Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- 4am Questions (Poetic Dan)
I\'d offer a rather simple explanation to all of your queries. You pose...
July 14th, 2018 08:52 - OR SO WE BOTH VOWED (Michael Edwards)
For an experience, try out a \'concert\'/gig where caribbean or reggae...
July 14th, 2018 08:41 - I Felt Like Jesus (Syd)
I think you may upset a few poets here who seem to be \'devout\'...
July 13th, 2018 18:58 - BY GRACE, THROUGH FAITH (Melissa Daly)
I really like this. No mention of any deity, god or religion... not...
July 13th, 2018 18:53 - Poison Pen Poems (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A fine write upon the blessings of having been well and truly bitten by...
July 13th, 2018 18:43 - CHANGES (Michael Edwards)
I were only talking to me mate the poet here yesterday, we was lookin at...
July 13th, 2018 15:59 - A Young Poet’s Beginning (Reyas)
Cute storytelling and quite readable. Too flippin long though... only my...
July 13th, 2018 15:55 - I guess this makes me a hypocrite (Edthepoet)
Complexity of life, our emotions fitting in and self denial, background...
July 13th, 2018 15:51 - O\' human heart (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our...
July 12th, 2018 15:27 - O\' human heart (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our...
July 12th, 2018 15:21 - Loneliness does funny things inside a man (Edthepoet)
So true Ed, love the way you snip pieces of your everyday to reveal inner...
July 12th, 2018 14:52 - A DELICATE THING. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah this just gets better and better as one reads on. I am always struck by...
July 12th, 2018 03:18 - That Will Be Me. (Goldfinch60)
Was he that awful, the old man? Comfortably accepting the advancing years...
July 12th, 2018 03:07 - BE TOUGH (Michael Edwards)
Life its self tends to throw a lifebuoy at certain times - when we are...
July 12th, 2018 03:04 - leon (Queer-with-a-pen)
Fun writing. I believe everyone should write like this about their lovers....
July 11th, 2018 21:39 - They Say (PoeticPsycho)
Great in your face street writing. But i think youre writing away from the...
July 11th, 2018 21:35 - Losing you (Jaayx3)
But i bet you\'ll be all the better for letting go. Its so painful but...
July 11th, 2018 21:29 - Losing you (Jaayx3)
But i bet you\'ll be all the better for letting go. Its so painful but...
July 11th, 2018 20:48 - ME AND MY WIFE (NORMANLKIP)
What a wonderful joyous read. You lucky lucky man. Its so refreshing to...
July 11th, 2018 19:03 - ME AND MY WIFE (NORMANLKIP)
What a wonderful joyous read. You lucky lucky man. Its so refreshing to...
July 11th, 2018 19:03 - ME AND MY WIFE (NORMANLKIP)
What a wonderful joyous read. You lucky lucky man. Its so refreshing to...
July 11th, 2018 19:03 - ME AND MY WIFE (NORMANLKIP)
What a wonderful joyous read. You lucky lucky man. Its so refreshing to...
July 11th, 2018 18:55 - Embrace The Challenge (Brooklyn6timesplus)
What doesnt kill you strengthens you eh? Good advice from you.
Please...
July 11th, 2018 18:31 - THE DARK (Gabriella)
Have you read the piece Candle witch published on here today? I think shes...
July 11th, 2018 15:52 - Puzzled (Reyas)
Great thing about us poets is that we can take another persons words,...
July 11th, 2018 15:50 - The Gift Of Wings (W c)
Great tribute to these the supreme birds of our skies. Marvelous to watch...
July 11th, 2018 15:39 - Credit due (Nicco)
Get it outta ya system biatch! LOL
Love to see street talk used. Very...
July 11th, 2018 15:34 - Music could save a thousand lives. (E-Poems)
When i was a performing musician/singer a piece of music i learned with a...
July 11th, 2018 15:31 - 5am confirmation (Poetic Dan)
So that was you blasting out the moon in the khazie this morning was...
July 11th, 2018 15:18 - INVADED! (Jenn2009)
I
This reads like you want to be the victim of a disinterested and...
July 11th, 2018 15:14 - Seed (JasmineUK)
LOL naughty fun writing, i love it.
\'Unquenchable haven\'...
July 11th, 2018 14:55 - good enough (Georgelinster22)
Yeah, makes a lot of sense. You\'ve learned some self worth.
July 11th, 2018 14:50 - Hate Will Never Win (Slimy___)
Surely there\'s a lesson to be learned. Simply this. Choose your friends...
July 11th, 2018 14:47 - Severing the beast\'s head (Sylviasearcher)
There comes a time...... .... a time well described by you.
There...
July 11th, 2018 14:45 - Caving Together. (Goldfinch60)
Yes we can. The pulling together to save young lives is truly soul...
July 11th, 2018 14:41 - THE STARLINGS (Michael Edwards)
A sight i would love to see \'in the flesh\'. Sure to be more staggering...
July 11th, 2018 14:37 - Here\'s to looking at you, magnificent (Edthepoet)
Entertaining story of the one that got away...... or was she a dream, a...
July 11th, 2018 07:32 - Here\'s to looking at you, magnificent (Edthepoet)
Entertaining story of the one that got away...... or was she a dream, a...
July 10th, 2018 18:27 - Your Path. (Goldfinch60)
More wise words from you - the bard. I\'m already limping from several...
July 10th, 2018 06:32 - Your Path. (Goldfinch60)
More wise words from you - the bard. I\'m already limping from several...
July 10th, 2018 01:58 - MEMORIES OF WHAT WILL BE (Michael Edwards)
Ah yes those memories of what will be. BBC and Dr Who have a lot to...
July 10th, 2018 01:56 - To Shake or Not to Shake (Goldfinch60)
Personally i am only interested in what goes on on the football pitch...
July 9th, 2018 15:29 - Quite Dear To Me. (Kevin browne)
Lovely story of a loving couple gaining wisdom and strength from being...
July 9th, 2018 15:26 - Bathroom Breaks (Ragde Nella)
He he he, well i guess all guys had a similar inspiring situation such as...
July 8th, 2018 19:37 - The Spectrum of Solitude (Hesther)
Wow i say at the wonderful pictures you encourage my mind to paint upon...
July 8th, 2018 19:32 - The Climb (Skyebellasario)
Wonderful to see the beautiful things of a relationship praised as it...
July 8th, 2018 19:27 - Don\'t Be Bitter (Cindy Christmas)
Words of wisdom from a learned lady. I suspect the guys on here are all...
July 8th, 2018 19:23 - My Only (Here)
Was he so perfect that you should take all the blame for the pain?
...
July 8th, 2018 19:17 - Water, Whiskey and Wine (Edthepoet)
Those last two verses deserve their own place in MPS.
July 8th, 2018 19:10 - YOUR WORDS (Melissa Daly)
Sometimes other peoples words can add to our strengths even if they kill...
July 8th, 2018 19:07 - What They Don\'t Know (Cutelilcardinal)
This piece is very very well written. Compelling reading. I really like...
July 8th, 2018 19:04 - You make my skin crawl. (Antonis)
Great heartfelt outpouring in your writing today. When i\'ve done similar...
July 8th, 2018 18:52 - The Plan. (Goldfinch60)
Next????
Love it, your sense of humour shines thru this.
July 8th, 2018 18:45 - Love loss (Reyas)
Nice open heart writing young sir.
July 8th, 2018 18:43 - NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (5) (Michael Edwards)
Did u used to write for Tommy Cooper?
July 8th, 2018 18:41 - Moving on, Growing more (Asrealastheycome)
Letting go is in itself, you growing.
Your writing reminds me that part...
July 7th, 2018 05:23 - The Sounding Sea (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Masterful! It just doesn\'t get any better than this! I\'m envious of your...
July 7th, 2018 05:15 - I coloured Her In. (Kevin browne)
Amazing writing Kevin. Love the way you dangle the threads of this story...
July 7th, 2018 05:09 - liquid brines (Abora)
Hey, theres wonderful wildlife in a swamp and swamps change with the...
July 7th, 2018 05:03 - Human. (Goldfinch60)
Ah masterful! So many tell of what we ought to be, how to be better human...
July 7th, 2018 04:57 - NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (4) (Michael Edwards)
I didnt believe in mysticism
Till the last time we voted in...
July 7th, 2018 04:54 - Poetry or not! First and last part are worth a look (Poetic Dan)
Dan this is an amazing piece recounting a day in the life. A day in the...
July 5th, 2018 16:30 - SEIZE AND SEE. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow! There\'s lots said in this piece. Now is gone and replaced with...
July 5th, 2018 16:22 - Eight lessons I learned in life... (In the order I learnt them) (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Very well written.
Where others would drone on and on with the message...
July 5th, 2018 16:17 - Monsters (Naeners)
I like your style in writing this piece. Though it reads as very negative,...
July 5th, 2018 15:59 - SUN AND MOON (Melissa Daly)
I like this. The all too familiar situation we can find ourselves in when...
July 5th, 2018 15:52 - New Generation (Unfinishedepiphany27)
We will HAVE to learn to modify our point of view as we accept the wisdom...
July 5th, 2018 15:49 - SINGLE HANDED (Fay Slimm.)
Oh Fay you do look so cute astride that motorbike.
Being of that certain...
July 3rd, 2018 09:53 - Life Anew (Jamie Newton)
Yes many truths in your succinct writing today. I like the way its put...
July 1st, 2018 18:35 - A to Z of my head (Poetic Dan)
Prefer you when you \'plain speak\' because youve a lot to say and do it...
July 1st, 2018 07:58 - Goodbye (Used)
Well done and well written. On another day - when you can bring yourself...
July 1st, 2018 07:52 - REVERIE. (Fay Slimm.)
Exquisite! Just so flipping good! nuff said? Definate favourite.
June 28th, 2018 14:05 - WHAT IS LOVE? (KinleyMillsap)
From my experience, love is a continual lesson and \'oh boy\' does it ever...
June 28th, 2018 13:58 - Awakening (SLR)
Every time i hear a newborn baby cry, or touch a leaf, or see the sky -...
June 27th, 2018 16:04 - Romans 8:1-2 (ForeverJesus7)
Man written laws from a man written book which is full of mistranslations....
June 27th, 2018 08:33 - Back to front (Poetic Dan)
Just be gentle with yourself. There are no rules as to how a life should...
June 27th, 2018 08:25 - MY ENCOUNTER. (Fay Slimm.)
Odd how we have to do so much growing ourselves before we start to really...
June 27th, 2018 08:14 - Still Flight. (Goldfinch60)
Marveling at the other life forms of this world. Maybe the solitary bird...
June 23rd, 2018 16:16 - Such a beautiful mess (Edthepoet)
Mixed up wonderful memories flood back thru your writing to confront the...
June 23rd, 2018 16:12 - My Preston Boy (Undiscovered_diamond)
What an absolute joyous pleasure to read. With me dodgy eyes and dodgy...
June 19th, 2018 11:17 - Once Upon a Time (Germanamericanchurch)
They DO say you have to hit rock I bottom before you take the cure.
I...
June 19th, 2018 11:14 - I probably won\'t laugh at your jokes (Edthepoet)
The past accompanies us everywhere, be it physically or only in our...
June 19th, 2018 04:28 - SOME ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
He who rides a \'high\' horse has lost his sense of smell.
Muddy Waters...
June 19th, 2018 04:21 - Cat Wars. (Goldfinch60)
Personally i adore cats. Such a fine life form.
Very entertaining...
June 19th, 2018 04:18 - APPREHENSION. (Fay Slimm.)
Gripping, suspenseful and filled with fearful apprehension.
Dear to...
June 19th, 2018 04:11 - REFLECTION. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh so true. If only writing such truths could bring them to our door.
i...
June 15th, 2018 16:49 - CO-EXISTENCE. (Fay Slimm.)
Just today i sat in the sunshine watching trains go by and admired the...
June 14th, 2018 17:22 - BRIDGED. (Fay Slimm.)
What a lovely read, totally uplifting and such a wonderful picture...
June 12th, 2018 11:11 - Finding Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Somebody wrote that our life in this existence is an education for what...
June 12th, 2018 11:08 - LOVE HEALS (Michael Edwards)
Yes love heals but my word it marrs also.
June 12th, 2018 11:06 - My Lovebird (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Lyrical and sweet. Captures the enigma.
June 11th, 2018 05:36 - AFTER SCHOOL. (Fay Slimm.)
Now if Freud were to read this he may conject that your pigtailed...
June 11th, 2018 03:50 - Music is Life. (Goldfinch60)
So true. I would be quite lost without music. I have only ever met one...
June 10th, 2018 16:57 - THE DEBTOR (Michael Edwards)
There was this bloke called John Major (left the circus to become an...
June 10th, 2018 16:53 - Wave the stars goodbye (Gemma)
Uplifting yes, but our yesterdays make us what we are today. We carry our...
June 9th, 2018 17:26 - That Old Boy Down the Road. (Goldfinch60)
Hey, leave those kids alone!
June 9th, 2018 17:20 - LIMERICK 57 (Michael Edwards)
they said the gal is from brighton
reputed to be a right \'un
to stop...
June 9th, 2018 17:16 - Always Speak Clearly (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Simple good advice from you sir!
June 8th, 2018 18:14 - You’re Beautiful (AlexHoy)
Most of us want to be something a bit different to the thing we actually...
June 8th, 2018 18:14 - You Are You (GON)
Hey i really like this and its made me smile and chuckle.
There\'s so...
June 8th, 2018 18:10
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