Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• The Lighthouse (Diane) Nice light message contained herein, and we all want such happiness. Good...
  September 2nd, 2017 06:02
• I have the power (Poetic Dan) Good writing. The self healing within your writing is profound. There are...
  September 2nd, 2017 05:55
• Lost. (Fay Slimm.) This is so beautiful faye. Just so uplifting. I love your plain everyday...
  September 2nd, 2017 05:40
• Getting Older (FredPeyer) \"Take kindly the counsel of the years, gracefully surrendering the things...
  September 2nd, 2017 05:19
• S E P T E M B E R ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) September normally denotes a busier time of year for me but the UK...
  September 2nd, 2017 05:12
• Boy in Stone (Noah) Wow this iis powerful stuff.... is it the best i\'ve seen of...
  September 2nd, 2017 05:08
• Down To Earth (Wallace) Superb writing. It doesn\'t get any better than this standard. Please...
  September 2nd, 2017 04:52
• Ignorance in Age. (Goldfinch60) Well this version of \'so what\' is one of my favourite pieces from this...
  September 2nd, 2017 02:21
• Hurricane Harvey (Christina8) Good to see the spirit of community is alive and well in Texas. Good...
  September 2nd, 2017 02:09
• EBB AND FLOW (Michael Edwards) Wow.... \'caressing melancholic shores, the waves sang out in...
  September 2nd, 2017 01:59
• D. E. A. T. H. (Disrespectfully nice) I think you\'ll find youget a lot more people commenting here if YOU...
  September 1st, 2017 21:12
• Things That Impress Me Most... (Sue.evans) You\'re a lucky gal aint you..... all those goodies wrapped up in a man...
  September 1st, 2017 21:07
• End (Myself and me) That is very very clever. Well done.
  September 1st, 2017 20:39
• Dominoes (Tony36) Put the dominoes away now. ..... play nicely! Very provocative...
  September 1st, 2017 20:37
• bare of branches (Heather T) I grow verdant with envy of your wonderful woodland wizardry here....
  September 1st, 2017 20:26
• Forget-me-not (Aa Harvey) Sad my friend but..... You have experienced a beautiful time which...
  September 1st, 2017 20:21
• FIBS. (Goldfinch60) I tried it but...nah .... algebra was my failing at school. I\'d have...
  September 1st, 2017 19:48
• How do you play (Poetic Dan) Little gems of wisdom brought together to make an impactful read sir. Good...
  September 1st, 2017 19:40
• PYRAMID SELLING (Michael Edwards) It used to be popular u know amongst the nobility in Egypt. Nice one!
  September 1st, 2017 19:37
• Choices (FredPeyer) Oh i love it Fred. I wish everybody could think like like that instead of...
  September 1st, 2017 19:29
• Prisoner of love 💔 (Malubotelho) Awww Malubotelho,..... youve made poetry form the story of my life. I...
  August 31st, 2017 16:58
• Want to be with you (Myself and me) Lifes definately incomplete without that special someone. Nice write.
  August 31st, 2017 03:54
• The Hipster & The Geisha (Edthepoet) Nice writing Ed. Yep it sho\'nuff just comes up and hits ya when its ready...
  August 31st, 2017 03:49
• Honu (FredPeyer) Such amazing creatures, noble and graceful. So often we see on our screens...
  August 31st, 2017 03:41
• The Lone Poppy. (Goldfinch60) The unusual calls to you, speaks to you. I know this feeling, a dozen...
  August 31st, 2017 03:24
• THE 5 SENSES OF LOVE ~ A B & S Collaboration Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Excellent job both of you.
  August 31st, 2017 03:19
• The Angels (Christina8) Now that is quite quite beautiful. Even better for a second reading....
  August 31st, 2017 02:54
• THREE BITS OF MERRY (Michael Edwards) I sense electricity in your writing. Don\'t go out tonite. There\'s a...
  August 31st, 2017 01:42
• GENIUS (Louis Gibbs) Profound words! Really good read. Goes into my favourites
  August 30th, 2017 18:31
• The Sentimental Ghost (Amnesiaclizard) I think you are just going to have to face up to the words of Max Ehrmann...
  August 30th, 2017 18:29
• Pray for Texas (Malubotelho) I have never visited the USA and only met US citizens online. All such...
  August 30th, 2017 17:28
• Frenzy. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely writing Faye. And the last line has me giggling, i never would have...
  August 30th, 2017 17:20
• Panoply and Flair (FredPeyer) Lovely words to inspire. Sometimes i guess we all need the inspiration you...
  August 30th, 2017 17:02
• Hilary\'s Passing Year. (Goldfinch60) The gift of poetry created by a friend is something special. You are...
  August 30th, 2017 16:54
• THE SEASONS (Michael Edwards) Like four buttons on a jacket for all weathers. They all come together...
  August 30th, 2017 16:51
• Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS (Malubotelho) Here malubotelho - you leave my bow and arrows alone! ... i bet you could...
  August 29th, 2017 22:32
• Frozen (Aa Harvey) I had no idea this was about a film.
  August 29th, 2017 11:26
• Frozen (Aa Harvey) Wow! Excellent. Your writing clearly portrays what goes on in the hearts...
  August 29th, 2017 04:07
• Searching (FredPeyer) Though we search for our spiritual essence it seems it is intentionally a...
  August 29th, 2017 04:05
• MY FRIEND\'S A WITCH ! ~ AN EERIE ETHEREE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I think i know of a witch, who does good - a bit of a glitch! She\'s...
  August 29th, 2017 03:58
• The Theatre of Dreams. (Goldfinch60) Thank goodness that you are right about this. I\'ve found myself thru that...
  August 29th, 2017 02:58
• AUTUMN (Michael Edwards) Lovely autumn words, i picture the first signs on the leaves in my minds...
  August 29th, 2017 01:36
• Marriage (FredPeyer) Amazing piece of writing which im sure resonates with all who are a part...
  August 29th, 2017 01:31
• Tango (Myself and me) Tango in the wind. Lovely. Lifes entire cycle in the passing of a leaf.
  August 29th, 2017 01:23
• I am a Christian (Tony36) Do nt knock yourself out mate. Hundreds of thousands of christians killed...
  August 28th, 2017 12:31
• Heart to heart ❤️ (Malubotelho) Quite quite lovely. Sooo much love in the air. I like this, its happy and...
  August 28th, 2017 11:47
• Blackwater Depths (Noah) Dont worry, Domestos cleans right round the bend. Those nasty stains soon...
  August 28th, 2017 11:36
• A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Glass (Aa Harvey) Nope! Haven\'t a clue, .. love you say? whats that all about then?...
  August 28th, 2017 11:32
• Shoulder exercises (Poetic Dan) Your honesty here shows such love and care for the fragile wellbeing of...
  August 28th, 2017 11:30
• Conceding. (Fay Slimm.) Is this about the night sky or ones spiritual journey to ones \'heaven\' ?...
  August 28th, 2017 04:09
• MPS ~ WE ARE FAMILY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Im proud to be able to contribute here both commenting and publishing....
  August 28th, 2017 04:05
• Is there no hope? (Goldfinch60) Beautiful observational writing backed up by your real life explanation....
  August 28th, 2017 04:02
• Untamed-Collection of Senryu (Christina8) There is FIRE in your words. The fire of passion. Love these short...
  August 28th, 2017 03:51
• Winter (Michael Edwards) Hmmm \'a blankets cold caress\' sounds like my marriage.... I\'m free.......
  August 28th, 2017 03:44
• Yellow card (soccer game) (Myself and me) This brings out the nippon in your grammar. Loved it!
  August 28th, 2017 03:40
• Unknown lover (ShannonXx) That terrible feeling is betrayal indeed. Why don\'t people wak away...
  August 27th, 2017 15:15
• Heart of Mercy (WL Schuett) Beautiful sentiment. Very moving and inspiring. Pleasure to read. Goes...
  August 27th, 2017 15:01
• Love Haiku (FredPeyer) Whoever wants to solve such a mystery? No no no, its a mystery...
  August 27th, 2017 11:22
• Said and Unsaid. (Goldfinch60) Aaaaah wise words indeed. But you sir say so much in your works about the...
  August 27th, 2017 08:19
• BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Wonderful feeling to offer that bridge for another soul and ask nothing....
  August 27th, 2017 08:15
• Forbidden (Malubotelho) Malu, you know we shall all see these places again in time and when we do,...
  August 27th, 2017 08:10
• SUMMER (Michael Edwards) Laughing at your comment about seasons might be a bit out of sync to Fred....
  August 27th, 2017 08:01
• Farewell -cinquain (Myself and me) OMG i just had deja vu with this. Nice bit of writing.
  August 27th, 2017 07:53
• Longing (Myself and me) Such romantic visions youve created here. What a wonderful idea.
  August 26th, 2017 13:25
• SOME MORE ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) There are some real beauties there sir! Each deserving of its own write...
  August 26th, 2017 13:07
• The Lone Tree. (Goldfinch60) I really do like your poem. As a believer in reincarnation i wonder...
  August 26th, 2017 13:02
• S A N T I T A ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Such a lovely focusing point though Brian. Nicely done.
  August 26th, 2017 12:55
• Another Beautiful Day in Paradise (FredPeyer) Tits and bums and legs and Fred. Its all here on my poetic side folks! Try...
  August 26th, 2017 12:50
• One part of the fractal (Poetic Dan) Super sentiment expressed here with clarity and soul. If only every man...
  August 26th, 2017 12:45
• Celebrate 🎉 (Sue.evans) Raise a glass indeed (hic!) one for every poet (hic!). Nice words. But...
  August 26th, 2017 12:41
• Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.) Made me giggle with the fun i hadst converting your olde worlde stylism...
  August 26th, 2017 12:31
• Out of gas (Running on empty) (Aa Harvey) Excellent! You portray a way of life i have known all too well.
  August 26th, 2017 12:13
• I NEVER FELT LIKE THIS (Yourselfobject) Like a flower opening to the rays of sunlight. nice writing.
  August 26th, 2017 11:50
• Life (Malubotelho) Wonderful words. I came online today and straight to your poem. What...
  August 26th, 2017 11:28
• Blurry (Baylee) How come you dont comment on other peoples poems?
  August 25th, 2017 19:09
• Enamored (Malubotelho) \"Beauty, drawn by gods hand to fulfill my time\"....... beautiful line...
  August 25th, 2017 18:51
• ........ (Angel Smileyface) I agree with Santita\'s comments wholeheartedly. I\'m one of the old...
  August 25th, 2017 12:59
• THOUGHTS ON MADNESS (Louis Gibbs) I just better be careful or i\'ll end up in one of those places. I\'m not...
  August 25th, 2017 09:19
• True Love! (Sue.evans) Quite quite delicious. Superbly, lovingly written.
  August 25th, 2017 09:15
• The Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.) I can feel the coolness of your woodland. You brought it to life in my...
  August 25th, 2017 04:35
• Lovers On The Run (Hidden) Merry and fun, this has got to be a song. Really nicely written. Plse...
  August 25th, 2017 04:33
• ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I will be working till aged 70 at least thanks to tat credit crunch and...
  August 25th, 2017 04:30
• Open (Caden) Got to love yourself yep. These days we seem to try to love before we even...
  August 25th, 2017 03:36
• Kisses (Christina8) Envious of your partnership. Great piece of writing.
  August 25th, 2017 03:34
• Art is Feeling. (Goldfinch60) I like the company of artistic and creative people. They are by and large...
  August 25th, 2017 03:18
• My wife, my lover, my friend (FredPeyer) Fred i love this. So honest and open. You are a lucky man to have such a...
  August 25th, 2017 03:13
• \\\\\\\" FOR HER \\\\\\\" (Vincent jodi) Vincent jodi you are an excellent poet.
  August 25th, 2017 03:10
• A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Picture (Aa Harvey) Good succinct writing.
  August 25th, 2017 00:42
• Love is just a name away (Poetic Dan) In its purest love is just as you suggest. Nicely put.
  August 24th, 2017 22:47
• Be as sad as I am (Stumped) Time to let somebody hold your hand i think.
  August 24th, 2017 22:27
• A Moment In Time (Ron parrish aka wordman) Too true wordman have a look at my \'forever\' published today where i...
  August 24th, 2017 22:24
• I Want The Old Him (CaraMia) I love your writing but it has left me a little confused and sad for you.
  August 24th, 2017 21:47
• Impermanence (Seeker123) Ah well yes...i may have the answer for you.... see my published poem...
  August 24th, 2017 21:36
• Sleep (Tealblueturtle) Aaaah our dreams where will they take us.... and will we recall them as...
  August 24th, 2017 21:32
• Trapped in the Day (Faye99) Amazing the things we were when we look back. Great writing.
  August 24th, 2017 21:30
• Abstract (Lizzie Lara) Were u a canvas or a moving target?
  August 24th, 2017 20:26
• The Road not Taken (C.L.) Super work C.L.
  August 24th, 2017 20:16
• Cleaning my room today (Egyptianqt79) OK so at least you\'re thinking about it. Have you put the rubbish out -...
  August 24th, 2017 20:12
• You can\'t take it with you. (Docstorm) Gotta say that FredPeyer just said it all. Nice work.
  August 24th, 2017 19:44
• Just Thinking (Thoff1) Chill out and enjoy whatever your life brings to you.
  August 24th, 2017 19:40