Comments on community poems by dusk arising
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OOOH you could frighten a man away with stuff like this Santita..... ...
September 6th, 2017 05:05 - Rabbit-edone (Myself and me)
LOL nice bit of fun.
September 6th, 2017 04:58 - The time is 10.23 pm (Aa Harvey)
I like it, especially the way you close it down. Good writing.
September 6th, 2017 04:50 - God ? (FredPeyer)
Too many people taking this religious stuff as dead serious so its a...
September 6th, 2017 04:41 - She Fever Too. (Goldfinch60)
Whichever way it reads
it\'ll satisfy your needs
the beauty\'s in its...
September 6th, 2017 04:33 - LIMERICK No 42 (Michael Edwards)
ha ha ha
i\'ve a trick with farts thats new
i save \'em for the...
September 6th, 2017 04:19 - Limericks (Sue.evans)
Good fun stuff.
When asked to write on MPS
Sue.Evans quickly said...
September 4th, 2017 19:25 - Day Break (Maggie)
Strong writing with a strong purpose in mind. Always good to see something...
September 4th, 2017 10:25 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Pumpkin (Aa Harvey)
Lorra lorra love everywhere. Nice short.
September 4th, 2017 08:52 - The Stone Tower (J.M. Shine)
Now this i could fancy. Living on my own chunk of earth like a cloud. And...
September 4th, 2017 08:51 - Jigsaw of Life. (Goldfinch60)
This just isn\'t fair..... why do my jigsaws have bits missing. You\'ve...
September 4th, 2017 08:46 - The Boneyard (Noah)
Horror mystery..... sets the scene for a damn good film.... i see...
September 4th, 2017 08:42 - Alone. (Wallace)
Nicely written. Time heals. Please comment on my stuff.
September 4th, 2017 08:36 - Love lies (Sunflowers Bloom)
Great writing. Difficult isn\'t it, recovering fro heartbreak. I\'ve done...
September 3rd, 2017 15:36 - Awake (AudieSaige)
Innocent but ready, or was she conned by a big bad wolf? Oh no, he was...
September 3rd, 2017 15:23 - Acid rain (A__pott)
I think the way santita sums this up is just right. Lot of us carry pains...
September 3rd, 2017 15:09 - Truth Behind Climate Change (Poetboy123)
I thought it was common knowledge now that cows farting was the cause of...
September 3rd, 2017 15:07 - Guess the Character (TN96)
Had to be sherlock. Aaaah tiz quiz nite - evenings draw in and sundays are...
September 3rd, 2017 15:03 - O My .... (Maggie)
The last line is worrying me. It reads \'well shall have met\' should that...
September 3rd, 2017 14:56 - Campfire Legends (LukeCoomer)
i love it. Life is for living not sitting in the dark waiting for...
September 3rd, 2017 14:50 - About Love (Seeker)
All too true, those last two lines nail it. Is our existence here on earth...
September 3rd, 2017 14:25 - Untitled (SarahLouise)
Lovely words. Please comment upon my stuff.
September 3rd, 2017 14:16 - How Else Could It Have Gone (John Prophet)
Maybe this is the alternative world?
September 3rd, 2017 14:14 - Exit-etheree (Myself and me)
Well done M&M
September 3rd, 2017 14:09 - Inner Thoughts (Diane)
Why write when u havent the inspiration. Whats the point? If you\'re...
September 3rd, 2017 08:54 - A Multitude of Moggies (Viv Wade)
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Viv. Its very well written too, a...
September 3rd, 2017 08:45 - suicide (Wackyheartache4)
I picture your tombstone.
RIP Wackyheartache4 who took 5 mins to tell...
September 3rd, 2017 08:35 - Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree (Sue.evans)
Cute, i like that. And wisdom too.
September 3rd, 2017 08:29 - Accidental Birth (Lanaevans)
Cool. Rant over ? Try reading positive stuff and making a positive move...
September 3rd, 2017 08:25 - Born To Fight (Felicityjones)
Nice writing. Wanting to change is a good start on any journey.
please...
September 3rd, 2017 08:18 - Four Walls. (Wallace)
Nice cheerfully decorated room you describe.
September 3rd, 2017 08:15 - Looking Inward (Mugsdaddy)
Good writing. Of course once u know where the bottom is then u know...
September 3rd, 2017 08:02 - Sex Starved (BlueDays)
Eros the black hearted beast ....thats a first! Don\'t get too hungry...
September 3rd, 2017 08:00 - For-Life-Wife (Aa Harvey)
Quite quite a beautiful piece written from your heart. You have obviously...
September 3rd, 2017 07:56 - Maybe, Maybe Someday (Accidental Poet)
If only we knew the rest of the story..... youve teased us beautifully...
September 3rd, 2017 06:48 - No beef (Poetic Dan)
Sometimes certain mens actions can lead you to believe you are a quite...
September 3rd, 2017 06:45 - My Soul (FredPeyer)
I learned a new word which no doubt i will promptly forget...
September 3rd, 2017 06:35 - GOD ANSWERS PRAYER ~ Sonnet for Sunday ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Are sure god is a man? Really sure?
September 3rd, 2017 06:29 - Two into One. (Goldfinch60)
Fangs very much for that. It gave me a thirst. Very enjoyable reading.
September 3rd, 2017 06:25 - DAFFODILS (Michael Edwards)
Clever stuff, but it looks like a christmas tree.
September 3rd, 2017 01:22 - Stretch (Myself and me)
nice short and meaningful. nothing wasted. Good concise write.
September 2nd, 2017 15:56 - Insomnia (Malubotelho)
Mental turmoil preventing sleep is something i have discovered over the...
September 2nd, 2017 15:48 - the dawning of grief (Alienkid)
This is top notch stuff poet. That last verse is especially strong and oh...
September 2nd, 2017 15:42 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Banana (Aa Harvey)
Now that i like, its both clever and meaningful. yes its going into my...
September 2nd, 2017 13:19 - wandering (but never finding) (Alienkid)
hOne of a poets noblest companions is his/her troubled mind. You\'ve shown...
September 2nd, 2017 06:27 - wandering (but never finding) (Alienkid)
hOne of a poets noblest companions is his/her troubled mind. You\'ve shown...
September 2nd, 2017 06:19 - The Lighthouse (Diane)
Nice light message contained herein, and we all want such happiness. Good...
September 2nd, 2017 06:02 - I have the power (Poetic Dan)
Good writing. The self healing within your writing is profound. There are...
September 2nd, 2017 05:55 - The Universe’s Wheel (Accidental Poet)
Song lyric from yesteryear comes to mind \"Free your mind and the rest...
September 2nd, 2017 05:44 - Lost. (Fay Slimm.)
This is so beautiful faye. Just so uplifting. I love your plain everyday...
September 2nd, 2017 05:40 - Getting Older (FredPeyer)
\"Take kindly the counsel of the years, gracefully surrendering the things...
September 2nd, 2017 05:19 - S E P T E M B E R ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
September normally denotes a busier time of year for me but the UK...
September 2nd, 2017 05:12 - Boy in Stone (Noah)
Wow this iis powerful stuff.... is it the best i\'ve seen of...
September 2nd, 2017 05:08 - Down To Earth (Wallace)
Superb writing. It doesn\'t get any better than this standard. Please...
September 2nd, 2017 04:52 - Ignorance in Age. (Goldfinch60)
Well this version of \'so what\' is one of my favourite pieces from this...
September 2nd, 2017 02:21 - Hurricane Harvey (Christina8)
Good to see the spirit of community is alive and well in Texas. Good...
September 2nd, 2017 02:09 - EBB AND FLOW (Michael Edwards)
Wow.... \'caressing melancholic shores, the waves sang out in...
September 2nd, 2017 01:59 - D. E. A. T. H. (Disrespectfully nice)
I think you\'ll find youget a lot more people commenting here if YOU...
September 1st, 2017 21:12 - Things That Impress Me Most... (Sue.evans)
You\'re a lucky gal aint you..... all those goodies wrapped up in a man...
September 1st, 2017 21:07 - End (Myself and me)
That is very very clever. Well done.
September 1st, 2017 20:39 - Dominoes (Tony36)
Put the dominoes away now. ..... play nicely! Very provocative...
September 1st, 2017 20:37 - bare of branches (Heather T)
I grow verdant with envy of your wonderful woodland wizardry here....
September 1st, 2017 20:26 - Forget-me-not (Aa Harvey)
Sad my friend but..... You have experienced a beautiful time which...
September 1st, 2017 20:21 - Let Them Be a Kid (Accidental Poet)
Super writing. Lovely to read. Should be presented to every new parent so...
September 1st, 2017 20:06 - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
I tried it but...nah .... algebra was my failing at school. I\'d have...
September 1st, 2017 19:48 - How do you play (Poetic Dan)
Little gems of wisdom brought together to make an impactful read sir. Good...
September 1st, 2017 19:40 - PYRAMID SELLING (Michael Edwards)
It used to be popular u know amongst the nobility in Egypt. Nice one!
September 1st, 2017 19:37 - Choices (FredPeyer)
Oh i love it Fred. I wish everybody could think like like that instead of...
September 1st, 2017 19:29 - Prisoner of love 💔 (Malubotelho)
Awww Malubotelho,..... youve made poetry form the story of my life. I...
August 31st, 2017 16:58 - Want to be with you (Myself and me)
Lifes definately incomplete without that special someone. Nice write.
August 31st, 2017 03:54 - The Hipster & The Geisha (Edthepoet)
Nice writing Ed. Yep it sho\'nuff just comes up and hits ya when its ready...
August 31st, 2017 03:49 - The Umbilical Cord Of Love (Accidental Poet)
Wow poet. Wow. This is so moving. Straight from your soul this must have...
August 31st, 2017 03:45 - Honu (FredPeyer)
Such amazing creatures, noble and graceful. So often we see on our screens...
August 31st, 2017 03:41 - The Lone Poppy. (Goldfinch60)
The unusual calls to you, speaks to you. I know this feeling, a dozen...
August 31st, 2017 03:24 - THE 5 SENSES OF LOVE ~ A B & S Collaboration Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Excellent job both of you.
August 31st, 2017 03:19 - The Angels (Christina8)
Now that is quite quite beautiful. Even better for a second reading....
August 31st, 2017 02:54 - THREE BITS OF MERRY (Michael Edwards)
I sense electricity in your writing.
Don\'t go out tonite.
There\'s a...
August 31st, 2017 01:42 - GENIUS (Louis Gibbs)
Profound words! Really good read. Goes into my favourites
August 30th, 2017 18:31 - The Sentimental Ghost (Amnesiaclizard)
I think you are just going to have to face up to the words of Max Ehrmann...
August 30th, 2017 18:29 - Pray for Texas (Malubotelho)
I have never visited the USA and only met US citizens online. All such...
August 30th, 2017 17:28 - Frenzy. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely writing Faye. And the last line has me giggling, i never would have...
August 30th, 2017 17:20 - Panoply and Flair (FredPeyer)
Lovely words to inspire. Sometimes i guess we all need the inspiration you...
August 30th, 2017 17:02 - Hilary\'s Passing Year. (Goldfinch60)
The gift of poetry created by a friend is something special. You are...
August 30th, 2017 16:54 - THE SEASONS (Michael Edwards)
Like four buttons on a jacket for all weathers. They all come together...
August 30th, 2017 16:51 - Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS (Malubotelho)
Here malubotelho - you leave my bow and arrows alone! ... i bet you could...
August 29th, 2017 22:32 - Frozen (Aa Harvey)
I had no idea this was about a film.
August 29th, 2017 11:26 - Frozen (Aa Harvey)
Wow! Excellent. Your writing clearly portrays what goes on in the hearts...
August 29th, 2017 04:07 - Searching (FredPeyer)
Though we search for our spiritual essence it seems it is intentionally a...
August 29th, 2017 04:05 - MY FRIEND\'S A WITCH ! ~ AN EERIE ETHEREE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I think i know of a witch, who does good - a bit of a glitch!
She\'s...
August 29th, 2017 03:58 - The Theatre of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Thank goodness that you are right about this. I\'ve found myself thru that...
August 29th, 2017 02:58 - AUTUMN (Michael Edwards)
Lovely autumn words, i picture the first signs on the leaves in my minds...
August 29th, 2017 01:36 - Marriage (FredPeyer)
Amazing piece of writing which im sure resonates with all who are a part...
August 29th, 2017 01:31 - Tango (Myself and me)
Tango in the wind. Lovely. Lifes entire cycle in the passing of a leaf.
August 29th, 2017 01:23 - I am a Christian (Tony36)
Do nt knock yourself out mate. Hundreds of thousands of christians killed...
August 28th, 2017 12:31 - Heart to heart ❤️ (Malubotelho)
Quite quite lovely. Sooo much love in the air. I like this, its happy and...
August 28th, 2017 11:47 - Blackwater Depths (Noah)
Dont worry, Domestos cleans right round the bend. Those nasty stains soon...
August 28th, 2017 11:36 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Glass (Aa Harvey)
Nope! Haven\'t a clue, .. love you say? whats that all about then?...
August 28th, 2017 11:32 - Shoulder exercises (Poetic Dan)
Your honesty here shows such love and care for the fragile wellbeing of...
August 28th, 2017 11:30 - Conceding. (Fay Slimm.)
Is this about the night sky or ones spiritual journey to ones \'heaven\' ?...
August 28th, 2017 04:09 - MPS ~ WE ARE FAMILY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Im proud to be able to contribute here both commenting and publishing....
August 28th, 2017 04:05
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