Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Follow Thy Elsewhere (Seek) Way over my head is this. I\'m still at jack and jill went up the hill...
  September 15th, 2017 21:34
• Residency Restoration (Orchidee) More tea vicar?
  September 15th, 2017 21:27
• My Poetic Side (Lasergraph) Well there Mr Lasergraph i think every one of us has at some stage paid...
  September 15th, 2017 21:23
• Turtles on a log (WL Schuett) This is a delight to read. nuff said?
  September 15th, 2017 21:19
• Homeless (W c) Yep, been there done that. It won\'t leave you. Fresh out of the shower...
  September 15th, 2017 21:15
• Fire and Gasoline (Writings From The Unknown13) She set fire to my heart and threw me some matches..... \'in case you go...
  September 15th, 2017 21:08
• You\'re My Sunshine (Liberty_Shadows) This was all flowing lovely until that last line threw me..... it could...
  September 15th, 2017 21:04
• Facing Reality (Simple-Man87) Well written. It doesn\'t always work out and, just as u show us here,...
  September 15th, 2017 20:57
• Fake Love (Chloe Rachel Flisher) Working out your partners thoughts etc when relationship is going wrong is...
  September 15th, 2017 20:53
• I\'m fine (Joy Fetherolf) Well described lie we use all too often here. I like your style.
  September 15th, 2017 20:47
• Happy Birthday (Axel Keating) First time i ever saw the word conversate. Spell checker on here...
  September 15th, 2017 19:40
• Undressed. (Fay Slimm.) Loved these lines \"your glistening retains measured pace with the...
  September 15th, 2017 18:02
• A friend (Tony36) Tony this is truly what a friend is, you write it so well here.
  September 15th, 2017 17:57
• You are (Myself and me) Very much reminded me of a Lionel Ritchie song i used to sing to my lover...
  September 15th, 2017 17:52
• Passion (Malubotelho) Wimmin see.... u just cant trust the buggers..... ha ha ha oooh...
  September 15th, 2017 17:49
• WELL FED AM I (Michael Edwards) Now this is just damned clever sir and a lovely image above.
  September 15th, 2017 16:05
• VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION (Louis Gibbs) Always a better you after such confrontation..... a new day, a new dawn,...
  September 15th, 2017 16:03
• Hungry Ghosts (Goldfinch60) Oh you made me laugh again..... this is absolutely prescious mate. Goes...
  September 15th, 2017 15:59
• My Baby Girl (FredPeyer) Beautiful from your heart writing. Envious.
  September 15th, 2017 15:57
• What is Time? (Goldfinch60) If i only had time to learn my five times table a...
  September 14th, 2017 18:24
• Endless Love. (Goldfinch60) God has shown you what love is my friend. Real unconditional love is what...
  September 14th, 2017 18:15
• Just Human (FredPeyer) Walk tall, walk straight and look the world right in the eye... words...
  September 14th, 2017 18:10
• The girl I am (Kat) \"I want to be someone who say what she thinks\" LOL so who\'s...
  September 14th, 2017 18:06
• Living on a 4/6 (Malubotelho) Love it when you write about things in our everyday life we take for...
  September 14th, 2017 17:26
• The water and the rock (Malubotelho) ooooh a deja vu moment Malubotelho. Great to see you writing again after...
  September 14th, 2017 14:59
• Union of Perfection (Leah Sharp) Hmmm a box of matches?
  September 12th, 2017 03:19
• Thought (FredPeyer) Ahhh thats one of those top of the stairs moments isn\'t it \'now what...
  September 12th, 2017 03:15
• THREE FROM FUSIONS (Michael Edwards) Great stuff... i do like to see light hearted fun stuff in here. Yes that...
  September 12th, 2017 03:13
• What is the Time? (Goldfinch60) Time as we perceive it is a weird commodity. Have you ever heard...
  September 12th, 2017 02:59
• Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.) Tell me a tale, tell me. Oh you told this so well.... winter was here in...
  September 11th, 2017 16:34
• Another Day Gone (FredPeyer) These days all to frequent when your prime is past. \'with nothing in...
  September 11th, 2017 16:26
• My Dear Mother (Christina8) Clearly a heartfelt loving tribute.... mum\'s... wonderful creatures,...
  September 11th, 2017 16:15
• Frequencies match (Poetic Dan) Tell it like it is.... erm 2222 ? Cold bum or hot, dont lose the...
  September 11th, 2017 16:04
• From Corncrake to God. (Goldfinch60) We know god by different names and traditions but wotever god is there can...
  September 11th, 2017 15:33
• Notebook (Aa Harvey) Some of my best are recovered from half written ideas. Often i want to...
  September 11th, 2017 01:46
• SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY (Michael Edwards) Anguish or what? Gripping reading, demands rereading.
  September 11th, 2017 01:38
• () Wonderful experience you portray. And how you portray it !! I felt this!...
  September 11th, 2017 01:32
• TICK TOCK (Louis Gibbs) Maybe mans existence is compatible we\'ve just got it so wrong so far....
  September 11th, 2017 01:22
• Future Vibes (HighImMaddie) I think a lot of us write to fill a void in our lives. I guess i do and...
  September 10th, 2017 20:09
• Future Vibes (HighImMaddie) I think a lot of us write to fill a void in our lives. I guess i do and...
  September 10th, 2017 20:08
• Drunk! (Sue.evans) Booze can be like that can\'t it. It\'s enjoyable in small measure but...
  September 10th, 2017 19:53
• Running in the forest (Nyoko_beautiful moon) Smell the freshness of the trees, feel the dampness in the air from the...
  September 10th, 2017 19:46
• Stuck Under Thunderstorms (Edthepoet) The dread of all those who are called away to \'do their duty\'. You...
  September 10th, 2017 18:21
• Saddest Love Triangle (Ruby.e) I recently found myself in one of these horrendous situations..... really...
  September 10th, 2017 16:11
• A Lovers Light (Maggie) Who\'s paying the electric bill? Nice love poem.
  September 10th, 2017 11:31
• Walking the Earth While Dead (Lanaevans) There you go gal..... all men are the same! You said it - \"except that...
  September 10th, 2017 11:28
• What Happened ? (Fay Slimm.) Ahhhh brit weather eh? No wonder its our favourite conversation...
  September 10th, 2017 07:33
• LIMERICK No 44 (Michael Edwards) So they\'d told M.E. it was nothing But they carried him off in his...
  September 10th, 2017 07:20
• The Rules of Cricket. (Goldfinch60) OH okey cokey cokey, oh okey cokey cokey ..... I creased with...
  September 10th, 2017 06:47
• Our Bond (Ruby.e) Yes, just like Santita commented, I assumed he was going to be your man....
  September 10th, 2017 06:36
• Inflatable Irene (Viv Wade) You\'re my kinda poet.... a demonstrably wicked sense of humour. Mate...
  September 10th, 2017 06:32
• Mother. (Noah) There is imperfection in us all. Your words are a stark reminder of...
  September 10th, 2017 06:27
• Doors left open (Poetic Dan) Dan this is great. I know you are searching for a greater truth that will...
  September 10th, 2017 06:13
• Meandher (Aa Harvey) Great positive message here which always good to see. Don\'t lose sight...
  September 10th, 2017 06:05
• The Artist Within. (Goldfinch60) Nice one Goldfinch. I find that i have a serious, a sentimental and a...
  September 9th, 2017 18:30
• Santa Claus (Ruby.e) Well my faith in that one and his son died when we found out my daugher...
  September 8th, 2017 19:50
• Santa Claus (Ruby.e) Santa is a great idea and a wonderful myth around which theres so much fun...
  September 8th, 2017 16:55
• Dishonor Among Thieves (Noah) The stories this could tell. The questions it leaves hanging. Provokative...
  September 8th, 2017 16:50
• They let me die (rape scene) (Samreen Chowdhury) There are those of us who care a great deal. Difficult for a man to show...
  September 8th, 2017 16:45
• Writer\'s Block (Ruby.e) Just write wot u feel, if it doesnt work out stick it into an incomplete...
  September 8th, 2017 15:39
• A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Sky (Aa Harvey) Love is all around you, love is not only romantic love. Love everything ,...
  September 8th, 2017 13:38
• Your Love (Tony36) Tony, in time you\'ll look at all the good love you have enjoyed and are...
  September 8th, 2017 10:44
• Breaking patterns, don\'t scream (Poetic Dan) LOL @ real man is etc.... real men realised long ago that the concept...
  September 8th, 2017 10:36
• Undeniably You (Christina8) Love story well told. Time after time it\'s a beautiful theme. Love in all...
  September 8th, 2017 10:26
• Star Trek Now. (Goldfinch60) All great sci-fi writers are visionaries. Their huge visions are fantastic...
  September 8th, 2017 05:00
• Wordsmith (FredPeyer) Scrap is a bit high and mighty for my efforts, being a five letter word,...
  September 8th, 2017 04:10
• THE BROKEN (Louis Gibbs) Im not so much broken as cracked!
  September 8th, 2017 01:39
• DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) For me number one has the drama and is a story waiting to be told.
  September 8th, 2017 01:38
• Seren (BlueDays) Lovely ode to your bestest pal. Dogs are quite wonderful friends aren\'t...
  September 8th, 2017 01:21
• Coffee House (ShannonXx) Your phrasing paints such clear mental pictures. The scene the anguish,...
  September 8th, 2017 01:14
• Blue is the Sea (Edthepoet) Yes, do the new things threaten the love or do they become a part of it....
  September 8th, 2017 01:08
• Well hello (Renzi) aaaaahh pleasure! to see that style of writing again and that lovely face...
  September 8th, 2017 00:45
• Back Then. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful oh to live those bygone days again eh? lovely writing,...
  September 7th, 2017 18:52
• Home is where the start is. (Aa Harvey) Dont get too needy, you\'ll frighten prospective candidates away. Or is...
  September 7th, 2017 04:45
• View of God. (Goldfinch60) You made me burst out laughing there. Hadn\'t heard that before - very...
  September 7th, 2017 04:41
• Ghost Walk. (Wallace) Well at least you won\'t get soaked in that rainfall. Good entertaining...
  September 7th, 2017 04:30
• Why Men Have Hairy Bums (Viv Wade) So man applied a bit of science and he invented the domestic...
  September 7th, 2017 04:25
• The Dream (FredPeyer) No no no no you had me going there, i was seeing images, i broke out in a...
  September 7th, 2017 04:03
• SHE CONFIRMS (Michael Edwards) And the black sullen swell of the sea held its breath at the suspense...
  September 7th, 2017 03:51
• The Crossing (Mugsdaddy) Ah the crossroads. Every third blues song finds its way to or from a...
  September 7th, 2017 03:42
• The Wolf and The Moon (RickyMcG) Wonderful .... mystery, you have woven your chosen elements...
  September 6th, 2017 20:36
• I Hurt Too (Marek) On it\'s own it stands up well. Romance, mystery, loss. pain, love.......
  September 6th, 2017 20:32
• Homeless, Hopeless (LM1005) There are many types of people homeless and for many reasons. Although we...
  September 6th, 2017 20:21
• sometimes (Mozart) And sometimes a breath of fresh air like you makes poetry seem so simple...
  September 6th, 2017 20:09
• The World Burns As We Speak (and one more) (Poetboy123) Two pieces of contrast here. The first quite quite apposite for the world...
  September 6th, 2017 19:54
• My love is in the silence (David) Yes, often misunderstood but sometimes to \'let it be\' and love from afar...
  September 6th, 2017 19:37
• The Pills (Mugsdaddy) This is so dark that it\'s good job i have a braillle screen..... Good...
  September 6th, 2017 19:33
• Change (Samreen Chowdhury) Hey Samreen this is a breath of fresh air and a song i sing everyday....
  September 6th, 2017 19:29
• Bible (AudieSaige) Maybe he\'s a bit frightened by your interpretation of your christianity....
  September 6th, 2017 19:08
• Adult Relationship (Ruby.e) Nice writing Ruby. I hope the dilemma of your poems contents is a thing of...
  September 6th, 2017 18:56
• Time To Grow Up (E.J. Waling) I dont know if you are right about that throwback, but i know many on here...
  September 6th, 2017 16:45
• ODE\' TO COFFEE (Lasergraph) Its all been said by my fellow coffee quaffing poetic colleagues here. The...
  September 6th, 2017 16:41
• Goodbye Dave R.I.P (Miss Lisa Poems 80) This is a beautifully written tribute to your late husband and father of...
  September 6th, 2017 16:35
• Being Again, Tested (WriteBeLight) What can we do but watch our screens from afar? Good writing on this...
  September 6th, 2017 16:29
• Home Hunting (Calling_alaska) Alone is good so long as you are together about yourself. Spend enough...
  September 6th, 2017 15:54
• What my Mother Taught Me (Andreax21) Momma was right. Love makes the world go round. And you express your love...
  September 6th, 2017 15:51
• Only. (Wallace) Wow powerful stuff. Nice writing. Please comment on my stuff.
  September 6th, 2017 15:47
• Preparing for Irma (Malubotelho) Be safe, i need you back here to \'protect\' me from you know who....
  September 6th, 2017 15:09
• I am the Alpha-wolf (Tony36) Grrrrrrr...... Who\'s that walking in the woods...... its little red...
  September 6th, 2017 15:06
• So Met. (Fay Slimm.) Oh how true i love it! North coast of your lovely county is covered in...
  September 6th, 2017 05:57