Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Elusive Endorphins (Lorna)
One day, when your back is turned and the sun is shining on all around but...
May 12th, 2018 09:34 - An Insomniac Nightmare (Dohiser)
I agree with Lorna\'s comment about the last line, really clever.
Reading...
May 12th, 2018 09:26 - Unshackled. (Camille)
This is quite beautiful. I share this vision of lifes journey and respect...
May 12th, 2018 09:11 - Peg\'s Mini. (Goldfinch60)
Well we were all young yesterday werent we. Great that you friend has fond...
May 12th, 2018 09:02 - AS AN ARTIST SEES (Michael Edwards)
Turner comes to my minds eye.So much emotion in his moody seascapes....
May 12th, 2018 08:55 - Dearth (Jabberwocky)
Excellent writing. Truly conveys the disappointment and emptiness which...
May 10th, 2018 05:20 - I think (Aa Harvey)
I suppose you could have written:-
i do,
and the things i do,
i...
May 10th, 2018 05:16 - The Cards of Life. (Goldfinch60)
We each are dealt a hand from which we play. I am thankful for the...
May 10th, 2018 05:14 - A LIFELESS LAND (Michael Edwards)
Hmm, brought to mind the mother in laws garden. Only difference was, in...
May 10th, 2018 05:06 - This Life (Jabberwocky)
A great depiction of everyday monotony and the gradual build up of stress...
May 9th, 2018 13:52 - LOVE\'S TUNE. (Fay Slimm.)
No one else sees what the lover sees and, with its own beguiling charm...
May 9th, 2018 13:47 - Wandering (DesertWords)
I\'d love to see tomorrows poem with the beginning \"yesterday i woke up...
May 7th, 2018 13:40 - Wandering (DesertWords)
I\'d love to see tomorrows poem with the beginning \"yesterday i woke up...
May 7th, 2018 13:30 - Alone (Lionheart)
Wow! I\'m laughing because your piece says exactly what your \'comments\'...
May 7th, 2018 13:27 - Someone to hold (Netashi)
This is great. The perpetual search and hope for all of us unsuccessful at...
May 7th, 2018 13:22 - Find me (Birddie Jane)
oooh youre so mixed up here! where is your self worth poet?
May 7th, 2018 13:17 - Holding Me Hostage (Felicityjones)
You sound like the person i recently fell out of love with. Her condition...
May 7th, 2018 11:16 - Garden Love. (Goldfinch60)
You have the rare gift of showing us the richness of so many facets of...
May 7th, 2018 06:46 - TRANSIENT DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
I\'m mad crazy about your sculpture here. In my deranged inner sight it...
May 7th, 2018 06:37 - The Old Man by the River. (Goldfinch60)
Your river, my river, all rivers. Rivers of souls perpetually inspiring,...
May 6th, 2018 10:46 - Pain is no longer welcome here (Aa Harvey)
I enjoyed reading this and it certainly chimes with my experience of loves...
May 6th, 2018 10:38 - Impossible Tamed. (Goldfinch60)
I can see you like playing with words as much as i do.
Strange how...
May 5th, 2018 18:16 - Quartet for the End of Time. (Goldfinch60)
amazing pieces, the first seems painful and gradually entrances with...
May 4th, 2018 19:57 - The Preacher (Edthepoet)
This reads like the story of my existence now at age 66. Once again you...
May 4th, 2018 08:19 - The Triolet Within (Gary Edward Geraci)
Such a shame christians kill and maim each other with their weapons of...
April 21st, 2018 12:38 - HIS SCENT. (Fay Slimm.)
Absolutely wonderful writing. You are a magician of words producing a...
April 17th, 2018 14:14 - Say It Louder Baby (Edthepoet)
enigmatic women can be so attractive , but there are those who just play...
March 27th, 2018 17:33 - CHANGELING (Fay Slimm.)
such poetic meteorology. we are all dancers upon the winds changing mood...
March 27th, 2018 17:28 - Mile-High Amour. (Fay Slimm.)
it could be said there are those of us who need to be in orbit for quite...
March 26th, 2018 14:01 - COMING. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'d been away for a while before i saw your kind invitation which sadly i...
March 17th, 2018 03:46 - The Angels are There. (Goldfinch60)
Angels, guardian spirits, guides, wotever they are they\'re there sure...
March 6th, 2018 16:24 - SO MANY WARS (Michael Edwards)
War - the original \'weapon of mass destruction\'. My dictionary would...
March 6th, 2018 15:20 - Dementia Sea. (Goldfinch60)
May your faith remain ever strong for surely we are challenged in this...
March 5th, 2018 17:19 - LIMERICKS 49 and 50 (Michael Edwards)
An adorable gal from Much Guiting,
Had eyes all the lads found...
March 3rd, 2018 16:49 - Honey Fire (Edthepoet)
Oh i met her so many times, more often watched her dance from afar....
March 2nd, 2018 13:51 - The Kids They \'Phone. (Goldfinch60)
Cute i like this.
March 2nd, 2018 13:46 - WITH TIME (Michael Edwards)
Arithmetic and poetry should never be brought together! However yours here...
March 2nd, 2018 13:45 - The Night Before (Edthepoet)
Cor blimey this is raw. Life down an east end pub m8. East end of
March 1st, 2018 13:39 - Banging on the Bandit (Edthepoet)
Your stuff is always down to earth and hits the nail smack on its...
February 27th, 2018 17:05 - Communication. (Goldfinch60)
The missing ingredient is thought. Listen, think, then reply. I do so...
February 27th, 2018 13:36 - CULTURE (Michael Edwards)
Also applies to politics and society. The country i grew up in where we...
February 27th, 2018 03:21 - TICKING AWAY. (Fay Slimm.)
WOW! and some people just call it waking up before dawn. I never knew what...
February 26th, 2018 15:37 - In Defense of the Realm (Lorna)
Biding ones time until the feeling is right..... some people would call...
February 26th, 2018 15:31 - Beginning to end it out shines the rest (Poetic Dan)
Words in praise of a faith here. Accepting this strength giving joy into...
February 26th, 2018 04:30 - The Painting of Love (Goldfinch60)
Sadness, pain, love and joy all come through your words here and...
February 26th, 2018 04:25 - A WOMAN OF DIGNITY (Michael Edwards)
That\'s a lady that is. You can spot \'em... it\'s the way they eat cake.
February 26th, 2018 04:21 - Sappho (FredPeyer)
This is everywoman. Well captured sir!
February 26th, 2018 04:19 - LOVE\'S GLOW. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh yes, i can feel it creeping all over me already. Which is just as well...
February 25th, 2018 11:50 - The Renaissance Lover (Lorna)
Then carry us off to a far off land,
To accompanying strains of a ten...
February 25th, 2018 11:47 - The Polititian (FredPeyer)
Nice angry writing. On this side of the pond we used to have a good...
February 25th, 2018 11:38 - The Intensity of Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Reminds me of when i was asked to stand quietly in a sound laboratory...
February 25th, 2018 11:32 - FOG (Michael Edwards)
You got the title wrong mate, this should be called dusks kitchen. We use...
February 25th, 2018 02:55 - The Truth and The Lie (Little_Write)
I\'d be lieing if i said...... but the truth is.... no, you don\'t want...
February 25th, 2018 02:53 - My Chocolate Fix (W c)
A great fun piece to start everyones day off with a smile. Oh choccy...
February 25th, 2018 02:51 - Having To Let You Go (Lorna)
Letting go of such small wonders as you list enables us to greet the...
February 24th, 2018 15:18 - Dancing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
So it shall be for you both. This is where i get confused with the ten...
February 24th, 2018 15:14 - Solemn Vow (FredPeyer)
Lots of us begin to fear our passing less as we age. Accepting there is a...
February 24th, 2018 15:09 - RISING PAIN (Michael Edwards)
How often we pick up the signals missed by those involved who may be...
February 24th, 2018 15:06 - 6 word memoir (Panicedallthetime)
Just as it should do. Music can soothe your soul or move you to tears. As...
February 23rd, 2018 20:27 - Play That Bass (W c)
Right on soul man i\'m in total harmony with your writing today.
February 23rd, 2018 18:43 - Not in Sync (FredPeyer)
Dont go with the flow, youre too old for that rubbish....Youve learned to...
February 23rd, 2018 18:42 - Get out (Edthepoet)
Oh my word do i feel the spirit of your words in my own life right now....
February 23rd, 2018 16:25 - STILL CLIMBING. (Fay Slimm.)
Wisdom and love of humanity, human nature, does educate us as we age. Pain...
February 23rd, 2018 16:08 - The Man in the Mirror. (Goldfinch60)
Truly fine writing Sir. You are a fortunate man.
February 23rd, 2018 15:59 - Imagine. (Wallace)
Lucky you, excellent tease.
February 23rd, 2018 15:50 - BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS (Michael Edwards)
Long may you persevere too.
February 23rd, 2018 15:50 - God\'s Humour. (Goldfinch60)
Nearest we get is love i guess. Love teaches us so much too and one of its...
February 20th, 2018 07:44 - LOVE IS...etcetera (Michael Edwards)
Laugh out loud at the Elton John quip, better sounds are heard at the...
February 20th, 2018 07:40 - Insercurites (HeartfullyFallen)
Oh but you must keep trying. Many of us have been brought up to undervalue...
February 19th, 2018 08:22 - SUCHNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Quite lovely. If you have achieved such then it must be blissful. I\'m...
February 19th, 2018 08:16 - The Last Rail Ticket (Lorna)
I\'m sure there\'s a place in your mind you visit quite regularly. It\'s...
February 19th, 2018 08:12 - Metamorphosis (Jabberwocky)
Oh crikey this made me chuckle and its so clever. Full marks, less is...
February 19th, 2018 05:01 - Te sueƱo cada noche (Larosamarchitada)
eth eth eth eth eth chris waddle, eth eth eth eth scorchio!
February 19th, 2018 03:13 - Skiing for Life. (Goldfinch60)
Skiing thought terrifies me but like you see, there will always be a way...
February 19th, 2018 02:33 - Project Progress (Aa Harvey)
LOL dream on dreamer, it does no harm..... cor! if only life really...
February 19th, 2018 02:25 - If I told you (Sidqiehs)
Having been through this dilemma several times so far in my life i\'d say....
February 19th, 2018 02:15 - A Wish Unfulfilled (+5) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Say it once\' is golden.
February 19th, 2018 02:11 - No Movement. (Wallace)
LOL i read your piece and on completion i wanted to leave a comment of...
February 19th, 2018 01:49 - I\'m... (Outsidetoinside)
Hmmm though i can\'t get into your mindframe here i\'d suggest the...
February 19th, 2018 01:47 - My Sunshine (Simplybeautiful)
Lovely sentiment in this gift of love poem. May your lover wake to these...
February 19th, 2018 01:41 - Who I Am. (ThatThugUnicorn)
I found that in running from my recent past i became what i was before and...
February 19th, 2018 01:40 - THE PATH (Michael Edwards)
Clever lady and clever you but may we yet see the maiden of number 3...
February 19th, 2018 01:38 - 21 again?! (Orchidee)
Glass raised to you sir this jurassic weekend. Didnt we meet in the...
February 18th, 2018 21:58 - Laptop Man. (Goldfinch60)
Personally i view my laptop usage through a veil of filth. I have no idea...
February 18th, 2018 21:50 - MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER (Michael Edwards)
oh my.... some of these are writing stories in my mind
you must surely be...
February 18th, 2018 21:45 - Why. (Wallace)
What price freedom and democracy? What price capitalism when theres profit...
February 18th, 2018 21:42 - War Brought Peace (Noah)
Noah, you just get better and better. This is a great piece. Goes into my...
February 18th, 2018 21:40 - God\'s Mistake (Lorna)
I really am a big fan of the \'less is more\' school of poetry and yours...
February 18th, 2018 21:37 - Old Love - No Regrets (RK) (Lorna)
Really like the way you have ended this. Those lines in themselves are...
February 17th, 2018 09:00 - Knowing (Arazimus)
Love this, you lucky person!
February 17th, 2018 03:37 - Doors. (Goldfinch60)
More words of wisdom from you. So very true. You are the poetic Sage of...
February 17th, 2018 03:35 - KISS ME HARDY (Michael Edwards)
Kiss your what?
February 17th, 2018 03:31 - Just one look (Aa Harvey)
This is epic, my mind begins to write a screenplay because you\'ve given...
February 16th, 2018 14:30 - Maybe (Myself and me)
Nice one, i like the way you constructed this. It\'s like a song to me in...
February 16th, 2018 14:25 - Bridges. (Goldfinch60)
This is you at your poetic best my friend.
This spiritual piece is very...
February 16th, 2018 09:10 - IN DENIAL (Michael Edwards)
A true gem of wisdom you have produced here sir! Begs the question why do...
February 16th, 2018 08:57 - Happens To Us All. (Wallace)
A very enjoyable read as i look forward to my 66th next month. I try to...
February 16th, 2018 08:55 - Love can never be denied (FredPeyer)
Oh so true, sooner or later it\'ll come calling. Nice one.
February 16th, 2018 08:50 - Loveless (Aa Harvey)
I know exactly where you\'re coming from in this.
Very well crafted....
February 15th, 2018 19:34 - WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN (Michael Edwards)
This read like a winter seasons reflection upon places i had known, life i...
February 15th, 2018 19:20
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