Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• The Night Before (Edthepoet) Cor blimey this is raw. Life down an east end pub m8. East end of
  March 1st, 2018 13:39
• Banging on the Bandit (Edthepoet) Your stuff is always down to earth and hits the nail smack on its...
  February 27th, 2018 17:05
• Communication. (Goldfinch60) The missing ingredient is thought. Listen, think, then reply. I do so...
  February 27th, 2018 13:36
• CULTURE (Michael Edwards) Also applies to politics and society. The country i grew up in where we...
  February 27th, 2018 03:21
• TICKING AWAY. (Fay Slimm.) WOW! and some people just call it waking up before dawn. I never knew what...
  February 26th, 2018 15:37
• In Defense of the Realm (Lorna) Biding ones time until the feeling is right..... some people would call...
  February 26th, 2018 15:31
• Beginning to end it out shines the rest (Poetic Dan) Words in praise of a faith here. Accepting this strength giving joy into...
  February 26th, 2018 04:30
• The Painting of Love (Goldfinch60) Sadness, pain, love and joy all come through your words here and...
  February 26th, 2018 04:25
• A WOMAN OF DIGNITY (Michael Edwards) That\'s a lady that is. You can spot \'em... it\'s the way they eat cake.
  February 26th, 2018 04:21
• Sappho (FredPeyer) This is everywoman. Well captured sir!
  February 26th, 2018 04:19
• LOVE\'S GLOW. (Fay Slimm.) Oh yes, i can feel it creeping all over me already. Which is just as well...
  February 25th, 2018 11:50
• The Renaissance Lover (Lorna) Then carry us off to a far off land, To accompanying strains of a ten...
  February 25th, 2018 11:47
• The Polititian (FredPeyer) Nice angry writing. On this side of the pond we used to have a good...
  February 25th, 2018 11:38
• The Intensity of Silence. (Goldfinch60) Reminds me of when i was asked to stand quietly in a sound laboratory...
  February 25th, 2018 11:32
• FOG (Michael Edwards) You got the title wrong mate, this should be called dusks kitchen. We use...
  February 25th, 2018 02:55
• The Truth and The Lie (Little_Write) I\'d be lieing if i said...... but the truth is.... no, you don\'t want...
  February 25th, 2018 02:53
• My Chocolate Fix (W c) A great fun piece to start everyones day off with a smile. Oh choccy...
  February 25th, 2018 02:51
• Having To Let You Go (Lorna) Letting go of such small wonders as you list enables us to greet the...
  February 24th, 2018 15:18
• Dancing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60) So it shall be for you both. This is where i get confused with the ten...
  February 24th, 2018 15:14
• Solemn Vow (FredPeyer) Lots of us begin to fear our passing less as we age. Accepting there is a...
  February 24th, 2018 15:09
• RISING PAIN (Michael Edwards) How often we pick up the signals missed by those involved who may be...
  February 24th, 2018 15:06
• 6 word memoir (Panicedallthetime) Just as it should do. Music can soothe your soul or move you to tears. As...
  February 23rd, 2018 20:27
• Play That Bass (W c) Right on soul man i\'m in total harmony with your writing today.
  February 23rd, 2018 18:43
• Not in Sync (FredPeyer) Dont go with the flow, youre too old for that rubbish....Youve learned to...
  February 23rd, 2018 18:42
• Get out (Edthepoet) Oh my word do i feel the spirit of your words in my own life right now....
  February 23rd, 2018 16:25
• STILL CLIMBING. (Fay Slimm.) Wisdom and love of humanity, human nature, does educate us as we age. Pain...
  February 23rd, 2018 16:08
• The Man in the Mirror. (Goldfinch60) Truly fine writing Sir. You are a fortunate man.
  February 23rd, 2018 15:59
• Imagine. (Wallace) Lucky you, excellent tease.
  February 23rd, 2018 15:50
• BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS (Michael Edwards) Long may you persevere too.
  February 23rd, 2018 15:50
• God\'s Humour. (Goldfinch60) Nearest we get is love i guess. Love teaches us so much too and one of its...
  February 20th, 2018 07:44
• LOVE IS...etcetera (Michael Edwards) Laugh out loud at the Elton John quip, better sounds are heard at the...
  February 20th, 2018 07:40
• Insercurites (HeartfullyFallen) Oh but you must keep trying. Many of us have been brought up to undervalue...
  February 19th, 2018 08:22
• SUCHNESS. (Fay Slimm.) Quite lovely. If you have achieved such then it must be blissful. I\'m...
  February 19th, 2018 08:16
• The Last Rail Ticket (Lorna) I\'m sure there\'s a place in your mind you visit quite regularly. It\'s...
  February 19th, 2018 08:12
• Metamorphosis (Jabberwocky) Oh crikey this made me chuckle and its so clever. Full marks, less is...
  February 19th, 2018 05:01
• Te sueño cada noche (Larosamarchitada) eth eth eth eth eth chris waddle, eth eth eth eth scorchio!
  February 19th, 2018 03:13
• Skiing for Life. (Goldfinch60) Skiing thought terrifies me but like you see, there will always be a way...
  February 19th, 2018 02:33
• Project Progress (Aa Harvey) LOL dream on dreamer, it does no harm..... cor! if only life really...
  February 19th, 2018 02:25
• If I told you (Sidqiehs) Having been through this dilemma several times so far in my life i\'d say....
  February 19th, 2018 02:15
• A Wish Unfulfilled (+5) (Kurt Philip Behm) \'Say it once\' is golden.
  February 19th, 2018 02:11
• No Movement. (Wallace) LOL i read your piece and on completion i wanted to leave a comment of...
  February 19th, 2018 01:49
• I\'m... (Outsidetoinside) Hmmm though i can\'t get into your mindframe here i\'d suggest the...
  February 19th, 2018 01:47
• My Sunshine (Simplybeautiful) Lovely sentiment in this gift of love poem. May your lover wake to these...
  February 19th, 2018 01:41
• Who I Am. (ThatThugUnicorn) I found that in running from my recent past i became what i was before and...
  February 19th, 2018 01:40
• THE PATH (Michael Edwards) Clever lady and clever you but may we yet see the maiden of number 3...
  February 19th, 2018 01:38
• 21 again?! (Orchidee) Glass raised to you sir this jurassic weekend. Didnt we meet in the...
  February 18th, 2018 21:58
• Laptop Man. (Goldfinch60) Personally i view my laptop usage through a veil of filth. I have no idea...
  February 18th, 2018 21:50
• MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER (Michael Edwards) oh my.... some of these are writing stories in my mind you must surely be...
  February 18th, 2018 21:45
• Why. (Wallace) What price freedom and democracy? What price capitalism when theres profit...
  February 18th, 2018 21:42
• War Brought Peace (Noah) Noah, you just get better and better. This is a great piece. Goes into my...
  February 18th, 2018 21:40
• God\'s Mistake (Lorna) I really am a big fan of the \'less is more\' school of poetry and yours...
  February 18th, 2018 21:37
• Old Love - No Regrets (RK) (Lorna) Really like the way you have ended this. Those lines in themselves are...
  February 17th, 2018 09:00
• Knowing (Arazimus) Love this, you lucky person!
  February 17th, 2018 03:37
• Doors. (Goldfinch60) More words of wisdom from you. So very true. You are the poetic Sage of...
  February 17th, 2018 03:35
• KISS ME HARDY (Michael Edwards) Kiss your what?
  February 17th, 2018 03:31
• Just one look (Aa Harvey) This is epic, my mind begins to write a screenplay because you\'ve given...
  February 16th, 2018 14:30
• Maybe (Myself and me) Nice one, i like the way you constructed this. It\'s like a song to me in...
  February 16th, 2018 14:25
• Bridges. (Goldfinch60) This is you at your poetic best my friend. This spiritual piece is very...
  February 16th, 2018 09:10
• IN DENIAL (Michael Edwards) A true gem of wisdom you have produced here sir! Begs the question why do...
  February 16th, 2018 08:57
• Happens To Us All. (Wallace) A very enjoyable read as i look forward to my 66th next month. I try to...
  February 16th, 2018 08:55
• Love can never be denied (FredPeyer) Oh so true, sooner or later it\'ll come calling. Nice one.
  February 16th, 2018 08:50
• Loveless (Aa Harvey) I know exactly where you\'re coming from in this. Very well crafted....
  February 15th, 2018 19:34
• WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN (Michael Edwards) This read like a winter seasons reflection upon places i had known, life i...
  February 15th, 2018 19:20
• What Valentine\'s Card? (Goldfinch60) By \'eck, i do look forward to buying a card and filling it with love and...
  February 14th, 2018 08:40
• ME AND MY FAMILY (Michael Edwards) Ha! Adam and Eve indeed,.. you\'re a bunch of youngsters..... my family...
  February 14th, 2018 08:35
• A Selection of Couplets (FredPeyer) I like these. Thoughful but light entertainment as a group like this.
  February 13th, 2018 19:59
• SACRED STORIES (Louis Gibbs) Love is the important lesson we continue to learn throughout our lives.
  February 13th, 2018 18:28
• Quaking Waters (Noah) Class. Sometimes its a no win isn\'t it and our ship sinks. But somehow...
  February 13th, 2018 18:23
• Construction (Syd) Syd this is so beautiful. So uplifting and truly a pleasure to re-read...
  February 13th, 2018 17:28
• Drugs are for taking. (The Pills) (Royboy) Today i wrote about pills, a user and love. It shines another light upon...
  February 13th, 2018 17:22
• Crystal Clarity (A__pott) My but this is a clever piece of thinking put into verse beautifully. A...
  February 13th, 2018 17:18
• Demons (Ash2017) Some folk suffer terribly from demons and have their lives and others...
  February 13th, 2018 17:16
• Stamps (Moom) I know what you mean. Most of mine are little ditties i compose on the...
  February 13th, 2018 17:06
• Hands of Cain (Jabberwocky) So true when we innocently place our heads upon the block of life.
  February 13th, 2018 15:50
• Rejection (MelanieSkyes) Deprived of your love his heart may realise and love blossom. Some people...
  February 13th, 2018 15:46
• Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles (Lorna) Lovely.
  February 13th, 2018 15:42
• Respect for All. (Goldfinch60) So true, but difficult to respect a person who believes you are not worthy...
  February 13th, 2018 15:41
• LOVE IS >>> (Michael Edwards) Ha! wht do you know about love...she makes me wear her undies or she wont...
  February 13th, 2018 15:38
• Loved Up. (Wallace) Long may your trust in love prevail.
  February 13th, 2018 14:45
• UNDETERRED. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely force of positivity seeps into me from reading your words, just...
  February 13th, 2018 12:08
• Roxy (Royboy) So sad to lose your loving friend. Your words are truly a loving tribute...
  February 13th, 2018 06:31
• Roxy (Royboy) So sad to lose your loving friend. Your words are truly a loving tribute...
  February 12th, 2018 19:45
• Then Came The Sadness. (Kevin browne) Excellent closing line. Grace is so important. Grace nurtures self...
  February 12th, 2018 19:41
• Gingerbread (Jabberwocky) And tomorrow - sunshine! Good write.
  February 12th, 2018 16:01
• Devils Love (Parisinwonderland) Enjoyed this. Felt the pain.
  February 12th, 2018 15:59
• COPING ALONE. (Fay Slimm.) Indeed, what is the point of going to war if this is its harvest.
  February 12th, 2018 11:23
• Less and More. (Goldfinch60) Less is more works when the emotion is strongly conveyed. In music a...
  February 12th, 2018 03:27
• NOW SHARP THE FROSTS (Michael Edwards) Very deep and needs several reads to find its meaning. It reminds me of...
  February 12th, 2018 03:22
• Out on the street. (Antonis) We could do with a lot more verse content like yours. There seems to be an...
  February 12th, 2018 03:15
• Times passed (Poetic25) Thats the way of it nicely put. Demise and rebirth.
  February 11th, 2018 18:46
• Little Games (Peeter pewter) This subject deserves anger and you did it well.
  February 11th, 2018 16:56
• America (Hitalot879) Haven\'t you forgotten or missed out the original americans from your...
  February 11th, 2018 16:50
• Not An Angel (Skyebellasario) Oh i like it. This is so true and you have versed it so very cleverly. i...
  February 11th, 2018 16:47
• There is Only Love (Lorna) This is soooo good. I re-read it several times with pleasure. I relate to...
  February 11th, 2018 16:34
• Pebble (Jabberwocky) A really this is really good. You punch line is truly excellent. A...
  February 11th, 2018 16:32
• Open Door. (Wallace) That place we - who have too often been in \'other\' places - all desire...
  February 11th, 2018 16:27
• Waiting Words. (Goldfinch60) A time of mixed emotions maybe? I know unsteady/unstable times for me...
  February 11th, 2018 11:43
• Waiting Words. (Goldfinch60) A time of mixed emotions maybe? I know unsteady/unstable times for me...
  February 11th, 2018 08:27
• NOW FARP THE SHOTS (Michael Edwards) i was cheating my fleckfast when i read this, i nearly flew it up all over...
  February 11th, 2018 08:24
• UNLATCHED. (Fay Slimm.) Brrrrrr how could you write such a warm inviting nay, encouraging...
  February 9th, 2018 15:30