTTING OF TOE NAILS (Michael Edwards)
What a snip! My belly has been an object in the way of such activity for...
May 23rd, 2018 07:46 - The end? (KC)
Really nice writing. I like short wrks, theyre so punchy. This is real...
May 22nd, 2018 17:28 - The end? (KC)
Really nice writing. I like short wrks, theyre so punchy. This is real...
May 22nd, 2018 17:11 - If i were a love poet (Skyler.miles19)
Wow Skyler, you most definately are the poet any of us would wish to be.
May 22nd, 2018 16:22 - Tilly. (Goldfinch60)
Oh well done! Such happiness!
I am blessed with two delightful...
May 22nd, 2018 10:41 - A PAIR OF SOCK COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
My damaged lower legs
are such an awful sight
i\'m loathe to expose...
May 22nd, 2018 10:25 - I Hate Starting Over (Karakter)
Soul destroying isn\'t it. Much older but i share your dilemma. Even shut...
May 21st, 2018 18:15 - Lost Decade. (Goldfinch60)
Odd isn\'t it how one persons drab decade is anothers \'days of my life\'...
May 21st, 2018 11:00 - THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK (Michael Edwards)
Bloody graffiti artists get everywhere! Even showing up in your poetry...
May 21st, 2018 10:58 - Flame (Teyonce)
Spontaneous combustion is an attribute some people can have upon us....
May 20th, 2018 09:43 - Coffee Meetings (Goldfinch60)
For the first time in years i wandered through Worcester city t he other...
May 20th, 2018 03:58 - A COUPLE OF 575s (Michael Edwards)
I like that, pulsing hum of street traffic, the heart of the town. All the...
May 20th, 2018 03:53 - THIS LAND (Michael Edwards)
The eyes of an artist see beauty where others see nought. The hands of an...
May 19th, 2018 12:09 - beach soliloquy (Drabbler)
Who is she and who\'s are the calloused hands?... I don\'t know, don\'t...
May 18th, 2018 13:37 - The seesaw of life (Poetic Dan)
That\'s probably the most profound piece of yours i have ever read. There...
May 18th, 2018 10:10 - To Whom It May Concern (Karakter)
Though what i an about to write may be becoming a cliche, to someone you...
May 18th, 2018 10:05 - The Office. (Goldfinch60)
Being self employed and semi retired it does feel odd to be getting a...
May 18th, 2018 09:07 - BUTTERFLY (Michael Edwards)
Lovely to watch aren\'t they. I think you do catch their flitting flight...
May 18th, 2018 09:00 - Goodbye (SLR)
Your writing really does convey the sadness of tragic loss.
Truly made...
May 17th, 2018 20:10 - Be me (Netashi)
So who\'s stopping you being you? The only answer can be - yourself. Walk...
May 17th, 2018 12:47 - The truth is (Mj_santos)
I know this situation and i think i have an idea of how to resolve...
May 17th, 2018 12:39 - Here Comes Summer (Ternic73)
This needs putting to music, it really is catchy, its bright and...
May 17th, 2018 10:56 - Still burning (Aa Harvey)
OK first off, you are already a \'one off\'. you are unique and theres not...
May 17th, 2018 10:54 - MERLOT (Michael Edwards)
Yes i agree, merlot can be relied upon and available in a range of...
May 17th, 2018 04:28 - Wheeled Freedom. (Goldfinch60)
That is so good to read, especially now that summer is in the air and the...
May 17th, 2018 04:25 - Meeting Time (W c)
I\'d love to drop in sometime and share the warm atmosphere of friendship.
May 16th, 2018 14:55 - The Life I Live With You (Caprib97)
Your writing today shows how blessed you are.
May 16th, 2018 14:51 - PREJUDICES (Michael Edwards)
Great analogy, whereas the thinking mind IS on a flexible \'line\', those...
May 16th, 2018 10:26 - A poem for a great woman (Renzi)
Hello Renzi, great to see you writing again, enjoyed your post (as...
May 16th, 2018 08:00 - When everyone realised. (Mollie Brown)
A fitting tribute to the real Norma-Jeane. Are we more enlightened these...
May 15th, 2018 10:18 - The Inevitability of 3 A.M. (Lorna)
Yes those early hours certainly have something. I know i have written many...
May 15th, 2018 10:13 - An Honest Bob (DJ)
I just loved reading your piece today. Vivid and evocative reality of...
May 15th, 2018 10:05 - My Essence (EmiliasLillith)
Here you describe that wonderful but horrible limbo we can be in after a...
May 15th, 2018 08:56 - A Gesture Against Time. (Goldfinch60)
So right. I have found that writing pieces about my past \'highs\' really...
May 15th, 2018 03:26 - SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY (Michael Edwards)
Transitional beauty here. I\'m interpreting this as the passing at the end...
May 15th, 2018 03:22 - Regret (Leostars_poems)
Beautiful. The dilemma, do i trust again and put my head on the block - or...
May 14th, 2018 20:12 - Closing the door (SLR)
Great pain here in your writing and today i know only too well how you...
May 14th, 2018 11:05 - my singing voice has gone (DJ)
I admire the strength of feeling which shouts in your piece today. There...
May 14th, 2018 08:52 - Time\'s River (Lorna)
Yes the moon brings out the contemplative. In harmony wth our years....
May 14th, 2018 08:46 - Just a Book. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely music and images whilst i contemplate your words.
Wonderful to...
May 14th, 2018 08:41 - A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
The custom of ghosts - a haunting line indeed. Joking apart - very clever...
May 14th, 2018 08:32 - All (SheWasTheSun)
Sometimes we lose ourselves into another being. We surrender our all to...
May 13th, 2018 23:00 - *MINI MELTDOWN* (Missfit88)
A frighteningly vivvid read. I know what it is to go down and down. Its a...
May 13th, 2018 11:57 - Somewhere (MillyT)
Hello Mlly. Let me be first to welcome you to this friendly site. Much as...
May 13th, 2018 10:38 - Beached (Jabberwocky)
Wow! Reads like a strong message/warning to somebody who has either lost...
May 13th, 2018 08:05 - Chet Lives in Me. (Goldfinch60)
Chet is in me too, very much so. An amazing history this man had.
But...
May 13th, 2018 07:58 - baby take our memories with you.. (Lea cobain .)
Ouch! So much pain here. I really felt this.
May 13th, 2018 07:51 - I’m Not Afraid (LukeCoomer)
So true. Do we question the mental health of our leaders when they send...
May 13th, 2018 07:42 - Get On Course (Brooklyn6timesplus)
A great positive message, very encouraging for any reader feeling blue or...
May 12th, 2018 16:05
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