Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Is there no hope? (Goldfinch60) Beautiful observational writing backed up by your real life explanation....
  August 28th, 2017 04:02
• Untamed-Collection of Senryu (Christina8) There is FIRE in your words. The fire of passion. Love these short...
  August 28th, 2017 03:51
• Winter (Michael Edwards) Hmmm \'a blankets cold caress\' sounds like my marriage.... I\'m free.......
  August 28th, 2017 03:44
• Yellow card (soccer game) (Myself and me) This brings out the nippon in your grammar. Loved it!
  August 28th, 2017 03:40
• Unknown lover (ShannonXx) That terrible feeling is betrayal indeed. Why don\'t people wak away...
  August 27th, 2017 15:15
• Heart of Mercy (WL Schuett) Beautiful sentiment. Very moving and inspiring. Pleasure to read. Goes...
  August 27th, 2017 15:01
• Love Haiku (FredPeyer) Whoever wants to solve such a mystery? No no no, its a mystery...
  August 27th, 2017 11:22
• Said and Unsaid. (Goldfinch60) Aaaaah wise words indeed. But you sir say so much in your works about the...
  August 27th, 2017 08:19
• BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Wonderful feeling to offer that bridge for another soul and ask nothing....
  August 27th, 2017 08:15
• Forbidden (Malubotelho) Malu, you know we shall all see these places again in time and when we do,...
  August 27th, 2017 08:10
• SUMMER (Michael Edwards) Laughing at your comment about seasons might be a bit out of sync to Fred....
  August 27th, 2017 08:01
• Farewell -cinquain (Myself and me) OMG i just had deja vu with this. Nice bit of writing.
  August 27th, 2017 07:53
• Longing (Myself and me) Such romantic visions youve created here. What a wonderful idea.
  August 26th, 2017 13:25
• SOME MORE ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) There are some real beauties there sir! Each deserving of its own write...
  August 26th, 2017 13:07
• The Lone Tree. (Goldfinch60) I really do like your poem. As a believer in reincarnation i wonder...
  August 26th, 2017 13:02
• S A N T I T A ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Such a lovely focusing point though Brian. Nicely done.
  August 26th, 2017 12:55
• Another Beautiful Day in Paradise (FredPeyer) Tits and bums and legs and Fred. Its all here on my poetic side folks! Try...
  August 26th, 2017 12:50
• One part of the fractal (Poetic Dan) Super sentiment expressed here with clarity and soul. If only every man...
  August 26th, 2017 12:45
• Celebrate 🎉 (Sue.evans) Raise a glass indeed (hic!) one for every poet (hic!). Nice words. But...
  August 26th, 2017 12:41
• Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.) Made me giggle with the fun i hadst converting your olde worlde stylism...
  August 26th, 2017 12:31
• Out of gas (Running on empty) (Aa Harvey) Excellent! You portray a way of life i have known all too well.
  August 26th, 2017 12:13
• I NEVER FELT LIKE THIS (Yourselfobject) Like a flower opening to the rays of sunlight. nice writing.
  August 26th, 2017 11:50
• Life (Malubotelho) Wonderful words. I came online today and straight to your poem. What...
  August 26th, 2017 11:28
• Blurry (Baylee) How come you dont comment on other peoples poems?
  August 25th, 2017 19:09
• Enamored (Malubotelho) \"Beauty, drawn by gods hand to fulfill my time\"....... beautiful line...
  August 25th, 2017 18:51
• ........ (Angel Smileyface) I agree with Santita\'s comments wholeheartedly. I\'m one of the old...
  August 25th, 2017 12:59
• THOUGHTS ON MADNESS (Louis Gibbs) I just better be careful or i\'ll end up in one of those places. I\'m not...
  August 25th, 2017 09:19
• True Love! (Sue.evans) Quite quite delicious. Superbly, lovingly written.
  August 25th, 2017 09:15
• The Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.) I can feel the coolness of your woodland. You brought it to life in my...
  August 25th, 2017 04:35
• Lovers On The Run (Hidden) Merry and fun, this has got to be a song. Really nicely written. Plse...
  August 25th, 2017 04:33
• ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I will be working till aged 70 at least thanks to tat credit crunch and...
  August 25th, 2017 04:30
• Open (Caden) Got to love yourself yep. These days we seem to try to love before we even...
  August 25th, 2017 03:36
• Kisses (Christina8) Envious of your partnership. Great piece of writing.
  August 25th, 2017 03:34
• Art is Feeling. (Goldfinch60) I like the company of artistic and creative people. They are by and large...
  August 25th, 2017 03:18
• My wife, my lover, my friend (FredPeyer) Fred i love this. So honest and open. You are a lucky man to have such a...
  August 25th, 2017 03:13
• \\\\\\\" FOR HER \\\\\\\" (Vincent jodi) Vincent jodi you are an excellent poet.
  August 25th, 2017 03:10
• A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Picture (Aa Harvey) Good succinct writing.
  August 25th, 2017 00:42
• Love is just a name away (Poetic Dan) In its purest love is just as you suggest. Nicely put.
  August 24th, 2017 22:47
• Be as sad as I am (Stumped) Time to let somebody hold your hand i think.
  August 24th, 2017 22:27
• A Moment In Time (Ron parrish aka wordman) Too true wordman have a look at my \'forever\' published today where i...
  August 24th, 2017 22:24
• I Want The Old Him (CaraMia) I love your writing but it has left me a little confused and sad for you.
  August 24th, 2017 21:47
• Impermanence (Seeker123) Ah well yes...i may have the answer for you.... see my published poem...
  August 24th, 2017 21:36
• Sleep (Tealblueturtle) Aaaah our dreams where will they take us.... and will we recall them as...
  August 24th, 2017 21:32
• Trapped in the Day (Faye99) Amazing the things we were when we look back. Great writing.
  August 24th, 2017 21:30
• Abstract (Lizzie Lara) Were u a canvas or a moving target?
  August 24th, 2017 20:26
• The Road not Taken (C.L.) Super work C.L.
  August 24th, 2017 20:16
• Cleaning my room today (Egyptianqt79) OK so at least you\'re thinking about it. Have you put the rubbish out -...
  August 24th, 2017 20:12
• You can\'t take it with you. (Docstorm) Gotta say that FredPeyer just said it all. Nice work.
  August 24th, 2017 19:44
• Just Thinking (Thoff1) Chill out and enjoy whatever your life brings to you.
  August 24th, 2017 19:40
• To be a rose (Femlord) Be honest, this poem is about me and my ageing spirit isn\'t it LOL. Great...
  August 24th, 2017 19:37
• Help for Heroes (Bibbeck) I think that if you spoke to the returning heros my friend you would hear...
  August 24th, 2017 19:33
• All in the mix! (Sue.evans) Last time i read a piece about a cake i was at a wedding and it ended in...
  August 24th, 2017 19:28
• Back Pat (WriteBeLight) Great stuff. You can\'t win them all and sometimes you do something that...
  August 24th, 2017 18:14
• AGE : (Perspective) (Lasergraph) I hate the shop window reflection but my eyes look out young. Nice
  August 24th, 2017 17:53
• Time Move Slowly (Edthepoet) Sad. As time goes by you come to terms with, get used to situations. But...
  August 24th, 2017 17:51
• First Cut The Deepest (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Brilliant! Tell it like it is. Strong!
  August 24th, 2017 16:52
• The candy girl (Malubotelho) As an old guy i have to add i certainly appreciate beauty and the beauity...
  August 24th, 2017 16:37
• A Beautiful Butterfly (Mandi) Quite lovely. Very enjoyable reading.
  August 24th, 2017 16:30
• Regret (Noah) Ah dreams. Ahhhh the lottery, my wealthy offspring, the cars the house the...
  August 24th, 2017 16:25
• Questions. (Fay Slimm.) Those last three lines kill me inside. I meet widows with my romantic...
  August 24th, 2017 16:20
• Time to Fight. (Liam Lawless) Difficult! Thought provoking. Angry? Very powerful writing.
  August 24th, 2017 16:09
• Love Is (Jennylynn0324) Love is all of that. Love isn\'t complicated so long as it is a shared...
  August 24th, 2017 16:05
• Jealousy, Nausea, ad Nauseam! (Nameless) For nausea like this youve been eating the wrong kind of man. Bold but...
  August 24th, 2017 15:16
• Poem 43 (Disrespectfully nice) Some people aint going to like your explicit words but you know you tell...
  August 24th, 2017 15:11
• The Prism of Life. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful subject and great words. For me it is the coloured spectrum...
  August 24th, 2017 11:53
• Alone / not alone (Aa Harvey) I\'m in two minds about this. Both are thinking hard. A very enjoyable...
  August 24th, 2017 11:47
• Panic (Christina8) I only ever had one panic attack - horrible. Good writing.
  August 24th, 2017 11:45
• Jaded (Baylee) Such a shame those eyes are jaded sweet poet. Your work has such flowing...
  August 24th, 2017 11:38
• Let me uncomplicate us / Inner demons (Sara Storkson) Two good pieces here worth posting separately i thought, however. First...
  August 24th, 2017 11:32
• A Date with my Muse (FredPeyer) If only my little white muse would stay in its cage and run around on its...
  August 24th, 2017 11:14
• THE LETTER (Michael Edwards) This feels like mindfulness. My imagination savoured each new item as you...
  August 24th, 2017 11:07
• Ring for Santita (Myself and me) Ahhh the poetry of romance. A keyring with a jewel and a vacancy for an...
  August 23rd, 2017 18:40
• Books (Tony36) Your poetry for me is an escape too Tony. Takes my mind to where you put...
  August 23rd, 2017 18:36
• The Natives Were Butchered For This Sh*t? (Edthepoet) And the meek shall inherit the earth DOH! mmmmm donuts. Yes i get the...
  August 23rd, 2017 18:34
• The silliest (Malubotelho) I was tossed around like an old newspaper caught in the wind of your poem....
  August 23rd, 2017 16:55
• HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) What a figure! Nice one....Oh and good writing too
  August 23rd, 2017 03:40
• Simple (Disrespectfully nice) Gutsy and real.
  August 23rd, 2017 02:49
• Weekend Insane Asylum (SebaastionB) You just won first prize for telling it like it is inside this ugly...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:44
• I See..Said The Blind Man (Edthepoet) So many damaged encounters or encounters with the damaged. Stunning...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:40
• Progress Way (Classicmister) Or will it be something far more messy? Provokative writing well executed.
  August 23rd, 2017 02:36
• Stumbling Service. (Goldfinch60) Evesham, just down the stumbling road from me, give or take a wrong turn...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:30
• bitter sweet (Clark) Ha ha ha this is great. Wonderful piece of writing.
  August 23rd, 2017 02:18
• A darkskin. (Femlord) ooooh i\'d be seething too. What patronising gits some people are. I\'d...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:17
• Miss You Too! (WriteBeLight) Awww cute doggie, youve captured my heart already. Hey lucky you that its...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:13
• Relativity - a moral tale! (Sue.evans) Nicely written and so easily read. You could teach your wisdom to...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:05
• you are gone. (Lillian_Jean) This is so true. Sad when people dont realise it or are insecure and...
  August 23rd, 2017 02:01
• Sharks (Kruits) Oh your last line made me laugh. But yes expose yourself as you really are...
  August 23rd, 2017 01:59
• Unfinished (Sara Storkson) Most resoundingly YES! Many more cracks shall appear and there are many...
  August 23rd, 2017 01:56
• Dark Thought (Kurt Philip Behm) Cast me out of the dungeon and into light. For i have seen hell in my...
  August 23rd, 2017 01:54
• LOOKING BACK (Lasergraph) Class! Just seems to ooze wisdom. I know i look back often, but i still...
  August 23rd, 2017 01:51
• The hole and I (Emmarunway) Well very pleased you got to feel much better for your writing is severe...
  August 23rd, 2017 01:39
• Insignificance. (Goldfinch60) Makes you wonder surrounded by such beauty. I\'m sure none of us are...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:53
• Unbelievable (Disrespectfully nice) Go for it! No holding back here. Couldn\'t write like this when i was a...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:51
• LIES (Julianogollo) Powerful words here. I dont like lies, lies rely upon more lies being...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:48
• Happiness is fleeting (Sara Storkson) Wow compact but with excitement lust and power.... really exciting i...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:45
• Rise (Lost-but-not-broken17) Who could fail to adore this positive writing and your smiling face. ...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:38
• FRESHLY COOKED (Michael Edwards) Clever yet delicious! This is really good stuff.
  August 23rd, 2017 00:35
• Nonsense (Baylee) Yes goodbyes are too final. Even if it is to see someone in your dreams...
  August 23rd, 2017 00:29
• Trade Winds (FredPeyer) Up up and away i was taken, cool breeze in my hair. Lovely.
  August 23rd, 2017 00:28
• A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Song (Aa Harvey) I put on my sunday best to read this. Nice writing.
  August 23rd, 2017 00:26