Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- What a wonderful time (Renzi)
All the time she spenz
on hols with her frenz
you gotta make...
September 25th, 2017 17:55 - Not Yet.. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful and really moving. Into my favourites.
September 25th, 2017 17:50 - Dark Comfort. (Goldfinch60)
You do realise you\'re absent mindedly eating biscuits while its still...
September 25th, 2017 17:46 - IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Bootiful sir! I only wish my dreams were so placid.
September 25th, 2017 17:40 - Two Smiles (FredPeyer)
Let me greet you with a smile as i pass along the way.
For the smile is...
September 24th, 2017 17:43 - From the unknown (Poetic Dan)
Creating a good musical sound is a great gift and shouldnt be kept hidden...
September 24th, 2017 17:37 - Fall From Grace (Christina8)
Thats beautiful. Becoming totally smitten.... everything going...
September 24th, 2017 17:25 - He played as a monster (Malubotelho)
I know you are strong Malu and i know you have a wonderful faith and...
September 24th, 2017 17:19 - Lost Yesterdays (Accidental Poet)
Oh my album of such memories gets a regular airing. Actual photos enhance...
September 24th, 2017 16:59 - The Becoming (Noah)
Youre scarey u know that? Nice writing.
September 24th, 2017 16:56 - Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60)
Amen. Lovely words. Spread a little love around.
September 24th, 2017 16:47 - Mind Games (FredPeyer)
Oh so true.... but when we do are we blinkered?... aha.... ...
September 24th, 2017 04:29 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh fay... sheer delight in reading your piece today. You\'ve done it yet...
September 24th, 2017 03:31 - DORCAS (Michael Edwards)
Village life has so much to offer if you join in rather than just live to...
September 24th, 2017 03:00 - El Bandito (Edthepoet)
And if i ever have a son i\'m gonna name him Sue
Yours is a great tale...
September 23rd, 2017 09:57 - No More.. (Fay Slimm.)
And today we see two nations leaders posturing... ready to commit young...
September 23rd, 2017 09:48 - I Got Wood (G84)
May you two enjoy many hours of good plucking G84.
A nice little...
September 23rd, 2017 09:15 - About sex and orgasm (Malubotelho)
Beautifully and openly worded Malu. Surprises me how awful some peoples...
September 23rd, 2017 09:09 - The Man at the Door. (Goldfinch60)
A lady phones me up and makes an arrangement for me to call at a specific...
September 23rd, 2017 08:06 - FIRST LOVE (Michael Edwards)
Cor! So sweet and charming. Wasn\'t like that for me in the first love...
September 23rd, 2017 07:55 - Smoke and Mirrors (Edthepoet)
Daft isn\'t it...you meet someone who amazes you in the way you feel about...
September 22nd, 2017 17:36 - THE OLD LIGHTHOUSE (Lasergraph)
LOL lasergraph... u want old?, boy have we got old ! ....... come...
September 22nd, 2017 17:29 - Just memories 📌 (Malubotelho)
And you are a wonderful warm and loving person because of your gallery...
September 22nd, 2017 16:03 - Seeing the World Differently (Goldfinch60)
Oh the blinkers of our own limited reality. Each day we set a mood for...
September 22nd, 2017 15:48 - Missing You (FredPeyer)
An imagined tragedy in the midst of a flaming love. Really the stuff of...
September 22nd, 2017 15:41 - Green. (Wallace)
When i was a boy my parents moved me around the country, new school, new...
September 22nd, 2017 15:36 - FAIR WARNING (Louis Gibbs)
Who let that pussycat in here? Everything must change, tis one of the laws...
September 22nd, 2017 15:31 - ()
NOW you\'ve done it!
I\'m blushing.
September 22nd, 2017 15:26 - RING RING (Michael Edwards)
There\'s a hole in the bucket dear Lisah dear Lisah, There\'s a hole in...
September 22nd, 2017 15:23 - Seize Now. (Fay Slimm.)
Whatever heaven means to the individual. Some seems to want to claim their...
September 21st, 2017 17:16 - Pondering the Question (Noah)
Do we con ourselves into believing we know the answers? The more you think...
September 21st, 2017 17:13 - The End. (Wallace)
All is dark! And you leave your reade hanging in suspense..... wanting...
September 21st, 2017 17:10 - Taming of the Beast (Mugsdaddy)
You turned this around nicely and quite surprised me. This is a hero gets...
September 21st, 2017 17:07 - For those who love ❤️ (Malubotelho)
Yes Malubotelho, love is everything and is the acceptance of everything,...
September 21st, 2017 16:48 - Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
Quote \"mmm mmm another fine mess you\'ve gotten me into orchi\"
...
September 21st, 2017 15:22 - The Door (FredPeyer)
Yes we continually move e away from the comfortable room to the next but...
September 21st, 2017 15:14 - A day (Myself and me)
How does she feel about it? or would she rather bring someone else...
September 20th, 2017 19:48 - A Poem For All (Christina8)
Wherever beauty leaps out fro my screen i will give thanks and praise in...
September 20th, 2017 18:17 - Inner debate (Malubotelho)
oooh such pain and anguish ! where is the love ? love doesn\'t dance...
September 20th, 2017 18:12 - Becoming Other. (Fay Slimm.)
You allowed me to recall the morning i was out looking for mushrooms and...
September 20th, 2017 17:41 - Throat Cutting. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha ha your wit doesn\'t need sharpening does it!
September 20th, 2017 15:44 - Nobody\'s Fool, a short story (FredPeyer)
Great writing Fred in both your literary style and of course content....
September 20th, 2017 15:35 - You May Say I\'m A Dreamer (Edthepoet)
< the crowd raised Ed onto their shoulders amidst rapturous applause and...
September 19th, 2017 21:52 - I Am Free (Christina8)
Sc many times i am caught out by somethig which was said or happened in my...
September 19th, 2017 19:37 - Always know just enough (Poetic Dan)
Older Ladies of grace. I now that serenity of which you speak. Nostalgic...
September 19th, 2017 19:16 - Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum (Accidental Poet)
Now i\'m confused which one\'s tweedle ... dum was it? Mass produced look...
September 19th, 2017 19:14 - Monstichs by Fred (inspired by Michael Edwards) (FredPeyer)
Each one a thriller waiting to be written..... so many plots... so...
September 19th, 2017 19:11 - Stalled. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes indeed for all is ready for the roaring fire of passionate love..... ...
September 19th, 2017 19:08 - Void of Life (Mugsdaddy)
Lived like that for ten years till May this year when i took my size 11...
September 19th, 2017 18:40 - Rainbow of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Though a rainbow has no end Goldfinch, I think you found the fabled...
September 19th, 2017 18:06 - Money Grabber. (Wallace)
Ha ha ha.... did the young lady teach you anything?
Great story i loved...
September 19th, 2017 18:01 - THE BURGESS SHALE (Michael Edwards)
Reminded me of the man who ran up expenses of $2 million digging up old...
September 19th, 2017 17:59 - Yesterday (Myself and me)
Great piece of writing. Made me think back to younger days and ponder upon...
September 18th, 2017 20:33 - THE WINDMILL (Lasergraph)
Here in UK there are still a few of the really old windmills which still...
September 18th, 2017 17:20 - Love for love (Malubotelho)
Ah Malubotelho you are indeed a beautiful soul and looks to me you are on ...
September 18th, 2017 16:45 - The Gambler (FredPeyer)
sings:-
i used to be a big shot long time ago
had a cadillac and whole...
September 18th, 2017 16:38 - Brian (Nicki Jackson)
Wot no text message yet.... hmmm i\'m worrying now..... do you...
September 18th, 2017 16:15 - Spain (Renzi)
Wear ya smile
Lose that frown
The place is kikkin
Renzi\'s in...
September 18th, 2017 16:13 - Shine A Light (Edthepoet)
Sometimes it just cuts through all the crap we build around ourselves. The...
September 18th, 2017 15:57 - Plan B (Accidental Poet)
Ah yes that cunningly contrived second plan.... but will they let you...
September 18th, 2017 13:15 - Mortal Hellfire (Noah)
In my mind i had you writing this as if you were a tomato on a plate of...
September 18th, 2017 13:12 - Thinnest Divide. (Fay Slimm.)
Go on Fay... dive in... you know you want to! Swim with those...
September 18th, 2017 13:07 - Followed in the Night. (Goldfinch60)
Do you ever push the words out ahead of you and see where they take you?...
September 18th, 2017 12:44 - SHE MONSTICHS (Michael Edwards)
A plot in every one of them.... oh ye of multi talents.... only 24...
September 18th, 2017 06:55 - DayDreaming ❤ (Karla)
Just read your poem and time on my watch is 2.12 am here in UK - good...
September 17th, 2017 20:14 - Brian (Nicki Jackson)
This is magical writing before my eyes. You see i am in my sixties and...
September 17th, 2017 20:10 - Without You (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Beautiful words of love for someone special. Will she see them, will she...
September 17th, 2017 20:03 - I Wish I Could (Mugsdaddy)
Thats when it really hurts isn\'t it. All the love you feel, the one-ness,...
September 17th, 2017 19:57 - Moment (Myself and me)
Wow yes soooo true. This is quite a deep subject for not only does it...
September 17th, 2017 19:41 - Life of love (Poetic Dan)
Great poem, and wicked pic. Reading all comments before i make mine i say...
September 17th, 2017 17:14 - A Traditional Man (Accidental Poet)
Nice one sir! But will 10 year old girls buy it on vinyl? Aww we wont...
September 17th, 2017 17:08 - Why? (FredPeyer)
Do you really want a diaper already Fred? Is there something you\'re not...
September 17th, 2017 16:38 - Singing. (Goldfinch60)
I share your taste in shirts. Actually we do have quite a bit in common....
September 17th, 2017 16:34 - MORE THAN. (Fay Slimm.)
WOW Fay that is tremendous! Held me breathless as i read it thru (cept i...
September 17th, 2017 16:29 - Electric Blue. (Wallace)
Sad loss shouts out from your words. Well written piece of loss grief. If...
September 17th, 2017 16:05 - Space (Kailie Jackson)
How unimportant do you want to be??? Man goes to opticians, optician...
September 17th, 2017 12:10 - Make Us Laugh (W c)
Yes i agree.... i know i\'m already doing my bit.
Good to read.
September 17th, 2017 12:06 - LIMERICK 43 (Michael Edwards)
I used to visit the Gower every month of the year, a favourite area with...
September 17th, 2017 11:28 - Embrace the remembering (Poetic Dan)
To all men i think motherhood is amazing. The unconditional love involved...
September 16th, 2017 21:34 - One (Arazimus)
Aaaah that god-spun draft wafting through our lifes. Your words bring to...
September 16th, 2017 11:02 - Humanities Redemption (John Prophet)
The answer is of course \'yes\'. Provokative writing there. Please comment...
September 16th, 2017 10:53 - The first time (Pr3ttyshad0ws)
LOL i really enjoyed your first time you poetic minx. You are a fine...
September 16th, 2017 06:36 - Slave (FredPeyer)
All too easily the ladies forget that inside every gentleman is the lusty...
September 16th, 2017 06:28 - Saturday Mornings (Accidental Poet)
Oh what a treasure you\'ve unearthed here my friend. For we all have those...
September 16th, 2017 06:24 - Winter (G84)
Winter is my time too, but here in UK it would have been nice to have had...
September 16th, 2017 06:14 - Buzzard (Noah)
\"Stuck like blood on the sheet\" and \"Keep them all from loving...
September 16th, 2017 06:11 - I\'ll Be Seeing You. (Goldfinch60)
Needless to say that i\'m familiar with Billie Hilliday\'s work. I read...
September 16th, 2017 02:12 - HIS PICTURE GONE (Michael Edwards)
A sad tale of loss and sorrow. Beautifully painted picture of words...
September 16th, 2017 00:09 - Ghost in my age (ScatterMax)
Good piece of writing there. Succinct! Is it heartfelt or imagined? Beware...
September 15th, 2017 23:51 - Somebody (Lanaevans)
Why should somebody help you? Answer that and you\'ll realise you dont...
September 15th, 2017 22:16 - Countryside Life (JamieDayDream)
Is your loneliness within or without? Would you feel less lonely in a...
September 15th, 2017 22:13 - Heading out (Arazimus)
Isolation is a remedy but not the cure. Break out, or rather break back...
September 15th, 2017 22:00 - One With The Universe (John Prophet)
I\'m inclined to be in agreement with comments made by Seek above.
Nice...
September 15th, 2017 21:58 - I have it together with my address book and calendar. (Bethgaines62678)
Those two are great companions when your pals are always in touch and...
September 15th, 2017 21:40 - My Praises to The Lord (ForeverJesus7)
Is this the same lord in charge of famine? The one in who\'s image...
September 15th, 2017 21:37 - Follow Thy Elsewhere (Seek)
Way over my head is this. I\'m still at jack and jill went up the hill...
September 15th, 2017 21:34 - Residency Restoration (Orchidee)
More tea vicar?
September 15th, 2017 21:27 - My Poetic Side (Lasergraph)
Well there Mr Lasergraph i think every one of us has at some stage paid...
September 15th, 2017 21:23 - Turtles on a log (WL Schuett)
This is a delight to read.
nuff said?
September 15th, 2017 21:19 - Homeless (W c)
Yep, been there done that. It won\'t leave you. Fresh out of the shower...
September 15th, 2017 21:15
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