Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Fire and Gasoline (Writings From The Unknown13)
She set fire to my heart and threw me some matches..... \'in case you go...
September 15th, 2017 21:08 - You\'re My Sunshine (Liberty_Shadows)
This was all flowing lovely until that last line threw me..... it could...
September 15th, 2017 21:04 - Facing Reality (Simple-Man87)
Well written. It doesn\'t always work out and, just as u show us here,...
September 15th, 2017 20:57 - Fake Love (Chloe Rachel Flisher)
Working out your partners thoughts etc when relationship is going wrong is...
September 15th, 2017 20:53 - I\'m fine (Joy Fetherolf)
Well described lie we use all too often here. I like your style.
September 15th, 2017 20:47 - Happy Birthday (Axel Keating)
First time i ever saw the word conversate. Spell checker on here...
September 15th, 2017 19:40 - Undressed. (Fay Slimm.)
Loved these lines
\"your glistening retains measured
pace with the...
September 15th, 2017 18:02 - A friend (Tony36)
Tony this is truly what a friend is, you write it so well here.
September 15th, 2017 17:57 - You are (Myself and me)
Very much reminded me of a Lionel Ritchie song i used to sing to my lover...
September 15th, 2017 17:52 - Passion (Malubotelho)
Wimmin see.... u just cant trust the buggers..... ha ha ha
oooh...
September 15th, 2017 17:49 - WELL FED AM I (Michael Edwards)
Now this is just damned clever sir and a lovely image above.
September 15th, 2017 16:05 - VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION (Louis Gibbs)
Always a better you after such confrontation..... a new day, a new dawn,...
September 15th, 2017 16:03 - Hungry Ghosts (Goldfinch60)
Oh you made me laugh again..... this is absolutely prescious mate. Goes...
September 15th, 2017 15:59 - My Baby Girl (FredPeyer)
Beautiful from your heart writing. Envious.
September 15th, 2017 15:57 - What is Time? (Goldfinch60)
If i only had time
to learn my five times table
a...
September 14th, 2017 18:24 - Endless Love. (Goldfinch60)
God has shown you what love is my friend. Real unconditional love is what...
September 14th, 2017 18:15 - Just Human (FredPeyer)
Walk tall, walk straight and look the world right in the eye... words...
September 14th, 2017 18:10 - The girl I am (Kat)
\"I want to be someone who say what she thinks\" LOL so who\'s...
September 14th, 2017 18:06 - Living on a 4/6 (Malubotelho)
Love it when you write about things in our everyday life we take for...
September 14th, 2017 17:26 - The water and the rock (Malubotelho)
ooooh a deja vu moment Malubotelho. Great to see you writing again after...
September 14th, 2017 14:59 - Union of Perfection (Leah Sharp)
Hmmm a box of matches?
September 12th, 2017 03:19 - Thought (FredPeyer)
Ahhh thats one of those top of the stairs moments isn\'t it \'now what...
September 12th, 2017 03:15 - THREE FROM FUSIONS (Michael Edwards)
Great stuff... i do like to see light hearted fun stuff in here. Yes that...
September 12th, 2017 03:13 - What is the Time? (Goldfinch60)
Time as we perceive it is a weird commodity.
Have you ever heard...
September 12th, 2017 02:59 - Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.)
Tell me a tale, tell me. Oh you told this so well.... winter was here in...
September 11th, 2017 16:34 - Another Day Gone (FredPeyer)
These days all to frequent when your prime is past. \'with nothing in...
September 11th, 2017 16:26 - My Dear Mother (Christina8)
Clearly a heartfelt loving tribute.... mum\'s... wonderful creatures,...
September 11th, 2017 16:15 - Frequencies match (Poetic Dan)
Tell it like it is.... erm 2222 ?
Cold bum or hot, dont lose the...
September 11th, 2017 16:04 - From Corncrake to God. (Goldfinch60)
We know god by different names and traditions but wotever god is there can...
September 11th, 2017 15:33 - Notebook (Aa Harvey)
Some of my best are recovered from half written ideas. Often i want to...
September 11th, 2017 01:46 - SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY (Michael Edwards)
Anguish or what? Gripping reading, demands rereading.
September 11th, 2017 01:38 - ()
Wonderful experience you portray. And how you portray it !! I felt this!...
September 11th, 2017 01:32 - TICK TOCK (Louis Gibbs)
Maybe mans existence is compatible we\'ve just got it so wrong so far....
September 11th, 2017 01:22 - Future Vibes (HighImMaddie)
I think a lot of us write to fill a void in our lives. I guess i do and...
September 10th, 2017 20:09 - Future Vibes (HighImMaddie)
I think a lot of us write to fill a void in our lives. I guess i do and...
September 10th, 2017 20:08 - Drunk! (Sue.evans)
Booze can be like that can\'t it. It\'s enjoyable in small measure but...
September 10th, 2017 19:53 - Running in the forest (Nyoko_beautiful moon)
Smell the freshness of the trees, feel the dampness in the air from the...
September 10th, 2017 19:46 - Stuck Under Thunderstorms (Edthepoet)
The dread of all those who are called away to \'do their duty\'.
You...
September 10th, 2017 18:21 - Saddest Love Triangle (Ruby.e)
I recently found myself in one of these horrendous situations..... really...
September 10th, 2017 16:11 - A Lovers Light (Maggie)
Who\'s paying the electric bill? Nice love poem.
September 10th, 2017 11:31 - Walking the Earth While Dead (Lanaevans)
There you go gal..... all men are the same! You said it - \"except that...
September 10th, 2017 11:28 - What Happened ? (Fay Slimm.)
Ahhhh brit weather eh? No wonder its our favourite conversation...
September 10th, 2017 07:33 - LIMERICK No 44 (Michael Edwards)
So they\'d told M.E. it was nothing
But they carried him off in his...
September 10th, 2017 07:20 - Heavenly Dreamland (Accidental Poet)
A love many will never have known sadly. Envious. Nice writing.
September 10th, 2017 06:51 - The Rules of Cricket. (Goldfinch60)
OH okey cokey cokey, oh okey cokey cokey ..... I creased with...
September 10th, 2017 06:47 - Our Bond (Ruby.e)
Yes, just like Santita commented, I assumed he was going to be your man....
September 10th, 2017 06:36 - Inflatable Irene (Viv Wade)
You\'re my kinda poet.... a demonstrably wicked sense of humour. Mate...
September 10th, 2017 06:32 - Mother. (Noah)
There is imperfection in us all. Your words are a stark reminder of...
September 10th, 2017 06:27 - Life in the Rearview Mirror 101 (Accidental Poet)
Great to read. Looking back on your life experiences with the kind eyes...
September 10th, 2017 06:23 - Doors left open (Poetic Dan)
Dan this is great. I know you are searching for a greater truth that will...
September 10th, 2017 06:13 - Meandher (Aa Harvey)
Great positive message here which always good to see.
Don\'t lose sight...
September 10th, 2017 06:05 - The Artist Within. (Goldfinch60)
Nice one Goldfinch. I find that i have a serious, a sentimental and a...
September 9th, 2017 18:30 - Santa Claus (Ruby.e)
Well my faith in that one and his son died when we found out my daugher...
September 8th, 2017 19:50 - Santa Claus (Ruby.e)
Santa is a great idea and a wonderful myth around which theres so much fun...
September 8th, 2017 16:55 - Dishonor Among Thieves (Noah)
The stories this could tell. The questions it leaves hanging. Provokative...
September 8th, 2017 16:50 - They let me die (rape scene) (Samreen Chowdhury)
There are those of us who care a great deal. Difficult for a man to show...
September 8th, 2017 16:45 - Writer\'s Block (Ruby.e)
Just write wot u feel, if it doesnt work out stick it into an incomplete...
September 8th, 2017 15:39 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Sky (Aa Harvey)
Love is all around you, love is not only romantic love. Love everything ,...
September 8th, 2017 13:38 - Your Love (Tony36)
Tony, in time you\'ll look at all the good love you have enjoyed and are...
September 8th, 2017 10:44 - Breaking patterns, don\'t scream (Poetic Dan)
LOL @ real man is etc.... real men realised long ago that the concept...
September 8th, 2017 10:36 - Undeniably You (Christina8)
Love story well told. Time after time it\'s a beautiful theme. Love in all...
September 8th, 2017 10:26 - Star Trek Now. (Goldfinch60)
All great sci-fi writers are visionaries. Their huge visions are fantastic...
September 8th, 2017 05:00 - Wordsmith (FredPeyer)
Scrap is a bit high and mighty for my efforts, being a five letter word,...
September 8th, 2017 04:10 - THE BROKEN (Louis Gibbs)
Im not so much broken as cracked!
September 8th, 2017 01:39 - DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
For me number one has the drama and is a story waiting to be told.
September 8th, 2017 01:38 - Seren (BlueDays)
Lovely ode to your bestest pal. Dogs are quite wonderful friends aren\'t...
September 8th, 2017 01:21 - Coffee House (ShannonXx)
Your phrasing paints such clear mental pictures. The scene the anguish,...
September 8th, 2017 01:14 - Blue is the Sea (Edthepoet)
Yes, do the new things threaten the love or do they become a part of it....
September 8th, 2017 01:08 - Well hello (Renzi)
aaaaahh pleasure! to see that style of writing again and that lovely face...
September 8th, 2017 00:45 - Back Then. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful oh to live those bygone days again eh? lovely writing,...
September 7th, 2017 18:52 - Home is where the start is. (Aa Harvey)
Dont get too needy, you\'ll frighten prospective candidates away. Or is...
September 7th, 2017 04:45 - View of God. (Goldfinch60)
You made me burst out laughing there. Hadn\'t heard that before - very...
September 7th, 2017 04:41 - Ghost Walk. (Wallace)
Well at least you won\'t get soaked in that rainfall. Good entertaining...
September 7th, 2017 04:30 - Why Men Have Hairy Bums (Viv Wade)
So man applied a bit of science
and he invented the domestic...
September 7th, 2017 04:25 - The Dream (FredPeyer)
No no no no you had me going there, i was seeing images, i broke out in a...
September 7th, 2017 04:03 - SHE CONFIRMS (Michael Edwards)
And the black sullen swell of the sea held its breath at the suspense...
September 7th, 2017 03:51 - The Crossing (Mugsdaddy)
Ah the crossroads. Every third blues song finds its way to or from a...
September 7th, 2017 03:42 - The Wolf and The Moon (RickyMcG)
Wonderful .... mystery, you have woven your chosen elements...
September 6th, 2017 20:36 - I Hurt Too (J.M. Shine)
On it\'s own it stands up well. Romance, mystery, loss. pain, love.......
September 6th, 2017 20:32 - Homeless, Hopeless (LM1005)
There are many types of people homeless and for many reasons. Although we...
September 6th, 2017 20:21 - sometimes (Mozart)
And sometimes a breath of fresh air like you makes poetry seem so simple...
September 6th, 2017 20:09 - The World Burns As We Speak (and one more) (Poetboy123)
Two pieces of contrast here. The first quite quite apposite for the world...
September 6th, 2017 19:54 - My love is in the silence (David)
Yes, often misunderstood but sometimes to \'let it be\' and love from afar...
September 6th, 2017 19:37 - The Pills (Mugsdaddy)
This is so dark that it\'s good job i have a braillle screen..... Good...
September 6th, 2017 19:33 - Change (Samreen Chowdhury)
Hey Samreen this is a breath of fresh air and a song i sing everyday....
September 6th, 2017 19:29 - Bible (AudieSaige)
Maybe he\'s a bit frightened by your interpretation of your christianity....
September 6th, 2017 19:08 - Adult Relationship (Ruby.e)
Nice writing Ruby. I hope the dilemma of your poems contents is a thing of...
September 6th, 2017 18:56 - Time To Grow Up (John Prophet)
I dont know if you are right about that throwback, but i know many on here...
September 6th, 2017 16:45 - ODE\' TO COFFEE (Lasergraph)
Its all been said by my fellow coffee quaffing poetic colleagues here. The...
September 6th, 2017 16:41 - Goodbye Dave R.I.P (Miss Lisa Poems 80)
This is a beautifully written tribute to your late husband and father of...
September 6th, 2017 16:35 - Being Again, Tested (WriteBeLight)
What can we do but watch our screens from afar?
Good writing on this...
September 6th, 2017 16:29 - Home Hunting (Calling_alaska)
Alone is good so long as you are together about yourself. Spend enough...
September 6th, 2017 15:54 - What my Mother Taught Me (Andreax21)
Momma was right. Love makes the world go round. And you express your love...
September 6th, 2017 15:51 - Only. (Wallace)
Wow powerful stuff. Nice writing. Please comment on my stuff.
September 6th, 2017 15:47 - Preparing for Irma (Malubotelho)
Be safe, i need you back here to \'protect\' me from you know who....
September 6th, 2017 15:09 - I am the Alpha-wolf (Tony36)
Grrrrrrr...... Who\'s that walking in the woods...... its little red...
September 6th, 2017 15:06 - So Met. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh how true i love it! North coast of your lovely county is covered in...
September 6th, 2017 05:57 - Ocean (FredPeyer)
Amazing unceasing motion of energy isn\'t it. Like so many people i am...
September 6th, 2017 05:39 - My Tomorrows. (Goldfinch60)
aaaah Peer Gynt all time popular favourite and easy to see why. Suits you...
September 6th, 2017 05:33 - A Trilogy of Edone Poems (BlueDays)
Clever.
September 6th, 2017 05:21
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