Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Here\'s to looking at you, magnificent (Edthepoet) Entertaining story of the one that got away...... or was she a dream, a...
  July 10th, 2018 18:27
• Your Path. (Goldfinch60) More wise words from you - the bard. I\'m already limping from several...
  July 10th, 2018 06:32
• Your Path. (Goldfinch60) More wise words from you - the bard. I\'m already limping from several...
  July 10th, 2018 01:58
• MEMORIES OF WHAT WILL BE (Michael Edwards) Ah yes those memories of what will be. BBC and Dr Who have a lot to...
  July 10th, 2018 01:56
• To Shake or Not to Shake (Goldfinch60) Personally i am only interested in what goes on on the football pitch...
  July 9th, 2018 15:29
• Quite Dear To Me. (Kevin browne) Lovely story of a loving couple gaining wisdom and strength from being...
  July 9th, 2018 15:26
• Bathroom Breaks (Ragde Nella) He he he, well i guess all guys had a similar inspiring situation such as...
  July 8th, 2018 19:37
• The Spectrum of Solitude (Hesther) Wow i say at the wonderful pictures you encourage my mind to paint upon...
  July 8th, 2018 19:32
• The Climb (Skyebellasario) Wonderful to see the beautiful things of a relationship praised as it...
  July 8th, 2018 19:27
• Don\'t Be Bitter (Cindy Christmas) Words of wisdom from a learned lady. I suspect the guys on here are all...
  July 8th, 2018 19:23
• My Only (Here) Was he so perfect that you should take all the blame for the pain? ...
  July 8th, 2018 19:17
• Water, Whiskey and Wine (Edthepoet) Those last two verses deserve their own place in MPS.
  July 8th, 2018 19:10
• YOUR WORDS (Melissa Daly) Sometimes other peoples words can add to our strengths even if they kill...
  July 8th, 2018 19:07
• What They Don\'t Know (Cutelilcardinal) This piece is very very well written. Compelling reading. I really like...
  July 8th, 2018 19:04
• You make my skin crawl. (Antonis) Great heartfelt outpouring in your writing today. When i\'ve done similar...
  July 8th, 2018 18:52
• The Plan. (Goldfinch60) Next???? Love it, your sense of humour shines thru this.
  July 8th, 2018 18:45
• Love loss (Reyas) Nice open heart writing young sir.
  July 8th, 2018 18:43
• NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (5) (Michael Edwards) Did u used to write for Tommy Cooper?
  July 8th, 2018 18:41
• Moving on, Growing more (Asrealastheycome) Letting go is in itself, you growing. Your writing reminds me that part...
  July 7th, 2018 05:23
• The Sounding Sea (Kevin Michael Bloor) Masterful! It just doesn\'t get any better than this! I\'m envious of your...
  July 7th, 2018 05:15
• I coloured Her In. (Kevin browne) Amazing writing Kevin. Love the way you dangle the threads of this story...
  July 7th, 2018 05:09
• liquid brines (Abora) Hey, theres wonderful wildlife in a swamp and swamps change with the...
  July 7th, 2018 05:03
• Human. (Goldfinch60) Ah masterful! So many tell of what we ought to be, how to be better human...
  July 7th, 2018 04:57
• NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (4) (Michael Edwards) I didnt believe in mysticism Till the last time we voted in...
  July 7th, 2018 04:54
• Poetry or not! First and last part are worth a look (Poetic Dan) Dan this is an amazing piece recounting a day in the life. A day in the...
  July 5th, 2018 16:30
• SEIZE AND SEE. (Fay Slimm.) Wow! There\'s lots said in this piece. Now is gone and replaced with...
  July 5th, 2018 16:22
• Eight lessons I learned in life... (In the order I learnt them) (Andrew Charles Forrest) Very well written. Where others would drone on and on with the message...
  July 5th, 2018 16:17
• Monsters (Naeners) I like your style in writing this piece. Though it reads as very negative,...
  July 5th, 2018 15:59
• SUN AND MOON (Melissa Daly) I like this. The all too familiar situation we can find ourselves in when...
  July 5th, 2018 15:52
• New Generation (Unfinishedepiphany27) We will HAVE to learn to modify our point of view as we accept the wisdom...
  July 5th, 2018 15:49
• SINGLE HANDED (Fay Slimm.) Oh Fay you do look so cute astride that motorbike. Being of that certain...
  July 3rd, 2018 09:53
• Life Anew (Jamie Newton) Yes many truths in your succinct writing today. I like the way its put...
  July 1st, 2018 18:35
• A to Z of my head (Poetic Dan) Prefer you when you \'plain speak\' because youve a lot to say and do it...
  July 1st, 2018 07:58
• Goodbye (Used) Well done and well written. On another day - when you can bring yourself...
  July 1st, 2018 07:52
• REVERIE. (Fay Slimm.) Exquisite! Just so flipping good! nuff said? Definate favourite.
  June 28th, 2018 14:05
• WHAT IS LOVE? (KinleyMillsap) From my experience, love is a continual lesson and \'oh boy\' does it ever...
  June 28th, 2018 13:58
• Awakening (SLR) Every time i hear a newborn baby cry, or touch a leaf, or see the sky -...
  June 27th, 2018 16:04
• Romans 8:1-2 (ForeverJesus7) Man written laws from a man written book which is full of mistranslations....
  June 27th, 2018 08:33
• Back to front (Poetic Dan) Just be gentle with yourself. There are no rules as to how a life should...
  June 27th, 2018 08:25
• MY ENCOUNTER. (Fay Slimm.) Odd how we have to do so much growing ourselves before we start to really...
  June 27th, 2018 08:14
• Still Flight. (Goldfinch60) Marveling at the other life forms of this world. Maybe the solitary bird...
  June 23rd, 2018 16:16
• Such a beautiful mess (Edthepoet) Mixed up wonderful memories flood back thru your writing to confront the...
  June 23rd, 2018 16:12
• My Preston Boy (Undiscovered_diamond) What an absolute joyous pleasure to read. With me dodgy eyes and dodgy...
  June 19th, 2018 11:17
• Once Upon a Time (Germanamericanchurch) They DO say you have to hit rock I bottom before you take the cure. I...
  June 19th, 2018 11:14
• I probably won\'t laugh at your jokes (Edthepoet) The past accompanies us everywhere, be it physically or only in our...
  June 19th, 2018 04:28
• SOME ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) He who rides a \'high\' horse has lost his sense of smell. Muddy Waters...
  June 19th, 2018 04:21
• Cat Wars. (Goldfinch60) Personally i adore cats. Such a fine life form. Very entertaining...
  June 19th, 2018 04:18
• APPREHENSION. (Fay Slimm.) Gripping, suspenseful and filled with fearful apprehension. Dear to...
  June 19th, 2018 04:11
• REFLECTION. (Fay Slimm.) Oh so true. If only writing such truths could bring them to our door. i...
  June 15th, 2018 16:49
• CO-EXISTENCE. (Fay Slimm.) Just today i sat in the sunshine watching trains go by and admired the...
  June 14th, 2018 17:22
• BRIDGED. (Fay Slimm.) What a lovely read, totally uplifting and such a wonderful picture...
  June 12th, 2018 11:11
• Finding Peace. (Goldfinch60) Somebody wrote that our life in this existence is an education for what...
  June 12th, 2018 11:08
• LOVE HEALS (Michael Edwards) Yes love heals but my word it marrs also.
  June 12th, 2018 11:06
• My Lovebird (Kevin Michael Bloor) Lyrical and sweet. Captures the enigma.
  June 11th, 2018 05:36
• AFTER SCHOOL. (Fay Slimm.) Now if Freud were to read this he may conject that your pigtailed...
  June 11th, 2018 03:50
• Music is Life. (Goldfinch60) So true. I would be quite lost without music. I have only ever met one...
  June 10th, 2018 16:57
• THE DEBTOR (Michael Edwards) There was this bloke called John Major (left the circus to become an...
  June 10th, 2018 16:53
• Wave the stars goodbye (Gemma) Uplifting yes, but our yesterdays make us what we are today. We carry our...
  June 9th, 2018 17:26
• That Old Boy Down the Road. (Goldfinch60) Hey, leave those kids alone!
  June 9th, 2018 17:20
• LIMERICK 57 (Michael Edwards) they said the gal is from brighton reputed to be a right \'un to stop...
  June 9th, 2018 17:16
• Always Speak Clearly (Brooklyn6timesplus) Simple good advice from you sir!
  June 8th, 2018 18:14
• You’re Beautiful (AlexHoy) Most of us want to be something a bit different to the thing we actually...
  June 8th, 2018 18:14
• You Are You (Noah Malice) Hey i really like this and its made me smile and chuckle. There\'s so...
  June 8th, 2018 18:10
• Time (Nobody) I like poems about time. Its a strange thing isn\'t it- it rules us, we...
  June 8th, 2018 18:04
• Baby Boy (W c) Yep, recently met my 8 weeks old grandaughter and immediately fell in love...
  June 8th, 2018 17:54
• The Meaning of Life (Avigail) You\'ve made me smile. Really nice to read your well written piece....
  June 8th, 2018 17:45
• Message (Lovely brown skin) Constructive advice offered.... follow advice as given by...
  June 8th, 2018 17:42
• Behold (SLR) In your writing here i see no arrogance at all. Anyone who has shared...
  June 8th, 2018 14:57
• As long as I miss you (Gemma) Lovely truly romantic writing. Your heartfelt feelings really come across....
  June 8th, 2018 14:19
• A chained heart (Leostars_poems) My answer your question is \'yes\' and like your friend i cannot talk of...
  June 8th, 2018 14:15
• Music (Whyme24) You just made me realise that, having installed my music system in my...
  June 8th, 2018 14:09
• truly horrible advice (Abora) Hey you forgot \"get a job, buy a car, take a drive, see how the other...
  June 8th, 2018 14:06
• I am me! (Prettylittlepoet) A most uplifting piece. Good reading for those who are down. So many...
  June 8th, 2018 14:04
• EPITAPH. (Fay Slimm.) Sadly i have been that driver and its a sickening event. But too i...
  June 8th, 2018 14:01
• EPITAPH. (Fay Slimm.) Sadly i have been that driver and its a sickening event. But too i...
  June 8th, 2018 11:57
• Behold (SLR) And long may your love flourish.
  June 8th, 2018 11:50
• A Question of Life. (Goldfinch60) I gave up on that lot last year and shaved my head. Ever since taking what...
  June 8th, 2018 11:48
• Because of You (Sooni A. Clock) Is this poetry or a rant?
  June 7th, 2018 02:40
• THE BOATYARD (Michael Edwards) A clinker built piece today - no wait is it carvel or double diagonal? A...
  June 7th, 2018 01:57
• Wondrous Enchantment. (Goldfinch60) Exactly! All in the eye of the beholder. Im more impressed by the...
  June 7th, 2018 01:53
• The choice is yours (HangingbyaHalo) Wow! This is one of the best, most thought out and direct pieces i have...
  June 7th, 2018 00:05
• I want you (Prettylittlepoet) Well it\'s nice of you to write about me this way. I had hoped we could...
  June 6th, 2018 18:23
• Shrinking World (Goldfinch60) I have never felt the desire to travel outside of UK. Having written...
  June 6th, 2018 06:52
• Shrinking World (Goldfinch60) I have never felt the desire to travel outside of UK. Having written...
  June 6th, 2018 06:32
• A DREAM (Michael Edwards) Daytimes beta brain wave patters cannot assimilate the information which...
  June 6th, 2018 06:25
• stay (Maura) You know what, there is just soooo much wisdom in your words here....
  June 5th, 2018 19:15
• Homlesness (Lucyloo.lo) So very true. I was homeless for a short time aged 15 but times were...
  June 5th, 2018 18:53
• PERCEPTION (Michael Edwards) Maybe Trump is the first prominent U.S. leader to actually acknowledge...
  June 5th, 2018 18:13
• Love Unknown. (Goldfinch60) I think life and love springs things upon us which we dont anticipate but...
  June 5th, 2018 18:05
• Echos (HangingbyaHalo) Your writing today has a theatrical mystery. Gripping, \'cantputdownable\'...
  June 5th, 2018 17:53
• I miss you (Blank_voice) And for your next piece may i dare to suggest that you write about what a...
  June 5th, 2018 15:06
• Recipe For A Poem (Jane Frye) A clever idea carried off with polish and panache. Are there poets...
  June 5th, 2018 14:50
• INSIDE ME. (Fay Slimm.) Another jewel from the pearl which you are. Time - what is that? The...
  June 4th, 2018 16:12
• INSIDE ME. (Fay Slimm.) Another jewel from the pearl which you are. Time - what is that? The...
  June 4th, 2018 11:33
• Only fools fall (Sierra) Great to read your watershed here. If only all were as wise as you and...
  June 4th, 2018 03:20
• COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG IS SPOKE (Michael Edwards) Well me old china (plate - mate), just along the frog (and toad -road)...
  June 4th, 2018 03:11
• Pre-Technology. (Goldfinch60) Well at least you dont have a public address system attached to the...
  June 4th, 2018 03:03
• Blue Sky (Shahla Latifi) Oh how life and living it taints us. What it would be to meet tomorrows...
  June 3rd, 2018 16:31
• Self grounding (TheNMH) All the bananas in Florida wouldn\'t say it any clearer. Succinct!
  June 3rd, 2018 16:28
• The Woods (Jane Frye) Beautiful enchanting writing. I too looked at your previous work here and...
  June 2nd, 2018 15:29