Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• The Rules of Cricket. (Goldfinch60) OH okey cokey cokey, oh okey cokey cokey ..... I creased with...
  September 10th, 2017 06:47
• Our Bond (Ruby.e) Yes, just like Santita commented, I assumed he was going to be your man....
  September 10th, 2017 06:36
• Inflatable Irene (Viv Wade) You\'re my kinda poet.... a demonstrably wicked sense of humour. Mate...
  September 10th, 2017 06:32
• Mother. (Noah) There is imperfection in us all. Your words are a stark reminder of...
  September 10th, 2017 06:27
• Doors left open (Poetic Dan) Dan this is great. I know you are searching for a greater truth that will...
  September 10th, 2017 06:13
• Meandher (Aa Harvey) Great positive message here which always good to see. Don\'t lose sight...
  September 10th, 2017 06:05
• The Artist Within. (Goldfinch60) Nice one Goldfinch. I find that i have a serious, a sentimental and a...
  September 9th, 2017 18:30
• Santa Claus (Ruby.e) Well my faith in that one and his son died when we found out my daugher...
  September 8th, 2017 19:50
• Santa Claus (Ruby.e) Santa is a great idea and a wonderful myth around which theres so much fun...
  September 8th, 2017 16:55
• Dishonor Among Thieves (Noah) The stories this could tell. The questions it leaves hanging. Provokative...
  September 8th, 2017 16:50
• They let me die (rape scene) (Samreen Chowdhury) There are those of us who care a great deal. Difficult for a man to show...
  September 8th, 2017 16:45
• Writer\'s Block (Ruby.e) Just write wot u feel, if it doesnt work out stick it into an incomplete...
  September 8th, 2017 15:39
• A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Sky (Aa Harvey) Love is all around you, love is not only romantic love. Love everything ,...
  September 8th, 2017 13:38
• Your Love (Tony36) Tony, in time you\'ll look at all the good love you have enjoyed and are...
  September 8th, 2017 10:44
• Breaking patterns, don\'t scream (Poetic Dan) LOL @ real man is etc.... real men realised long ago that the concept...
  September 8th, 2017 10:36
• Undeniably You (Christina8) Love story well told. Time after time it\'s a beautiful theme. Love in all...
  September 8th, 2017 10:26
• Star Trek Now. (Goldfinch60) All great sci-fi writers are visionaries. Their huge visions are fantastic...
  September 8th, 2017 05:00
• Wordsmith (FredPeyer) Scrap is a bit high and mighty for my efforts, being a five letter word,...
  September 8th, 2017 04:10
• THE BROKEN (Louis Gibbs) Im not so much broken as cracked!
  September 8th, 2017 01:39
• DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) For me number one has the drama and is a story waiting to be told.
  September 8th, 2017 01:38
• Seren (BlueDays) Lovely ode to your bestest pal. Dogs are quite wonderful friends aren\'t...
  September 8th, 2017 01:21
• Coffee House (ShannonXx) Your phrasing paints such clear mental pictures. The scene the anguish,...
  September 8th, 2017 01:14
• Blue is the Sea (Edthepoet) Yes, do the new things threaten the love or do they become a part of it....
  September 8th, 2017 01:08
• Well hello (Renzi) aaaaahh pleasure! to see that style of writing again and that lovely face...
  September 8th, 2017 00:45
• Back Then. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful oh to live those bygone days again eh? lovely writing,...
  September 7th, 2017 18:52
• Home is where the start is. (Aa Harvey) Dont get too needy, you\'ll frighten prospective candidates away. Or is...
  September 7th, 2017 04:45
• View of God. (Goldfinch60) You made me burst out laughing there. Hadn\'t heard that before - very...
  September 7th, 2017 04:41
• Ghost Walk. (Wallace) Well at least you won\'t get soaked in that rainfall. Good entertaining...
  September 7th, 2017 04:30
• Why Men Have Hairy Bums (Viv Wade) So man applied a bit of science and he invented the domestic...
  September 7th, 2017 04:25
• The Dream (FredPeyer) No no no no you had me going there, i was seeing images, i broke out in a...
  September 7th, 2017 04:03
• SHE CONFIRMS (Michael Edwards) And the black sullen swell of the sea held its breath at the suspense...
  September 7th, 2017 03:51
• The Crossing (Mugsdaddy) Ah the crossroads. Every third blues song finds its way to or from a...
  September 7th, 2017 03:42
• The Wolf and The Moon (RickyMcG) Wonderful .... mystery, you have woven your chosen elements...
  September 6th, 2017 20:36
• I Hurt Too (J.M. Shine) On it\'s own it stands up well. Romance, mystery, loss. pain, love.......
  September 6th, 2017 20:32
• Homeless, Hopeless (LM1005) There are many types of people homeless and for many reasons. Although we...
  September 6th, 2017 20:21
• sometimes (Mozart) And sometimes a breath of fresh air like you makes poetry seem so simple...
  September 6th, 2017 20:09
• The World Burns As We Speak (and one more) (Poetboy123) Two pieces of contrast here. The first quite quite apposite for the world...
  September 6th, 2017 19:54
• My love is in the silence (David) Yes, often misunderstood but sometimes to \'let it be\' and love from afar...
  September 6th, 2017 19:37
• The Pills (Mugsdaddy) This is so dark that it\'s good job i have a braillle screen..... Good...
  September 6th, 2017 19:33
• Change (Samreen Chowdhury) Hey Samreen this is a breath of fresh air and a song i sing everyday....
  September 6th, 2017 19:29
• Bible (AudieSaige) Maybe he\'s a bit frightened by your interpretation of your christianity....
  September 6th, 2017 19:08
• Adult Relationship (Ruby.e) Nice writing Ruby. I hope the dilemma of your poems contents is a thing of...
  September 6th, 2017 18:56
• Time To Grow Up (John Prophet) I dont know if you are right about that throwback, but i know many on here...
  September 6th, 2017 16:45
• ODE\' TO COFFEE (Lasergraph) Its all been said by my fellow coffee quaffing poetic colleagues here. The...
  September 6th, 2017 16:41
• Goodbye Dave R.I.P (Miss Lisa Poems 80) This is a beautifully written tribute to your late husband and father of...
  September 6th, 2017 16:35
• Being Again, Tested (WriteBeLight) What can we do but watch our screens from afar? Good writing on this...
  September 6th, 2017 16:29
• Home Hunting (Calling_alaska) Alone is good so long as you are together about yourself. Spend enough...
  September 6th, 2017 15:54
• What my Mother Taught Me (Andreax21) Momma was right. Love makes the world go round. And you express your love...
  September 6th, 2017 15:51
• Only. (Wallace) Wow powerful stuff. Nice writing. Please comment on my stuff.
  September 6th, 2017 15:47
• Preparing for Irma (Malubotelho) Be safe, i need you back here to \'protect\' me from you know who....
  September 6th, 2017 15:09
• I am the Alpha-wolf (Tony36) Grrrrrrr...... Who\'s that walking in the woods...... its little red...
  September 6th, 2017 15:06
• So Met. (Fay Slimm.) Oh how true i love it! North coast of your lovely county is covered in...
  September 6th, 2017 05:57
• Ocean (FredPeyer) Amazing unceasing motion of energy isn\'t it. Like so many people i am...
  September 6th, 2017 05:39
• My Tomorrows. (Goldfinch60) aaaah Peer Gynt all time popular favourite and easy to see why. Suits you...
  September 6th, 2017 05:33
• A Trilogy of Edone Poems (BlueDays) Clever.
  September 6th, 2017 05:21
• () OOOH you could frighten a man away with stuff like this Santita..... ...
  September 6th, 2017 05:05
• Rabbit-edone (Myself and me) LOL nice bit of fun.
  September 6th, 2017 04:58
• The time is 10.23 pm (Aa Harvey) I like it, especially the way you close it down. Good writing.
  September 6th, 2017 04:50
• God ? (FredPeyer) Too many people taking this religious stuff as dead serious so its a...
  September 6th, 2017 04:41
• She Fever Too. (Goldfinch60) Whichever way it reads it\'ll satisfy your needs the beauty\'s in its...
  September 6th, 2017 04:33
• LIMERICK No 42 (Michael Edwards) ha ha ha i\'ve a trick with farts thats new i save \'em for the...
  September 6th, 2017 04:19
• Limericks (Sue.evans) Good fun stuff. When asked to write on MPS Sue.Evans quickly said...
  September 4th, 2017 19:25
• Day Break (Maggie) Strong writing with a strong purpose in mind. Always good to see something...
  September 4th, 2017 10:25
• A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Pumpkin (Aa Harvey) Lorra lorra love everywhere. Nice short.
  September 4th, 2017 08:52
• The Stone Tower (J.M. Shine) Now this i could fancy. Living on my own chunk of earth like a cloud. And...
  September 4th, 2017 08:51
• Jigsaw of Life. (Goldfinch60) This just isn\'t fair..... why do my jigsaws have bits missing. You\'ve...
  September 4th, 2017 08:46
• The Boneyard (Noah) Horror mystery..... sets the scene for a damn good film.... i see...
  September 4th, 2017 08:42
• Alone. (Wallace) Nicely written. Time heals. Please comment on my stuff.
  September 4th, 2017 08:36
• Love lies (Sunflowers Bloom) Great writing. Difficult isn\'t it, recovering fro heartbreak. I\'ve done...
  September 3rd, 2017 15:36
• Awake (AudieSaige) Innocent but ready, or was she conned by a big bad wolf? Oh no, he was...
  September 3rd, 2017 15:23
• Acid rain (A__pott) I think the way santita sums this up is just right. Lot of us carry pains...
  September 3rd, 2017 15:09
• Truth Behind Climate Change (Poetboy123) I thought it was common knowledge now that cows farting was the cause of...
  September 3rd, 2017 15:07
• Guess the Character (TN96) Had to be sherlock. Aaaah tiz quiz nite - evenings draw in and sundays are...
  September 3rd, 2017 15:03
• O My .... (Maggie) The last line is worrying me. It reads \'well shall have met\' should that...
  September 3rd, 2017 14:56
• Campfire Legends (LukeCoomer) i love it. Life is for living not sitting in the dark waiting for...
  September 3rd, 2017 14:50
• About Love (Seeker) All too true, those last two lines nail it. Is our existence here on earth...
  September 3rd, 2017 14:25
• Untitled (SarahLouise) Lovely words. Please comment upon my stuff.
  September 3rd, 2017 14:16
• How Else Could It Have Gone (John Prophet) Maybe this is the alternative world?
  September 3rd, 2017 14:14
• Exit-etheree (Myself and me) Well done M&M
  September 3rd, 2017 14:09
• Inner Thoughts (Diane) Why write when u havent the inspiration. Whats the point? If you\'re...
  September 3rd, 2017 08:54
• A Multitude of Moggies (Viv Wade) I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Viv. Its very well written too, a...
  September 3rd, 2017 08:45
• suicide (Wackyheartache4) I picture your tombstone. RIP Wackyheartache4 who took 5 mins to tell...
  September 3rd, 2017 08:35
• Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree (Sue.evans) Cute, i like that. And wisdom too.
  September 3rd, 2017 08:29
• Accidental Birth (Lanaevans) Cool. Rant over ? Try reading positive stuff and making a positive move...
  September 3rd, 2017 08:25
• Born To Fight (Felicityjones) Nice writing. Wanting to change is a good start on any journey. please...
  September 3rd, 2017 08:18
• Four Walls. (Wallace) Nice cheerfully decorated room you describe.
  September 3rd, 2017 08:15
• Looking Inward (Mugsdaddy) Good writing. Of course once u know where the bottom is then u know...
  September 3rd, 2017 08:02
• Sex Starved (BlueDays) Eros the black hearted beast ....thats a first! Don\'t get too hungry...
  September 3rd, 2017 08:00
• For-Life-Wife (Aa Harvey) Quite quite a beautiful piece written from your heart. You have obviously...
  September 3rd, 2017 07:56
• No beef (Poetic Dan) Sometimes certain mens actions can lead you to believe you are a quite...
  September 3rd, 2017 06:45
• My Soul (FredPeyer) I learned a new word which no doubt i will promptly forget...
  September 3rd, 2017 06:35
• GOD ANSWERS PRAYER ~ Sonnet for Sunday ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Are sure god is a man? Really sure?
  September 3rd, 2017 06:29
• Two into One. (Goldfinch60) Fangs very much for that. It gave me a thirst. Very enjoyable reading.
  September 3rd, 2017 06:25
• DAFFODILS (Michael Edwards) Clever stuff, but it looks like a christmas tree.
  September 3rd, 2017 01:22
• Stretch (Myself and me) nice short and meaningful. nothing wasted. Good concise write.
  September 2nd, 2017 15:56
• Insomnia (Malubotelho) Mental turmoil preventing sleep is something i have discovered over the...
  September 2nd, 2017 15:48
• the dawning of grief (Alienkid) This is top notch stuff poet. That last verse is especially strong and oh...
  September 2nd, 2017 15:42
• A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Banana (Aa Harvey) Now that i like, its both clever and meaningful. yes its going into my...
  September 2nd, 2017 13:19
• wandering (but never finding) (Alienkid) hOne of a poets noblest companions is his/her troubled mind. You\'ve shown...
  September 2nd, 2017 06:27
• wandering (but never finding) (Alienkid) hOne of a poets noblest companions is his/her troubled mind. You\'ve shown...
  September 2nd, 2017 06:19