Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• feelings #006 (Tumnus) I think Dan has said it all.
  May 30th, 2018 10:42
• Regret. (Ng Um) Hope this is a watershed, a turning point for you. It\'s never too late...
  May 30th, 2018 10:41
• UGLY USE OF THE LANGUAGE (Michael Edwards) Er, anyway, know wot i mean, innit.
  May 30th, 2018 04:56
• The Moon of Peace. (Goldfinch60) You bring to mind the acceptance of the wonders of existence which we will...
  May 29th, 2018 10:35
• Of Love That Conquers... (Kevin Michael Bloor) Really refreshing to read such a well penned piece. All to often the...
  May 28th, 2018 18:41
• WHY? (Renzi) Sincerity always came through in your writing and today its heart...
  May 24th, 2018 18:19
• Life Stopped. (Goldfinch60) Yep, theres a way out there is your open minded.
  May 24th, 2018 05:23
• THE SILENCE BROKEN (Michael Edwards) Im not a fan of arithmetic layouts for verse but today yours transcends...
  May 24th, 2018 05:21
• Power Of Forgiveness (ForeverJesus7) Yes i agree wholeheartedly with your message.
  May 23rd, 2018 19:52
• There are Days (LiterateLesbian) Enjoyed reading this with your positive message.
  May 23rd, 2018 19:48
• \"Don\'t call him names\" (Ian Primmer) Really important message in your writing. If only we could convey this...
  May 23rd, 2018 18:37
• A message to the insecure (Mj_santos) Profound writing. Certainly got thru to my insecurities and i know you are...
  May 23rd, 2018 18:32
• Table Talk (Classicmister) Beautifully captured lifes fickle nature here. Love the conversational way...
  May 23rd, 2018 18:27
• The Blue Canvas. (Goldfinch60) Natures canvas repainted exquisitely afresh every day. Long may your eyes...
  May 23rd, 2018 07:49
• OBSERVATIONS MADE DURING THE CUTTING OF TOE NAILS (Michael Edwards) What a snip! My belly has been an object in the way of such activity for...
  May 23rd, 2018 07:46
• The end? (KC) Really nice writing. I like short wrks, theyre so punchy. This is real...
  May 22nd, 2018 17:28
• The end? (KC) Really nice writing. I like short wrks, theyre so punchy. This is real...
  May 22nd, 2018 17:11
• If i were a love poet (Skyler.miles19) Wow Skyler, you most definately are the poet any of us would wish to be.
  May 22nd, 2018 16:22
• Tilly. (Goldfinch60) Oh well done! Such happiness! I am blessed with two delightful...
  May 22nd, 2018 10:41
• A PAIR OF SOCK COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) My damaged lower legs are such an awful sight i\'m loathe to expose...
  May 22nd, 2018 10:25
• I Hate Starting Over (Karakter) Soul destroying isn\'t it. Much older but i share your dilemma. Even shut...
  May 21st, 2018 18:15
• Lost Decade. (Goldfinch60) Odd isn\'t it how one persons drab decade is anothers \'days of my life\'...
  May 21st, 2018 11:00
• THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK (Michael Edwards) Bloody graffiti artists get everywhere! Even showing up in your poetry...
  May 21st, 2018 10:58
• Flame (Teyonce) Spontaneous combustion is an attribute some people can have upon us....
  May 20th, 2018 09:43
• Coffee Meetings (Goldfinch60) For the first time in years i wandered through Worcester city t he other...
  May 20th, 2018 03:58
• A COUPLE OF 575s (Michael Edwards) I like that, pulsing hum of street traffic, the heart of the town. All the...
  May 20th, 2018 03:53
• THIS LAND (Michael Edwards) The eyes of an artist see beauty where others see nought. The hands of an...
  May 19th, 2018 12:09
• beach soliloquy (Drabbler) Who is she and who\'s are the calloused hands?... I don\'t know, don\'t...
  May 18th, 2018 13:37
• The seesaw of life (Poetic Dan) That\'s probably the most profound piece of yours i have ever read. There...
  May 18th, 2018 10:10
• To Whom It May Concern (Karakter) Though what i an about to write may be becoming a cliche, to someone you...
  May 18th, 2018 10:05
• The Office. (Goldfinch60) Being self employed and semi retired it does feel odd to be getting a...
  May 18th, 2018 09:07
• BUTTERFLY (Michael Edwards) Lovely to watch aren\'t they. I think you do catch their flitting flight...
  May 18th, 2018 09:00
• Goodbye (SLR) Your writing really does convey the sadness of tragic loss. Truly made...
  May 17th, 2018 20:10
• Be me (Netashi) So who\'s stopping you being you? The only answer can be - yourself. Walk...
  May 17th, 2018 12:47
• The truth is (Mj_santos) I know this situation and i think i have an idea of how to resolve...
  May 17th, 2018 12:39
• Here Comes Summer (Ternic73) This needs putting to music, it really is catchy, its bright and...
  May 17th, 2018 10:56
• Still burning (Aa Harvey) OK first off, you are already a \'one off\'. you are unique and theres not...
  May 17th, 2018 10:54
• MERLOT (Michael Edwards) Yes i agree, merlot can be relied upon and available in a range of...
  May 17th, 2018 04:28
• Wheeled Freedom. (Goldfinch60) That is so good to read, especially now that summer is in the air and the...
  May 17th, 2018 04:25
• Meeting Time (W c) I\'d love to drop in sometime and share the warm atmosphere of friendship.
  May 16th, 2018 14:55
• The Life I Live With You (Caprib97) Your writing today shows how blessed you are.
  May 16th, 2018 14:51
• PREJUDICES (Michael Edwards) Great analogy, whereas the thinking mind IS on a flexible \'line\', those...
  May 16th, 2018 10:26
• A poem for a great woman (Renzi) Hello Renzi, great to see you writing again, enjoyed your post (as...
  May 16th, 2018 08:00
• When everyone realised. (Mollie Brown) A fitting tribute to the real Norma-Jeane. Are we more enlightened these...
  May 15th, 2018 10:18
• The Inevitability of 3 A.M. (Lorna) Yes those early hours certainly have something. I know i have written many...
  May 15th, 2018 10:13
• An Honest Bob (DJ) I just loved reading your piece today. Vivid and evocative reality of...
  May 15th, 2018 10:05
• My Essence (EmiliasLillith) Here you describe that wonderful but horrible limbo we can be in after a...
  May 15th, 2018 08:56
• A Gesture Against Time. (Goldfinch60) So right. I have found that writing pieces about my past \'highs\' really...
  May 15th, 2018 03:26
• SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY (Michael Edwards) Transitional beauty here. I\'m interpreting this as the passing at the end...
  May 15th, 2018 03:22
• Regret (Leostars_poems) Beautiful. The dilemma, do i trust again and put my head on the block - or...
  May 14th, 2018 20:12
• Closing the door (SLR) Great pain here in your writing and today i know only too well how you...
  May 14th, 2018 11:05
• my singing voice has gone (DJ) I admire the strength of feeling which shouts in your piece today. There...
  May 14th, 2018 08:52
• Time\'s River (Lorna) Yes the moon brings out the contemplative. In harmony wth our years....
  May 14th, 2018 08:46
• Just a Book. (Goldfinch60) Lovely music and images whilst i contemplate your words. Wonderful to...
  May 14th, 2018 08:41
• A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) The custom of ghosts - a haunting line indeed. Joking apart - very clever...
  May 14th, 2018 08:32
• All (SheWasTheSun) Sometimes we lose ourselves into another being. We surrender our all to...
  May 13th, 2018 23:00
• *MINI MELTDOWN* (Missfit88) A frighteningly vivvid read. I know what it is to go down and down. Its a...
  May 13th, 2018 11:57
• Somewhere (MillyT) Hello Mlly. Let me be first to welcome you to this friendly site. Much as...
  May 13th, 2018 10:38
• Beached (Jabberwocky) Wow! Reads like a strong message/warning to somebody who has either lost...
  May 13th, 2018 08:05
• Chet Lives in Me. (Goldfinch60) Chet is in me too, very much so. An amazing history this man had. But...
  May 13th, 2018 07:58
• baby take our memories with you.. (Lea cobain .) Ouch! So much pain here. I really felt this.
  May 13th, 2018 07:51
• I’m Not Afraid (LukeCoomer) So true. Do we question the mental health of our leaders when they send...
  May 13th, 2018 07:42
• Get On Course (Brooklyn6timesplus) A great positive message, very encouraging for any reader feeling blue or...
  May 12th, 2018 16:05
• Elusive Endorphins (Lorna) One day, when your back is turned and the sun is shining on all around but...
  May 12th, 2018 09:34
• An Insomniac Nightmare (Dohiser) I agree with Lorna\'s comment about the last line, really clever. Reading...
  May 12th, 2018 09:26
• Unshackled. (Camille) This is quite beautiful. I share this vision of lifes journey and respect...
  May 12th, 2018 09:11
• Peg\'s Mini. (Goldfinch60) Well we were all young yesterday werent we. Great that you friend has fond...
  May 12th, 2018 09:02
• AS AN ARTIST SEES (Michael Edwards) Turner comes to my minds eye.So much emotion in his moody seascapes....
  May 12th, 2018 08:55
• Dearth (Jabberwocky) Excellent writing. Truly conveys the disappointment and emptiness which...
  May 10th, 2018 05:20
• I think (Aa Harvey) I suppose you could have written:- i do, and the things i do, i...
  May 10th, 2018 05:16
• The Cards of Life. (Goldfinch60) We each are dealt a hand from which we play. I am thankful for the...
  May 10th, 2018 05:14
• A LIFELESS LAND (Michael Edwards) Hmm, brought to mind the mother in laws garden. Only difference was, in...
  May 10th, 2018 05:06
• This Life (Jabberwocky) A great depiction of everyday monotony and the gradual build up of stress...
  May 9th, 2018 13:52
• LOVE\'S TUNE. (Fay Slimm.) No one else sees what the lover sees and, with its own beguiling charm...
  May 9th, 2018 13:47
• Wandering (DesertWords) I\'d love to see tomorrows poem with the beginning \"yesterday i woke up...
  May 7th, 2018 13:40
• Wandering (DesertWords) I\'d love to see tomorrows poem with the beginning \"yesterday i woke up...
  May 7th, 2018 13:30
• Alone (Lionheart) Wow! I\'m laughing because your piece says exactly what your \'comments\'...
  May 7th, 2018 13:27
• Someone to hold (Netashi) This is great. The perpetual search and hope for all of us unsuccessful at...
  May 7th, 2018 13:22
• Find me (Birddie Jane) oooh youre so mixed up here! where is your self worth poet?
  May 7th, 2018 13:17
• Holding Me Hostage (Felicityjones) You sound like the person i recently fell out of love with. Her condition...
  May 7th, 2018 11:16
• Garden Love. (Goldfinch60) You have the rare gift of showing us the richness of so many facets of...
  May 7th, 2018 06:46
• TRANSIENT DREAMS (Michael Edwards) I\'m mad crazy about your sculpture here. In my deranged inner sight it...
  May 7th, 2018 06:37
• The Old Man by the River. (Goldfinch60) Your river, my river, all rivers. Rivers of souls perpetually inspiring,...
  May 6th, 2018 10:46
• Pain is no longer welcome here (Aa Harvey) I enjoyed reading this and it certainly chimes with my experience of loves...
  May 6th, 2018 10:38
• Impossible Tamed. (Goldfinch60) I can see you like playing with words as much as i do. Strange how...
  May 5th, 2018 18:16
• Quartet for the End of Time. (Goldfinch60) amazing pieces, the first seems painful and gradually entrances with...
  May 4th, 2018 19:57
• The Preacher (Edthepoet) This reads like the story of my existence now at age 66. Once again you...
  May 4th, 2018 08:19
• The Triolet Within (Gary Edward Geraci) Such a shame christians kill and maim each other with their weapons of...
  April 21st, 2018 12:38
• HIS SCENT. (Fay Slimm.) Absolutely wonderful writing. You are a magician of words producing a...
  April 17th, 2018 14:14
• Say It Louder Baby (Edthepoet) enigmatic women can be so attractive , but there are those who just play...
  March 27th, 2018 17:33
• CHANGELING (Fay Slimm.) such poetic meteorology. we are all dancers upon the winds changing mood...
  March 27th, 2018 17:28
• Mile-High Amour. (Fay Slimm.) it could be said there are those of us who need to be in orbit for quite...
  March 26th, 2018 14:01
• COMING. (Fay Slimm.) I\'d been away for a while before i saw your kind invitation which sadly i...
  March 17th, 2018 03:46
• The Angels are There. (Goldfinch60) Angels, guardian spirits, guides, wotever they are they\'re there sure...
  March 6th, 2018 16:24
• SO MANY WARS (Michael Edwards) War - the original \'weapon of mass destruction\'. My dictionary would...
  March 6th, 2018 15:20
• Dementia Sea. (Goldfinch60) May your faith remain ever strong for surely we are challenged in this...
  March 5th, 2018 17:19
• LIMERICKS 49 and 50 (Michael Edwards) An adorable gal from Much Guiting, Had eyes all the lads found...
  March 3rd, 2018 16:49
• Honey Fire (Edthepoet) Oh i met her so many times, more often watched her dance from afar....
  March 2nd, 2018 13:51
• The Kids They \'Phone. (Goldfinch60) Cute i like this.
  March 2nd, 2018 13:46
• WITH TIME (Michael Edwards) Arithmetic and poetry should never be brought together! However yours here...
  March 2nd, 2018 13:45