Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Who I Am. (ThatThugUnicorn) I found that in running from my recent past i became what i was before and...
  February 19th, 2018 01:40
• THE PATH (Michael Edwards) Clever lady and clever you but may we yet see the maiden of number 3...
  February 19th, 2018 01:38
• 21 again?! (Orchidee) Glass raised to you sir this jurassic weekend. Didnt we meet in the...
  February 18th, 2018 21:58
• Laptop Man. (Goldfinch60) Personally i view my laptop usage through a veil of filth. I have no idea...
  February 18th, 2018 21:50
• MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER (Michael Edwards) oh my.... some of these are writing stories in my mind you must surely be...
  February 18th, 2018 21:45
• Why. (Wallace) What price freedom and democracy? What price capitalism when theres profit...
  February 18th, 2018 21:42
• War Brought Peace (Noah) Noah, you just get better and better. This is a great piece. Goes into my...
  February 18th, 2018 21:40
• God\'s Mistake (Lorna) I really am a big fan of the \'less is more\' school of poetry and yours...
  February 18th, 2018 21:37
• Old Love - No Regrets (RK) (Lorna) Really like the way you have ended this. Those lines in themselves are...
  February 17th, 2018 09:00
• Knowing (Arazimus) Love this, you lucky person!
  February 17th, 2018 03:37
• Doors. (Goldfinch60) More words of wisdom from you. So very true. You are the poetic Sage of...
  February 17th, 2018 03:35
• KISS ME HARDY (Michael Edwards) Kiss your what?
  February 17th, 2018 03:31
• Just one look (Aa Harvey) This is epic, my mind begins to write a screenplay because you\'ve given...
  February 16th, 2018 14:30
• Maybe (Myself and me) Nice one, i like the way you constructed this. It\'s like a song to me in...
  February 16th, 2018 14:25
• Bridges. (Goldfinch60) This is you at your poetic best my friend. This spiritual piece is very...
  February 16th, 2018 09:10
• IN DENIAL (Michael Edwards) A true gem of wisdom you have produced here sir! Begs the question why do...
  February 16th, 2018 08:57
• Happens To Us All. (Wallace) A very enjoyable read as i look forward to my 66th next month. I try to...
  February 16th, 2018 08:55
• Love can never be denied (FredPeyer) Oh so true, sooner or later it\'ll come calling. Nice one.
  February 16th, 2018 08:50
• Loveless (Aa Harvey) I know exactly where you\'re coming from in this. Very well crafted....
  February 15th, 2018 19:34
• WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN (Michael Edwards) This read like a winter seasons reflection upon places i had known, life i...
  February 15th, 2018 19:20
• What Valentine\'s Card? (Goldfinch60) By \'eck, i do look forward to buying a card and filling it with love and...
  February 14th, 2018 08:40
• ME AND MY FAMILY (Michael Edwards) Ha! Adam and Eve indeed,.. you\'re a bunch of youngsters..... my family...
  February 14th, 2018 08:35
• A Selection of Couplets (FredPeyer) I like these. Thoughful but light entertainment as a group like this.
  February 13th, 2018 19:59
• SACRED STORIES (Louis Gibbs) Love is the important lesson we continue to learn throughout our lives.
  February 13th, 2018 18:28
• Quaking Waters (Noah) Class. Sometimes its a no win isn\'t it and our ship sinks. But somehow...
  February 13th, 2018 18:23
• Construction (Syd) Syd this is so beautiful. So uplifting and truly a pleasure to re-read...
  February 13th, 2018 17:28
• Drugs are for taking. (The Pills) (Royboy) Today i wrote about pills, a user and love. It shines another light upon...
  February 13th, 2018 17:22
• Crystal Clarity (A__pott) My but this is a clever piece of thinking put into verse beautifully. A...
  February 13th, 2018 17:18
• Demons (Ash2017) Some folk suffer terribly from demons and have their lives and others...
  February 13th, 2018 17:16
• Stamps (Moom) I know what you mean. Most of mine are little ditties i compose on the...
  February 13th, 2018 17:06
• Hands of Cain (Jabberwocky) So true when we innocently place our heads upon the block of life.
  February 13th, 2018 15:50
• Rejection (MelanieSkyes) Deprived of your love his heart may realise and love blossom. Some people...
  February 13th, 2018 15:46
• Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles (Lorna) Lovely.
  February 13th, 2018 15:42
• Respect for All. (Goldfinch60) So true, but difficult to respect a person who believes you are not worthy...
  February 13th, 2018 15:41
• LOVE IS >>> (Michael Edwards) Ha! wht do you know about love...she makes me wear her undies or she wont...
  February 13th, 2018 15:38
• Loved Up. (Wallace) Long may your trust in love prevail.
  February 13th, 2018 14:45
• UNDETERRED. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely force of positivity seeps into me from reading your words, just...
  February 13th, 2018 12:08
• Roxy (Royboy) So sad to lose your loving friend. Your words are truly a loving tribute...
  February 13th, 2018 06:31
• Roxy (Royboy) So sad to lose your loving friend. Your words are truly a loving tribute...
  February 12th, 2018 19:45
• Then Came The Sadness. (Kevin browne) Excellent closing line. Grace is so important. Grace nurtures self...
  February 12th, 2018 19:41
• Gingerbread (Jabberwocky) And tomorrow - sunshine! Good write.
  February 12th, 2018 16:01
• Devils Love (Parisinwonderland) Enjoyed this. Felt the pain.
  February 12th, 2018 15:59
• COPING ALONE. (Fay Slimm.) Indeed, what is the point of going to war if this is its harvest.
  February 12th, 2018 11:23
• Less and More. (Goldfinch60) Less is more works when the emotion is strongly conveyed. In music a...
  February 12th, 2018 03:27
• NOW SHARP THE FROSTS (Michael Edwards) Very deep and needs several reads to find its meaning. It reminds me of...
  February 12th, 2018 03:22
• Out on the street. (Antonis) We could do with a lot more verse content like yours. There seems to be an...
  February 12th, 2018 03:15
• Times passed (Poetic25) Thats the way of it nicely put. Demise and rebirth.
  February 11th, 2018 18:46
• Little Games (Peeter pewter) This subject deserves anger and you did it well.
  February 11th, 2018 16:56
• America (Hitalot879) Haven\'t you forgotten or missed out the original americans from your...
  February 11th, 2018 16:50
• Not An Angel (Skyebellasario) Oh i like it. This is so true and you have versed it so very cleverly. i...
  February 11th, 2018 16:47
• There is Only Love (Lorna) This is soooo good. I re-read it several times with pleasure. I relate to...
  February 11th, 2018 16:34
• Pebble (Jabberwocky) A really this is really good. You punch line is truly excellent. A...
  February 11th, 2018 16:32
• Open Door. (Wallace) That place we - who have too often been in \'other\' places - all desire...
  February 11th, 2018 16:27
• Waiting Words. (Goldfinch60) A time of mixed emotions maybe? I know unsteady/unstable times for me...
  February 11th, 2018 11:43
• Waiting Words. (Goldfinch60) A time of mixed emotions maybe? I know unsteady/unstable times for me...
  February 11th, 2018 08:27
• NOW FARP THE SHOTS (Michael Edwards) i was cheating my fleckfast when i read this, i nearly flew it up all over...
  February 11th, 2018 08:24
• UNLATCHED. (Fay Slimm.) Brrrrrr how could you write such a warm inviting nay, encouraging...
  February 9th, 2018 15:30
• God and Religion. (Goldfinch60) It seems there now are many of us who were brought up in the christian...
  February 9th, 2018 14:06
• Refresh your soul (Aa Harvey) Re-invention of ones self is often the best way forward. Neatly expressed.
  February 8th, 2018 16:43
• Coming Soon (Edthepoet) This is like you teling someone to stop being false and be what you really...
  February 7th, 2018 15:39
• EBONY CHILL. (Fay Slimm.) Huddling, snuggling to keep warm these winter nights its quite easy to...
  February 7th, 2018 15:23
• Someone needs to love you (Aa Harvey) So so many love songs are written and we relate to them so easily for,...
  February 7th, 2018 15:08
• Growing Love. (Goldfinch60) This read to me like a preface for a book about how love matures and...
  February 7th, 2018 03:39
• What Ever God Was Hiding Up His Sleeve. (Kevin browne) What an amazing piece you\'ve written here. Good to read the positivity...
  February 7th, 2018 03:36
• he caught her (Dusk arising) i brought you back the warmest of smiles.
  February 6th, 2018 20:13
• Breeze Blocks (Edthepoet) Wow! powerful stuff. Seems like you are at one with yourself when alone....
  February 6th, 2018 17:50
• The Rain Wants Me (Lorna) The sky is crying, the streets full of tears. Seems a voice whispers,...
  February 6th, 2018 17:43
• Bad Luck (FredPeyer) Hey, if it wasn\'t for bad luck, i\'d have no luck at all. Nice one.... ...
  February 6th, 2018 17:38
• What is Life? (Goldfinch60) We all wonder about this dont we. So many what if\'s and other...
  February 6th, 2018 17:34
• The Book. (Goldfinch60) Oh for the energy and clarity of intent of those early pages before...
  February 5th, 2018 13:40
• The Real Me (FredPeyer) Didn\'t i see the real you on a motorbike a while back. That was before...
  February 5th, 2018 13:37
• Tanka Truths (Gary Edward Geraci) Gosh, all a bit strict.
  February 3rd, 2018 19:10
• The Monster (Kae) And all this is done by someone who claims to love the thing you are. I...
  February 3rd, 2018 18:51
• Missing Nature. (Goldfinch60) Well when you are raised in front of a television and given...
  February 3rd, 2018 07:14
• Missing Nature. (Goldfinch60) Well when you are raised in front of a television and given...
  February 3rd, 2018 05:59
• SHORTIES FROM FUSIONS (Michael Edwards) Hmmm i think i just might copy your idea of publishing shorts ..... i...
  February 3rd, 2018 05:49
• Baffled. (Goldfinch60) This is natures way of getting back at us for the industrial revolution....
  February 2nd, 2018 18:24
• IF ALL THE WORLD...(2) (Michael Edwards) After sleeping on Danish blue cheese I began writing poems like...
  February 2nd, 2018 18:15
• Mathematics (Noah) Ok, off that backburner and into the raging storm of the flames which rip...
  January 31st, 2018 19:10
• Specialness. (Fay Slimm.) Quite quite beautiful and very moving. You\'ll know from my occasional...
  January 31st, 2018 18:59
• My Artist. (Goldfinch60) This reads like you were a dry sponge soaking up the beauty of the image...
  January 31st, 2018 18:51
• Special Table (W c) Your piece is warm and comforting though it brings to mind that there are...
  January 31st, 2018 18:40
• Rejection (DD.) Ah, i can feel the self confidence ooozing out of this piece. Ooozing...
  January 30th, 2018 18:42
• The Concert Once Foretold (Noah) Were there ice creams in the interval?
  January 30th, 2018 18:41
• \"GOLDEN HOURS\" (Andrew Guzaldo) Oh yes a very clever piece. Nice one.
  January 30th, 2018 18:39
• Floating (Poetic Dan) A six line admission of what being a fallible human being is all about....
  January 30th, 2018 18:27
• The Reflection (NowICutTheseLovelessWrists) At least you recognise the person in your mirror. The person in my mirror...
  January 30th, 2018 18:24
• Where Is The Outrage? (Poetboy123) Death is an end to existence in our dimension but not spiritually. There...
  January 30th, 2018 17:38
• Unfettered. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely words again Fay. If only we could do as you suggest. Sadly all too...
  January 30th, 2018 17:20
• Full time dreamer (Aa Harvey) Your last verse is a stunner, feels like its words pulled from my...
  January 30th, 2018 16:13
• My Thoughts. (Wallace) I read this like it was meant for me. Thank you.
  January 30th, 2018 16:07
• Music In My Soul. (Goldfinch60) I couldn\'t imagine living without music. If its not playing then im...
  January 30th, 2018 15:52
• The Woman On The Plane (ForeverJesus7) What a great story with a really nice ending.
  January 30th, 2018 07:04
• Pain or Feeling (Little_Write) Oh the dilemma so often penned beautifully expressed here. We\'ve all done...
  January 30th, 2018 07:02
• SPILLED INK SHADOWS (Michael Edwards) For one who often loves to show his sense of humour on here you have today...
  January 30th, 2018 06:55
• combat (Here) Heartfelt. Our biggest fear the dreaded \'C\' which has taken friends and...
  January 29th, 2018 16:17
• combat (Here) Heartfelt. Our biggest fear the dreaded \'C\' which has taken friends and...
  January 29th, 2018 16:10
• Ingestion (Aislinn Wilson) That\'ll teach you not to eat blue cheese for supper!
  January 29th, 2018 13:50
• The Next Morning (Christina K) Excellently crafted work. Print it and pin it on the back of the bathroom...
  January 29th, 2018 13:48
• Sticks and Stones (Songbird) Love this piece and great choice of picture. Today i published a heartfelt...
  January 29th, 2018 13:43