Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- ME AND MY FAMILY (Michael Edwards)
Ha! Adam and Eve indeed,.. you\'re a bunch of youngsters..... my family...
February 14th, 2018 08:35 - A Selection of Couplets (FredPeyer)
I like these. Thoughful but light entertainment as a group like this.
February 13th, 2018 19:59 - SACRED STORIES (Louis Gibbs)
Love is the important lesson we continue to learn throughout our lives.
February 13th, 2018 18:28 - Quaking Waters (Noah)
Class. Sometimes its a no win isn\'t it and our ship sinks. But somehow...
February 13th, 2018 18:23 - Construction (Syd)
Syd this is so beautiful. So uplifting and truly a pleasure to re-read...
February 13th, 2018 17:28 - Drugs are for taking. (The Pills) (Royboy)
Today i wrote about pills, a user and love. It shines another light upon...
February 13th, 2018 17:22 - Crystal Clarity (A__pott)
My but this is a clever piece of thinking put into verse beautifully. A...
February 13th, 2018 17:18 - Demons (Ash2017)
Some folk suffer terribly from demons and have their lives and others...
February 13th, 2018 17:16 - Stamps (Moom)
I know what you mean. Most of mine are little ditties i compose on the...
February 13th, 2018 17:06 - Hands of Cain (Jabberwocky)
So true when we innocently place our heads upon the block of life.
February 13th, 2018 15:50 - Rejection (MelanieSkyes)
Deprived of your love his heart may realise and love blossom. Some people...
February 13th, 2018 15:46 - Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles (Lorna)
Lovely.
February 13th, 2018 15:42 - Respect for All. (Goldfinch60)
So true, but difficult to respect a person who believes you are not worthy...
February 13th, 2018 15:41 - LOVE IS >>> (Michael Edwards)
Ha! wht do you know about love...she makes me wear her undies or she wont...
February 13th, 2018 15:38 - Loved Up. (Wallace)
Long may your trust in love prevail.
February 13th, 2018 14:45 - UNDETERRED. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely force of positivity seeps into me from reading your words, just...
February 13th, 2018 12:08 - Roxy (Royboy)
So sad to lose your loving friend. Your words are truly a loving tribute...
February 13th, 2018 06:31 - Roxy (Royboy)
So sad to lose your loving friend. Your words are truly a loving tribute...
February 12th, 2018 19:45 - Then Came The Sadness. (Kevin browne)
Excellent closing line. Grace is so important. Grace nurtures self...
February 12th, 2018 19:41 - Gingerbread (Jabberwocky)
And tomorrow - sunshine! Good write.
February 12th, 2018 16:01 - Devils Love (Parisinwonderland)
Enjoyed this. Felt the pain.
February 12th, 2018 15:59 - COPING ALONE. (Fay Slimm.)
Indeed, what is the point of going to war if this is its harvest.
February 12th, 2018 11:23 - Less and More. (Goldfinch60)
Less is more works when the emotion is strongly conveyed. In music a...
February 12th, 2018 03:27 - NOW SHARP THE FROSTS (Michael Edwards)
Very deep and needs several reads to find its meaning. It reminds me of...
February 12th, 2018 03:22 - Out on the street. (Antonis)
We could do with a lot more verse content like yours. There seems to be an...
February 12th, 2018 03:15 - Times passed (Poetic25)
Thats the way of it nicely put. Demise and rebirth.
February 11th, 2018 18:46 - Little Games (Peeter pewter)
This subject deserves anger and you did it well.
February 11th, 2018 16:56 - America (Hitalot879)
Haven\'t you forgotten or missed out the original americans from your...
February 11th, 2018 16:50 - Not An Angel (Skyebellasario)
Oh i like it. This is so true and you have versed it so very cleverly. i...
February 11th, 2018 16:47 - There is Only Love (Lorna)
This is soooo good. I re-read it several times with pleasure. I relate to...
February 11th, 2018 16:34 - Pebble (Jabberwocky)
A really this is really good. You punch line is truly excellent.
A...
February 11th, 2018 16:32 - Open Door. (Wallace)
That place we - who have too often been in \'other\' places - all desire...
February 11th, 2018 16:27 - Waiting Words. (Goldfinch60)
A time of mixed emotions maybe? I know unsteady/unstable times for me...
February 11th, 2018 11:43 - Waiting Words. (Goldfinch60)
A time of mixed emotions maybe? I know unsteady/unstable times for me...
February 11th, 2018 08:27 - NOW FARP THE SHOTS (Michael Edwards)
i was cheating my fleckfast when i read this, i nearly flew it up all over...
February 11th, 2018 08:24 - UNLATCHED. (Fay Slimm.)
Brrrrrr how could you write such a warm inviting nay, encouraging...
February 9th, 2018 15:30 - God and Religion. (Goldfinch60)
It seems there now are many of us who were brought up in the christian...
February 9th, 2018 14:06 - Refresh your soul (Aa Harvey)
Re-invention of ones self is often the best way forward. Neatly expressed.
February 8th, 2018 16:43 - Coming Soon (Edthepoet)
This is like you teling someone to stop being false and be what you really...
February 7th, 2018 15:39 - EBONY CHILL. (Fay Slimm.)
Huddling, snuggling to keep warm these winter nights its quite easy to...
February 7th, 2018 15:23 - Someone needs to love you (Aa Harvey)
So so many love songs are written and we relate to them so easily for,...
February 7th, 2018 15:08 - Growing Love. (Goldfinch60)
This read to me like a preface for a book about how love matures and...
February 7th, 2018 03:39 - What Ever God Was Hiding Up His Sleeve. (Kevin browne)
What an amazing piece you\'ve written here. Good to read the positivity...
February 7th, 2018 03:36 - he caught her (Dusk arising)
i brought you back the warmest of smiles.
February 6th, 2018 20:13 - Breeze Blocks (Edthepoet)
Wow! powerful stuff. Seems like you are at one with yourself when alone....
February 6th, 2018 17:50 - The Rain Wants Me (Lorna)
The sky is crying, the streets full of tears.
Seems a voice whispers,...
February 6th, 2018 17:43 - Bad Luck (FredPeyer)
Hey, if it wasn\'t for bad luck, i\'d have no luck at all.
Nice one.... ...
February 6th, 2018 17:38 - What is Life? (Goldfinch60)
We all wonder about this dont we. So many what if\'s and other...
February 6th, 2018 17:34 - The Book. (Goldfinch60)
Oh for the energy and clarity of intent of those early pages before...
February 5th, 2018 13:40 - The Real Me (FredPeyer)
Didn\'t i see the real you on a motorbike a while back. That was before...
February 5th, 2018 13:37 - Tanka Truths (Gary Edward Geraci)
Gosh, all a bit strict.
February 3rd, 2018 19:10 - The Monster (Kae)
And all this is done by someone who claims to love the thing you are.
I...
February 3rd, 2018 18:51 - Two Hearts Thirsty for Love (Accidental Poet)
Love comes along in its own way my friend. You dont have to be hungry for...
February 3rd, 2018 09:02 - Missing Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Well when you are raised in front of a television and given...
February 3rd, 2018 07:14 - Missing Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Well when you are raised in front of a television and given...
February 3rd, 2018 05:59 - SHORTIES FROM FUSIONS (Michael Edwards)
Hmmm i think i just might copy your idea of publishing shorts ..... i...
February 3rd, 2018 05:49 - Baffled. (Goldfinch60)
This is natures way of getting back at us for the industrial revolution....
February 2nd, 2018 18:24 - IF ALL THE WORLD...(2) (Michael Edwards)
After sleeping on Danish blue cheese
I began writing poems like...
February 2nd, 2018 18:15 - Mathematics (Noah)
Ok, off that backburner and into the raging storm of the flames which rip...
January 31st, 2018 19:10 - Specialness. (Fay Slimm.)
Quite quite beautiful and very moving. You\'ll know from my occasional...
January 31st, 2018 18:59 - My Artist. (Goldfinch60)
This reads like you were a dry sponge soaking up the beauty of the image...
January 31st, 2018 18:51 - Special Table (W c)
Your piece is warm and comforting though it brings to mind that there are...
January 31st, 2018 18:40 - Rejection (DD.)
Ah, i can feel the self confidence ooozing out of this piece. Ooozing...
January 30th, 2018 18:42 - The Concert Once Foretold (Noah)
Were there ice creams in the interval?
January 30th, 2018 18:41 - \"GOLDEN HOURS\" (Andrew Guzaldo)
Oh yes a very clever piece. Nice one.
January 30th, 2018 18:39 - Floating (Poetic Dan)
A six line admission of what being a fallible human being is all about....
January 30th, 2018 18:27 - The Reflection (NowICutTheseLovelessWrists)
At least you recognise the person in your mirror. The person in my mirror...
January 30th, 2018 18:24 - Where Is The Outrage? (Poetboy123)
Death is an end to existence in our dimension but not spiritually. There...
January 30th, 2018 17:38 - Unfettered. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely words again Fay. If only we could do as you suggest. Sadly all too...
January 30th, 2018 17:20 - Full time dreamer (Aa Harvey)
Your last verse is a stunner, feels like its words pulled from my...
January 30th, 2018 16:13 - My Thoughts. (Wallace)
I read this like it was meant for me. Thank you.
January 30th, 2018 16:07 - Music In My Soul. (Goldfinch60)
I couldn\'t imagine living without music. If its not playing then im...
January 30th, 2018 15:52 - The Woman On The Plane (ForeverJesus7)
What a great story with a really nice ending.
January 30th, 2018 07:04 - Pain or Feeling (Little_Write)
Oh the dilemma so often penned beautifully expressed here. We\'ve all done...
January 30th, 2018 07:02 - SPILLED INK SHADOWS (Michael Edwards)
For one who often loves to show his sense of humour on here you have today...
January 30th, 2018 06:55 - combat (Here)
Heartfelt. Our biggest fear the dreaded \'C\' which has taken friends and...
January 29th, 2018 16:17 - combat (Here)
Heartfelt. Our biggest fear the dreaded \'C\' which has taken friends and...
January 29th, 2018 16:10 - Ingestion (Aislinn Wilson)
That\'ll teach you not to eat blue cheese for supper!
January 29th, 2018 13:50 - The Next Morning (Christina K)
Excellently crafted work. Print it and pin it on the back of the bathroom...
January 29th, 2018 13:48 - Sticks and Stones (Songbird)
Love this piece and great choice of picture. Today i published a heartfelt...
January 29th, 2018 13:43 - A Matter Of Seconds (Writings From The Unknown13)
I love this piece. My word you covered a lot of ground and i lived every...
January 29th, 2018 13:29 - Criticism (ForeverJesus7)
Quite nicely presented. Some people just have to be negative don\'t they...
January 29th, 2018 12:55 - Angel. (Wallace)
Has she got a sister by any chance?
Nuff said?
January 29th, 2018 12:34 - New line (Aa Harvey)
Let your poetry be your essence and a scent that fills the air with your...
January 29th, 2018 12:32 - Slowdance (FredPeyer)
Slow dancing, touching bodies knowingly blending into relaxed familiarity...
January 29th, 2018 12:29 - THE STRUGGLE WITHIN (Louis Gibbs)
Hmmmm i too pondered long upon this until i discovered Buddhism which has...
January 29th, 2018 11:51 - Hide and Seek (Lorna)
If you cant see you from where you\'re sat
maybe you should try looking...
January 29th, 2018 10:17 - Path of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely words.
January 29th, 2018 09:25 - IF ALL THE WORLD...(1) (Michael Edwards)
One of the phrases i use is \'he/she\'s not exactly the sharpest tool in...
January 29th, 2018 09:24 - Hey ho (Moom)
I can feel your pain and feel you not wanting to feel your pain too. You...
January 28th, 2018 18:09 - Naughty at any age (Jooles)
Rest assured that 40 though it rhymes with naughty is not the cut off for...
January 28th, 2018 14:53 - Final Flight (FredPeyer)
I doubt a final fanfare, I doubt even i shall enjoy that final flight but...
January 28th, 2018 13:28 - Home (TrystanBehm)
LOL Excellent.... been there done that.... one of those where the...
January 28th, 2018 13:08 - Mamma Mia (AJ)
This really is quite quite touching. I\'ve re-read it several times and it...
January 28th, 2018 13:04 - The Raven Calls (EmiliasLillith)
OOOOH i\'m drawn into the mystery of this. I love it. It leaves me wanting...
January 28th, 2018 13:00 - BIRD-TUNED. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh you and your ability to conjure up these wonderful mental pictures with...
January 28th, 2018 12:58 - less than 3 thoughts (Abpoet18)
Yep love is all there is sir! Bit worried about life being a fraud though....
January 28th, 2018 12:54 - Nocturne 82 (Tirzah Juarez)
\'I wasted life upon the brink
A barge floating across the kitchen...
January 28th, 2018 12:52 - Lovesick (A__pott)
LOL i love your spin on this. Of course it does get better and is rarely...
January 28th, 2018 12:47 - Discontent (Dusk arising)
Thank you Hood. High praise from a respected songwriter/poet.
I think...
January 28th, 2018 09:44
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