Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• God and Religion. (Goldfinch60) It seems there now are many of us who were brought up in the christian...
  February 9th, 2018 14:06
• Refresh your soul (Aa Harvey) Re-invention of ones self is often the best way forward. Neatly expressed.
  February 8th, 2018 16:43
• Coming Soon (Edthepoet) This is like you teling someone to stop being false and be what you really...
  February 7th, 2018 15:39
• EBONY CHILL. (Fay Slimm.) Huddling, snuggling to keep warm these winter nights its quite easy to...
  February 7th, 2018 15:23
• Someone needs to love you (Aa Harvey) So so many love songs are written and we relate to them so easily for,...
  February 7th, 2018 15:08
• Growing Love. (Goldfinch60) This read to me like a preface for a book about how love matures and...
  February 7th, 2018 03:39
• What Ever God Was Hiding Up His Sleeve. (Kevin browne) What an amazing piece you\'ve written here. Good to read the positivity...
  February 7th, 2018 03:36
• he caught her (Dusk arising) i brought you back the warmest of smiles.
  February 6th, 2018 20:13
• Breeze Blocks (Edthepoet) Wow! powerful stuff. Seems like you are at one with yourself when alone....
  February 6th, 2018 17:50
• The Rain Wants Me (Lorna) The sky is crying, the streets full of tears. Seems a voice whispers,...
  February 6th, 2018 17:43
• Bad Luck (FredPeyer) Hey, if it wasn\'t for bad luck, i\'d have no luck at all. Nice one.... ...
  February 6th, 2018 17:38
• What is Life? (Goldfinch60) We all wonder about this dont we. So many what if\'s and other...
  February 6th, 2018 17:34
• The Book. (Goldfinch60) Oh for the energy and clarity of intent of those early pages before...
  February 5th, 2018 13:40
• The Real Me (FredPeyer) Didn\'t i see the real you on a motorbike a while back. That was before...
  February 5th, 2018 13:37
• Tanka Truths (Gary Edward Geraci) Gosh, all a bit strict.
  February 3rd, 2018 19:10
• The Monster (Kae) And all this is done by someone who claims to love the thing you are. I...
  February 3rd, 2018 18:51
• Missing Nature. (Goldfinch60) Well when you are raised in front of a television and given...
  February 3rd, 2018 07:14
• Missing Nature. (Goldfinch60) Well when you are raised in front of a television and given...
  February 3rd, 2018 05:59
• SHORTIES FROM FUSIONS (Michael Edwards) Hmmm i think i just might copy your idea of publishing shorts ..... i...
  February 3rd, 2018 05:49
• Baffled. (Goldfinch60) This is natures way of getting back at us for the industrial revolution....
  February 2nd, 2018 18:24
• IF ALL THE WORLD...(2) (Michael Edwards) After sleeping on Danish blue cheese I began writing poems like...
  February 2nd, 2018 18:15
• Mathematics (Noah) Ok, off that backburner and into the raging storm of the flames which rip...
  January 31st, 2018 19:10
• Specialness. (Fay Slimm.) Quite quite beautiful and very moving. You\'ll know from my occasional...
  January 31st, 2018 18:59
• My Artist. (Goldfinch60) This reads like you were a dry sponge soaking up the beauty of the image...
  January 31st, 2018 18:51
• Special Table (W c) Your piece is warm and comforting though it brings to mind that there are...
  January 31st, 2018 18:40
• Rejection (DD.) Ah, i can feel the self confidence ooozing out of this piece. Ooozing...
  January 30th, 2018 18:42
• The Concert Once Foretold (Noah) Were there ice creams in the interval?
  January 30th, 2018 18:41
• \"GOLDEN HOURS\" (Andrew Guzaldo) Oh yes a very clever piece. Nice one.
  January 30th, 2018 18:39
• Floating (Poetic Dan) A six line admission of what being a fallible human being is all about....
  January 30th, 2018 18:27
• The Reflection (NowICutTheseLovelessWrists) At least you recognise the person in your mirror. The person in my mirror...
  January 30th, 2018 18:24
• Where Is The Outrage? (Poetboy123) Death is an end to existence in our dimension but not spiritually. There...
  January 30th, 2018 17:38
• Unfettered. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely words again Fay. If only we could do as you suggest. Sadly all too...
  January 30th, 2018 17:20
• Full time dreamer (Aa Harvey) Your last verse is a stunner, feels like its words pulled from my...
  January 30th, 2018 16:13
• My Thoughts. (Wallace) I read this like it was meant for me. Thank you.
  January 30th, 2018 16:07
• Music In My Soul. (Goldfinch60) I couldn\'t imagine living without music. If its not playing then im...
  January 30th, 2018 15:52
• The Woman On The Plane (ForeverJesus7) What a great story with a really nice ending.
  January 30th, 2018 07:04
• Pain or Feeling (Little_Write) Oh the dilemma so often penned beautifully expressed here. We\'ve all done...
  January 30th, 2018 07:02
• SPILLED INK SHADOWS (Michael Edwards) For one who often loves to show his sense of humour on here you have today...
  January 30th, 2018 06:55
• combat (Here) Heartfelt. Our biggest fear the dreaded \'C\' which has taken friends and...
  January 29th, 2018 16:17
• combat (Here) Heartfelt. Our biggest fear the dreaded \'C\' which has taken friends and...
  January 29th, 2018 16:10
• Ingestion (Aislinn Wilson) That\'ll teach you not to eat blue cheese for supper!
  January 29th, 2018 13:50
• The Next Morning (Christina K) Excellently crafted work. Print it and pin it on the back of the bathroom...
  January 29th, 2018 13:48
• Sticks and Stones (Songbird) Love this piece and great choice of picture. Today i published a heartfelt...
  January 29th, 2018 13:43
• A Matter Of Seconds (Writings From The Unknown13) I love this piece. My word you covered a lot of ground and i lived every...
  January 29th, 2018 13:29
• Criticism (ForeverJesus7) Quite nicely presented. Some people just have to be negative don\'t they...
  January 29th, 2018 12:55
• Angel. (Wallace) Has she got a sister by any chance? Nuff said?
  January 29th, 2018 12:34
• New line (Aa Harvey) Let your poetry be your essence and a scent that fills the air with your...
  January 29th, 2018 12:32
• Slowdance (FredPeyer) Slow dancing, touching bodies knowingly blending into relaxed familiarity...
  January 29th, 2018 12:29
• THE STRUGGLE WITHIN (Louis Gibbs) Hmmmm i too pondered long upon this until i discovered Buddhism which has...
  January 29th, 2018 11:51
• Hide and Seek (Lorna) If you cant see you from where you\'re sat maybe you should try looking...
  January 29th, 2018 10:17
• Path of Love. (Goldfinch60) Lovely words.
  January 29th, 2018 09:25
• IF ALL THE WORLD...(1) (Michael Edwards) One of the phrases i use is \'he/she\'s not exactly the sharpest tool in...
  January 29th, 2018 09:24
• Hey ho (Moom) I can feel your pain and feel you not wanting to feel your pain too. You...
  January 28th, 2018 18:09
• Naughty at any age (Jooles) Rest assured that 40 though it rhymes with naughty is not the cut off for...
  January 28th, 2018 14:53
• Final Flight (FredPeyer) I doubt a final fanfare, I doubt even i shall enjoy that final flight but...
  January 28th, 2018 13:28
• Home (TrystanBehm) LOL Excellent.... been there done that.... one of those where the...
  January 28th, 2018 13:08
• Mamma Mia (AJ) This really is quite quite touching. I\'ve re-read it several times and it...
  January 28th, 2018 13:04
• The Raven Calls (EmiliasLillith) OOOOH i\'m drawn into the mystery of this. I love it. It leaves me wanting...
  January 28th, 2018 13:00
• BIRD-TUNED. (Fay Slimm.) Oh you and your ability to conjure up these wonderful mental pictures with...
  January 28th, 2018 12:58
• less than 3 thoughts (Abpoet18) Yep love is all there is sir! Bit worried about life being a fraud though....
  January 28th, 2018 12:54
• Nocturne 82 (Tirzah Juarez) \'I wasted life upon the brink A barge floating across the kitchen...
  January 28th, 2018 12:52
• Lovesick (A__pott) LOL i love your spin on this. Of course it does get better and is rarely...
  January 28th, 2018 12:47
• Discontent (Dusk arising) Thank you Hood. High praise from a respected songwriter/poet. I think...
  January 28th, 2018 09:44
• Discontent (Dusk arising) Ha ha ha does god get re-elected? Puzzles me how you could read a God...
  January 28th, 2018 06:54
• Help Me Lord. (Goldfinch60) My heart goes out to you my friend. I think you show us here the torture...
  January 28th, 2018 06:10
• ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE (Michael Edwards) Look, just push the hills out of view and place a block of flats there...
  January 28th, 2018 05:56
• Look at the Stars. (Goldfinch60) Great sentiment. Uplifting.
  January 27th, 2018 15:25
• THE KNOWING. (Fay Slimm.) Yes indeed, to experience a truth beyond all we are taught or hope for...
  January 27th, 2018 15:21
• I Am Here. (Goldfinch60) I knew you were in there somewhere! Dare i begin to think your...
  January 23rd, 2018 05:44
• Unending Light? (Goldfinch60) Inner light ... is it the strength held in our knowledge/belief in...
  January 21st, 2018 05:52
• Paradise Party (Orchidee) Nice one Orchidee. I\'m not a christian believer but i think your words...
  January 21st, 2018 05:39
• When You Find Someone. (Kevin browne) Truly beautifully put together. Words which echo within us all, calling to...
  January 21st, 2018 05:33
• \"Where Are My Glasses?\" (Goldfinch60) i have a habit of pushing my reading specs up above my forehead which of...
  January 19th, 2018 19:51
• Visions of Hope. (Goldfinch60) Hope and positivity go hand in hand i feel. Luckily they both hold my hand...
  January 15th, 2018 04:48
• Be Your Best... (W c) Your writing actually gave me a positive boost just when i needed it....
  January 11th, 2018 18:25
• THE BEAST (Louis Gibbs) I know this beast well from many inner conversations and failures. Your...
  January 11th, 2018 18:23
• Cook (Tony36) If its sizzling and hot i\'ll eat it..... any chance of seconds? Whats...
  January 9th, 2018 17:01
• Monster (Olivergreenwood19) Yep, the world doesnt look too kindly on monsters does it? Adolf Hitler,...
  January 9th, 2018 16:55
• Beyond Ahead. (Fay Slimm.) \'Somewhere, over the rainbow, skies are blue and the dreams, that you...
  January 9th, 2018 16:46
• The Moon - Senryu. (Goldfinch60) Thanks for reminding me you are a loony. It doesn\'t show. Fortunately for...
  January 9th, 2018 16:31
• IN ECSTASY (Michael Edwards) Pure joy to read. Less is more and there is soooo much more here.
  January 9th, 2018 15:52
• The mess of words from depression (Elliemarie) Very strong emotive writing. Difficult to read without becoming...
  January 9th, 2018 14:06
• Double Doors (FredPeyer) Inner strength, determination and self worth. Great strong positive and...
  January 9th, 2018 14:01
• GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) His brow was moderately wrinkled as he sat in the cold and he...
  January 8th, 2018 21:41
• Feeling Poetry. (Goldfinch60) Amazes me too, positively. When i get chance to look at MPS these...
  January 8th, 2018 21:35
• \"PASSIONATELY\" (Andrew Guzaldo) hmmm.... your words left me thinking of that wonderful feeling of...
  January 8th, 2018 20:58
• games (Shadowbox15) erm..... i\'m 65. after a while you really get fed up with those...
  January 8th, 2018 20:55
• Bullish Dreams (Its Raskolnikov) Lovely thoughts which most of us poets have tried to express at one time...
  January 8th, 2018 20:53
• Accents (Niallprideaux) Language, pronunciaton and grammar are a thing we are taught. Taught to...
  January 8th, 2018 20:49
• Life (Willow_Wander) Life is like a well thumbed book you left on the shelf long ago, one day...
  January 8th, 2018 20:44
• Worst enemy (Renzi) Hello Renz old pal. Sad to read your hurt here. Being moved to write for...
  January 8th, 2018 19:15
• The Chapel Of You (Edthepoet) Ed truly an amazing write. love the use of hijack my mind and chapel of...
  December 20th, 2017 18:35
• I can’t sleep alone (Theglassman) great examle of \'less is more\' - gives the reader their own canvas on...
  December 20th, 2017 18:29
• A Shadow Of The Sunrise (Edthepoet) lovely words on which to dwell and wonder. i conjure up a story of...
  December 13th, 2017 19:00
• writing in the moon (Frank Prem) Stunning dramatic writing again. i read this aloud to my partner at first...
  December 10th, 2017 12:08
• District Line – The Acton Town to Upminster Connection (FineB) Memories of early 70\'s travelling on the district line to wimbledon, the...
  November 21st, 2017 17:50
• Chemical Reaction (Whisky Vandal) Yep dopamine wins the day. A naturally produced chemical messenger in our...
  November 20th, 2017 17:32
• Blind me so (Melchman50) Dont get too blind, you might miss some important signals. Nice writing
  November 20th, 2017 17:22
• Caught. (Fay Slimm.) Yes you\'re right, they are awesome structures. I haven\'t seen any for...
  November 20th, 2017 04:11
• A New Ending. (Goldfinch60) So true.. if only i could turn back time. But armed with yesterdays...
  November 20th, 2017 03:49