Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Becoming Other. (Fay Slimm.) You allowed me to recall the morning i was out looking for mushrooms and...
  September 20th, 2017 17:41
• Throat Cutting. (Goldfinch60) Ha ha ha your wit doesn\'t need sharpening does it!
  September 20th, 2017 15:44
• Nobody\'s Fool, a short story (FredPeyer) Great writing Fred in both your literary style and of course content....
  September 20th, 2017 15:35
• You May Say I\'m A Dreamer (Edthepoet) < the crowd raised Ed onto their shoulders amidst rapturous applause and...
  September 19th, 2017 21:52
• I Am Free (Christina8) Sc many times i am caught out by somethig which was said or happened in my...
  September 19th, 2017 19:37
• Always know just enough (Poetic Dan) Older Ladies of grace. I now that serenity of which you speak. Nostalgic...
  September 19th, 2017 19:16
• Monstichs by Fred (inspired by Michael Edwards) (FredPeyer) Each one a thriller waiting to be written..... so many plots... so...
  September 19th, 2017 19:11
• Stalled. (Fay Slimm.) Yes indeed for all is ready for the roaring fire of passionate love..... ...
  September 19th, 2017 19:08
• Void of Life (Mugsdaddy) Lived like that for ten years till May this year when i took my size 11...
  September 19th, 2017 18:40
• Rainbow of Life. (Goldfinch60) Though a rainbow has no end Goldfinch, I think you found the fabled...
  September 19th, 2017 18:06
• Money Grabber. (Wallace) Ha ha ha.... did the young lady teach you anything? Great story i loved...
  September 19th, 2017 18:01
• THE BURGESS SHALE (Michael Edwards) Reminded me of the man who ran up expenses of $2 million digging up old...
  September 19th, 2017 17:59
• Yesterday (Myself and me) Great piece of writing. Made me think back to younger days and ponder upon...
  September 18th, 2017 20:33
• THE WINDMILL (Lasergraph) Here in UK there are still a few of the really old windmills which still...
  September 18th, 2017 17:20
• Love for love (Malubotelho) Ah Malubotelho you are indeed a beautiful soul and looks to me you are on ...
  September 18th, 2017 16:45
• The Gambler (FredPeyer) sings:- i used to be a big shot long time ago had a cadillac and whole...
  September 18th, 2017 16:38
• Brian (Nicki Jackson) Wot no text message yet.... hmmm i\'m worrying now..... do you...
  September 18th, 2017 16:15
• Spain (Renzi) Wear ya smile Lose that frown The place is kikkin Renzi\'s in...
  September 18th, 2017 16:13
• Shine A Light (Edthepoet) Sometimes it just cuts through all the crap we build around ourselves. The...
  September 18th, 2017 15:57
• Mortal Hellfire (Noah) In my mind i had you writing this as if you were a tomato on a plate of...
  September 18th, 2017 13:12
• Thinnest Divide. (Fay Slimm.) Go on Fay... dive in... you know you want to! Swim with those...
  September 18th, 2017 13:07
• Followed in the Night. (Goldfinch60) Do you ever push the words out ahead of you and see where they take you?...
  September 18th, 2017 12:44
• SHE MONSTICHS (Michael Edwards) A plot in every one of them.... oh ye of multi talents.... only 24...
  September 18th, 2017 06:55
• DayDreaming ❤ (Karla) Just read your poem and time on my watch is 2.12 am here in UK - good...
  September 17th, 2017 20:14
• Brian (Nicki Jackson) This is magical writing before my eyes. You see i am in my sixties and...
  September 17th, 2017 20:10
• Without You (Ron parrish aka wordman) Beautiful words of love for someone special. Will she see them, will she...
  September 17th, 2017 20:03
• I Wish I Could (Mugsdaddy) Thats when it really hurts isn\'t it. All the love you feel, the one-ness,...
  September 17th, 2017 19:57
• Moment (Myself and me) Wow yes soooo true. This is quite a deep subject for not only does it...
  September 17th, 2017 19:41
• Life of love (Poetic Dan) Great poem, and wicked pic. Reading all comments before i make mine i say...
  September 17th, 2017 17:14
• Why? (FredPeyer) Do you really want a diaper already Fred? Is there something you\'re not...
  September 17th, 2017 16:38
• Singing. (Goldfinch60) I share your taste in shirts. Actually we do have quite a bit in common....
  September 17th, 2017 16:34
• MORE THAN. (Fay Slimm.) WOW Fay that is tremendous! Held me breathless as i read it thru (cept i...
  September 17th, 2017 16:29
• Electric Blue. (Wallace) Sad loss shouts out from your words. Well written piece of loss grief. If...
  September 17th, 2017 16:05
• Space (Kailie Jackson) How unimportant do you want to be??? Man goes to opticians, optician...
  September 17th, 2017 12:10
• Make Us Laugh (W c) Yes i agree.... i know i\'m already doing my bit. Good to read.
  September 17th, 2017 12:06
• LIMERICK 43 (Michael Edwards) I used to visit the Gower every month of the year, a favourite area with...
  September 17th, 2017 11:28
• Embrace the remembering (Poetic Dan) To all men i think motherhood is amazing. The unconditional love involved...
  September 16th, 2017 21:34
• One (Arazimus) Aaaah that god-spun draft wafting through our lifes. Your words bring to...
  September 16th, 2017 11:02
• Humanities Redemption (John Prophet) The answer is of course \'yes\'. Provokative writing there. Please comment...
  September 16th, 2017 10:53
• The first time (Pr3ttyshad0ws) LOL i really enjoyed your first time you poetic minx. You are a fine...
  September 16th, 2017 06:36
• Slave (FredPeyer) All too easily the ladies forget that inside every gentleman is the lusty...
  September 16th, 2017 06:28
• Winter (G84) Winter is my time too, but here in UK it would have been nice to have had...
  September 16th, 2017 06:14
• Buzzard (Noah) \"Stuck like blood on the sheet\" and \"Keep them all from loving...
  September 16th, 2017 06:11
• I\'ll Be Seeing You. (Goldfinch60) Needless to say that i\'m familiar with Billie Hilliday\'s work. I read...
  September 16th, 2017 02:12
• HIS PICTURE GONE (Michael Edwards) A sad tale of loss and sorrow. Beautifully painted picture of words...
  September 16th, 2017 00:09
• Ghost in my age (ScatterMax) Good piece of writing there. Succinct! Is it heartfelt or imagined? Beware...
  September 15th, 2017 23:51
• Somebody (Lanaevans) Why should somebody help you? Answer that and you\'ll realise you dont...
  September 15th, 2017 22:16
• Countryside Life (JamieDayDream) Is your loneliness within or without? Would you feel less lonely in a...
  September 15th, 2017 22:13
• Heading out (Arazimus) Isolation is a remedy but not the cure. Break out, or rather break back...
  September 15th, 2017 22:00
• One With The Universe (John Prophet) I\'m inclined to be in agreement with comments made by Seek above. Nice...
  September 15th, 2017 21:58
• I have it together with my address book and calendar. (Bethgaines62678) Those two are great companions when your pals are always in touch and...
  September 15th, 2017 21:40
• My Praises to The Lord (ForeverJesus7) Is this the same lord in charge of famine? The one in who\'s image...
  September 15th, 2017 21:37
• Follow Thy Elsewhere (Seek) Way over my head is this. I\'m still at jack and jill went up the hill...
  September 15th, 2017 21:34
• Residency Restoration (Orchidee) More tea vicar?
  September 15th, 2017 21:27
• My Poetic Side (Lasergraph) Well there Mr Lasergraph i think every one of us has at some stage paid...
  September 15th, 2017 21:23
• Turtles on a log (WL Schuett) This is a delight to read. nuff said?
  September 15th, 2017 21:19
• Homeless (W c) Yep, been there done that. It won\'t leave you. Fresh out of the shower...
  September 15th, 2017 21:15
• Fire and Gasoline (Writings From The Unknown13) She set fire to my heart and threw me some matches..... \'in case you go...
  September 15th, 2017 21:08
• You\'re My Sunshine (Liberty_Shadows) This was all flowing lovely until that last line threw me..... it could...
  September 15th, 2017 21:04
• Facing Reality (Simple-Man87) Well written. It doesn\'t always work out and, just as u show us here,...
  September 15th, 2017 20:57
• Fake Love (Chloe Rachel Flisher) Working out your partners thoughts etc when relationship is going wrong is...
  September 15th, 2017 20:53
• I\'m fine (Joy Fetherolf) Well described lie we use all too often here. I like your style.
  September 15th, 2017 20:47
• Happy Birthday (Axel Keating) First time i ever saw the word conversate. Spell checker on here...
  September 15th, 2017 19:40
• Undressed. (Fay Slimm.) Loved these lines \"your glistening retains measured pace with the...
  September 15th, 2017 18:02
• A friend (Tony36) Tony this is truly what a friend is, you write it so well here.
  September 15th, 2017 17:57
• You are (Myself and me) Very much reminded me of a Lionel Ritchie song i used to sing to my lover...
  September 15th, 2017 17:52
• Passion (Malubotelho) Wimmin see.... u just cant trust the buggers..... ha ha ha oooh...
  September 15th, 2017 17:49
• WELL FED AM I (Michael Edwards) Now this is just damned clever sir and a lovely image above.
  September 15th, 2017 16:05
• VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION (Louis Gibbs) Always a better you after such confrontation..... a new day, a new dawn,...
  September 15th, 2017 16:03
• Hungry Ghosts (Goldfinch60) Oh you made me laugh again..... this is absolutely prescious mate. Goes...
  September 15th, 2017 15:59
• My Baby Girl (FredPeyer) Beautiful from your heart writing. Envious.
  September 15th, 2017 15:57
• What is Time? (Goldfinch60) If i only had time to learn my five times table a...
  September 14th, 2017 18:24
• Endless Love. (Goldfinch60) God has shown you what love is my friend. Real unconditional love is what...
  September 14th, 2017 18:15
• Just Human (FredPeyer) Walk tall, walk straight and look the world right in the eye... words...
  September 14th, 2017 18:10
• The girl I am (Kat) \"I want to be someone who say what she thinks\" LOL so who\'s...
  September 14th, 2017 18:06
• Living on a 4/6 (Malubotelho) Love it when you write about things in our everyday life we take for...
  September 14th, 2017 17:26
• The water and the rock (Malubotelho) ooooh a deja vu moment Malubotelho. Great to see you writing again after...
  September 14th, 2017 14:59
• Union of Perfection (Leah Sharp) Hmmm a box of matches?
  September 12th, 2017 03:19
• Thought (FredPeyer) Ahhh thats one of those top of the stairs moments isn\'t it \'now what...
  September 12th, 2017 03:15
• THREE FROM FUSIONS (Michael Edwards) Great stuff... i do like to see light hearted fun stuff in here. Yes that...
  September 12th, 2017 03:13
• What is the Time? (Goldfinch60) Time as we perceive it is a weird commodity. Have you ever heard...
  September 12th, 2017 02:59
• Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.) Tell me a tale, tell me. Oh you told this so well.... winter was here in...
  September 11th, 2017 16:34
• Another Day Gone (FredPeyer) These days all to frequent when your prime is past. \'with nothing in...
  September 11th, 2017 16:26
• My Dear Mother (Christina8) Clearly a heartfelt loving tribute.... mum\'s... wonderful creatures,...
  September 11th, 2017 16:15
• Frequencies match (Poetic Dan) Tell it like it is.... erm 2222 ? Cold bum or hot, dont lose the...
  September 11th, 2017 16:04
• From Corncrake to God. (Goldfinch60) We know god by different names and traditions but wotever god is there can...
  September 11th, 2017 15:33
• Notebook (Aa Harvey) Some of my best are recovered from half written ideas. Often i want to...
  September 11th, 2017 01:46
• SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY (Michael Edwards) Anguish or what? Gripping reading, demands rereading.
  September 11th, 2017 01:38
• () Wonderful experience you portray. And how you portray it !! I felt this!...
  September 11th, 2017 01:32
• TICK TOCK (Louis Gibbs) Maybe mans existence is compatible we\'ve just got it so wrong so far....
  September 11th, 2017 01:22
• Future Vibes (HighImMaddie) I think a lot of us write to fill a void in our lives. I guess i do and...
  September 10th, 2017 20:09
• Future Vibes (HighImMaddie) I think a lot of us write to fill a void in our lives. I guess i do and...
  September 10th, 2017 20:08
• Drunk! (Sue.evans) Booze can be like that can\'t it. It\'s enjoyable in small measure but...
  September 10th, 2017 19:53
• Running in the forest (Nyoko_beautiful moon) Smell the freshness of the trees, feel the dampness in the air from the...
  September 10th, 2017 19:46
• Stuck Under Thunderstorms (Edthepoet) The dread of all those who are called away to \'do their duty\'. You...
  September 10th, 2017 18:21
• Saddest Love Triangle (Ruby.e) I recently found myself in one of these horrendous situations..... really...
  September 10th, 2017 16:11
• A Lovers Light (Maggie) Who\'s paying the electric bill? Nice love poem.
  September 10th, 2017 11:31
• Walking the Earth While Dead (Lanaevans) There you go gal..... all men are the same! You said it - \"except that...
  September 10th, 2017 11:28
• What Happened ? (Fay Slimm.) Ahhhh brit weather eh? No wonder its our favourite conversation...
  September 10th, 2017 07:33
• LIMERICK No 44 (Michael Edwards) So they\'d told M.E. it was nothing But they carried him off in his...
  September 10th, 2017 07:20